CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspects

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  1. carole

    carole Prime Suspect

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    Re: CSI:Miami: RT #5- In God We Trust-All Others Are Suspect

    I picked CSI: Miami Road Trip 6: One question, Are We There Yet? :lol:
    Update soon pleaaaaaasssssseeee :)
     
  2. Finch

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    :lol: I had about three favorites too, so we'll see which one wins. :)

    Giving You Wings

    QD

    Horatio: *walks in* Alright, tape recorder.

    Speed: *typing* I took out the dispatcher, and enhanced the background noise.

    Horatio: You did? Why?

    Speed: I thought I heard something when I was listening to the tape, now tell me if you here this. *clicks mouse*

    Horatio: *tilts head* ...

    Speed: *squints*

    Horatio: ...What in the hell is that?

    Speed: It's a clicking sound.

    Horatio: Sounds like metal.

    Speed: Yeah I was thinking of something that could make that sound, and then I remembered when I walked in, it smelled different in there.

    Horatio: How do you mean?

    Speed: Well, besides the blood, it smelled like smoke.

    Horatio: You don't smoke do you?

    Speed: No, and neither did Katie.

    Horatio: So it's very possible, that someone was closing a lighter.

    Speed: And that means someone was in the room as she died.

    Horatio: Maybe he left something we can use.

    Speed: *nods*

    Horatio: Take Eric, and go back there.

    Speed: Will do. *leaves*

    Office, PD

    Horatio: Status on the weapon.

    Calleigh: The gun isn't registered.

    Horatio: Well, it's probably why he left it at the scene.

    Calleigh: Looks like it's a dead end, sorry.

    Apartment

    Delko: So, what are we looking for again?

    Speed: *steps over blood* Someone was in here smoking.

    Delko: So?

    Speed: So look around.

    Delko: You think he was actually stupid enough to put out his cigarette in here?

    Speed: *kneels* Yeah.

    Delko: You're kidding me.

    Speed: *picks up cigarette butt* It was under the table.

    Delko: So we have his spent cigarette.

    Speed: We have his DNA.

    Delko: Well at least we're getting somewhere.

    Speed: *looks around*

    Delko: ...Are we having a moment of silence or something?

    Speed: *stands, walks over to blood pool*

    Delko: What?

    Speed: There's ash in the blood.

    Delko: ...The killer was standing over her, watching her die.

    Speed: *frowns* What a standup citizen.

    TBC.........
     
  3. speedmonkey2

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    *gasp* Someone was watching me die! Thats just creepy! But he must not be to smart of a cookie to leave his cigarette behind. I mean seriiously come on. I can't wait to see where this leads to, Geni! Update soon please!
     
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    Wyoming Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    He's taking lessons from Horatio isn't he? "What a stellar human being" lol Poor Speed, I'm just waiting for the moment where he totally breaks down and cries. But I love it when Speed cries so I guess that's a good thing for me :p.

    Oh gosh, I've been browsing ff.net reading Talleigh stories the past few hours lol. *sniffles* none of the stories are as good as this one though....poor Timmy!

    Alright, well I guess I should go write some more of Les Sanglots Longs now, parce-ce que j'ai writers block! lol

    Great update Geni! *says like Oliver* I'd like s'more please sir (or in this place ma'am) hahaha :D
     
  5. Anni Grey

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    OMG!!! I can't believe that Katie is dead!!!! What the???? Geni, that came waaaaaaaay from left field. * sigh* I'm so sad, I actually cried when I read that she was dead. Poor Lori, and poor Speed. I think deep down he truly loved Katie!


    I just can't really get over it. I agree with JC, Speed needs to take time and grieve. And Speedcochrane , as much as I would've loved a really graphic make out with Speed, I think that I would have some respect for my fallen friend and be there for her widow ( then we could get it on :devil:) I'm just joking, I know you have something great for us. And Katie , I will always remember our times together, our craziness over Speed, random comments on his hotness.... *sigh* I'm going to cry again..... :( KATIE, I MISS YOU!!!!




    Very random side note, I voted for RT6: One question, are we there yet?

    :( KATIE!!!!!!!!
     
