CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

Status
Not open for further replies.
:lol: Lora, I understood you perfectly fine. Maybe you should lay off the apple martinis eh? :p

And I think I said it before in here but I'm probably going to do ten whole threads. Ie: Next thread will go to 1000 posts. So there's still a little bit left. :) After that, I'm going to shove myself into RT retirement....And probably write more fics, lol.

Anni, the team is going to be in all sorts of foibles. :D

Heather! *huggles* Welcome back!


Thanks for the reviews!

*******************

Chapel, Texas, 5pm

Woman: *smiling* Okay everyone, let's sit around a circle and share our stories. Bill, how about you go first.

Bill: *scratches head* Well I uh, robbed a liquor store and then with that money I robbed a drug dealer and took all of his smack but it turns out it was fake smack and I smoked it all and here I am because of a court order.

Woman: *smiling* Very good Bill. How about you Jolene?

Jolene: *twitching* I drove down a freeway drunk in reverse going the wrong direction.

Woman: *smiling* Excellent. Sam, how about you?

Sam: *blinking* I *blinks* Kicked *blinks* My *blinks* Neighbor's *blinks* Papillon dog *blinks* In the butt *blinks* Because *blinks* He *blinks* stole my *blinks* weed, man.

Woman: *smiling* I bet he was a fighter.

Sam: Yes ma'am. *blinks*

Woman: Charlie, how about you?

Charlie: I bought expired beer off of Ebay in a stupid bet to prove I wouldn't die and then I accidentally ran over my friend with his Mercedes.

Woman: *smiling* That's a doozy. Okay Lori, how about you?

Lori: ...

Woman: Lori?

Lori: Do I really have to share? I mean, y'alls stories made me...Speechless, really.

Woman: *smiling* It'll be fun Lori.

Lori: *sigh* Well, it all started with a trip to Colombia when I was five.

Three hours later

Everyone: ...

Lori: So that's pretty much what happened.

Woman: *smile fades* ...You sure you're not suicidal?

Lori: *frowns*

Priest: *walks in* Hello everyone.

Woman: *smiles* Father, we were just finishing up.

Priest: No no, my chapel is your chapel. Please, take your time.

Woman: But...We're finished.

Priest: Oh. Well, by all means, set your chairs in an orderly fashion at the back.

Woman: *stands* You heard him clan, let's hop to it! *claps*

Everyone stands and grabs their chairs and leave

Lori: *places hands in pockets*

Priest: I heard some of your story back there.

Lori: Were you hiding in the confessional again?

Priest: *chuckles*

Lori: So, am I fixed yet?

Priest: Patience is a virtue. Or at least that's what they say.

Lori: Well I've never really been very patient.

Priest: You've only got 75 days left of treatment anyhow.

Lori: Seems like a prison sentence to me.

Priest: Didn't you volunteer?

Lori: I did.

Priest: I suppose we all make our own prisons.

Lori: Mhm.

Miami, Trace Lab

Carly: *walks in* ...Wow. Did I just walk into a parallel universe?

Gavin: *looking through microscope* Caught a break in the case.

Carly: What break?

Gavin: Substance on the maid's running shoes.

Printer beeps

Gavin: *walks over to printer*

Carly: You processed the shoes?

Gavin: Ryan had some spare time. *reads paper*

Carly: Okay, so what does it say?

Gavin: *smiles* Sodium, potassium chloride, pancurionium bromide and a list of everything toxic.

Carly: Alright the company uses some of those products in their cleaning bottles. The rest seem more...Pharmaceutical.

Gavin: Everything listed here was in the kid's blood stream.

Carly: I just think it's all a little circumstantial.

Gavin: *looking down at paper*

Carly: We need more evidence.

Gavin: The kid's dad works for a pharmaceutical company. He has a PHD.

Carly: We'll look into it.

Interrogation room

Carly: *looks down at folder* Jacob Rogers...It was good of you to come down.

Jacob: Can I see my daughter?

Carly: I'm afraid not. So, you work for a pharmaceutical company?

Jacob: Yeah. What does that have to do with my daughter?

Carly: It's routine.

Gavin: *leans against wall, crosses arms* You have access to chemicals, right?

