CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

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I could have sworn I've said this at least three times. :lol: I'll be doing a tenth thread -- which will be my last one. Odd numbers aren't as appealing. :p But I'm also thinking of putting an RT soundtrack together. I listen to music while I write, so I thought some of the ones that go with the moods of this fic might be fun.

But once it's finished, I'll be writing other fics that are less long.

Thanks for the reviews!

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80 days later, because well, time jumps are super

Miami Lab

Horatio: Eric, what are you doing?

Delko: I'm writing a proposal.

Horatio: What are you talking about?

Delko: For us to have road trips instead of investigating cases.

Horatio: Well too bad because we have a case.

Delko: What? No. We just got back.

Horatio: ...Did you really have to buy Geisha makeup and put it on?

Delko: I thought it would look pretty.

Miami Beach, 10am

Calleigh: *snapping photos* Who called it in?

Speed: *opens kit* Little girl was playing on the beach and found this girl behind the rocks. Told her parents.

Calleigh: She looks like a model.

Speed: What gave you that impression?

Calleigh: Manicured nails, expensive garments, straightened hair.

Speed: Maybe she was born with straight hair.

Calleigh: It's curling at the ends.

Speed: Well you would know.

Calleigh: *smiles*

Yelina: *walks over* Spoke to the parents. They don't know the woman.

Alexx: *grabs purse* Well we do. *opens wallet* Gina Abernathy, 21 years old.

Speed: Wait, I've heard of her. She's one of those uh, models that do other things on the side.

Calleigh: What other things?

Speed: Well aside from walking down the runway- which by the way is a strange term since they don't run- they go to social functions as art.

Calleigh: Art?

Speed: Yeah it's the new thing in Miami. Live art.

Calleigh: Explains the jewelery she's wearing.

Speed: I'll bag it.

Calleigh: *snaps photos*

Alexx: Says here she's from Oregon. Maybe she just moved here? Probably to start a career or..Pay tuition for college.

Calleigh: Miami sees a lot of those kinds of girls.

Alexx: *turns girl over* Whoa.

Speed: What?

Alexx: Large gashes in her back. *leans closer* Looks like...Rocks? In the wound? And up here, looks like we might have cause of death. Skull is fractured.

Yelina: I'll try to get in touch with her parents.

Speed: Well those rocks don't look like the same consistancy of these ones on the beach.

Calleigh: Trace?

Speed: If Alexx doesn't mind.

Alexx: You take all the trace you want, baby.

Miami, large house with trees everywhere...You know the kind of houses they have there.

Lori: *opens door* Hey! *hugs Gavin*

Gavin: Hey you're out.

Lori: Mhm. *kisses Gavin* I am.

Gavin: *walks in* It's a nice house. How'd you get it?

Lori: I actually found a job.

Gavin: That's nice but it doesn't answer my question.

Lori: My...Father's wife's mother bought it.

Gavin: That was generous of her.

Lori: She didn't have to do it.

Gavin: Have you even spoken with your parents since you got out?

Lori: ...No. I wanted to settle in first.

Gavin: *nods* So what new job do you have?

Lori: I'm an Executive Firm Manager.

Gavin: ...I have no idea what that is.

Lori: I work at the Reid firm.

Gavin: You mean law firm? How did that happen? I mean before you were just a clerical aid and now you're an executive manager?

Lori: I have a degree.

Gavin: Yeah but from Colombia.

Lori: *smiles* Point is, I'm makin' the big bucks.

Gavin: *smiles* About time.

Lori: Yep. Care to stay for lunch? I'm having a chef come in.

Gavin: You have a chef?

Lori: *smiling* You betcha.

Gavin: *laughs* Well that sounds great. *looks at wall* What's that?

Lori: *turns around* Oh that. *turns back* It's a crucifix. It's not like you've never seen one before.

Gavin: I've seen one before. I meant what is it doing in your house.

Lori: ...It came with the house?

Gavin: Lori.

Lori: Alright fine! I...*rolls eyes* Took the whole spirituality thing to heart. You can make fun of me now.

Gavin: No, I think it's a wonderful thing.

Lori: The truth is...I always kind of believed in that stuff. I just never said anything.

Gavin: As I recall you said something along the lines of 'There's no God'.

Lori: I lied.

Gavin: *smiles*

Lori: Shut up.

Gavin: I see treatment didn't take your 'spirit'.

