CSI:Miami Road Trip #11: We Ain't Comin' Home

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Well That was dramatic! and what the hell was up with Speed ! he sure didn't act to damn concerned over Anni ! he just said are you ok and basicly walked away! WTF!

Note to Speed!

Anni is the mother of your child ! Your wife ! If you know what is good for you and you love her then you would be a little more upset that she almost died! And was it conveniant that you didn't ask her how she got out from under the bus before it blew up and she became a crispy critter! Or maybe you already suspect that Toms bedding down your wife and you really could care less ! jeez Speed! A little more care is in order twords her! Maybe thats why she is turning to Tom for Comfort ! You think! Duh!

Great update Geni!
 
Thanks so much for the lovely reviews. :)

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Gables Estates, house, den, 3pm

Steph: *picks up chess piece*

Scott: *stares at Steph*

Steph: *concentrates on board*

Scott: *smirks*

Steph: *places piece on square*

Scott: Nice job.

Steph: *smiles*

Lori: *walks over, sits* You're teaching her chess? That's a little advanced, even for me.

Scott: She needs to learn decision-making skills and the direct result that comes from them.

Lori: Couldn't you have taught her to play Monopoly or something?

Scott: We already did that last week.

Lori: Of course.

Scott: *places chess piece on board*

Steph: *staring at board*

Lori: She seems very...intense.

Scott: Shh.

Lori: *frowns*

Steph: ...*places piece on board*

Scott: *sigh* I thought we just went over this. The Rook can only move in a straight line.

Steph: Daddy, I'm tired of chess.

Scott: But you're doing so well.

Lori: *places hand on Scott's shoulder* I think she'd rather do something aimed more at her age.

Scott: *lifts finger* An early start equals success later in life.

Lori: Sure it does.

Scott: Come on Steph, let's go. Keep playing.

Steph: No.

Scott: Just a few more minutes.

Steph: *sighs, grabs piece*

Scott: *smiles*

Steph: *slams piece onto board*

Scott: *smile fades* ...That doesn't go there.

Steph: *crosses arms*

Scott: *places piece onto board* Your turn.

Steph: I wanna watch toons.

Scott: Not until we're finished.

Steph: *frowning*

Scott: Go on. Make a play.

Steph: NO.

Scott: Yes.

Steph: *shoves board off the table*

Chess pieces fall everywhere

Scott: Stephanie, pick that up.

Steph: NO!

Scott: Now.

Steph: *screeches, starts kicking table*

Scott: Stop kicking the table. Steph. Steph!

Steph: *screaming, pounding fists into floor*

Scott: *grabs at Steph*

Steph: *scratches Scott's face*

Scott: UGH! *holds face*

Steph: *smashing feet into chess board, screaming*

Scott: Stephanie!

Steph: *throws chess pieces at Scott*

Scott: *grabs Steph*

Steph: *screeching, hitting Scott*

Scott: *sits Steph on couch*

Steph: *rips at Scott's chest*

Scott: *grabs Steph's wrists* Enough.

Steph: *starts to cry* LEMME GO!

Scott: You need to calm down first.

Steph: *crying*

Scott: *stares at Steph*

Lori: *scratches forehead*

Scott: *kneels at couch* Are you finished?

Steph: *crying, nods*

Scott: *lets go*

Steph: *grabs Lori's arm, hugs her*

Lori: *lifts brows*

Steph: Daddy's a meanie.

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Scott: Stephanie, go upstairs to your room.

Steph: *pouts, jumps off couch, leaves*

Scott: *sits on couch*

Lori: Scott, children don't have the same attention span as adults. Even I know that.

Scott: I just want her to learn. I want her to have all the opportunities.

Lori: There's plenty of time.

Scott: *nods*

Lori: *reaches over, lifts Scott's collar* She sure got you.

Biscayne Park, house, bedroom, 1am

Anni: *sighs, lies against Tom*

Tom: *wraps arm around Anni*

Anni: *closes eyes*

Tom: *kisses Anni's cheek*

Anni: *smirks*

Tom: *whispers* I love you.