Jacob: Of course.

Gavin: Are you familiar with these? *places paper on table*

Jacob: ...Those are run of the mill medicines.

Carly: Your daughter was killed with a combination of those.

Jacob: ...Wait...You're not saying I did this?

Gavin: I understand back in the 70s you were present as a consultant in various executions in Florida.

Jacob: So?

Carly: You see why this makes you look guilty?

Jacob: I didn't kill my daughter!

Gavin: *places photo on table*

Jacob: *turns head away*

Gavin: Someone made it look like suicide. Conveniently while you were out of town.

Jacob: Exactly, I was out of town. I couldn't have killed my daughter.

Carly: How about the maid? She was in town.

Jacob: You think Maria could have done something like this?

Gavin: Maria. It's...Kind of informal for an employee.

Jacob: *frowns*

Carly: Either you tell us what happened or the evidence will.

Jacob: I'm not saying a thing. I think I'd like to call my lawyer.

Layout room

Heather: *crosses arms* You wanted all the evidence out?

Carly: *walks in* Yeah, is this all the stuff you took from Maria Fuentes' locker?

Heather: Yeah sneakers, photographs of her family things like that.

Gavin: *staring at table*

Heather: I don't know how this is going to connect her to the crime scene.

Carly: We know she was there in the last fourteen days which fits the time frame of our murder. The chemicals on her shoe are gravitational.

Heather: So if she had a syringe, it could have dripped.

Carly: Potassium chloride, sodium. All within her reach so that means opportunity. What about the other ones? She had to have gotten them somewhere.

Gavin: No.

Carly: No?

Gavin: It doesn't make sense. Sure, she has the chemicals but I think that was just a convenience.

Carly: How?

Gavin: The dad has access to the other two chemicals in her system while the maid had access to the rest. What if they planned this together?

Heather: So what's the motive?

Gavin: I think daughter saw daddy dearest and the maid together.

Carly: Thank God people are predictable.

Gavin: *picks up photograph, turns it over* May 12th, 1998. This looks hand-written, right?

Carly: Yeah.

Gavin: You have the log from the condo?

Carly: It's right here.

Gavin: *picks up log*

Carly: *smirks*

Gavin: Looks like a visible match to me.

Interrogation room

Maria: *drinks cup of water*

Carly: *sits* We know what happened.

Maria: I don't know what you mean.

Carly: You and Mister Rogers were having an affair. His daughter caught you and was planning on telling her mother. So you and him devised a plan to shut her up. Him with his pharmaceutical experience and access to some potent stuff and you with access to their condo while he was away -- giving him the perfect alibi. But the problem was, he couldn't get all the supplies he needed without drawing attention so you had to get the rest of the drugs. Then once she was dead, you made it look like suicide. Pretty clever. I bet the blood we recovered on the glass will turn out to be yours.

Maria: I could have been deported back to Cuba if her mother found out. I had no other choice.

Gavin: Well it looks like you got what you wanted. You'll be staying in America for life. Too bad you won't see much of it.

TBC.................
 
wow e wow e wow wow. Gavin has officially passed over to the dirty side of csi.. Congratulations. :lol:

and Lori, I almost feel sorry for her, almost.

I can't wait until we go see and what is happening in China. How's Horatio's hair doing? :lol:

*huggles* I'll be here for a week, and then I leave for vacation. *sigh*

Great update, Geni. I always love seeing a case close. Because you know; in Miami, we never close. :cool: :lol:
 
:eek: Take me with you on vacation. I haven't had one since last year. *cries*

Onward to China!

****************

Ancient temple, China

Horatio: *looking down at brochure* Okay, we're in a Buddhist temple everyone. So take off your shoes.

Calleigh: But...What if they get stolen?

Horatio: Calleigh, the shoes.

Calleigh: *pouts, removes shoes*

Horatio: We're in the grotto which is called the Shiku.

Delko: Sounds like shitzu.

Lilly: *giggles*

Lora: *snickers*

Horatio: Eric.

Delko: Sorry.

Horatio: *reading* Apparently figures and bones of Buddah's relics are worshipped in these temples which were called Lanruo, Futu, Daochang, Zhaot-

Katie: We get it.

