CSI:NY - "The Younger Generation"

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OH YAY! I have five interesting and wonderful pages of Linda's fictions to read, enjoy and release my stress. I promise I'll be here everyday. I wanted to. I don't want to miss anything anymore. It would always be my loss.

Post #817
"This is it you son of a boar."
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*Laugh out loud*. Son of a boar.. Mackenzie is soooo cute! Eric is lucky to have such a great wife. She brings happiness to the family. Of course, without Eric and the kids, it won't be complete. Oh? Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde.. Did she invent the potion and killed Sir Danvers Crew? *Kidding* Aw, Eric being so sweet and having a pleasing and helpful disposition.

I swear if you help me I'll never have sex again.
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Yeah right! When Eric do something, she'll have to break that. Enlarge? Hmm, I'm glad that Eric helped her to release her pain. THEIR FIRST BOY! Now that's going to be interesting with his 6 sisters. Welcome to the Family of Joy and Happiness, Little boy! Wonder what the other's reaction would be. Their baby boy name~

Post #819
Eh..Eh..Eh.. Danny, he must be too happy and excited for them. WOW! That was really a miraculous day! Full of wonderful events which is inexplicable. ENIGMA! Eric Edward Delko JR who weighs 9lbs 3ozs.. They're great. Handsome little cute boy. He's going to be a great guy someday with the Taylors and Delkos in him. Their only boy. They're going to have more right? *Blush* Anyhow, I'm still looking forward to what the future would hold for this little boy. MJ... *Sighs*. Is he still bearing grudges against Anya? I hope he'll forgive her soon. She doesn't mean it. They are all in one room happily together. Wonderful!

Post #822
Mackenzie... I'm proud of her. Being caring for her nephew. And she did everything to try and cheer up her nephew, MJ. I wonder where is Anya. Everything needs time to solve. MJ's stroke, Michael understanding MJ's speech, Anya's and MJ's relationship is getting more and more far away as parents-son, MJ's understanding towards what Anya said. I'm sad for MJ. He's been through alot. And now he's suffering from stroke. Kids? I understand.. I'm once a kid and when I'm an adult, I doesn't understand kids. Just like Michael. But I have 1 nephew and 1 niece at home who helps me and is very naughty. Hmm, the similitude of father and son really makes me picturing it. OH! Don't Michael said that "LEAVING ANYA". Noooo.. I don't want any of them to get separated. Everything needs time. Hopefully MJ will be okay soon. Physically and Mentally as in will he forgive Anya. AND I'll have faith in the Therapist that will help MJ passing throughout this stage.

Post #824
"I aaaate my ooom. I nooooo aaaant ooo gooo ooommme. I sssayy iiith aaapaa."
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Ha! I caught MJ not hating Anya completely.. He still calls Anya mom. That means he does understand a little bit. Maybe they should talk? It's the best solution. Understanding is important. Hmm, I understand that MJ doesn't want to talk to Anya. One day, he will. I'm sure MJ shall like the therapies with such a great Therapist helping him. It will lighten up his mood and leave him to forget about those sad things for some certain time before they went to that topic. Yeah, I think it's the best to give what MJ wants for now. He'll get over it someday. She's like a counsellor. I love how she says all those things. She's as calm. A great new character!

Post #828
Wow! A welcome home party by the kids. They are great! They are so independent just like their mom. I'm glad that they are happy about it. Hmm, MJ is going to stay with his grandparents? Well, there's still one week for him to change his mind but I think he needs more time though. Finally, Lindsay and MJ get to spend some time together. Aw, Anya.. Her emotional problem? I'm worried for her. Poor Natalia. She's being a great sister. *Sighs* Anya.. It's going to be a hard time for her. What's bothering her actually? Michael will make things right!

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This is a great one! Anyhow, Anya needs to clear her mind. She'll do something she might regret someday. Hmm, it was not MJ that caused her to get Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. I never thought it was MJ's problem that refresh her memory back to 2006 where she got kidnapped. PTSD is quite serious. That condition must have develops develop after exposure to one or more terrifying events that threatened or caused grave physical harm and caused a piece of memory that is left in her head. It must have hurt her alot that all came back. I'm afraid that it may cause a severe and ongoing emotional reaction to an extreme psychological trauma. Will she accept the appointment and talk to a psychologist. Most people cannot accept that. I just hope she'll be okay soon.