Anni: *opens eyes* ...*looks back at Tom* What?

Tom: *stares at Anni*

Anni: *sits up* No you don't.

Tom: *lifts head* I don't?

Anni: This is a fling, Tom. When I'm finished, I'm going to go back to my husband and this will be a foot note in my life.

Tom: What about my life? I'm not a slab of cardboard, Anni. I'm just as much involved in this as you are and whether you want to admit it or not, this stopped being a 'fling' weeks ago.

Anni: *looks down at bed*

Tom: *sits up* Y-

Anni: I can't go back to him.

Tom: *stares at Anni*

Anni: I don't want to. *lifts eyes*

Tom: *nods*

Anni: 2 months with you has been more fufilling to me than years with him. I thought I knew what love was. But I didn't.

Tom: *brushes hair from Anni's cheek*

Anni: *sigh*

Tom: You're an amazing woman and you don't deserve to be stuck and unhappy.

Anni: ...How am I supposed to tell him? We have a daughter.

Tom: Would you rather stay and continue to pretend everything's okay?

Anni: *stares at Tom*

Gables Estates, house, dining room, 4pm next day

Katie: This chicken's really good. What's in it?

Scott: ...Chicken.

Katie: Oh. How inventive! *gobbles chicken down*

Speed: *lifts bowl* Did you want more potatoes?

Anni: No thanks.

Speed: *places bowl on table*

Lori: So who wants good news!

Katie: I DO! *lifts hands in the air*

Lori: Scott's going to be named CEO of his company.

Katie: ...He's not the CEO?

Scott: This would be attempt number 2.

Katie: How much money do you get?

Lori: Mother.

Scott: Uh...there is a substantial salary increase but we won't get into that here.

Speed: Doesn't this mean that your hours increase as well?

Scott: Not by much. There's been some changes in the company.

Katie: So you say what goes now. I mean, everyone's gotta listen to you.

Scott: ...It's sort of part of the job description.

Katie: *smiles* Does Lori have to do everything you say too? *brow bounce*

Scott: *stares at Katie*

Lori: Let's talk about something else, shall we?

Anni: *looks at Speed* I'm leaving you for Tom Carter.

Everyone: *looks at Anni*

Anni: And I'm taking my daughter.

Everyone: *staring at Anni*

Knife drops

Katie: ...APRIL FOOLS!

Scott: It's December.

Anni: *grabs glass, sips wine*

Speed: *staring at Anni*

Katie: OH OH! *points* I TOTALLY KNEW IT! *looks at Lori* I KNEW IT, DIDN'T I!

Lori: *shakes head*

Anni: Who wants more chicken?

Speed: *downs wine*

Katie: I love family meals.

Lori: So um...Dad, how are those anger management classes going?

Speed: *looks at Lori*

Lori: ...Well keep at it, you...trooper, you!

Speed: *stands, walks away*

Lori: Oy. Scott-

Scott: I'm not getting involved. He looks pissed.

Katie: Why should he be? He's cheated on his mistresses for crying out loud.

Lori: Scott, go talk to him.

Katie: Yeah Scott. You've been directly in his shoes. Lori used to sleep with Tom all the time.

Lori: *frowns*

Katie: OH I KNOW! Let's compare notes. Anni first, then Lori. These are the days of our lives.

Lori: I'll go. *stands, walks away*

Katie: I want in on the scandals too. Hey Scotty! You, me, behind that potted plant in the foyer. 5 minutes. *stands, runs*

Scott: Maybe we should stop having these dinners.

Anni: *smirks*

Backyard, balcony

Lori: *steps over*

Speed: *staring ahead*

Lori: *leans against balcony* Hi.

Speed: *looks at Lori*

Lori: ...Interesting night.

Speed: *looks back ahead*

Lori: Do you want to talk to Scott? Because he's not Tom's biggest fan either. Y'all can form a club or something.