Lori: *punches Gavin's arm*

Gavin: *laughs*

Large modeling agency, wide open windows everywhere, etc

Calleigh: *smiles* Mister Addison.

Addison: *stands from chair* You're the detectives who called earlier?

Calleigh: Yes. *opens file, places on table* Gina Abernathy was found this morning, dead.

Addison: One of my girls? No, that's impossible.

Speed: Cause of death was a blow to the head.

Addison: *shakes head* I just spoke to her yesterday.

Calleigh: *lifts brows* Really. What did you two speak about?

Addison: She...*clears throat* I really shouldn't be divulging this information as it was a confidential conversation between her and I.

Speed: She's dead. Any conversation you had with her is no longer confidential.

Addison: She...Wanted a raise.

Calleigh: Did you give it to her?

Addison: That is confidential.

Calleigh: It's okay, we'll supoena your financial records.

Addison: Do that.

Speed: Did she have any enemies here?

Addison: This is the modeling business. You don't exactly make friends here.

Speed: Okay, were there any people in particular that...Especially disliked her?

Addison: *thinks* ...No, actually. For a model, she was generally well-liked by the rest of the girls, even though they're older than her.

Calleigh: What does that have to do with anything?

Addison: The younger you are, the better jobs you get.

Calleigh: What kind of jobs was she getting?

Addison: Business parties, large scale club openings, things like that.

Calleigh: May we speak with some of the girls?

Addison: Sure. Have at it.

Dressing room

Speed: *knocks on door*

Girl: I AIN'T READY YET!

Speed: *shows badge through door*

Girl: Oh crap. *runs to door* Wha'd I do?

Speed: I just have some questions about a girl who worked here. Your name is?

Girl: Foxy.

Speed: *blinks* Okay, do you know a girl named Gina?

Foxy: Everyone knows Gina. She didn't do anything bad did she?

Speed: She's dead.

Foxy: *wide-eyed*

Speed: Did she have any enemies?

Foxy: *scoffs* Yeah only the older girls. I mean, I'm 23 and I get enough grief as it is. But she was 17.

Speed: 17.

Foxy: Yeah.

Speed: *sigh* Thanks, that's all the information I needed.

Foxy: Really?

Speed: Yeah.

Foxy: Okay man. You're not after as much info as other cops.

Speed: What do you mean?

Foxy: Some come by because they think we're a porn ring. If you ask me, they should be checking the clubs in town, not respectable businesses.

Speed: Right. Well, thanks for your cooperation. *leaves*

Foxy: *closes door*

TBC...................
 
Geni! So everyone made it back to Miami in one piece (Please don't tell me Eric's wearing Geisha makeup...Please)

LOL, but cool to see that there is a case going on! And Yowza! Rt Anni's mother really pulled out for Lori! But never mind that... She's getting paid! An executive at a law firm... Can we say mucho dinero? :lol:

Awesome work, as always, Geni!
 
Nooo! The fun is over! *pause* Well for now. :D Road trips can wait, now i can show Horatio i CAN do work. *cracks fingers* :lol:

Hey this case sounds cool actually. Live art? Some chick named Foxy? :lol: I know/heard some guy has 3 sisters named Pheonix, Jag, and Hunter. *cough* Isn't that cool??

Anyways, awesome work Geni! Thanks for settling my addiction for now. :)
 
Thanks for the reviews!

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Trace Lab

Horatio: Status please.

Calleigh: *looks up from microscope* Rocks in the wound of our dead model came from standard pavement.

Horatio: *blinks* Pavement. She was found on the beach, wasn't she?

Calleigh: I'm thinkin' we're after a primary crime scene.

Speed: *walks in* I just spoke to the girl's parents who confirmed she wasn't 21.

Horatio: *nods* And the magic number is...

Speed: 17.

Horatio: Okay. Have we found out where her last modeling job was?

Speed: Well, it...Wasn't really a modeling job.

Horatio: *looks at Speed*

Speed: She was scheduled at a banquet in Coconut Grove for a high end law firm.

Horatio: So what do you mean it wasn't a modeling job?

Speed: I spoke to one of the attendees who confirmed her whereabouts and she wasn't at the party. She was upstairs with one of the guests.

Horatio: Which guest?

Speed: Marshall Reid.

Horatio: The law mogul.

Calleigh: I guess she was performing other duties.