Post #835
It hurts to see Anya like that. She have to get injected everytime when she loses control. I'm glad that they are having family psychotherapy together. Hmm, I'm glad there's a doctor like Dr.Robbets. He did help alot with just the words. It will help Michael to solve it easier. Well, MJ have to know what Anya has been through. Hopefully he'll understand what caused her to said those things that hurt him. Will the propanolol(Beta Blocker) have side effects? It's the best for now though. Helping in an attempt to reduce the impact of traumatic events and helping her to remain calmer. Lindaaaaa, you're really good in these Medications and disease. I love it!!

Post #838
*Sighs*. This is getting worst! Even Mac having problems with Stella. What happened? Hmm.. I'm really proud of the Taylors and Delkos.. they are strong in everything that happened. But this.. I'm sure they'll sort it out together but it's complicating. Michael is really pushing himself to the edge of Physical and Mental Fatigue. I don't want any of that to happen to anyone. I really looked up to Mac. He's the Family Guy. He stands up for his family no matter what happens. MJ.. Hmm, like Mac and the Psychologist said, a child needs more time to take it in. I have faith it that. He'll be okay soon! They're going to discuss it together? Will it be solved? I have endless tons of questions in my head.

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But.. I have to goo.. I can't stay too long here. Hate it when I get sick and lots of troubling hurl! Gahhhh.. I wanted to read more.. It's getting more and more interesting and what's coming... Will be back. I can't wait till it's morning.

Take Care - Asprine
 
OH YAY! :adore:I have five interesting and wonderful pages of Linda's fictions to read, enjoy and release my stress. I promise I'll be here everyday. I wanted to. I don't want to miss anything anymore. It would always be my loss.
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Oh believe me you do want to miss the rest. It's really angsty:lol::lol:But don't worry it all gets better soon:lol::lol:



But.. I have to goo.. I can't stay too long here. Hate it when I get sick and lots of troubling hurl! Gahhhh.. I wanted to read more.. It's getting more and more interesting and what's coming... Will be back. I can't wait till it's morning.
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Trust me there is more hurling to go:lol::lol:

This is how I release my frustration from real life.:lol::lol:Thanks for the review:lol::lol: Honest it will get better.:)

Asprine...are you sick with flu???

*Hugs my wonderful readers*
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With the family all together they were waiting on Eric and MJ's therapist who was supposed to have been there an hour ago.

*Knock,knock*

"That must be Leanne. She couldn't make it this morning, so she agreed to come this afternoon."

"Hi Stella. Sorry I'm late. I got held up with traffic."

"That's okay. You go ahead. Did you need any help with MJ today?"

"No. I'm just going to work his muscles today. But what I'd like to next week is get him up on his feet. I've noticed he's able to feel certain touches on his left side. So at this time I thinks it's important to work all those muscle."

"Sounds great. If you need anything Leanne let me know."

"I will Stella thanks."

Walking into the room, Stella noticed her grandson perk up. He seemed to be much happier and cooperative when Leanne was in the room. Then it dawned on her. Her grandson had a crush on her. Smiling to herself she left them to their session.

"Hi MJ how you feeling this morning?"

Smiling widely he tried to push himself up.

"Wow. Look at you MJ. That's it use that left arm like I showed you. Push off on it, that's it."

Watching as MJ pulled himself up into a sitting position she smiled.

"Great job MJ. I'm so proud of you. Do you know what we are going to work on next week?"

Shaking his head no, she said...

"Walking. We are going to help you get out of that bed. Won't that be great. Hopefully we can get you to take a few steps. Maybe even sit up in a chair for a while."

Still smiling Leanne said....

"Mj have you told your mom, dad, and grandparents that you can move your arm and leg yet?"

"No. I'm nooot reeeady."

"You know MJ you have to tell them soon. Even your speech is picking up. I understand your reason for not wanting too. But I'm supposed to give them a report. I can only hold on a little longer hon, then I have to tell them, or you do okay?"

