CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspense

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Ack fix it fix it! Or I'll have to get out my pitchfork rofl
 
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe

Thank you guys so much for the reviews , I really really love them !
So here is the next chapter , shorter than usual . Is more about Grissom’s reactions and feelings and there is a little about Hodges . Please read and review !

Feelin’ better


“What ?” Catherine asked in horror “what do you mean ?”
“Well his heart stopped and if we give him the antidote it probably won’t help him . He’s in a coma now , we don’t expect for him to wake up .”
“So what ? Give him the cure , miracles happens ”
“Well I don’t think …”
“Can you just shut up and make the injection ?” Grissom yelled for the first time since Greg had been kidnapped .
The doctor did what he was told . He bent over the bed and inserted the needle in his arm . After a second he pulled it out , while the nurses were listening to the instructions he was giving . One of them started to perform CPR , while the other was helping him breath .
But the machines showed that his heart was ‘working’ again .
Hopefully , the doctor , even if he was an idiot and an ass , will probably tell them things are fine . That thanks to the antidote he’ll wake up and be with them again .
Catherine didn’t know what to think ; neither one of them knew probably . But there was hope , lots of hope that would keep them smiling . Taking the cure meant that Greg was out of pain so when he’ll wake up he’ll feel much better than he was when he fell asleep . A very good point . Nick returned to his old self ; poor guy changed a lot since the explosion . The same for Warrick .
What the doctor told them , that he can’t do anything for Greg annoyed and scared at the same time . This guy looked like he didn’t want to save their buddy and that was the thing that made them angry ; he was an idiot .
Greg’s doctor was in a surgery and he couldn’t go check on him so he sent this one , who was a dumb person and who was acting like he had no feelings . Such a bastard . How could he be so indifferent to Greg’s sufferance ? An idiot , a bastard , how could a guy like that became a doctor ? Even a janitor could have done a better job than him .
“Your friend is a little better”
“See ? Greg’s not dead yet , why the hell you didn’t want to give him the cure ? What’s your problem ? I’m angry enough to beat you up here ”
“Sorry , sir … I am new here and I didn’t know the rules … ”
“What the hell is this ? ” Grissom said again , he was now yelling “you don’t know that a human life , or any other life is more important than anything ? When they gave you the degree , they didn’t even look on how good you were in the job ? How can someone think that is no way out ,I mean , you knew Greg was alive and you weren’t going to help him . What are , a sadistic that like to see human suffering ? ”
“Mr. Grissom…” the young doctor interrupted .
“Don’t take me with things like this , please . I’m way too experienced to even listen to you , you should be the one listening to me, okay ?” he looked straight into that man’s eyes , scaring the shit out of him “this guy whose life you weren’t willing to save have been through so much that I doubt you’ll ever survive . You understand ?”
The young doctor had on his face that look that was saying “I don’t believe you”
“So , you don’t thing I’m saying the truth ? fine then , let me tell you something . You were about to let to die a guy ; okay , you’re a doctor and didn’t want to save your patient , it might be a motive , I understand and not judge you .But you heard about a big kidnapping that happened three weeks ago , right ? ”
“Yeah , of course I heard , but where’s the connection ? I know I did a stupid thing , and I’m sorry , but you really have to tell me a story here ?”
“Listen , I forgive you just because you’re a kid ,but because you heard about the kidnapping , you didn’t know he was the victim ,right ? ”
“He was the vic ???”
“Yes , and if it was for you he’d be dead by now . Listen to me carefully , you know what had he been through ? Let’s tell you . Or ask you something . You survive a beating , or a whipping ? Or you’ll be able not to scream while you’re stabbed to death because you don’t want to scare your friends ? I really don’t thing so . I doubt you will even survive . But …I see I let you speechless . “
“I never knew …”
“Okay , so Greg is a great guy and I don’t even know why I am telling this to you , because you didn’t give a shit on him . So I hope you’ll remember and not do again the mistake ”
He nodded and let them alone . to wait . The best part was that they knew everything was going to be okay . So they entered slowly again the same room Greg had been for last two days and waited for him to wake up .
Because ,now , finally , it was no doubt : Greg was going to wake up and be okay . Finally .
Brass left the hospital to go to the police station to visit Hodges . He just wanted to tell that guy that he was wrong , because Greg was going to be fine . He wanted that guy to know .
…
“Hey , Hodges , how are you doing ? Are you comfortable there ? ”
“Fuck you !” the ex lab tech answered , anger obvious in his voice , thing that made Brass more happy than he already was . He wanted to make this bastard feel powerless , feel a piece of shit , like he made him feel when Greg was in danger . Hodges had to be glad it wasn’t Warrick , or worse , Nick who was doing this .
“Me ? Why me ? I an not a psycho that is killing people without a reason ”
“So what ? I’m not crazy and I didn’t kill anyone without a reason , I had a very good reason”
“Yeah , and I should be the idiot who believes you , right ? Bad choice , David “
“Ha ha ha” Hodges laughed .
“By th way , I have to tell you the good news , I bet you’ll be as happy as I am “
“Good news ? What, is Greg dead ?”
“Au contraire , David , he’s going to wake up and be okay . They gave him the cure ”
“What ? How ?”
But Brass left , leaving Hodges more angry than he already was . God , he loved so much teasing jerks . He should make a job from this .
…
Well , I really don’t want this story to finish , but I can’t stop it . There are three or four more chapters to go !
 
