CSI:Miami Road Trip: Seven Years of Bad Luck & Counting
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Excellent observation.
One wonders when Speed will have his time under the sun for the water works. I'm sure it'll happen, but I don't know when. Seems like that's what everyone has the consensus on.
Gosh y'all think the same way in here. :lol:
It's sad that I'm reviewing the reviews. I must give back! *raises fist*
:lol:
Carly! You're back! *clings to you* And you were the kidnappee, the bad guy, the good guy, and now you're just plain ol' Carly. Except you aren't old.
Funny how it's always a Speedle child who dies. Watch out to anyone who wants his children! :lol:
Or anyone who slept with him. Maybe he has one of those viruses where it gets passed through the bloodstream and then when you're infected, THERE'S NO GOING BACK!
...
*crickets*
Crickey! If real Carly meets the RT people, the world would implode even if she's not meeting RT Carly. Because well, that's what happens unless you have a twin. Which Carly doesn't have. I think...
Well remember what he did to the last guy who killed his child?
Hunter said
As in...? What? Emo cut themselves?
LOL, no. Although that would be kind of funny.
DIDGERREEDOO!
Motel
Anni: THEY HAVE A POOL IN THE OUTBACK!
JC: I didn't even know there were motels in the Outback.
Missy: Oh a pretty frog.
Horatio: DON'T TOUCH IT! *shoots frog*
Missy: *stares blankly*
Horatio: It was poisonous.
Anni: It wasn't even real. That's a thing to help you take off your shoes.
Horatio: ...Oh.
Calleigh: Hey that pool looks a little murky.
Colton: It's probably got dead people floating at the bottom.
Missy: EW!
Anni: Oh gross. Hey can we go swimming?
Horatio: Only if you don't get the murky water up here.
Inside pool, 15 minutes later
Anni: *covering eyes* MARCO!
Colton: Polo.
Anni: *lunges* AH!
SPLOOOSH
Calleigh: My hair's wet! My hair's wet!
Anni: *uncovers eyes* You're in a pool.
Colton: And she looks mighty fine.
Calleigh: *looks at Colton*
Colton: Or um....POLO!
Anni: Okay I'll go again. *covers eyes* MARCO!
JC: POLIO!
Anni: Polio?
JC: Oh...Wait we're not playing "Name the disease"?
Anni: No.
JC: Darn.
Anni: Guys, come on. Do this properly. MARCO!
Calleigh: Polo! *jumps around*
Anni: You're not supposed to be making noise.
Calleigh: I thought we were.
Missy: Hey! Let's play "Who can hold their breath underwater the longest".
Anni: NO. We're playing Marco-Polo.
Megan: I stepped on something squishy.
Anni: Colton! *slaps Colton* I told you to do your business in the motel room.
Colton: No you didn't. And that's not mine.
Megan: EW! I hate Australia!
Anni: You guys. Stop freaking out over poop.
Missy: IT'S EVERYWHERE!
Everyone: *screaming*
Anni: ...Why doesn't anyone want to play Marco-Polo?
Airplane
Jess: *sigh* ...I can't believe we had to take a stupid other flight.
Delko: Are you okay?
Jess: Yeah it's just a little hot in here.
Delko: *nods*
Jess: I'm so bored. I don't think I've ever been this bored. Boredom takes on a whole new shape when you're trying to find something interesting to talk about within the subject of BOREDOM.
Delko: I get the feeling this will be the last time we'll be bored for a while.
Jess: Is there something you're not telling me?
Delko: ...I recognize one of the men. His name is Adrian Vargas.
Jess: What, did you go to school with him or something?
Delko: I arrested him once on a hate crime. He and a couple of other men killed a blonde haired blue eyed man.
Jess: Why?
Delko: Because they can. These guys are bad news.
Jess: What do they want with a planeload of people?
Delko: I don't know.
Jess: So this Vargas guy...Does he recognize you?
Delko: I don't know.
Jess: Will he kill us?
Delko: I hope not.
Jess: So what if he kills me?
Delko: Then he'll be the next victim.
Jess: ...You know if we weren't in the worst situation on the planet, that would be very romantic.
Delko: Not the time.
Jess: Sorry.
Delko: We are so screwed.
Jess: *leans head on Delko's shoulder*
Delko: *wraps arm around Jess*
Josh/Carly's house
Josh: *sits on couch* I brought you some coffee.