"I proooomise Leeeanne."

"Good. Now let's start your exercises, then if we have time we'll play the speech game."

Out in the living room Eric finally showed up.

"I'm here guys. Let's get started I need to get back."

Mackenzie looked at Eric strangly. Christ he was being rude.

"You know Eric. If you're that busy you can leave. We wouldn't want to hold you back from more important things then family."

"I didn't mean it like that Mackenzie. I'm sorry if it sounded like I did."

Mac looked from his daughter to his son. Reaching over Stella took his hand and whispered...

"Leave it be Mac. They'll work it out."

"I know love. I just wish..."

"Me too. But sometimes we just have to sit in the sidelines."

Watching their daughter and son, they waited for the silence to hit the room before they started their meeting.
 
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Nodding his head no, she said...
Isnt it shaking his head no hehe :p
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Why yes it is:p:pAll fixed.

Cant wait for the next chapter with the family meeting and outcome of that guy in that hut thing lol :D
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Hut thing:lol::guffaw: God NattyBug, leave it to you to make me laugh:lol:
 
why not tell them right away?
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Maybe he's not ready. Maybe he's still upset. I guess we'll have to wait and see;):) Right NattyBug:)
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Sitting down beside his wife, they didn't touch.

"Alright. How about I begin?"

"Sounds good mom. We're listening."

"So I figure with what are family is going through it may be a good idea to make a chart. This way we can all take part in the care of Anya and MJ at the same time."

"Whoa...how is this going to help the stress or the hell with that Psychopath on the loose?"

"Trust me Danny. Jill is the least of our worries. We need to get this family back on track. We've all been through so much pain and hurt. Along the way we forgot to pull together as a close knit unit. Alot of that has to with the fact that everything snowballed together at once.

I mean look at us. We are all attacking each other. It has to stop here. We need to discuss what is bothering each one of us. This way we can talk about it and find a solution that fits us all as a family."

"Fine. Explain your chart."

"Thank you. What it basically concists of is different hours for each of us to take part in their care. Now I've worked around everyones schedules. This will help alleviate the stress. I think this was one of our biggest problems. We all tried to handle it on our own instead of as a family."

As Stella was about to continue Leanne walked in.

"Sorry Stella. We are done. MJ's resting. I'll see you tomorrow."

"Okay. I'll walk you out."

When Stella left the room the arguing started.

"This isn't going to work Mac. Our schedule is insane. Eric and I hardly have time to turn around before another case pops up. Christ they've been working around the clock on this huge...."

"Danny!!! Shut the hell up."

"Eric!!"

"No Mackenzie. He knows better. You don't discuss the case with anyone Danny."

"Sorry. It just slipped. Besides they're family."

"That's the problem Danny. It's always slipping. Family or not, the case is closed to them."

Mac was confused. What case? Eric always shared or asked his opinion.
Why hadn't he on this one?"

"I've got to go Mackenzie. I'm sorry. I'll see you at home."

"Eric!!! Eric get back here."

"Let him go sis. It's okay. He needs to cool off."

"I'm sorry Mac. It's my fault. I shouldn't have mentioned the case. It's very high profile."

Coming back into the room Stella wondered what had just happened.

"Don't ask mom. Let's continue."

"Sure. Okay. Um..Michael I'm giving you Monday and Wednesday mornings with Anya, Tuesday and Thursday afternoon with MJ. Mackenzie I'll give you Monday and Tuesday afternoon with MJ. You can bring little Eric here.

Natalia I'll give you Wednesday and Thursday afternoon with your sister. This way we play an active roll in each of their lives. I'm telling you if we all work together we can heal our family back to where it was before."

"What about Anya's new Psychologist. Has anyone booked her appointments yet?"

"I've already done that. She has to see him three times a week. Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays."

"The times Michael?"

"Nine in the morning. Which works out perfect with your schedule mom. I'll be able to take her."

"Good. This is wonderful. Your dad and I will continue to work with MJ's therapist. Hopefully we can get him back on track. Then I'd like him and Anya to spend some time together. If you're okay with that Anya?"