Horatio: I'm just trying to broaden your knowledge.

Anni: Hey look at the cute little Buddah statue. *touches statue*

Crack

Everyone: *looks at Anni*

Anni: ...I didn't touch it.

Delko: *trips* AH!

Carpet rips

Delko: My bad!

Horatio: *staring at Eric*

Lora: Ah crap my hotdog squished mustard everywhere!

Katie: Wait! *kneels* You have to really rub it in to get it out.

Lora: What? How does that work?

Katie: It's like scrubbing.

Lora: ...It looks even worse.

Katie: We'll just say it was already there.

Horatio: How did you get a hotdog in here?

Lora: ...I'm not exactly sure.

Horatio: Either eat it or hide it.

Lora: *shoves hotdog under carpet*

Horatio: 0_0

Lora: Your face looks like an emoticon.

Horatio: -_-

Lora: *giggling* Now it's a frowny emoticon.

Calleigh: Hey let me do one! ^_^

Lora: OH THAT'S A GOOD ONE!

Delko: I have one, I have one! ")

Speed: ...How is this even happening?

Katie: It's a fic.

Speed: What?

Katie: Ching chong chang woo.

Speed: *lifts brow*

Katie: *punches Speed's arm* Go get 'em tiger.

Speed: You confuse me.

Anni: *lifts large gold plate* Who wants to play frisbee!

Lora: I DO! I DO!

Anni: Go long!

Delko: Can I play?

Anni: Sure we'll make teams.

Calleigh: I'm on Eric's team!

Delko: *smiles* Ooh I got picked.

Calleigh: *smiles* You better believe it.

Anni: *throws plate*

Delko: I GOT IT! *jumps, smashes into large column* Ow ow...Ow..

Calleigh: *runs over* Are you okay? *kneels*

Delko: I'm good. *holds face*

Calleigh: You poor thing.

Anni: Ugh, Eric you cracked the frisbee.

Delko: You threw it.

Anni: You couldn't catch it.

Delko: Ah touché.

Chinese guard: HEY!

Anni: FIVE-O, RUN!

Delko: AHHH! *runs*

Horatio: *covers eyes* This isn't happening...

Lora: *hides face under carpet* If I can't see you, you can't see me!

Two hours later, chinese prison cell

Horatio: Well this was brilliant.

Delko: *holds ice to face* You're telling me.

Calleigh: *rubs Eric's arm* I should have caught the frisbee.

Horatio: IT WASN'T A FRISBEE!

Speed: Remind me again why the rest of us are in here?

Horatio: Hey if I'm going down, I'm taking you with me.

Speed: Fair enough.

Horatio: *flips hair* Now, to get us out of this mess. *stands* Oh guard!

Large burly guard walks over

Horatio: Uh...I was expecting someone less...Muscular and less...Masculine but this could work. Okay, I need to call my lawy-

Guard: No lawyer. You stay jail.

Horatio: No, no see I don't stay jail. *points to self* Me Lieutenant Caine.

Guard: Oooohh...Me in charge. You not.

Horatio: *laughs* Ah, very comical good sir but you see, I'm not a criminal. I'm a police officer so if you could kindly let us go with a warning, I'll be sure to pass it on with our government about how 'brotherly' you were with another police for-

Guard: Too much talk. You stay.

Horatio: Listen bub. *points finger* I have ginger hair and a great smile and I don't deserve to be here!

Guard: Cry to momma. *walks away*

Speed: *sigh* H, at least you tried.

Horatio: Yeah. *sits* It's hopeless. I feel like Charlie Brown.

Delko: Charlie Brown was arrested by the chinese police?

Horatio: *frowns*

Atrium, outside, Texas, two days later

Lori: *sitting on bench, drawing*

Gavin: *walks over*

Lori: *staring at page, drawing*

Gavin: Good afternoon.

Lori: *looks up, smiles*

Gavin: *smiles*

Lori: *stands, hugs Gavin*

Gavin: How are you doin'?

Lori: *lets go* I'm just glad to see you.

Gavin: I missed you too.

Lori: *clears throat*

Gavin: Somethin' wrong?

Lori: *smiles* No. I just didn't expect you here.

