A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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Hmmm....question, Why the interest in my story only?

I've never been a story writer, it's always been poetry, but when I tried my first story, some seen to like it, and urged me to continue. As for a Beta, never really thought of one, again, because I never thought of myself as a writer. The story is fiction, with some light comedy, fantasy and naughtiness up at FF.Net.


But again....Why the interest in my story"?
 
Don't you post to drum up interest? Isn't that why everyone writes? And I give feedback on many a fan fiction, however, they are usually posted on FF.net or other fora. Yours was the first I came across here and I was curious about it. If you write something then you are a writer!
 
When Sheldon arrived at NYPD, he seen the two lined up waiting for him. Walking over he decided to start with the father, pulling the sheet down to his waist, Sheldon went to make the cut, and the body inhaled deeply, and started gasping for air. Being freaked for a second, Sheldon collected himself, and called for the Paramedics. When they arrived, they boarded the patient for transfer. "Hold it, said Sheldon, you better wait until I check the female". Walking over Sheldon tested the woman, and found she was indeed dead. "Okay, go ahead, said Sheldon as Mac walked in. "What the hell happened Sheldon"? "I don't know Mac, I went to make the cut, and the victim woke up before I could, they think he may have been poisoned".



"He was what"? "Poisoned, they think he may not have been given enough, which is why he survived, come here, and I'll show you". As Mac walked over to the female, Sheldon showed him the blueish color around her tongue and teeth. "Okay Sheldon, do the bloodwork, and let me know what you find". "I will Mac, and let me know how the father is". "I will, said Mac heading over to the Hospital, to find out how much the victim knew, about what had happened to them.



When Mac arrived at the ER, he asked the nurse where they had taken the male victim. "Excuse me...I'm Det.Taylor, could you tell me where they took my victim". "Sure Detective, Trauma one, the doctor is with him now". "Thank-you, said Mac as he headed down to the Trauma Unit. "Excuse me...are you Det.Taylor"? said the doctor. "I am, what is it"? "It seems your victim is now dead". Mac was clearly shocked and confused. "Not just five minutes ago, he was alive, and now he is dead again"? "Yes Detective, we can and have pronounced him leagally dead". "Any idea from what"? "No...we are waiting for the Tox results". "Okay, thanks", said Mac as he called Sheldon.



"Sheldon...it's Mac, it looks like your male victim is going to be returning". "I kind of figured he would". "Why, what did you find"? "Striychnine poisoning". "You're kidding right"? "Afraid not Mac, as I found traces of it in her food she had digested earlier". "Wait a minute, didn't the mother of the little girl, say she had lunch with the daughter, father and his new wife"? "She did yes". "Thanks Sheldon, I'll see you later". Hanging up the phone, Mac called Flack to meet him at the mother's home.


tBC..........
 
When Mac and Flack arrived they noticed the house was quiet. Knocking on the door, Mac got no reply. "Now what"? asked Flack. "We wait, she has to come back sometime, and when she does, we will question her". Heading back to the car, Mac seen the drape move. "Flack, she's in there, let's go". Walking back up to the door, Flack said... "NYPD open up". Nothing, no response. "You have five seconds to open the door, or we bust it in". As the door opened Mac seen the little girl in tears. "Where is your mommy sweetheart"? "She won't wake up, I tried but she won't wake up". Moving past the child Mac noticed she was dead. "Flack, take the girl outside please, and send for the EMT's". "Sure Mac". As Mac checked for a pulse, he knew it was to late, for she had already passed.



When the EMT's arrived Mac informed them the body was DOA from poisoning. "Mac...what do we do with the girl"? "We'll have to hand her over to Child Services". "Would you like me to call them"? "No I'll do it, and see you later". 'Okay Mac, see you". After Falck left Mac asked the little girl if she had any family in NY. "Listen sweetheart, do you have family here"? "No, it was just mommy and me". "Okay, how about you and I go for a ride to the station". "In your police car"? "No, I don't have a police car, but if you like I can catch Officer Flack to take you in his". "Yes please, can I". Calling back Flack, he had him take the girl to the station. "Danny, you find anything"? asked Mac. "Yeah Mac, looks like a vile of something clear". "Okay get it to the lab, and anaylize it". "Sure Mac, see you later".



Back at NYPD Flack had ran into Jennifer. "Hey handsome, who's the little Angel with you"? "This is Marie, and she's visiting us until someone picks her up". Jennifer knew who Mac meant. "You're kidding right"? "Afraid not, we have no choice, she has no family". "Aww..come now Flack, we can arrange something, can't we". "No Jennifer, we've been in enough trouble, and besides that here is Social Services now". "Excuse me, are you Officer Flack"? "I am, and you must be Social Services". "That's right, and this little girl must be Marie". "Hi", she said Shyly. "Hello, how would you like to have a seat over there for a moment". "Okay". With Marie sitting down, the Social worker informed Flack that they had no openings anywhere. "What!!! you're telling me there isn't one home available for this child"? "That's right, we are so full of children right now, all our homes are booked solid". "Now what", said Jennifer.