"I'm fine with it Stella. It's MJ I'm worried about. He's still upset with me."

"That's why you need to spend time together. Hopefully the more time you spend with him, he'll talk to you. I want you to tell him about your PTSD. Even if he turns away from you. Continue to talk about it with him. He's still listening. He needs to kow that you still love him. The two of you can no longer run away from each other.

Another mistake we made as a family. Keeping you two apart. That shouldn't have happened. So that needs to be corrected now. As for the other little details, they'll work themselves out as we go along. I'm sure we will still have ups and downs. But I think with the new changes we will begin to heal."

"You know mom. This all sounds wonderful and we all hope this works. But what if it don't?"

"Listen to me Michael. There is no what if. From now on that word does not exist in this house, is that understood. When we are here we are all family. What happens when you leave here is your decision. One way or another this family will be healed."

Nodding that they understood. They took a break for lunch.

Back at the Beach house Eric noticed Don's car in the driveway. Then he noticed the front door.

"Don!!! Christ Don."

Checking for a pulse he found one. Calling 911 he looked around for their witness. As the EMT's pulled up Don began waking up.

"Mmm..oww..Eric. Where's our witness?"

"How the hell should know. What the hell happened here?"

"I don't know. Someone knocked me out. That's all I remember."

"Excuse me Detective you are going to need some stitches."

"Thanks. I'll take care of it later. I'm fine you can go."

"Where the hell are our Undercovers?"

Running up the street to the unmarked unit Eric found them dead in the backseat.

"Great. Now What? IAB is going to have a field day with this one."

"Did you find him Eric"?

"No. But our Undercovers are dead."

*Ring,ring*

"Delko."

"Eric it's Danny. I just got a call to the beach. You'll never guess who I'm standing in front of? dead."

"Let me guess. Our witness?"

"You got it. His throats been slit. Two kids found him. We're getting statements now."

"There goes our whole God damn case. Not to mention what IAB is going to do to us. We'll be right there Danny."

"What is it Eric?"

"Our witness is dead. Our case is finished. Our suspect is now free to run the streets of Miami again."

"This is great Eric. Don't look now. Here come the suits."

Shaking his head. Eric waited for the yelling to begin.
 
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Back at the house Mac was looking out over the beach.

"Mac!! You okay?"

Wrapping her arms around her husband he linked their fingers together.

"I'm fine love. I just don't know if we are ever going to heal. I've never heard Eric yell like that at anyone. I've never seen Mackenzie under so much stress either. What are we doing wrong to have our family so screwed up."

"Mac look at me please."

Turning to face his wife she caressed his face.

'It's not us Mac. It's nothing we've done. It's just a run of bad luck. It's two random events that snowballed together at the same time. Leaving us all stressed and shocked. But it's nothing we can't heal together."

"Mom!!! I'm going to head home with Eric and the girls. I'll be taking Michelle too. She wants to come for the night. I'll see you tomorrow morning. Daddy, you going to be okay?"

"I'll be fine love. You take your family home. Get some rest. Tomorrow is going to be a whole new day."

"I love you daddy. Remember stay strong."

Kissing his daughter, she left for home.

"Dad we're going to get going too. The kids want to come home with us tonight. So we are going to talk about Anya's TPSD with them. You'll call me if there's any change with MJ?"

"I will son. Drive careful."

"I will dad. Bye mom."

"By son. I love you. See you tomorrow."

With the house quiet Mac and Stella went to check on their grandson. Walking into the room they found him sitting up in his bed.

"Hey MJ!!! You ready to lay down son?"

"Nooo paaaapa. I waaaaant tooo siiiiiiiit wittttth youuuuu and naaaaaaaaaana."

"You do. That's great. Come here. Papa will carry you out to the den."

Carrying MJ into the den Mac handed him the converter. There you go son. Would you like a drink?"

"I waaaant tooooooo taaaalk to yoooooooooou and naaaaaaaaaana."

"About what MJ?"

Lifting his arm, Mac and Stella looked shocked. Then when he brought up his left leg, Stella moaned.

"Oh MJ. Oh my. How long son? How long have you been able to move your left side?"