Gavin: Well expect it. So how's treatment been going?

Lori: Fine. I feel...A little better. Not as sick.

Gavin: How about emotionally?

Lori: Frustrated...Angry.

Gavin: I guess you can't run from your issues anymore.

Lori: No and I don't want to.

Gavin: You're probably the strongest woman I know. You'll get through it.

Lori: *smirks*

Gavin: Plus, I'm always a phone call away. If you ever need anything day or night, I'll be here.

Lori: Thanks. *sits on bench*

Gavin: *sits*

Lori: I like Texas. Probably because I've always liked sunsets and they're always so colorful here. I mean, it's because of the dust that gets into the air which inevitably changes the sky's color but science always takes the grace out of nature.

Gavin: I see you have a lot of spare time.

Lori: *laughs* Some.

Gavin: You know, when I was a kid, I used to take one of the mares out and ride as far as I could just to get away from the city lights. I wanted to see the sky through the same eyes as the cowboys I guess.

Lori: *smiling* That's very cute.

Gavin: I haven't rode in a while. I almost forgot how beautiful this place can be.

Lori: *leans head on Gavin's shoulder*

Gavin: *wraps arm around Lori*

Lori: I'm sorry, I'm still picturing you in little chaps and a little hat. *giggles*

Gavin: *laughs* Hey I thought I was rather handsome back in the day.

Lori: I bet you got beat up a lot in school.

Gavin: True but the bruises were worth it. Plus when I made it to highschool I could kick their ass anyday.

Lori: Oh I believe it.

Gavin: Good.

Lori: *sigh* I don't want you to leave.

Gavin: Rules are rules.

Lori: Rules suck.

Gavin: *laughs* Yeah but you don't want to get kicked out this early. *stands*

Lori: No, no! Stay for a few more minutes.

Gavin: I can't.

Lori: *stands* Don't leave me with these nuts. Some of them should seriously be in a hospital.

Gavin: *smiles* You'll survive.

Lori: You're not going to find a new girlfriend are you?

Gavin: What do you mean?

Lori: Well obviously you can't visit every day and you'll probably meet someone and well it happens.

Gavin: Lori, I'm going to visit every day. And you don't have to worry about me 'meeting' other people.

Lori: *narrows eyes*

Gavin: You can trust me.

Lori: *sigh* Sorry. I guess another issue I have to work out.

Gavin: *kisses Lori's cheek* I'll see you tomorrow.

TBC..........
 
I am back I am back I am BACK. :D

Horatio and the gang got arrested in China? Ooh, Geni, it reminds me of Smallville when Lex and Jason (*wink wink nod nod* Jason *cough* Ackles *cough*) and the Chinese police arrested and tortured them... ah, I miss Smallville.

I love how Gavin keeps visiting Lori, and the fact that he's getting her help. This problem has gone on for too long and it's a good thing it's finally being taken care of the right way with someone who she cares about there for her all the way. What a wonderful way to boost up their relationship. I love seeing Lori have to work out her problems but still not be alone in it.

And the case is solved, finally. I can't wait to get back to Miami, away from the nutcases, and back to solving cases :)lol: not nutcases, just normal cases) with Ryan...

Loving it, Geni! *huggles*
 
LILLY! *jumps on* You're back!

Priest: You've only got 75 days left of treatment anyhow.

Lori: Seems like a prison sentence to me.

Priest: Didn't you volunteer?

Lori: I did.

Priest: I suppose we all make our own prisons.

Lori: Mhm.
Click to expand...

That is such a good line. 'We all make our own prisons.' Good one Geni. ;)

Horatio: 0_0

Lora: Your face looks like an emoticon.

Horatio: -_-
Click to expand...
:lol:

Horatio: *flips hair*
Click to expand...
Whoa whoa whoa whoa....stop there. Flips hair? How!?

Great updates Geni!
 
Geni! My god woman, I thought I was going to stop breathing there for a second reading those nuts in China. Leave it to RT Anni to break things and start a frisbee game with an ancient plate. Oddly sounds familiar *coughmecough*. I'm a clutz, and proud of it;) . And the entire scene in the prison...Horatio's emoticon...LOL I thought I was going to spaz from all the laughing! Purely hiliarious that the guard made fun of Horatio...and 0-0... Horatio flipped his hair>>>>>????? LOL...that , my dear, took it to the bank for me lol!