Flack thought about it for a moment. "How about you take her Jennifer, just for the night". "Are you insane, I'm no good with children, christ Flack, you take her". "I'm afraid he can't, he's a man, and she's a young girl, detective or not it isn't done". "Well, what if we both take her, I'll stay at his place, this way we can both help her through this", said Jennifer. "We can do that, is that fine with you detective"? Giving Jennifer that "you're dead look", he said...."Yeah, I can do that". "Good, as soon as I find a place for Marie, I will come collect her". When the Social worker left Don said..."Thanks alot Jennifer, what the hell are you thinking"? "What I'm thinking is we just saved this child a night of hell, now..should I bring the Pizza, or should you". Walking away Flack said...."You, I'll see you later.


tBC.......
 
When they got to Flack's place with Marie, Jennifer couldn't help but notice Flack's tight ass bending over the Tv as he hooked up the new DVD system. "Ummm...nice cakes Flack", she giggled. Looking over at her he said..."behave detective". Blowing him a pretend kiss, he continued connecting the cables. "Would you like some pop with your pizza Marie". "Yes please, thank-you". "You are very welcome, and as soon as Flack has the DVD player hooked up, we will watch your movie". "Listen Jennifer, I haven't lived here in months, I've been staying at Mac's so be patient while I try to remember how things work". "No problem Flack, we can wait, right Marie". Shaking her head, she said yes.



When Mac got back to the station with Danny, he asked Lindsay where Marie was. "Lindsay...where is Marie"? "Oh, Flack and Jennifer took her to his place for the night, cause Social Services had no room available". "Flack...with Jennifer, oh great, they'll kill each other, you should have seen them at the poker game the other night, they were throwing daggers at each other", said Danny. "Great...so you're telling me they don't get along"? "I don't know Mac, what I do know is their looks are deadly". "Okay, I'm going to head over there and check on them, said Mac. "Okay Mac, I'll give you a call with those results". "Thanks Danny".



Arriving at Flack's old place, Mac got out of the car and rang the doorbell. "Hey...how are you Mac"? asked Jennifer. "I'm fine, where is Marie, and Don"? "In the living room watching the movie, come on in". Walking into the living room, Mac noticed Marie was sound asleep with Flack's arm around her. "I see she has taken to you", said Mac. "Yeah, I guess she has, and Mac, let Stella know I won't be home tonight". "I will Don, Jennifer...behave". "I always do, don't worry Mac it will be fine". After letting Mac out, Jennifer sat on the other side of Don and layed her head on his shoulder. "What are you up too Jennifer"? "Nothing, just getting comfy". Moving in closer, Jennifer smiled as she inhaled Don's handsome scent.



When Mac got home Stella asked...."where's Don"? "He and Jennifer are babysitting Marie, he won't be home tonight". "Ahhh!!! babysitting, interesting". "Forget it love, they hate each other". "Who told you that"? "Danny, he said they were firing daggers at each other all night during the poker game". "Oh Mac, have I taught you nothing". "What do you mean love"? "Come now, everyone knows the best kind of relationship is the one that begins in anger". Looking at his wife with a shocked expression he said...."Not again". "Afraid so Mac, Jennifer and Don are in love". Sighing into the room, Stella wrapped her arms around Mac and held him. "It will be okay, Don's a big boy". "It's not Don I'm worried about". *Giggling*, she'll be fine Mac, besides, they will be good for each other". 'I hope you are right love". "I am, now come on, Stella wants some love".


TBC........
 
Draging Mac to the bedroom, Stella tossed him on the bed, and stood above him. "Now Det.Taylor, I have some rules for you, you are not to move, you are not to touch, understood"? Shaking his head yes, Stella continued. " Okay, we start out bare, and then anytime you try to touch me, I put on a piece of my clothing, and if I'm fully dressed you get nothing, however if you are a good boy, and I stay bare you get all of me" . "Oh Stel that's not fair, you can't expect to stand over me bare and have me not touch you". "I can, and you will, now strip". Obeying his wife's little game, Mac took off all his clothes, and laid there in all his bare glory.



Turning on the music, Stella began to dance over him, and as Mac watched he could feel his hands come up to touch his wife's sexy legs, then all of a sudden she stopped the music and put on one sock. "Augh....come on love, I don't like this game". "I told you the rules, now behave". Trying not to move, Mac watched Stella sensual move her hips and thighs, as her hands began stroking her husbands face. "Damn love, you are killing me here, please, stop this game". "Uhuh...you agreed to play Mr.Sinister, and now we finish it". The only thing Mac was thinking ,was in about two seconds he was going to change the rules, on his wife.



As Stella continued she made the mistake of closing her eyes, and Mac saw his opportunity to attack. Going into GI Joe mode, he tackled her down, and under him. "Maaaaaaaaac, stella screamed, that's cheating you bugger". "Sorry love ,GI Mac needs his Rambo girl now". Attacking all her senses Stella began to giggle. "Damn you Mac, stop tickling , God...you are killing me here". Knowing his beautiful wife was more then ready to be loved, Mac became serious and showed his Rambo girl how much he loved her.



Later that evening while Stella slept Mac called Flack to see how Marie was doing. "Flack". "hey Flack, how's Marie doing"? "She's good Mac, sound asleep in my room, I left the light on for her". "Okay, if anything changes give me a call". "I will Mac night". "Mmmm....said Jennifer moaning in her sleep. "What did Mac want this time of the morning"? "To know how Marie was". "Hmmm...she said as she reached over and grabbed Flack. "Come here Flack, I'm cold". Getting back under the covers Flack spent the rest of the early morning warming up his lady.


TBC.....
 
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