Speed: I knew.

Lori: *looks at Speed*

Speed: It just didn't think it would amount to anything serious.

Lori: I thought you guys were working everything out. You even had a kid.

Speed: Apparently some things can't be worked out.

Lori: So you're going to accept this? You're not going to fight for her?

Speed: *looks down at ground*

Lori: What about your child? She can't just run off and take her. You have every right to be there.

Speed: ...Maybe she's better off.

Lori: *frowns* You're her father. She's not better off without you.

Speed: *staring at ground*

Lori: Scott can get you a good lawyer, th-

Speed: No.

Lori: ...No?

Speed: I'm not going to put her through that. I want at least one of my children to have a stable home life and if that means it's with Anni and Tom, so be it. I will not watch her get ping-ponged around every week.

Lori: A lot of kids go through that and come out of it without a proverbial scratch.

Speed: You're not going to change my mind.

Lori: Yeah? You're banking on Tom and Anni actually working out. They've been together 2 months. Don't be so quick to throw away your parental rights for the sake of stability. It's not a sure thing.

Speed: *looks at Lori*

Lori: I don't understand how you can just give your own child away, good intentions be damned.

Speed: *staring at Lori*

Lori: ...But I guess that's what you do. *walks away*

Speed: *lowers eyes*

TBC.....................................
 
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OO Wow... And the cat's out of the bag- for sure! I surely thought it would be a battle royale, but I'm surprised to see that not only did they not start a death match at the table, Speed knew. And he's accepted it, and I know why, because deep down, he really knew that he didn't love Anni the way he should have. It was evident, believe me. It's very good of him to want to put Brooklyn's needs above his, and I think once they get to talk about it, Anni's going to agree to visitations. I also think above all of this, they'll be decent to each other about this. But ouch, Lori! That last comment smarts- although true, sadly.

This was a ridiculously awesome update! I cannot wait for more!

OMG...I forgot Steph's show of force. That was of Lori porportion, and extremely epic. I'm surprise Steph's still breathing, LOL. She truly is her mother's daughter!
 
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Whoa! What a Family Moment! I can't believe she Dropped the bomb right in he middle of the Chicken! Wow! i had a feeling Speed already knew about it, But what could he really say! Look at what he has done in his life he really can't preach to her to much, but he could at least fight for his child to be in his life!

OMG! Katie Shut the hell up and sit down! Loti Smack the shit out of your mother please!

Poor Speed ! Now I feel bad for him!

Note to Scott! although I love the gane of Chess and lerned when I was around 7 , i would be wise not to pressure Steph in to playing something she does not want to because then she will hate the game and never want to play again! Although she should have been punished for throwing the little fit she did and scratching you! Some children are not always reseptive to things that require a great deal of attention for long periods of time like Lori said! i guess shes smarted about kids than you think!

Whoa! Tom that was a very sweet moment with Anni! I just hope you can live up to what Anni wants you to be! And I hope Anni and Speed can still be friends!

Great Update Geni!
 
HOLY CRAP! She announced it over dinner....OMG! I am surprised Speed didn't say anything. Woah!

I am glad that Lori is encouraging Speed to fight. He needs to realize what he does will affect ALL of his kids.

Katie needs help....LMAO

Oh Stephie.....

Great update Geni can't wait to read more!
 
texmex327 said:
Katie needs help....LMAO

Truer words were never spoken. :lol:

CSISDFlash said:
Although she should have been punished for throwing the little fit she did and scratching you!

Well to be fair, Scott did send her to her room. :p

Thanks so much for the reviews!

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Condo, 9am next day

Anni: *places papers onto coffee table*

Speed: *looks down at papers*

Anni: Let's not make this complicated.

Speed: Agreed. *grabs pen*

Anni: ...You're not even going to ask me why?

Speed: Would it make us any less divorced?

Anni: I just figured maybe you would be a little more...surprised.

Speed: *signs papers*

Anni: You're not going to read them first?