Horatio: Let's go have a chat with Mister Reid.

Interrogation room

Reid: Was this really necessary? We could have done this in my office.

Calleigh: The Miami Dade Police department thanks you for your cooperation in this case.

Reid: Did one of our clients do something?

Speed: Maybe one of your clients.

Reid: Wh-

Calleigh: Gina Abernathy. *places picture on table*

Reid: *looks down at picture*

Calleigh: She was murdered and the last place she was seen was at your banquet.

Reid: There was a lot of people at my banquet.

Calleigh: Apparently she was upstairs with you.

Reid: Yes, she was. She had a lot of potential and it wasn't in modeling. My firm is in the business of hiring young smart women who are interested in law.

Speed: So she was thinking of quitting the modeling business.

Reid: *scoffs* If you can call it that. She was barely old enough to even call it a substantial job. She wanted to use the money she was making to get into Stanford Law. I was going to help her.

Speed: She was a minor.

Reid: I'm aware of that, detective...

Speed: Speedle.

Reid: *looks at Calleigh*

Calleigh: *lifts brow*

Reid: *looks at Speed* That's...Weird, I just hired someone of the same name. Smart girl, too.

Speed: Well right now we're talking about this girl. What time did she leave?

Reid: Around 10.

Calleigh: 10? It's a little early.

Reid: She seemed agitated.

Calleigh: Did anyone attend the banquet with her?

Reid: Not that I know of. But I do know that her boss was keeping tabs on her. I assured her our discussions were strictly confidential but she was worried.

Calleigh: About what?

Reid: She didn't want to get fired and lose the money she needed to get into Stanford.

Calleigh: Was the rest of your staff at the banquet?

Reid: All of them.

Calleigh: We'll need a list.

Reid: Sure thing.

Outside interrogation room

Calleigh: What do you think?

Speed: I don't buy it.

Calleigh: Me neither. Minor...Modeling..Seems kind of hinky. Who do you think he meant before when he was talking about hiring someone with your name?

Speed: When we get the guest list I guess we'll find out.

Calleigh: *nods* I didn't say anything.

Speed: Calleigh, it's probably nothing.

Calleigh: *smirks*

Speed: I'll find H and let him know.

Large office, law firm

Lori: *writing things down*

Horatio: It's a nice office.

Lori: It's a little more than I need. You're in my light.

Horatio: *steps aside* You were at the banquet?

Lori: I don't do formal get-togethers...But, yeah I was there.

Horatio: So you heard a girl was murdered.

Lori: *stares at Horatio* No. It's sad.

Speed: *walks in* Tripp's here with cadets getting everyone's fingerprints.

Horatio: Good. Lori, would you mind?

Lori: *closes folder* I'm all for...Helpin' the good guys but this is ridiculous. No one there killed anyone. Besides, what do you need fingerprints for?

Horatio: Standard procedure.

Speed: We need your DNA too.

Lori: Why don't you just search it up in a database? I'm sure it's there.

Horatio: The department doesn't keep a log of victims' DNA.

Lori: Of course it doesn't. *looks at Speed* Isn't this a conflict of interest?

Speed: You're not a suspect.

Lori: Comforting.

Horatio: What kind of car do you own?

Lori: *sigh* Are you really asking everyone this?

Horatio: *nods* Yep.

Lori: I own a motorcycle, it's out front. Feel free to dust and tape lift all you want.

Horatio: You uh...Recently got out of rehab.

Lori: Is that important to your case?

Horatio: Reid mentioned coaching young women into job opportunities with this firm.

Lori: Yes, he hired me. Apparently I had potential. I'm assuming your victim did too. What was her name again?

Horatio: Gina Abernathy.

Lori: Terrible thing she was murdered.

Speed: I need your prints.

Lori: You should learn to cool it. Patience sure doesn't seem like your th-

Speed: Now.

Lori: ...

Speed: *opens kit*

Lori: Yes sir.

Horatio: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *stands, walks over to Speed*

Speed: *pulls on latex gloves*

Lori: You need my DNA too?

Speed: *grabs swab*

Lori: ...Alright then.

Speed: Open up and this time cut it with the smartass comments.

Lori: *nods*

Horatio: Your cooperation is appreciated, Lori.

Lori: I hope you find who did this. I really do.

Speed: *closes swab casing*

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: *closes kit, looks down at Lori's hand*

Lori: *looks down*

Speed: *looks at Lori*

Lori: I....Uh....