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hahaha go Brass :) Can we take turns beating Hodges up?
 
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe

A happy waking

“Oh , Grissom , you really enraged the doctor !” Sara smiled .
“So ? I think he understood he was an idiot , so it was worth it , wasn’t he ?”
“Guys , guys , hey” Brass entered the room “how is he ?”
“He’s much better but he was About to die because of that idiot doctor who didn’t want to give him the cure . Bastard ….”
“But , he got the cure so he’ll live !?”
“Yeah , and he is going to wake up soon from the coma , so there is nothing to be worried for . But where have you been ?”
“To the station . Informing Hodges about Greg’s condition” he smiled and the team started laughing “take a guess , what reaction did he had ?”
“He swore to kill you ? ” Nick tried .
“No”
“He attacked you ?” Catherine asked .
“No”
“Then tell us , don’t keep the suspense up , it’s annoying !!!”
“He was dazed , I mean he really thought his poison was the best , it was really funny , I think I laughed all the way here . He asked things like why ? what , but I left without answering . He’s such a jerk !”
“Yeah he is !”
“But …” Nick laughed “he’s funny , because he always thought he was good and he wasn’t . He wasn’t ! And he’ll never be !”
“Yes , just a little bastard . I can’t wait for Greg to wake up , can you believe that he was close to death because of that doctor ? I mean , a doctor is supposed to save people , not let them die !”
“Calm down , Sara , Greg is okay now .”
…
Greg’s face wasn’t death pale any more , he was feeling much better and they saw that . Greg’s official doctor was taking care of him and informed them about the improvements and they were happy . But the news they were told a couple of minutes ago made them even happier : Greg was going to wake up . To be okay and to be with them again . The only bad part would be the trial , where he had to testify and remember all the horrible experiences he’s been through . And to see Hodges’ face .
But there was a lot of time until the trial , so they shouldn’t think at hat yet . They should think at the surprises they will make him , the party , the welcome back party that the poor guy never celebrated . The gifts and all that , the friends and the reason to live .
They were staying in the room , starring at Greg’s still closed eyes and praying for him to open them faster . But the doctor told them it was a possibility that he wouldn’t want to wake up , because he still thinks about the pain that his body is suffering when he’s awake .
“Hey , Greg ,I really hope you can hear me” Sara started “please wake up for me , for us , we miss you , we need you so much . I can’t want to see you , to talk to you , all of us are wanting this . “
“Yeah , man , for God’s sake , open your eyes , I am so bored when you’re not around , I can’t wait to hear you , to listen to your stupid jokes , please , if you are listening , just … just make a last effort and look at us !” Nick continued .
“Listen , I know you may don’t want to open your eyes , but don’t be afraid , is over , the pain , the sufferance , everything is over . There is no more pain , sweetie”
Again the silence filled the room . They were waiting for the reaction , Greg’s reaction .
…
“Hey , Greg … wake up ” … “just make a last effort and look at us …” …”I can’t wait to see you ” … “if you are listening ” …”we need you ” …“I miss your stupid jokes …”…“I know you don’t want to open you eyes …”…“the pain , the sufferance is over ”…“There is no more pain sweetie”
“Wake up Greg , wake up for us ”
…
He heard them , he heard all the words they said , and he regained his hope ; their voices made him strong and willing to come back on Earth . On real world , not in the world of dreams he had been for the last days .
He had to show them his will . He had to show them he had a little strength left .
“Guys !” Sara saw the first sign . “Look” she pointed to his hand “he’s waking up !”
They hugged each other tightly and happy , looking at his eyes all the time . In one second they were closed , but in the other …. Greg’s eyes were wide opened . Once and forever .
“Hey , Greg !” Catherine smiled .
“Cath … guys … hi ” he mumbled .
“Do you need a doctor or something ?” Nick offered.
“No … thank you … just some water ”
“Here you go ” Catherine poured some in the glass and helped him drink .
“How are you feeling ?”
“Better … than … remember …”
They knew what he was talking about . But they didn’t want to upset a man that just woke up from the dead . The should make him happy .
“Everything is okay now , Greg , everything is okay thankfully ”
“You … you are feeling okay ?
“Yeah , fine > You were the injure one , not us !”
“Well … whatever , is good to see you guys”
“I know , I’m so glad you decided to wake up !”
“Yeah … where is he ?”
He was talking about Hodges , probably .
“H …?”
“Yeah ”
“Prison ?”
“Perfect . He looks good in black and white ”
They laughed at the , that help them understand Greg was back to his old self . Finally .
“Do you like my stupid jokes , don’t you Nick ?”
…
Another chapter and the final chapter is getting closer day by day !
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Ch 33Finally