  6. Finch

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    Honestly, I can't wait to see where this leads too. :lol:

    And Jess, Speed probably is taking lessons from Horatio. :p I mean, they're almost like father and son..In a weird twisted way.

    Anni, aw, it'll be okay. And as for that graphic makeout scene, it probably won't happen. :p But hey, there's always...Un-graphic ones. :lol: :devil: - Which won't be for a LONG time considering the whole..We miss Katie thing.

    *hugs Katie*

    What It Takes To Break The Case

    Halls

    Horatio: *walking*

    Speed: Hey H, I got the results from the DNA. It didn't match the epithelials recovered from the body. It does, however match the cigarette.

    Horatio: Really. Do tell.

    Speed: I didn't get anything from CODIS, but I checked the FBI database. Trevor's name came up.

    Horatio: Interesting. Why was his DNA in the system?

    Speed: He was investigated for conspiring with a felon.

    Horatio: Ramirez.

    Speed: Yeah, so I checked with Calleigh. She finished up on the knife, and the prints are a match to Ramirez.

    Horatio: So there were two people there.

    Speed: Yeah.

    Horatio: Do we know where Ramirez is now?

    Speed: No, but I cross-referenced his DNA with the epithelials, and it matches.

    Horatio: So Trevor stood by, smoking his cigarette, while Ramirez finished the job.

    Speed: Exactly.

    Horatio: Let's go find Ramirez.

    Speed: I'll put it over the wires. *leaves*

    Calleigh: *runs over* Horatio, we have a visitor.

    Horatio: *stops walking, looks in interview room*

    Trevor is sitting in a chair

    Horatio: *smiles* Wonderful.

    Interview room

    Horatio: *walks in* Trevor.

    Trevor: Look, I want you to know that I'm prepared to cooperate in your investigation to get Ramirez behind bars.

    Horatio: How commendable. *gets out cell phone*

    Trevor: I'd like to testify as a witness.

    Horatio: *looking down at phone* Well actually that won't happen. At the most, you're an accomplice.

    Trevor: I came forward.

    Horatio: Yes you did.

    Trevor: I'm willing to help. I know where Ramirez is hiding, and I can give you names of about fifteen guys transporting drugs from Brazil to Miami.

    Horatio: I'd like to focus on this murder at the moment.

    Trevor: Alright. You mind if I smoke.

    Horatio: Actually I do, so put that out please.

    Trevor: ...*sigh* Fine.

    Horatio: *puts phone up to ear* Yes, could you get in here please? Thank you. *closes phone* So, tell me what happened.

    Trevor: In exchange for what?

    Horatio: I didn't say we were exchanging anything.

    Speed: *walks in*

    Trevor: What's he doing here?

    Horatio: Why?

    Trevor: He's not supposed to be on the case. It's a conflict of interests.

    Speed: *crosses arms*

    Trevor: I want my lawyer.

    Horatio: After you answer my questions.

    Trevor: I'm not answering anything.

    Speed: *walks around behind Trevor* It doesn't look like he's talking.

    Horatio: *closes blinds* It appears not.

    Trevor: What are you doing?

    Horatio: It gets a little too bright in here.

    Trevor: What are you going to do to me?

    Speed: Why, you scared?

    Trevor: *turns around* No.

    Horatio: Trevor, take a look at these pictures.

    Trevor: *turns back to Horatio*

    Horatio: *opens folder*

    Trevor: That's Katie, so?

    Horatio: That's a muzzle stamp. Now, we weren't able to find a registry on the gun, but I bet if we call up the FBI on your conspiracy charge, they'll be more than happy to confirm who the gun belongs to.

    Trevor: That charge is pending.

    Speed: How about a whole new charge for your rap sheet?

    Trevor: What, murder? I didn't kill her. Ramirez did.

    Horatio: Trevor, many things can lead to murder.

    Trevor: Yeah well it wasn't me.

    Horatio: Take a look at her face.

    Trevor: *looks down*

    Horatio: You destroyed her life, and probably your own.

    Trevor: I'm not saying anything.

    Speed: It doesn't matter. She's telling us everything.

    Trevor: So why haven't you arrested me if her corpse is so talkative?

    Horatio: You can end this right now, or you can keep this game going.