The case is solved! Awesome work in that, and Gavin, started to do some actual work...that was just great. He's fitting in nicely.

Lori really gave something for her 'group' to mull about. I checked out when the woman asked her if she was sure she wasn't suicidal...LOL

Gavin's assurance to Lori that he wasn't going to leave her was so sweet, as was the little story he told her about his childhood. I love moments like that, shows that Lori still has a fighting chance!

Awesome work, Geni! Awesome work!
 
Lora, H is a man of many talents. ;)

LILLY! *glomps* Ah yes, China. Good ol' Shanghai. *pokes Jason* :p

Thanks Anni!

**************

Two days later, Texas

Lori: *sitting by window*

Jolene: *walks over* Hey girl, what are you doin' over here?

Lori: I'm waiting for someone.

Jolene: You mean that dude that keeps comin' over?

Lori: Yeah. He didn't come yesterday.

Jolene: Maybe he got busy.

Lori: *jumps off window sill* I don't think so.

Jolene: What are you doin'?

Lori: *opens drawer, grabs gun*

Jolene: *wide-eyed* How did you get a gun in here?

Lori: *clicks gun barrel in place* Don't ask.

Jolene: *runs to door*

Lori: Hey.

Jolene: *stops*

Lori: Don't tell anyone.

Jolene: You brought a gun in here!

Lori: I'll only be gone for a couple of hours.

Jolene: You can't leave. We have circle sharing in twenty minutes.

Lori: Can I borrow this? *grabs leather jacket*

Jolene: Uh, sure. You know you'll get kicked out if they find out you're gone.

Lori: That's why they aren't going to find out. Tell 'em I'm sick or somethin'.

Jolene: What if they want to check on you?

Lori: Tell them I didn't want to be disturbed.

Jolene: They're not gonna like that.

Lori: *zips up jeans* You know what I've realized while I've been here?

Jolene: *shakes head*

Lori: I'm not from Miami.

Jolene: *lifts brow* You're not?

Lori: Nope. *places on shades*

Jolene: Then where are you from?

Lori: *smirks* Cover me. *jumps out window*

Jolene: Whoa, wait! *runs to window*

Warehouse, Texas

Gavin: *sitting in chair*

Zero: *smiles* Found ya.

Gavin: *frowning*

Zero: *grabs badge off of table* What's this? Your Boy Scout patch? *laughs* Herman, get a load of this.

Herman: *walks over* Looks like one of those things you get out of the cereal box.

Zero: Yeah man, definitely. I think I remember getting one of these things too when I was about five.

Gavin: You finished makin' fun of it now?

Zero: I didn't tell you you could talk.

Gavin: I apologize, your majesty.

Zero: You ruined the plan and you almost got us caught. You know what we do to people who betray us? Herman, fill him in.

Herman: *punches on hand* We kill 'em.

Gavin: *rolls eyes*

Zero: That's exactly right. So. *grabs gun off table* Where do you want it? You got your choice between head, chest, gut, hmm...Back of the head?

Herman: My personal favorite.

Zero: Yeah mine too.

Gavin: I see you've got a new little gang to play with.

Zero: They're a lot smarter than the other one.

Gavin: They look just as stupid to me, man.

Zero: *whacks Gavin in the face with gun*

Gavin: *frowns*

Zero: Ah he bleeds. You know what? I thought it would be fun to sit here and watch you gargle up your own blood but I got to thinking and I think...It would be even more fun to watch your girlfriend die first. How's that?

Gavin: Good luck findin' her.

Zero: We don't have to. She's at the druggie place right now.

Gavin: Wow. You're more uninformed than I thought. I've been gone two days which means she is now gone.

Zero: *stares at Gavin*

Gavin: I'd be a bit worried.

Zero: What's so scary about a little girl?

Gavin: I don't know, she got away the first time and you were standing in the room.

Zero: *snaps*

Guy: *walks over*

Zero: Your team back?

Guy: Yeah boss.

Zero: You get the girl?

Guy: Uh...*scratches head* She...Um...