Speed: *drops pen, leans back on couch*

Anni: ...You're mad.

Speed: I'm not jumping for joy.

Anni: Fair enough.

Speed: You sure didn't take long to get the files. Carter must be something.

Anni: *sigh*

Speed: *rubs eyes*

Anni: Tim, you'll be able to visit Brook.

Speed: *looks down at table*

Anni: Lori told me that you think she's better off not knowing you're her father. That it would be simpler and more beneficial if she had just Tom and I raising her...

Speed: Something like that.

Anni: She has the right to know who her biological parents are. I think it's selfish to deny her that.

Speed: You really want her growing up knowing her mother ran off on her father for a younger man?

Anni: I'm not going to lie to her. About anything.

Speed: Fine. Do whatever you want. *stands, walks away*

Anni: *scratches eyebrow* And we weren't going to make this complicated.

Gables Estates, house, livingroom

Lori: I'm gonna get you! *grabs Steph, tickles her*

Steph: *giggling*

Lori: *smiling* Where's my muffin, you silly girl!

Steph: *smiling* I don't gots it, Momma.

Lori: Okay then if you're going to be that way, I'll just have to TICKLE it out of you! *tickles Steph*

Steph: *squeals, giggling* OKAY MOMMA!

Lori: You have my muffin?

Steph: Yup.

Lori: *places Steph on floor*

Steph: *runs over to couch, lifts pillow, grabs muffin*

Lori: *walks over, sits*

Steph: *jumps onto couch* Here ya go, Momma.

Lori: Why thank you, sweetheart. *grabs muffin*

Steph: *smiles* Psst. *leans over to Lori's ear, places hand on Lori's cheek* I got Daddy's keys too.

Lori: *smirks* Stephanie Elizabeth Finch, you little thief.

Scott: *runs downstairs*

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *runs over to table, lifts briefcase*

Lori: *stares at Scott*

Scott: *checks pockets*

Steph: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *runs over to foyer*

Lori: *shakes head*

Scott: Lori! Where are my keys!

Steph: *covers mouth, giggles*

Lori: *smirking*

Scott: *walks over* Have you seen them? I'm late for work.

Lori: *clears throat* No. I haven't seen them.

Scott: They couldn't have vanished in thin air. I put them on my night stand last night.

Lori: Maybe you put them somewhere else.

Scott: No. My wallet goes in the drawer and my keys go on top near the lamp. I do that so I don't forget my wallet.

Lori: Did they fall behind the night stand?

Scott: I already looked there.

Lori: Seems like you need an investigative team.

Scott: Lori, this isn't funny. I have a meeting in 8 minutes.

Lori: You're the CEO. Postpone it.

Scott: Lend me yours, I'll take your truck.

Lori: HA. I don't think so. I'm getting groceries this afternoon, there's no way I'm going to fit it all in the back of your piss-ant Camaro. Don't get me wrong, it's a beautiful machine but it wasn't designed for errands.

Scott: Don't you have a spare key for my car on your chain?

Lori: Believe it ot not, we got married before we ever exchanged keys. I don't have one. Although, you did leave me that key to your condo in New York once.

Scott: Yeah and you broke in to search for my gun.

Lori: *smiles* Must be why you never gave me a key to your car.

Scott: *looks at Steph*

Steph: *twiddling thumbs, swinging legs*

Scott: Stephanie...

Steph: *looking around*

Scott: *walks over, kneels*

Steph: *wipes nose*

Scott: *smiles* Stephanie, where are my keys.

Steph: *looks at Scott, shrugs* I dunno.

Scott: I think you do.

Steph: Nope.

Scott: Yep.

Steph: *smiles* Nope.

Scott: Remember when we talked about lies? And how you're not supposed to tell one?

Steph: Yup.

Scott: Well I need you to tell me the truth now. I need you to tell me where my keys are.

Steph: *bites nail*

Scott: Steph...

Steph: They's in the globulator.

Scott: *lifts brow* The what?