    Speed: Where's Ramirez?

    Trevor: You didn't ask very nicely.

    Speed: Where's Ramirez, jackass.

    Trevor: *laughs* He's probably after your precious daughter now.

    Speed: *looks at Horatio*

    Horatio: *nods*

    Speed: *grabs Trevor*

    Trevor: Oh, you did it now Speedle. *pulls out gun*

    Horatio: *takes out gun*

    Speed: *takes out gun*

    Trevor: No one touches me.

    Speed: I'm not going to touch you, the bullet will.

    Trevor: Funny. You think this is going to stop me? I've got people in high places.

    Horatio: Put down your weapon.

    Trevor: Does anyone actually listen to you?

    Horatio: I gotta tell you, it never ends well for the criminal.

    Trevor: Maybe this'll be the first time.

    Speed: I hate to break it to you, but two guns are better than one.

    Trevor: Yours probably doesn't work.

    Speed: *smirks* You wanna test that theory?

    Trevor: *frowns*

    Horatio: Drop the gun.

    Trevor: Or what, you'll kill me? I'll take that over prison anyday.

    Speed: Okay. *cocks gun*

    Horatio: Speed...Take it easy.

    Trevor: You always obey your master?

    Speed: *frowns*

    Horatio: Speed, don't do it.

    Trevor: Oh wacha gonna do now? It's either kill me, or be killed.

    Horatio: No one is going to be killed, now put down the gun.

    Trevor: Why don't you put down your gun?

    Horatio: I can't do that.

    Trevor: Then it looks like we're in a bit of a pickle.

    TBC............
     
  7. Anni Grey

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    Oh my word!!! This is just getting better and better!!! That Trevor... ARGHHHHHH, He stood by and let some one kill Katie, the bas.... sorry, let my emotions get the best of me. This is sooooo good, I can't wait to see what happens!!!

    Oh, and I know the entire Anni gets some Speed lovin will be for a while to come, my grief is still so raw ( considered I just read that Katie was massacred) , I can't even think of it. *sigh* got a question though,how are the other team members and friends handling it?
     
  8. speedmonkey2

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    Ramirez! Geez, can't that guy leave me the hell alone. lol. But ohhhhhh Trevor...I don't even know what to say! He thinks he's a witness. Pfft!

    But oh man I got all excited when H man closed the blinds I was like "Teehee this is going to be good" And then BAM Trevor, Speed, and H pull out there guns! And holy hell!

    Teehee! Heck yes! Speed finally said it! It only took him until I died! But hey thats ok he said it and that's all that matters!

    *gasp* I hope Loris ok. If he hurts her I swear I'll..well there not much I can do but the real me will be very angry! lol.

    I seriously think that Trevor wants to be killed. Maybe he's scared of going to jail, i'm not sure. But maybe if you didn't make so many enemies and oh I don't know watch as someone killed another human being you wouldn't be in this situation!

    *lets out breath* Ok, I feel better now. lol.

    And awww Anni! I'm going to miss you to. Your porn talk and your alcohol. And yes the random talks about Speed's cuteness where awesome. "THE WORLD WILL IMPLODE!" Teehee, those were some good times.

    Great update Geni! Update soon please. Teehee H man closed the blinds. That was awesome.

    I liked how Horatio called Speed in the interrogation room, instead of leaving him in the wind about a suspect in my murder. It shows he cares un like some other bosses might of done.

    And I love how H had to tell Speed to calm down a few times. If I was in Speed's place and Trevor had murdered Speed I don't think I would have been able to control myself very well.

    But anyways great update, Can't wait for more!
     
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    That was cool, Katie. I thought that Speed was going to really take it to him, but it seems as if Trevor has a death wish. I'm really psyhced about this now!!!
     
  10. Wyoming

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    SPEED! SHOOT HIM! *slaps hand over mouth* I mean.......end it peacefully....pffffffffft

    This is getting so good! I'm just waiting for Calleigh to walk by, then Trevor will get distracted and Tim can tackle em! lol wooooo Go Speed! Get revenge! *looks up to sky* We shall avenge you Katie!!! Actually, Speed, Horatio, and Calleigh shall avenge you lol.

    Great job Geni! I love this storyline!
     