“Hey Greggo , ready to go out ?” Nick smiled ”to escape from this hospital ?” he joked .
“Hell yeah ! I miss my home !”
All the team was there when Greg got out . They were happy to see him again feeling good and help him forget about the things he’s been through . But he looked different , even if he was trying to hide it , he was scared of guns , knives , fire , and all the instruments that were used to torture him . He hated that he had to go testify against Hodges at the trial , he had to remember all that and he’ll see the criminal again .
But he should see that his friends were going to help him . He smiled at the thought he had such good friends , that suffered so much for him and were by his side no matter what .
“So … Grissom “
“Something wrong , Greg ? Do you need something ?”
“When .. ”he swallowed “when is the trial ?”
“In three weeks .” he nodded at the young CSI “you’ll be fine , Greg , I promise”
“I really hope so ”
…..
“Are you okay ?” Sara asked her younger co worker
“Yeah , let’s go , let’s make that criminal pay for all that he did !” Greg decided suddenly , for the first time .
“Perfect then . The first will be Warrick , me ,Catherine , Grissom , Nick , Brass , Jimmy, Hodges and then You . It’ll be over soon “
“Yeah … and he’ll go to jail for life , right ?”
“Of course !”
…
“Mr. Warrick Brown , right ?” the defense attorney asked .
“Yeah . ”
“You are one of the officers that investigated the case , right ? What’s your job at the crime lab ?”
“I am a CSI Level three , sir .”
“Yeah , right . Mr. Brown , could you describe your relationship with Mr. Sanders , the victim ?”
Greg’s head was spinning . He just hated to be called victim .
“Mr. Sanders is my co worker . We work together for more than five years . ”
“Okay , so you want to say that you and Mr. Sanders are not friends ?”
“Yes we are ”
“Objection , your honor ? What is this relevance ?”
“Objection accepted . To the point , Mr. Jollier ”
“Mr. Brown , what did the accused do to you ? ”
“He threatened to kill me . And my friends . ”
….
After Sara’s testimony , followed by Catherine , Grissom , Nick and Brass , Jimmy ws the next witness . They hoped that his statement will be the one to put Hodges behind the bars for the rest of his stupid life .
“Mr., Jim Bull , right ?” the prosecution attorney asked him .
“Yeah .”
“Mr. Bull , I see you was an accomplice of Mr. Hodges ”
“I was , yeah , sir”
“Can you describe me what you did for him ?”
“Yes . I cut the breaks to Mr. Sanders’ car , helped by Dean Mercury , who died shot by …”
“We know this , continue what you started . You cut the brakes and ?”
“He told us to see if Mr. Sanders will still leave after the accident ; if he did we were supposed to take him and bring him to a house .” he confessed .
“So , you just followed the car until it reached to an accident , or what ?”
“That’s right . They couldn’t stop the car , we walked and saw Mr. Sanders in the front of the car , we took him and took care not to be seen by other people . ”
”You didn’t take a look at Mr. Stokes or Ms. Sidle , that’s correct ?”
“Yes , sir . We didn’t care about them , all I know is that they were unconscious”
“So this is all you did for Mr. Hodges ?”
“No , sir , we were paid to go undercover and listen to everything that the team will find out about Mr. Sanders and tell this to Boss . We did as we were told ”
Sara put her hand on her mouth ; she remembered seeing Jim as a janitor , but didn’t pay attention then ; now it was all clear .
“O fuck …” she whispered .
