(I read it its excellent I loved it you did a great job)
Sara wondered what must have been going through his head,was he angry at her,Did he love her the way she Loved him,she waited impatiently for him,flipping through tv channels as she waited,thier was no sound she didnt want to wake Emily so she really only had been staring through the tv screen,she Looked back over at Emily, she had shifted in her sleep,she Kissed her little forehead as she whispered "Mommy Loves you so much"