Speed: *leaves, slams door*

Lori: *flinches*

Horatio: *looks down at shades*

Lori: ...That went well.

Horatio: Mhm.

TBC.................
 
Geni, when I saw that Reid said something about hiring a girl with Speed's name, I was like, oh no, LORI! I kept reading, hoping that I wouldn't be disappointed in seeing that she had gotten into trouble yet again. I'm glad I was wrong. But, there's something up with Speed...Wonder what that is...Lori's clean, sober, and has a fab job, what could be bothering him? Interesting developments!

Great job!
 
Apologies for the lapse in updates all, real life got a bit hectic but I'll be back with more soon! :)
 
Oh thank Horatio you at least said something!! Thought something went horribly wrong, because no one was posting and this Fic was almost at the bottom of the FanFic page. Whew. :lol: Anyways, hope you can deal with everything thats going on over there smoothly!
 
No, I've missed so much!

Well I'm glad Lori's not in trouble, and that there's a new case! Interesting to see how this turns out. Thanks Geni! :D
 
God I've missed alot two. Its true real life has gotten so hectic lately. I can't believe I'm in my last year of high school and then there is work and stuff like that *sigh* I hope your doing well Geni, Take care or yourself! Anyway, wow that was so cute when gavin told lori that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her but.... If i am guessing correctly and lori is now wearing a engagement ring, Speed daddy does not seem to please about that... but I wonder why? Can't he be happy for his little gurl? And OMG I can't believe we got arrested in china!!!! That is so not good for interpersonal relationships between countries lol, especially when it comes to the law enforcement lol. Can't wait for more, but take all the time you need geni! Fab as always!
 
*puts on sad face* Sorry I haven't been here in like *checks time stamps* over 2 weeks. Wow, I didn't realise it was that long. I promise I'll try to review properly when I read through what I've missed. But you know:
personal stuff + screwy internet + massive exams = not able to come on computer very much, if at all.

Although, I could just say that I've been on one of my butt reconstruction camps. Man, the amount of times I was supposed to have had my butt reconstructed...even the people addicted to plastic surgery don't go in that many time :lol: :p

Anyways, I'll be back to review when I finish reading. *hides from wrath*
 
Hi ok I just read the whole RT series (took like a week but thats ok who needs to work anyways) but I love this story excspecially Eric, Ryan and whatever teddy Eric has at the time But I miss Sniffles :(. Can't wait for an update. - Ashlei
 
Hiya kiwi_girl. :D Wow, I can't believe you went through the whol series, lol. (I can't believe we're calling it a series now)

Thanks for reading it and I'm very glad you're enjoying it! I hope it'll get better -- mainly because the last few storylines haven't been as up to par as I'd like them to be. :rolleyes: But if you guys like 'em then YAY!

Carly! *huggles* Gee, y'know I'm not quite sure what you did to your butt that you need this much surgery. :lol: Glad you're back and I hope your exams are over soon.

Thanks for the reviews everyone and I'll try and get another chapter up soon!
 
Carly! *huggles* Gee, y'know I'm not quite sure what you did to your butt that you need this much surgery.
Remember? Eric broke it after a food fight or something...ah, good times...

My exams haven't actually started yet. I mean, the "trial" exams (which weren't really trials, but actually worth a substantial chunk of our final assessment) are over, but the actual final exams start in about a month. Though I do graduate from school in 11 days. WOO!

Anyway, I still haven't finished reading, but I've read most of it and am about to go out.

Once thing I wanted to mention, aside from the fact that I am atotally cool CSI (Hee) was the whole thing about the team wanting to go to Russia. My leader at youth and my brothers girlfriend and two of their friends all went to Russia last week. Coincedence? I think not. Heh.

Anyway, please update soon, and I promise I will actually read it this time. The story is so darn good, I was crazy for staying away for so long...(much better than exams, even if you don't think the stories are up to par)

ETA: Woah, I had whole lot of trouble typing that out. My fingers don't seem to want to work. So very many spelling errors...(even as I was typing out that sentence :lol:)
 
Geni, I happen to think that you are way up to par on all of your story lines! But, then again, I've been a roadie since the beginning, so I might be just the teeniest bit biased...but what can you do? ;)

And welcome to the insanity, Kiwi_Girl ! Enjoy your stay! :lol:
 
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