Steph: *points to sink*

Scott: *looks at sink* ...Y-...You mean the garborator?

Steph: *nods*

Scott: Oh no. *stands, runs*

Kitchen

Scott: *leans over sink* No no no NO! *turns off garborator* You have got to be kidding me!

Lori: *looks back, covers mouth*

Scott: *kneels, opens cabinet doors*

Living room

Lori: *looks at Steph* I thought you said you had his keys.

Steph: I did. Now I don't gots 'em anymore.

Lori: Oh brother.

Kitchen

Scott: *unscrews pipe* Please God let there be one intact.

Lori: *walks over*

Scott: *sighs, leans head against counter* Great. I had everything on that chain. I had only one of two keys to the vault in New York.

Lori: Who has the other pair?

Scott: Kimberly. *lifts eyes* She's dead, Lori.

Lori: Ooh.

Scott: *covers eyes* This isn't happening.

Lori: Well look at it this way. Now we know even most powerful of people can still be foiled by the high jinks of a 4-year old.

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *smiles*

TBC...................................
 
Lol ! Poor Scotty He can't win for loosing with Steph around ! I guess that was payback for the Grounding over the Chess game! She getting to be a little more like Lori everyday! I hope she doesn't do mean things to the baby when it comes!

Poor Speed! Hes so depressed and dejected! Now he feels like a bad father! and a loose again! i hope he doesn't go off the deep end and start his wild life again! Boy Anni didn't waste anytime! She reminds me of my ex-husband ! he left me and filed the next day! lol! Well at least she told him he could see Brook now if he'll just do it ! he needs a good talking to by Scott or H ! he doesn't need to abandon his child this time ! he needs a Bromance intervintion! by all his buddys!

Great Update Geni!
 
Thanks so much for the review! :)

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Miami Lab, trace lab

Speed: *writing*

Katie: So...are you back on the market yet?

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: I only ask because I know someone at the court house and she's looking for someone who doesn't like kids, animals, Twitter or lawyers and I thought HEY! That's Speed!

Speed: Tell her to keep searching.

Katie: But she's totally your type! Completely out of your league.

Speed: *shakes head*

Katie: *grabs Speed's arm* Hey, you've got a bare hand. THAT'S what I like to see. It's great that you're able to move on.

Speed: *pulls arm away* You were actually helpful the other day, what happened?

Katie: It comes in spurts. Hey we're all going to the theatre tonight to catch a movie, are you going to join us?

Speed: Who's all going?

Katie: Everyone. Even Horatio said he'd try to make it. Ooh but then it'll be a tad awkward sitting in the same theatre as Anni. You can sit with me if you want. *smiles*

Speed: I don't want to sit with you. You talk too much during movies.

Katie: I promise I won't talk during this one.

Speed: You say that every time.

Katie: And every time I mean it until something I need to comment on happens in the movie. OH MAN you think Tom will be tagging along? OH OH! You think he and Anni will be making out in the corner during the movie? You can get back at her and make out with me, I won't mind.

Speed: *smirks*

Katie: What?

Speed: That was the funniest joke I've heard all day. You have officially cheered me up.

Katie: YAY! Wait, what? I was serious.

Speed: *walks away*

Katie: *frowns*

Movie theatre, 2pm

Horatio: *steps up to counter* I need 10 tickets please.

Guy: *looks over counter* Your ass isn't that big.

Horatio: What? No, I'm buying seats for my colleagues.

Guy: That'll be 300 dollars.

Horatio: I think you're fooling with me on that one. Let me get out my calculator. *reaches into breast pocket, pulls out large calculator with gigantic buttons*

Anni: *whispers* Horatio, put that away. The normals are watching.

Horatio: *pulls out Reading Glasses of Justice* I just need to make sure I'm getting a good deal. *starts hammering on calculator*

Anni: Just pay the 300 bucks.

Horatio: That's nonsensery.

Anni: *grabs calculator* Stop it. You're not a hundred.