Zero: She what.

Guy: She's...Gone.

Zero: *turns around* And when were you planning on telling me?

Guy: I wasn't. I don't want to get hurt.

Zero: *whacks guy in the back of the head*

Guy: Ow.

Zero: GO FIND HER!

Guy: *runs*

Zero: ALL OF YOU! NOW!

Men run out

Zero: *turns around*

Gavin: *smiles*

Zero: *glaring* She'll never find out where we took you.

Gavin: It's okay, I told her all of the hideouts you had when we were in Miami.

Zero: ...

Gavin: *shrugs*

Zero: She's a little girl. A minor distraction, nothing more. *scoffs* Besides, I see she distracted you enough to betray us. This is why I don't hire women. They make men like us weak.

Gavin: I'm nothing like you.

Zero: You're a criminal, even if you flash that shiny badge and think otherwise. You've killed for us and you never hesitated until she showed up.

Gavin: You're right.

Zero: You could be rich, you know. Not bound by rules and a shirt and tie. You could drive whatever vehicle you want, have any woman you want. You blew it. And it's too bad I'm going to kill you. *points gun to Gavin*

Click

Zero: *stares ahead*

Lori: Hey. Mind if I join the party?

Zero: How did you get in here!

Lori: Well next time you might try hiring more than bouncers to keep an eye on your digs. Their flashlights are out of batteries if you know what I mean.

Zero: *turns around*

Lori: Ah ah.

Zero: *frowns*

Lori: See, I came here to get treatment, not fight with you and your little Scooby Gang. So you can see why I'm a little pissed.

Zero: *places finger on trigger*

Lori: *swipes Zero's feet from under him*

Zero: AH! *falls*

Lori: *kicks gun away*

Zero: *grabs Lori's leg* HA!

Lori: *kicks Zero in the face*

Zero: OW! *headbutts Lori*

Lori: *falls* Ugh.

Zero: *punches Lori's face*

Lori: AH! You know, I'm gettin' a little tired of you. *knees Zero in the crotch*

Zero: 0_0

Lori: *punches Zero in face*

Zero falls, unconscious

Lori: *stands, grabs gun* Finally. *walks over, unties Gavin*

Gavin: *stands*

Lori: You okay?

Gavin: *touches Lori's face* You alright?

Lori: *pulls head away* I'm fine.

Gavin: *nods*

Lori: I can't believe you let them catch you.

Gavin: *frowns* I didn't let them.

Lori: I could be kicked out of the program now.

Gavin: You didn't have to leave.

Lori: Come on, you saved my ass. Twice. I might as well have returned the favor.

Gavin: You seem in a hurry.

Lori: I have to get back. You have a vehicle?

Gavin: Sure.

Outside

Lori: *takes off shades*

Gavin: Grabbed it from my parents' place.

Lori: ...

Gavin: What?

Lori: A motorcycle.

Gavin: What's wrong with a motorcycle?

Lori: *extends hand*

Gavin: *looks at Lori* ...No. No no. You are not riding this thing.

Lori: *looks at Gavin*

Gavin: No.

Lori: *smirks*

Gavin: *sigh* You're insane.

Lori: You're ridin' in the bitch.

Gavin: What? NO! You are. I get the front.

Lori: *grabs keys*

Gavin: Lori.

Lori: *gets on bike, revs engine*

Gavin: How do you even know who to work these things?

Lori: Come on, I don't think Jolene can hold off the staff forever.

Gavin: You know what? You take the bike. I'll hotwire one of the goons' cars.

Lori: Suit yourself.

Lori speeds away

Gavin: What in the world has gotten into her?

TBC....................

**************

Hummerhome, China

Horatio: WOOOO!!!!! WE ESCAPED THE PRISON!!!

Calleigh: I'VE NEVER FELT THIS ALIVE!

Delko: THAT WAS SO AWESOME WHEN HORATIO PUNCHED THAT GUY RIGHT IN THE EYE! OH MAN!

Lilly: Wait, how did we get a Hummerhome?

Horatio: I HAD IT SHIPPED OVER! Did you guys see that guard cry? Ha. That'll teach 'em to keep me in prison. I'm like a horse. You can't tame me!