Katie: *wipes eyes* Thanks.
Josh: How are you feeling?
Katie: *grabs kleenex* Crappy.
Josh: It'll take some time.
Katie: *nods*
Josh: Do you need anything?
Katie: No.
Josh: Okay.
Cait: *runs downstairs* Daddy!
Josh: *looks over at Cait*
Cait: *runs over* Daddy guess what.
Josh: What?
Cait: *whispers* I don't wanna say.
Katie: *staring at Cait*
Josh: Cait...
Cait: *whispers* I made a picture for auntie Katie.
Josh: Did you.
Cait: *giggles*
Josh: Where is it?
Cait: *reaches into pocket, opens paper*
Josh: That's very pretty.
Cait: *runs over to Katie, gives her paper, runs back to Josh*
Katie: *looks down at paper*
Little stick figures and a giant Hummer-shaped thing is seen
Katie: ...Thanks.
Cait: *swaying back and forth on heels* You're very welcome.
Katie: ...
Josh: I'm going to take her out for a while. Did you want to stay here?
Katie: Yeah.
Josh: Okay. Come on Cait, let's go visit mommy.
Cait: YAY! Mummy!
Josh: *grabs Cait's hand*
Cait: Hee! *waves* Bye auntie Katie.
Katie: Bye.
Josh/Cait leave
Katie: *looks down at picture*
Miami, DNA Lab
Speed: *walks in* Hey.
Valera: *smiles* How are you?
Speed: *frowning*
Valera: *smile fades* Oh...Sorry.
Speed: Do you have the results?
Valera: They're still running. I'll page you.
Speed: I'll wait.
Valera: ...There isn't much to see.
Speed: Does it look like I need entertainment?
Valera: No sir.
Speed: *sits in chair*
Valera: ...Do you do this to all the techs?
Speed: Some.
Valera: ...New shirt?
Speed: *blinks*
Valera: Just...Making small talk.
Speed: Well don't quit your day job.
Valera: *smiles* Hey I did get those new pipets you recommended though. They work a lot better.
Speed: Look I'm not really in the mood for this.
Valera: Oh...
Speed: *shakes head*
Valera: ...
Speed: *looks down at table*
Valera: ...Okay. Awkward.
Speed: *angry sigh*
Valera: ...Um..So DNA is cool.
Speed: *looks at Valera*
Valera: ...I tend to make stupid jokes when I'm nervous. And you're extra intimidating so it makes this so much worse.
Josh: *walks over* Hey Tim have you seen Carly?
Speed: She's somewhere around here.
Josh: Do you know...Exactly where?
Speed: *glaring* I don't know where Josh. I don't have eyes glued to the back of my fu-
Cait: *staring at Speed*
Speed: *smiles* Hi Cait.
Cait: *smiles*
Josh: Uh...I'll leave her here for a while. If you see Carly, tell her I'm looking for her. *walks away*
Speed: Come here you little munchkin. *grabs Cait*
Cait: *giggles*
Speed: What's that in your hand?
Cait: It's my teddy. Do you like him?
Speed: He's very cute.
Valera: *lifts brow*
Cait: Guess what!
Speed: What?
Cait: I was gonna drive over here but daddy wouldn't let me.
Speed: *laughs* Well I think you're a little young.
Cait: Hey. I'm three. *lifts five fingers*
Speed: That's impressive.
Cait: Guess what I learned! I learned the alphabet! You wanna hear?
Speed: Go for it.
Cait: A! B! C! D! E! F! I...Wait...No...It's...K?
Speed: G, actually.
Cait: *snaps* I always get that one wrong. Okay. G! H! I! J! K! L! ...I can't remember the rest. But it sounds like hippopotamus.
Speed: *smiles* You did fine sweetheart.
Cait: YAY! Um...Uncle Timmy?
Speed: Yeah.
Cait: Who's the lady?
Valera: *smiles*
Speed: Her name's Maxine.
Valera: *screams*
Speed: *looks at Valera*
Valera: Sorry...That doesn't happen often.
Cait: Hi Maxine.
Valera: HI!
Cait: ...*whispers* She's crazy.
Speed: *laughs*
Cait: Okie. *jumps off Speed's lap* I gotta pee so where's the bathroom?
Speed: *grabs Cait's hand* I'll show you.
Cait: *waves* Bye crazy Maxine!
Valera: Bye!