Katie: *jumping up and down* LET'S GO SEE THE KIDDIE MOVIE! LET'S GO SEE THE KIDDIE MOVIE! IT'S IN 3D!

Speed: No.

Katie: Why the hell not?

Speed: We're watching the action movie.

Katie: But they're all the same. Cranky male star witnesses terrible happenings and takes it upon himself to save the world, token sidekick makes a few idiotic remarks, everyone gets into a car chase, people get shot, New York gets destroyed and a half naked woman screams. The end.

Speed: That doesn't happen in every action movie.

Katie: Fine, sometimes there's time travel and aliens too.

Speed: Horatio already took a vote and you lost.

Katie: I wasn't there for the vote.

Speed: Exactly.

Delko: Who wants popcorn!

Ryan: I DO! *runs*

Delko: *runs* NO BUTTING IN LINE!

Inside theatre arena

Delko: *trips over Ryan* Watch it! It's dark and I have melted cheese in my hands here.

Ryan: If you get any of that on my new expensive suit, I'm going to bust your head in.

Delko: Yeah right, you and what muscle?

Ryan: ...I have muscle.

Delko: Fat doesn't count.

Ryan: Horatio! Eric's calling me fat again!

Horatio: Eric, pick on someone with a physique comparable to your own.

Delko: But that would be nobody here.

Speed: Don't flatter yourself. *walks up steps*

Aisle

Speed: *looks down aisle*

Katie: I SAVED YOU A SEAT! *taps seat*

Speed: *angry sigh*

Calleigh: If I didn't know better, I'd say she saved you a seat.

Speed: Can I sit with you?

Calleigh: *smiles* No way, I'm between Colton and Eric. Just the kind of matinée sandwhich I like. *walks away*

Katie: YOOHOO! *waves*

Speed: *rolls eyes, walks down aisle*

End of aisle

Speed: *sits*

Katie: Here, have some popcorn.

Speed: I don't eat that stuff.

Katie: Is there anything you will eat?

Speed: Scott's food.

Katie: God you have such a man crush on him.

Speed: Shh the movie's starting. *points to screen*

Previews begin

Katie: *leans over* You know, Anni came alone.

Speed: So?

Katie: Go re-kindle your love.

Speed: I just signed divorce papers this morning, I think we're a little past 're-kindling'.

Katie: *looks over seat* She doesn't look the least bit lonely.

Speed: Maybe it's because she's not. Watch the screen.

Katie: I bet Tom's watching your baby.

Speed: *frowns* Katie, cram it.

Katie: OH OH I WANNA SEE THAT MOVIE!

Speed: Shhhh.

Katie: Oops.

Speed: *looks at screen*

Katie: *points* HE'S A GOOD ACTOR.

Speed: *rolls eyes*

Katie: I DON'T LIKE HER THOUGH, SHE'S A BIT BITCHY!

Speed: *covers Katie's mouth*

Katie: *mumbling*

Speed: Stop. Talking.

Katie: *nods*

Speed: *pulls hand away*

Katie: Your hand smells like cologne. Mmmm. Mystic rain.

Speed: ...You memorized my cologne?

Katie: I take samples from your place everytime I'm there.

Speed: That's it, I'm sitting in the front row. *stands*

Katie: NO! I'LL KEEP SCREAMING UNLESS YOU SIT! LA LA LA MOVIES ARE SO MUCH FUN LA LA L-

Speed: ALRIGHT! *sits* Enough already.

Katie: *smiles*

Delko: *leans over seat* I don't mean to be a party pooper here but...shut the hell up please.

Speed: We're sorry.

Delko: *leans back in seat*

45 minutes later, movie begins

Katie: *leans over* Geez, why come for the movie when you can spend your afternoon watching previews about guys in fat suits dancing around in mud, sponsored by the good people at CBS and Alliance Atlantis?

Speed: *staring at screen*

Katie: What's sad is movies like that don't even bomb either. Somewhere out there, there's a large group of highschool football players with extensive head injuries waiting in baited anticipation for that movie. They're already laying out their bright red baseball caps and Polo shirts for the premiere.