Calleigh: Most horses are tamed.

Horatio: WILD HORSES! WOOO!

Lora: Is it just me or are we going...Really fast.

Missy: Horatio, slow down!

JC: I like it. It's bumpy. *smiles*

Katie: *hanging onto couch for dear life* We're going to either get pulled over and go back to prison or we're going to die in a firey crash.

Horatio: Nonsense. I'm the perfect driver.

Colton: Didn't you guys go over a cliff once?

Horatio: Once is better than a hundred times.

Colton: My mistake then.

Speed: Horatio, maybe you should slow down just a little bit.

Horatio: NO. I shall never slow down until we reach the pinnicle of our journey.

Speed: Which is...

Horatio: HOME.

Calleigh: That's across the ocean.

Anni: NO! DON'T DRIVE US INTO THE OCEAN!

Horatio: No no no. We're going to Russia first.

Speed: What?

Horatio: Yeah and then we're going to Siberia and then we'll make a tailspin by the north pole, travel down British Columbia and then be back in Miami by supper time.

Colton: I don't think you quite understand the rules of time.

Horatio: Of course I do. Everything takes fourty minutes to an hour to complete.

Colton: Well actually in reality it's a lot more.

Horatio: STOP BUSTING MY BUBBLE!

Colton: Alright fine, calm down. Geez.

Calleigh: So what are we going to do in Russia?

Katie: *grabs camera* I hope there are cows.

Speed: *grabs camera from Katie*

Katie: Hey.

Speed: *throws bag of Cheez-its*

Katie: YAY! *eats*

Speed: See? She can be trained.

Katie: HEY! *slaps Speed*

Speed: OW.

Delko: Haha you got slapped by the Ex.

Speed: Last winter you stuck your tongue to a pole.

Delko: Where were we last winter?

Speed: It was the freezer of a 7-11.

Delko: ...Oh yeah. We had to call the fire department.

Speed: What a waste of money.

Delko: Hey I lost very valuable taste buds in that whole ordeal. I can't look at a bowl of ice cream without screaming now.

Colton: *whispers* Ice cream...

Delko: AHHH!

Lora: Wubba.

Delko: *screams*

Horatio: *slams on brakes*

Everyone: *flies forward*

Horatio: *grabs gun* Where's Wubba?

Speed: He doesn't exist.

Horatio: Okay team, our new mission. Hunt down Wubba once and for all.

Calleigh: In the middle of an interstate...Or...Highway? Whatever we're on?

Horatio: Yep.

Delko: FINALLY! He's on my side! Wait, you're not drunk are you?

Horatio: ON LIFE!

Delko: THAT'S MY BOSS!

Treatment center, midnight

Lori: *climbs through window*

Gavin: *climbs in*

Lori: My roommate's asleep so quiet.

Gavin: You sure seem confident and...Weird.

Lori: *takes off leather jacket* I think this treatment thing is working.

Gavin: After only a few weeks?

Lori: I'm not saying I'm ready to go home.

Gavin: Good.

Lori: *takes off shirt*

Gavin: *closes eyes* Um...It's not that dark in here.

Lori: *grabs tank top* It's nothing you haven't seen before.

Gavin: What's with you?

Lori: Look, I've been cooped up in here for weeks. I needed some air.

Gavin: So you didn't care that the guy was about to kill me.

Lori: What? Of course I cared.

Gavin: You seemed more into kicking ass.

Lori: *sits on bed* I'm sorry.

Gavin: *sits* It's okay. I understand. At least you came.

Lori: It's not okay. See? I told you I screw up every relationship I have. It's over, isn't it?

Gavin: Uh, no. It's not over.

Lori: It's not?

Gavin: *sigh* No.

Lori: Oh.

Gavin: *looks down at floor*

Lori: ...What is it?

Gavin: I love you.

Lori: You've said that.

Gavin: Promise me you won't leave here again until you're finished.

Lori: Okay I promise.

Gavin: And...

Lori: And what?

Gavin: ...When you get out...

Lori: *lifts brow*

Gavin: I...Want to...Spend the rest of my life with you.

Lori: *stares at Gavin*

Gavin: *looks at Lori*

Lori: ...