TBC.................
speedmonkey2
Head of the Graveyard Shift
So much to comment on so little time.
Ok to be honest I don't want Speed to cheat on Anni either but another part of me wants him to. I mean its Speed can I really complain. But then again we've set that whole friendship barrier to.
Awww poor poo...they just can't get away from that now can they?
Aww poor Delko and Jessie. And ohhh Delko knows one of the guys. This can't be good for them. I wonder why they wanted the plane and to go to Venzula anyway. Hmm...one wonders.
Aww Maxine is not crazy but Cait is so gosh darn cute. I got a stick figure picture and everything. Heee. I win!
Its Blood Brothers all over again. Only not with Calleigh and its not season two...
Ok to be honest I don't want Speed to cheat on Anni either but another part of me wants him to. I mean its Speed can I really complain. But then again we've set that whole friendship barrier to.
Awww poor poo...they just can't get away from that now can they?
Aww poor Delko and Jessie. And ohhh Delko knows one of the guys. This can't be good for them. I wonder why they wanted the plane and to go to Venzula anyway. Hmm...one wonders.
Aww Maxine is not crazy but Cait is so gosh darn cute. I got a stick figure picture and everything. Heee. I win!
Its Blood Brothers all over again. Only not with Calleigh and its not season two...
Seriously that man never gets to swear! lol. Awww how cute was Cait saying the alphabet. Teehee. Update soon please!
CSI_in_training
CSI Level Two
no it doesn't. OH MY GOD I MISSED SO MUCH! LORI's dead? lorie can't be dead she was like, the origional road trip baby! (I can't spell tongiht) Poor Speed, poor katie, poor josh and carly and everyone and Delko and JEss's plane's been hijacked and they're going to a country I won't even try to spell and OH MY GOD! OMFG! This is crazy. I laughed, cried, and went OMG so many times my mother has considered locking me in my room for the rest of my life (not my room though, one with padded walls and no windows) GENI! update soon! please? You are incredible, amazing, wondeful and a genius.
CSI_Trainee
CSI Level One
OMG i can't believe that lori is dead.... it just can't be true, You know no matter how long I have been reading this fic of yours geni, it still gets me when u have those little twists and turns in it. I had to stop myself from crying when i found out that lori was dead... Wow i just don't want to believe that its true tho.....
Great work geni and can't wait for more.... Update soon!
Great work geni and can't wait for more.... Update soon!
Chris_miami
Hit and Run
I started reading this one before I even had an account (for the last couple weeks or so) and I have to say, it is some amazing writing. speed_cochrane (Geni, i think?) you sure know how to keep people interested. Lots of twists and such, it was very very good. I'm gonna guess that anyone who's not on the show is a person on the thread? anyways, keep posting, 'cause I love it!
Welcome to the thread Chris. Wow, I can't believe you were reading it before you even registered. Thank you for the very nice compliments. (Yup, I'm Geni.)
I'm extremely happy that you like it, and it's such a pleasure to write for you lovely people. And yep, all those who aren't in the show, are members of TalkCSI who have asked to be placed in the story.
I should have more tomorrow, even though I promised Wyoming one for when she got up in the morning. Whoops. I'll have plenty more tomorrow!
Wow, I can't believe you were reading it before you even registered. Thank you for the very nice compliments. (Yup, I'm Geni.)I'm extremely happy that you like it, and it's such a pleasure to write for you lovely people.
And yep, all those who aren't in the show, are members of TalkCSI who have asked to be placed in the story. I should have more tomorrow, even though I promised Wyoming one for when she got up in the morning. Whoops.
I'll have plenty more tomorrow!Still_RIP_Speed
Police Officer
ah HA I spotted the Wannabe thing :lol: very good.........and awwwwww
all I can say is
OH
HOOOOOOOOOW
CUTE just beautiful-I wanna marry him, no wait-Anni is marrying him, oh no wait I'm not even in the story...oh
Guess I'll have to just settle for the dream in my head.
As ever Geni-update soon Geni(and its not sad you're reviewing your reviews-its quality)
ps Welcome Chris_Miami
karen999uk
Dead on Arrival
Cait is adorable, but I wont get too attached to her because she's doomed!
My friend brought me one of the CSI Miami books, but it's nothing like as interesting as this fic
My friend brought me one of the CSI Miami books, but it's nothing like as interesting as this fic
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