“And that’s all ?”
“No sir , I kidnapped one of the CSIs at his demand and kept him hostage , threatening to kill him ” he pointed to Nick “but I surrendered , I didn’t want to die that day “
“Okay Mr. Bull , prosecution doesn’t have anything more to ask “
“Okay , Mr. Logan . Defense ?”
“No Sir .”
…
“Mr. Hodges , why did you do it ? Why did you kidnap and torture Mr. Sanders and tried to kill him ?”
“Why ? Ask them why !” he pointed to the team “because they are murderers , because they killed Holly !”
“Holly Gribbs ?right ? ”
“Yeah , sir , they let her there to die , they didn’t care about her, they just let her there alone so that bastard could kill her ! ”
“Correct me if I’m wrong . Mr. Warrick Brown was the one that let her , right ?”
“Yes your honor , I just wanted to make them feel like I did , powerless !”
“Defense has nothing more to ask .”
“Alright .prosecution ?”
”Yes , Sir ”
“Proceed”
“Mr. Hodges , why did you poisoned Mr. Sanders ?”
“I didn’t poison him , Dean did . Ask him if you don’t believe me !” he laughed inside knowing that they couldn’t .
“How did Mr. Mercury manage to prepare the antidote ?”
“I dunno , ask him !”
“Why did you put Jonathan Wilder and Bobby Dawson to kidnap and torture Greg Sanders ?”
“I ? I didn’t even know these guys ! ” his face was so natural that annoyed the attorney .
“You said to Mr. Grissom that you found them and enraged them against the team ! “
“No I haven’t say that !”
“Yes you did !”
“Prove me , because I really don’t remember !”
“Objection , your honor !” the defense attorney jumped “he’s harassing my client !”
“Objection accepted ”
“Why did you tried to kill Mr. Grissom ?”
“I didn’t even shoot him ! I didn’t hurt him , I think he hurt me more than I did !”
“He hurt you ? You pointed a gun to his head , he defended himself !”
“He kicked me !”
The attorney closed his eyes angrily . This guy was such a bastard , he hurt all the team but he just couldn’t help nailing him . He turned for a second to look at the team and then saw that his questions were helping Hodges instead of accusing him , so he gave up . He just hoped Greg’s statement will nail David Hodges forever .
“I am out of questions , your honor”
“We’ll take a break for three hours . After this we are going to hear Mr. Sanders’ testimony and the verdict . ”
Greg couldn’t wait to get out of there . When Hodges saw his wet eyes laughed .
“I am going to win this too , Sanders . I am not going to jail , you’ll see ! I don’t even think you’re man enough to testify against me , are you ?” he smiled “you’re just a poor victim who’s crying for himself … and you’re so pathetic , Sanders , God , I wish you would be dead ! You’re such a child . I think I can beat you even with my hands tied !”
“Really ? Well , I think your just a bastard and a criminal , let’s see what the jury is going to say after I tell them everything , I want you to die in jail , to live your life like a criminal deserves to , you hear me ? And I ” the team approached him “we are going to take care you’ll pay for all that you did . And , by the way , you’re such an idiot !”
Then he turned to them and smiled , letting them see the satisfaction in his eyes .
“I just had to tell him that” he defended himself .
“Good , now we have some hours to get ready for the finale , are you okay ? ”
“Oh yeah !” he laughed .
…
I can’t wait to see what is Greg going to say at the trial ! What do you think ?
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I wanna see too what he's going to say. More more!
 