Speed: *smirks*

Katie: And they actually drag their girlfriends to these things too. You know the kind. Bubblegum poppin outta their mouths, pink poodles hanging out of their purses and one of those belts that says 'insert here' in the middle. *rolls eyes* These are the people who are going to run the world when we all die off.

Speed: Shh.

Katie: Oh, right.

30 minutes later

Katie: *points* What's he doing? Why's he got his gun held that way? Is he going to miss? What if they find him?

Speed: Shut up, Katie.

Katie: These are very important questions.

Speed: Why don't you watch and find out.

Katie: I like to figure things out before they happen. Keeps me one step ahead. OOH LOOK AT THAT EXPLOSION!

Everyone in theatre: SHHHH!

Katie: *blinks* ...I'll stop. *sinks into seat*

TBC...............................
 
Oh wow...what a great couple of updates! It's sad to see it end, but at least Speed's taking it the way I thought he would ( and yes, that was meant to sound just as sarcastic as the man himself, lol). I hope with time, he'll be able to become decent with this. That's a big thing to ask of someone, but still, grow...

Katie's back to herself again, and ALL over the place, LOL. * sigh* reminds me of old Katie. I'm going to go out on a limb and say that most definetly, they are going to re kindle. He's softening to her, I can see it. That's good for him, getting reacquainted.

The cuteness that is Steph . Her mischieviousness is going to get her in some big trouble. Scott couldn't have been too happy about things. It's good to see him lose his temper somewhat.

Awesome update!
 
Lol! I am so Katie when it comes to the going to the movies! lol! Sorry but I have to be ahead of the movie and comment to ! lol! So don't go with me if you don't want to hear me !

I'm with Anni! Speed and Katie are so gettting reaquanted with eachother but they totally deserve each other! he maybe he'll get her pregnant to Lol! It is Speed you know ! That would totally be his dumb luick!

Great Update Geni!
 
*duct tapes Katie's mouth shut* Problem solved. :D

*hugs Speed* Maybe now's the time to act on that mancrush you have on Scott. I'm pretty sure Lori won't mind too much... :lol:

STEPHIE IS SO FREAKING CUTE! Too bad she dropped the keys down the sink... although, it's probably better than the toilet... :lol:

Great updates! :D
 
That was freakin hilarious...Eric called Ryan fat...ha ha shot out to the spoilers

I agree...duct tape would work just fine.

Great updat Geni
 
Thanks so much for all the reviews. :)

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Miami parkinglot, 11pm

Lori: Ugh, what do your waiters not understand about 'no wine please'?

Scott: To be fair, you kept getting different ones.

Lori: I could have really gone for a drink, too. *opens car door* What was that guy rambling on about on the podium? Something about substantial profits in the international market through a surplus of bla bla bla...I was waiting for something exciting to happen.

Scott: Like what?

Lori: I don't know. Maybe a drunk and slutty co-worker to crash the party. *shrugs* I guess I'm just used to my mother being at social functions.

Scott: *smiles*

Guy: *walks over, lifts gun* GIVE ME YOUR WALLET!

Scott: *smile fades*

Lori: *looks at Guy*

Guy: NOW!

Scott: *lifts hands* Why don't we...relax for a second.

Guy: GIVE ME YOUR WALLET OR I'LL KILL YOU!

Scott: You don't want to do that, y-

Guy: GET IT! NOW!

Scott: Okay, okay take it easy. *reaches into back pocket*

Guy: *pushes gun against Scott's chest* FASTER!

Lori: *grabs Guy's arm, cracks it*

Guy: *screams*

Lori: *elbows Guy in the eye, knees him in the groin*

Guy: UGH! *falls backwards against van*

Lori: Drop the gun or I break the other arm.

Guy: *drops gun*

Lori: Take off.

Guy: *runs away, holding face*

Lori: *turns around*

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: *smiles* Ready to go home? *walks around car*

Scott: *looks back at Lori* You could have been shot.