"Juuuuust a coooooouple daaaaaaaays naaaaaaaaaana."

"But why didn't you tell us? Please MJ. Why?"

Mac could see him tear up. Not wanting him to upset himself he passed him a pad and pen.

"Here son. Write it down if it's easier."

Watching MJ wrote....

"I didn't want mom and dad to know. I don't want to live there anymore papa. I want to stay here forever. Please don't tell papa. Please don't make me go home."

"Listen MJ. I understand you are upset with your mom for what she said. But she didn't mean it MJ. I want you to listen to me very carefully. Your mom is sick. She has what is called PTSD, Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. It was brought on by your assault son. It brought back some very scary memories for your mother that she suffered two years ago. She was kidnapped and forced to watch some pretty horrific things.

After you got stabbed it brought it all back. Forcing her to once again face what she had kept buried. She never wanted you to die son. She was just very emotionally upset with her own memories. But she is getting help now. She's seeing a Psychologist. He's started her on medication, and counciling sessions. So it's going to get better son. Soon you will all heal. Just give your mom a chance to explain why she said what she did."

Writting on the paper again....

"Please papa. I don't want too. I don't want to go home. I want to stay with you and Nana. Please."

"I'll tell you what son. You give your mom a chance to explain everything to you. Then I will talk to dad about you staying with us for a while. At least until you are walking, and able to tend to yourself. Then you go home. If things don't work out, nana and papa will allow you to live us. Do we have a deal?"

Writing again he wrote...

"Deal papa. Thank you."

"You're welcome son. Now let's get you something to eat."

Picking his grandson up again he carried him to the kitchen.
 
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^ I concur, Natty. :)

MJ better be careful about his crush on Leanne. Lindsay will get jealous. hehe. :D

great chapters. :)
 
"Delko!!! What the hell happened here?"

"Your witness is what happened. We specifically told him not to make any calls. But he didn't listen. He called my home eight times within two hours. I guess they traced the call and found him. so before you start on my back, I lost two of my best Undercovers today."

"That's your problem Delko. Just who the hell do we have now to put Griffin away for good. The bastard walks to kill again. I hope you're happy."

"You know what?? Screw you. We did our best to protect your witness. The guy was a walking time bomb. He had no trust in us at all. We did what we could to keep him safe. Next time keep your own damn witnesses. From this moment on we will catch Griffin ourselves. Now get out of my way."

"This isn't over Delko."

"Yeah it is."

Walking away Eric drove Don to the Hospital.

"What are we going to do Eric?"

"We are going to have men on Griffin's ass every minute of everyday. And when he screws up, we'll be there to catch him. Dead or Alive."

When Mackenzie got in the door she put li'l Eric to bed. Then while starting dinner she had the girls clean the house.

"Mom. Can we watch a movie tonight?"

"Sure. Once you have everything cleaned up and dinner is done."

"Is daddy going to be here for dinner?"

"I'm not sure Sara. It depends how busy he is."

"He's always busy. He never stays home anymore. You're not getting divorced are you mom?"

"No Sara. What would make you think that?"

"I don't know. It just seems like you and daddy are always mad at each other."

"I want you to listen to me carefully. Just because your dad and I argue. That doesn't mean we don't love each other. And we most certainly are not getting divorced. Now help me set the table."

With dinner done and out the way, Mackenzie started dishes while the girls watched a movie. Leaning over the sink she sobbed. What was going on with Eric? Why did they seem so far apart?

Walking into the kitchen Eric seen her. Knowing he had caused her nothing but pain the last few weeks, he wrapped his arms tenderly around her waist.

"It's okay Mackenzie. I'm sorry. I know I've been so cold and distant with you. Please forgive me. Please give me a chance to explain."

Meanwhile...

"Paaaapa caaan weeee plllay a gaaame aaafter suuupper?"

"Sure we can. Which game son. NHL or NFL?"

"Booooooooooth. Caaaaause it woooon't taaake meee looooong tooo beeeeat yoooou."

"Oh you think so? We shall see my boy. We shall see."

Laughing Stella got up and cleared the table.

"Let's go son. Time for papa to kick some butt."