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The testimony

“Hey , guys ” Brass saluted them , walking over to see what they were doing “if you could see what face all of you have … what happened ? something wrong ?”
“Huh ? A , no , just that we have emotions , we want to see the verdict faster . “
“Come on , you heard Hodges’ testimony , they can accuse him just because of that ! Stay calm , Grissom , stay calm . ”
“I must , but hell I’m scared . And that fuckin’ lawyer Hodges has is a pain in the ass , I just hate him , he’s annoying ! But he’s smart , damnit , too smart !“
“He is , but Greg is smart even more ; he’ll never survive if he would not be smart . I feel proud , I’m proud of him !”
“Yeah , me too . He’s such a hero and the beautiful thing is he doesn’t even know it ; it’s enough that he’s not crying for himself and he is able to testify today . Hodges’ statement was too … original . ”
“Yeah . ”
The team didn’t hear any part of the conversation . They were too busy talking to Greg , powering him . Giving him power to fight in there .
“Greg !” Grissom said “let’s enter , is time !”
“ ’kay boss !”
He saw the doors opened and stepped in the court room . Again , hoping it was the last time .
“Prosecution is calling the next witness : Greg Sanders .”
He heard his name he saw that everyone was looking at him . He had to go and tell them everything , all that happened two months ago . It was a nightmare for him to remember all that , but it was important to catch the killer . He took a deep breath and started walking to the place he had to stay . But it seemed like his feet weren’t listening him . They didn’t want to move but , after taking more deep breath , trying to forget that in the next hour he’ll remember that horrible torture and sat on the chair .
“I’m ready ” he said .
“Okay , Mr. Sanders , defense may begin . Order in court room !” the judge yelled .
“What is your name ?”
“Greg Sanders ”
“Mr. Sanders , where are you working ?”
“At Las Vegas crime lab ” God are you so idiot ! “Greg smiled for himself .
“What’s your job at the lab ? ”
“I’m a CSI Level One . Been like this for one year .”
“Aha , okay then . Mr. Sanders , I want you to tell him so that everyone here can hear …”
“Hell , what if I don’t want to tell ? I’m scared ” he thought “to remember everything? ”
“… what happened with you three months ago .”
“One day , at a crime scene , after processing the scene I stepped out of the room , my wish was to so to the lab . But then I felt a hit in the head and probably passed out . I woke up some time after and saw that I was tied to a ceiling probably and the person who kidnapped me , his name was Jonathan Wilder I think , said that he’ll have him revenge . Then he called my colleagues and made them hear me ” a lightning went through his body while he remembered “yelling while … he used a whip on me .”
“Why did you stop ?”
“For nothing .”
That guy knew that was disturbing fore Greg and wanted to make it more disturbing , to a point he couldn’t control it .
“I think I passed out then .. because I couldn’t hear anything . Then ….” He told all that happened , the beatings , the stabbing , the shots . He didn’t know anything about the explosion , he was unconscious .
“Good , and ?”
“I woke up in the hospital with no memories of why I am there and I didn’t know anyone . But I recovered easily , in two weeks and I remembered everything , all that happened …. ”
He again told all the history with the amnesia .
“And , how did you get yourself kidnapped the second time ?”
“I was kidnapped . I didn’t get myself kidnapped !”
“Yeah , whatever , tell us .”
“Me and my friends were going to a crime scene ” he smiled “not really a crime scene , but …”
“But what ?”
“…but a party , a secret party my friends did for me . Can you let me tell a whole phrase without interrupting ?”
“Yeah , sorry .”
“Well , we were waiting to get there , my colleague Sara Sidle was driving and when Nick told her to slow down she didn’t because she said it is impossible . ”
“Why ? Why it was impossible ?”
“Because ” Greg said annoyed “the breaks weren’t working . That’s why ! ”
“Okay . So what happened ?”
“I think the car hit something , I really don’t remember well . All I know is that I woke up in a house that smelled awful . ”
Again he said all the history .
“What did he gave you ?”
“From what I heard , a combination of arsenic and thallium . ”
After finishing the story , after making a mind trip through all that awful memories he wanted to keep hidden , he just couldn’t wait for the verdict . Hoping it will be guilty and Hodges will receive like twenty years at least .
There was another break when they will decide what to choose . He knew there was another trial he had to assist to , Jimmy’s but he wasn’t afraid and wanted to save the guy .
…
“Congrats , Greg ” the team said to him “you did great in there”
“You think , guys ? I don’t and I’m fuckin afraid of what’s going to happen !”
“What ? Hodges=Guilty ! guilty , he’ll pay for what he did to you , for what he did to us , you mist not have a doubt ”
“If you say so Sara ,I believe you ! ”
“Of course you do Greg !”
…
They entered the court room for the last time that day and just hoped things will be as they wanted .
…
Look , I know the accused is the last to testify , but I didn’t want this ; this is fic so I can do what I want , right ?
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awesome story! that would be unbelieveable if it was actually an episode!
 
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I can't wait for the ending...post soon!
 
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe

It's great so far and I can't wait till the ending. Post soon. It would be cool (and not cause Greg gets hurt) if that was an episode on the show.
 
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