Lori: *laughs* Please. *gets into car*

Scott: ...*smirks, opens car door*

Gables Estates, house, hallway, 11:45pm

Lori: *pushes Scott against wall, kissing him*

Scott: *unbuttons Lori's blouse*

Steph: *steps out of room, rubbing eyes* Momma, I'm toisty.

Scott: *lifts head*

Lori: *steps back* Steph? *pulls blouse together* What are you doing up?

Steph: Toisty, Momma.

Lori: *sigh* I'll get you a glass of water, just let me...give me a few minutes, okay?

Steph: Kay.

Bathroom

Lori: *grabs cup* You shouldn't be up this late, you have school in the morning.

Steph: *frowns* I don't like school.

Lori: *looks at Steph* ...How come? I thought you loved it.

Steph: *shakes head*

Lori: *turns around, kneels* What's going on?

Steph: Kids are meanies.

Lori: How are they meanies?

Steph: *shrugs*

Lori: It's okay, you can tell me. You won't get in trouble.

Steph: They call me names. And they won't lemme play with them.

Lori: *places thumb on Steph's cheek* You know what, Steph...some kids are like that. In fact, some grown-ups are like that. It's life.

Steph: I don't like it.

Lori: *smirks* Me neither.

Steph: I told the teacher.

Lori: Good, what did the teacher do?

Steph: He gave 'em a time-out. But now they all mad at me, Momma.

Lori: *nods*

Steph: Were kids mean to you too?

Lori: *stares at Steph* ...Here, drink your water. *hands over cup*

Steph: *takes cup, drinks*

Lori: *strokes Steph's hair*

Steph: *gives cup to Lori* Thankies, Momma.

Lori: No problem, kiddo. Now get your butt to bed.

Steph: *nods, runs away*

Lori: *sigh*

Bedroom

Lori: *gets into bed*

Scott: *reading book*

Lori: Human beings are a cruel species.

Scott: I will agree with you there.

Lori: *grabs book from Scott* Watcha readin'?

Scott: It's Oedipus Rex.

Lori: *lifts brow, tilts book*

Scott: *takes book* Sophocles.

Lori: English?

Scott: *smirks* It's a play. It's supposed to be a masterpiece.

Lori: Uh huh...

Scott: I happen to think that's a relative term.

Lori: Then why are you reading it?

Scott: Why not?

Lori: *rolls eyes* College boys. *lies down*

Scott: That has nothing to do with it. I enjoy reading. I always have.

Lori: I bet. You sure it's the articles you're looking at or the uh, pictures.

Scott: *laughs*

Lori: *turns out light*

Scott: *lies down*

Lori: ...Were kids ever mean to you in school?

Scott: Sure.

Lori: What kind of things did they do?

Scott: Well...the 'four eyes' thing was pretty prevelant in elementary and let's not forget the 'my parents are richer than your parents' arguments.

Lori: That's it?

Scott: No but I didn't really let all that stuff bother me.

Lori: There had to be something that bothered you.

Scott: Okay...Suzie Richardson wouldn't go to the prom with me.

Lori: Why not?

Scott: She never said why, she just laughed at me...in front of the entire class.

Lori: Ouch.

Scott: I got over it but it did sting for a while.

Lori: She certainly missed out.

Scott: *smiles*

TBC....................................
 
Leave it to the kids to ruin it...Poor Lori...but she was awesome in kick ass mode and then, MOMMY mode. You gottta love her, she's awesome! I can't say enough how cool it is to see this family intact. Finally, Lori deserves to be happy. And I must say, it looks good on her...Except of course when she's being asked about her former life in Columbia and kicking ass... But I digress...

Excellent update!
 
Lol! Little Pregnant loris kicks the Shit out of the bad guy while Manly husband stares ! lol! Then she gets in the mood only to have it ruined by a 4 year old wanting water, and whining about not liking school! What a life !

Great update Geni!
 
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