karu_mila
CSI Level Two
*dives head first into the thread* I'm late!!! *collapses* I'm too weak to hug you guys right now... between exams and assignment and computer problems and godmother duties, I'm wiped. But I didn't forget you guys!
Debbie, thank you so much for being patient with me... for that, I have another sneak peek. If things go my way I should be finished in a few days. If not, I'll keep you posted on ideas and updates. Anyways, here's the confrontation scene with Mac and the archangel...
"And there's nothing else you can do?" Mackinnon stood opposite Virgil square and unyielding, almost expressionless except for the hard glint in his eyes.
"I'm afraid not. You'll be leaving tomorrow after we debrief you." He turned around to file one last bit of paperwork, but stopped at the sound of Mackinnon's voice.
"I want to talk to her."
Virgil couldn't help but feel a chill run down his spine. That voice did not belong to a boy. It was steely and unforgiving, a dangerous combination for someone like Mackinnon. He kept his back to the boy as he busied himself with filing, not sure if he wanted to see the look on his face. "No. You need to learn to cooperate with other people for once. You can't have it your way all the time and you'll start by stopping this nonsense with Estella. Who's to say that she'll remember you after you leave?" He regretted those words as soon as he turned around. Virgil swore that if he wasn't immortal, the look in the boy's eyes would have sent him to hell and back again.
Mackinnon quirked an eyebrow and let out a short disbelieving laugh, that infamous half-smile slowly starting to coming to life. "You sure about that? Because last time I checked, her memory was pretty exceptional. Now I'm only going to say this one last time. I want to talk to her before I leave. That isn't too much to ask for, is it?"
Let me know what you think! Now to answer that SMACK questionnaire...
1) Would you Like Mac kiss Stella in
a-Season 5
b-Season 6
c-Never
Well that rules out C. I'd settle for season 5 or season 6, but I don't really have a preference. I would like to see Mac and Stella resolve that Greek case before they do though... it'd make it much more epic! *pokes Mac and Stella this time* You know you want to...
2) Would you like they marry...
a-In an office
b-with a Greek Wedding
c-alone in a quick wedding at the beach in Mexico
Greek wedding all the way! I'm sure that Debbie would be in love with the idea and can you imagine the dancing that would take place afterwards? Besides, I would love it if Stella taught Mac some Greek before the wedding...
3) What Stella's Nemesis should be back in following seasons?
1-P.
b-Ella
c-Quinn
d-Jordan
e-Claire's ghost from Heaven after a spirit session
C-Quinn
Can we choose more than one? I'd personally choose P., Quinn and Jordan 'cause they bring out the best in Rambo Stella... *runs after them with camera in hand*
4) Where should they have their first love scene?
a-In their apartment
b-in Greece (in case some day they go there)
c- In a warehouse somewhere after being in danger
...or in Mac's office with the special glass? I'm kidding, though that would make for a hot scene, even if it is out of character.
5) Who do you think should sing a song to the other?
a-Mac
b-Stella (in Greek)
c-Carmine and his band
Can Mac and Stella take turns? Mac could play bass at the coffee house again and sing this time with Stella in the audience and afterwards, in bed of course, Stella could sing a Greek lullaby.
Debbie, thank you so much for being patient with me... for that, I have another sneak peek. If things go my way I should be finished in a few days. If not, I'll keep you posted on ideas and updates. Anyways, here's the confrontation scene with Mac and the archangel...
"And there's nothing else you can do?" Mackinnon stood opposite Virgil square and unyielding, almost expressionless except for the hard glint in his eyes.
"I'm afraid not. You'll be leaving tomorrow after we debrief you." He turned around to file one last bit of paperwork, but stopped at the sound of Mackinnon's voice.
"I want to talk to her."
Virgil couldn't help but feel a chill run down his spine. That voice did not belong to a boy. It was steely and unforgiving, a dangerous combination for someone like Mackinnon. He kept his back to the boy as he busied himself with filing, not sure if he wanted to see the look on his face. "No. You need to learn to cooperate with other people for once. You can't have it your way all the time and you'll start by stopping this nonsense with Estella. Who's to say that she'll remember you after you leave?" He regretted those words as soon as he turned around. Virgil swore that if he wasn't immortal, the look in the boy's eyes would have sent him to hell and back again.
Mackinnon quirked an eyebrow and let out a short disbelieving laugh, that infamous half-smile slowly starting to coming to life. "You sure about that? Because last time I checked, her memory was pretty exceptional. Now I'm only going to say this one last time. I want to talk to her before I leave. That isn't too much to ask for, is it?"
Let me know what you think! Now to answer that SMACK questionnaire...
1) Would you Like Mac kiss Stella in
a-Season 5
b-Season 6
c-Never
Well that rules out C. I'd settle for season 5 or season 6, but I don't really have a preference. I would like to see Mac and Stella resolve that Greek case before they do though... it'd make it much more epic! *pokes Mac and Stella this time* You know you want to...
2) Would you like they marry...
a-In an office
b-with a Greek Wedding
c-alone in a quick wedding at the beach in Mexico
Greek wedding all the way! I'm sure that Debbie would be in love with the idea and can you imagine the dancing that would take place afterwards? Besides, I would love it if Stella taught Mac some Greek before the wedding...
3) What Stella's Nemesis should be back in following seasons?
1-P.
b-Ella
c-Quinn
d-Jordan
e-Claire's ghost from Heaven after a spirit session
C-Quinn
Can we choose more than one? I'd personally choose P., Quinn and Jordan 'cause they bring out the best in Rambo Stella... *runs after them with camera in hand*
4) Where should they have their first love scene?
a-In their apartment
b-in Greece (in case some day they go there)
c- In a warehouse somewhere after being in danger
...or in Mac's office with the special glass? I'm kidding, though that would make for a hot scene, even if it is out of character.
5) Who do you think should sing a song to the other?
a-Mac
b-Stella (in Greek)
c-Carmine and his band
Can Mac and Stella take turns? Mac could play bass at the coffee house again and sing this time with Stella in the audience and afterwards, in bed of course, Stella could sing a Greek lullaby.
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