Gavin: I want you to marry me.

Lori: *nods* Okay.

Gavin: *lifts brow*

Lori: Yes, I'll marry you.

Gavin: *kisses Lori*

TBC...................

Now, onward to the RT Gang next for a while. :devil:
 
Oh that's awesome how cool Lori was in that update. Just totally takes out the guy. :lol: Gavin was pretty good too, for being bound to a chair. And those thugs or just SO typical. "Uh...yeah boss...." :lol:

Delko: THAT WAS SO AWESOME WHEN HORATIO PUNCHED THAT GUY RIGHT IN THE EYE! OH MAN!

Lilly: Wait, how did we get a Hummerhome?

Horatio: I HAD IT SHIPPED OVER! Did you guys see that guard cry? Ha. That'll teach 'em to keep me in prison. I'm like a horse. You can't tame me!

Calleigh: Most horses are tamed.

Horatio: WILD HORSES! WOOO!
Click to expand...
:lol: I would know. :lol: And YAY Horatio you made someone cry!!! *hugs* That's my baby.
Horatio: No no no. We're going to Russia first.
Click to expand...
*eyes widen* No way. Geni, no way! You're going to Russia!? Whoo! My home! (well, my parents home) Geni, did you know that i spoke russian or was this a coincidence? (or however you spell that) Anyways, slavabogouh!

Delko: FINALLY! He's on my side! Wait, you're not drunk are you?

Horatio: ON LIFE!
Click to expand...
*prays* Let's just hope if i scroll down more i get to sleep with him.

Lori: Yes, I'll marry you.

Gavin: *kisses Lori*
Click to expand...

:eek: OMG! No way i thought it would be just a short relationship! Like with Ryan and the guys before that. Wow Lori, full of surprises.

Fantasticallastical update Gen! Horatio being crazy and all. And Lori kneeing more guys in their crotches then getting married. :lol: I can't wait to see what happens in the next update.
 
Geni, I've got like six minutes before going back to work, so here it is...

Lori still kicks ass, in a major way, and doing it with style! Love that Gavin is so into her, so much so that he asked her to marry him. Wonder if he is experiencing some problems with the head shots he took from the goon:D Just joking, I'm awwwwwing at the proposal!!


And those RTers... Horatio is, ah... brand new? Gotta love a man who thinks that everything takes forty mintues to an hour to get to. With thinking like that, he could take over the world...Wait, hasn't he done that yet? If he hasn't , why not? :lol: Died , totally died on that speeding hulk of Hummerhome, that suddenly, made it to CHINA! This was so awesome! So awesome!


Good work, Geni!

whew..and curtain! ;)
 
Lori, is like, becoming my hero. 0_0 :lol:

This is my last night on before I leave, so I'm going to try to make this as worthwhile as possible.

I never thought that Lori would ever settle down with somone. If it was to be anybody though, I am glad that it is Gavin. Knowing you, Geni, I sense something is about to turn. I hope not, but eh. It's RT.

Speaking of RT!!! Haha first I never thought I'd read Mr. Caine would ever be in jail in the first place, but to break out. :lol: AND PUNCH A GUARD TO BOOT!

Oh, Geni. *sigh* I'm not going far, I'm taking my computer with me, and I'll be back in 9 days. ^_^ *huggles*
 
Speaking of RT!!! Haha first I never thought I'd read Mr. Caine would ever be in jail in the first place, but to break out. :lol: AND PUNCH A GUARD TO BOOT!
Click to expand...
EXACTLY my words! Except i didn't say them. I was just thinking the same thing....just couldn't describe it. You girls know what i mean. ;)
 
Thanks for the fab reviews, they always make my night. :)

Now, for time, my internet company has been screwing with the system so I'm not sure when I'll get as much time as I need to put up a chapter but I'll find a way. :p I always do. Plus, I'm having some er...Personal issues to deal with (Lots of meds :D) so I'll be a bit late as it is getting some chapters up. BUT I'LL GET 'EM HERE! So keep checking back. I just haven't had the time this week to get very many in.

*huggles all*
 
You're going into RT retirement after this one's finished? what a shame your writing skills are fab Geni.

enjoyed the update, more soon please.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top