MJ laughed.

"I loooooooove yoooooooooou paaaaapa."

"Know what son? I love you too."

Sweeping him up in his arms, he ran him into the living room.

"Floor or chair son?"

"Flooooor paaaaapa."

"Floor it is."

After setting up the game Mac passed his grandson the controller.

"Ready to lose?"

"Fuuunny paaaapa. Leeet's doooo iiit."

*Ring,ring*

"Hello."

"Hi mom. How's MJ doing?"

"He;s good Michael. He;s playing NHL with dad."

"Does he want to talk?"

"MJ it's daddy. Do you want to say goodnight?"

Bringing down the phone to his level. MJ said....

"I looove yoooooooou daaaaaaaddy, niiight."

"Goodnight son. I'll see you in the morning. Bye."

Placing the phone back to her ear she asked...

"How are things there Michael? The kids are doing okay?"

"They seem to be. Caroline understands quite a bit. It's harder for Tyler. But he kind of knows certain things that is wrong with his mom. It will take a while. But at least they are home with me. It will be nice when MJ comes home. I miss him."

"I know son. Give it time. Little steps remember."

"Yeah. Yeah I remember mom. Night."

"Night son. I love you."

Hanging up the phone she watched Mac and her grandson play. Knowing deep in her heart that MJ may never be going home.
 
The following morning Mac dressed MJ for his appointment with Leanne.

"Paaaaapa I weeeeaaaar theee blaaack shiiiiirt aaand paaaants liiiiiiike youurs?"

"You want to wear black son? Why?"

Blushing MJ felt his cheeks redden. Then Mac realized.

"Ahhh..I take it you like Leanne? Is black her favorite color?"

Laughing MJ lowered his head.

"It's okay son. You can blush all you want. It's only you and papa here. Let's get you dressed then. If you like you can wear some of papa's cologne nana likes."

"Hooooooonest paaapa?"

"Yup. You want to smell handsom for her, don't you?"

"Mac Taylor. What are you up to? You should be discouraging your grandson from chasing older women."

MJ laughed again. He couldn't supress the giggles.

"You do know she's a little to old for my handsom grandson right?"

"Nah...MJ is very mature. But my concern is Lindsay. What would she say son?"

Still giggling the doorbell rang.

"That will be Leanne. I'll be right back."

"Morning Stella. How's my MJ this morning?"

"Oh he's good. He also told us your secret."

"So you know he can move his left side?"

"We do. I wish you had of told us sooner."

"I know Stella. But I promised MJ I would give him a couple days. If he didn't tell you by then I would have to."

"I understand. Well he's all ready for you."

Walking into the room Leanne tried not to smile. She could smell the cologne all over the room.

"Mm..you smell so handsom MJ and look at you all dressed in black. Looking so dangerous."

Mac and Stella watched as his face went bright red.

"We'll leave you two alone. Behave MJ?"

Leaving the room, Stella whispered....

"What have you done Mac?"

"Oh stop. It's a little crush. I'm sure Leanne will break his heart gently."

"Mhmm.. and then you can put it back together." She laughed.

Over at the Delko's the girls were up early. Starting breakfast for their parents the girls burned the pancakes.

"I told you Sara. You have to butter the pan."

Running downstairs as the alarm went off Eric seen the kitchen loaded in smoke.

"What did you three burn? And where are your sisters?"

"They are watching TV daddy. We tried to make breakfast but Sara forgot to butter the pan."

"Did not Shannon. You didn't tell me nothing. Don't blame me for it."

"I did so Sara. You know I did."

"Stop!!! I don't care who did it. Just get this mess cleaned up now."

"Yes daddy."

While the girls tackled the kitchen Eric headed back upstairs to get dressed.

"I don't see anything funny Mac."

"Oh Eric. They do try. You have to love them for it."

"Yeah. As soon as they clean the kitchen. Then I'll love them."

Climbing back onto the bed Eric caressed her neck with his lips.

"Eriiiiiiiiiic."

Not stopping his quest, he caressed his way up her jaw, to her sweet lips. Then passionately kissing her he took her into their world that had long been left behind.
 
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