  11. Finch

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    Oh don't worry about that, there's a reason I've left everyone out for this long. ;)

    And Katie, I like the way you think. Perhaps Trevor wants to try death instead of prison. - Well besides the fact he would be someone's bum buddy, but still. :p

    And now....For the next chapter.

    The Rain's Pouring Down, I'm Alone

    Horatio: Trevor....Drop your weapon.

    Trevor: *cocks gun* Not until you do it first.

    Horatio: This isn't a wise course of action for you.

    Trevor: Hey Speedle, I was pretty close to something else other than murdering her, but she repulses me.

    Speed: *glaring*

    Horatio: *warning tone* Speed....

    Trevor: I have to tell you though, her screams were heaven to hear.

    Delko, Calleigh, Anni, Jess, Carly, Missy, JC, Carole, walk in, guns in hand, they point them at Trevor

    Trevor: *looks around* Calleigh? What are you doing?

    Calleigh: Isn't it obvious?

    Delko: I don't think I've actually ever shot my gun before.

    Carly: I've been going to target practice.

    Jess: I've been going with her.

    Carole: I just wanted in.

    Missy: Ten bucks for me if I get him between the eyes.

    JC: Hey if you miss, I get to run him over with the Hummerhome.

    Anni: *cocks gun* Sianora you little piss ant.

    Horatio: Looks like your time's up Trevor.

    Speed: *smirks*

    Trevor: You're all crazy.

    Horatio: Where's Ramirez?

    Trevor: ...*sigh* ....He could be halfway to Mexico by now.

    Horatio: Mexico.

    Trevor: Yeah.

    Horatio: *looks at Speed*

    Speed: *looks at Horatio*

    Horatio: Hmmm. Road trip.

    Everyone: *looks at Horatio*

    Horatio: Time to go Trevor.

    Trevor: *lowers gun*

    Speed: *gets out cuffs, walks over*

    Horatio: *nods*

    Trevor: So what now?

    Speed: *cuffs Trevor*

    Trevor: Ow.

    Speed: I don't know what's next for you, and frankly I don't care.

    Trevor: So you finally got your revenge.

    Speed: No, I didn't. But it looks like you got yours.

    Patrol cop: *grabs Trevor, leads him away*

    Horatio: Well done.

    Calleigh: *smiles*

    Delko: *nods*

    Carly: Glad we could help.

    Anni: I really wanted to shoot him.

    JC: Can I still run him over?

    Missy: *laughs*

    Carole: *looks at gun* These things are huge.

    Jess: You'll get used to it.

    Horatio: Alright. *looks at everyone* Looks like we're goin' on a road trip.

    JC: YES. I'll start up the Hummerhome.

    Horatio: Okay, get going.

    Everyone leaves

    Horatio: Speed.

    Speed: *turns around*

    Horatio: Nice job.

    Speed: ...It doesn't bring her back. *leaves*

    Horatio: *places hands on hips, looks out window*

    TBC...........
     
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    *sighs* Geni *points finger* I was doing fine! All happy that everyone came in and Trevor surrendered. And then bam! This one line gets me!

    Awwwww *huggles Speed* Poor guy!

    yes, he certanily did. And I think thats all he ever wanted.

    *shivers* I don't even want to THINK about what he wanted to do!

    He just doesn't stop does he!? Oh well he's on his way to jail now. So now all we have to do is catch this Ramirez fellow and put him away and all will be well.

    Update soon please!
     
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    I voted "CSI:Miami Road Trip 6: Forever Testing That Theory"

    You're doing a great job with this story Geni keep up the good work.

    Update soon please
     
  14. Wyoming

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW poor Speedy

    WHOA I just looked to my left, and there is this HUGE moth chillin on my screen........

    Anyway, the RT, We're goin to Mexico! Of course, not for a good reason, but damnit we'll get Katie's killer! Hahaha how sweet was that that we all walked in! See how much we all love you Katie! *cries* We love you! hahaha *remembers what I said last night about Katie and myself* HA

    Great update Geni!
     
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    Great update Geni!

    Oh man I loved how we all come in the room with gun and that everyone said something :p



    YAY road trip everyone!!! :)

    Update soon please:)
     
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