A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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As Mac dressed, he could feel the chills vibrating through his body. "Auuugh, owwww, God I'm dying here", he said to himself. Heading out the door, he forgot his car keys, and as he got to the car..."Auuuuuuuuuuugh, damn keys. Walking back into room, the only thing he wanted to do was get back into bed. "No Mac...walk away", he said to himself. When he arrived at the crime scene, he could feel his fever spiking. "Hey Mac, about time", said Messer. "Not now Danny, I'm sick, where's the bodies. "Over there, Sid's there now". "Where the hell is Hawkes"? "Not sure, haven't seen him all day".



As Mac looked at the bodies, he noticed the slices, where perfectly percise like three years ago. "Is our perp still in jail"? "Yeah Mac, I checked on that already". Mac was begining to wonder if that guy had told the truth three years ago, when he swore he didn't do it. "What are you thinking Mac"? "I'm thinking, either we have a perfect copycat, or we've had the wrong man in jail for three years".



"Sid, get these bodies back, and call me with a full report". "Sure Mac", said Sid. "Hey Mac, where you going"? asked Danny. "Home, and back to bed". As Mac walked away danny laughed. "Hah....so the great Det.Taylor does get sick". When Mac got back home, he took of his coat, stripped out of his clothes, and plopped down naked on the bed. A short time later Mac was freezing, and shivering. "Christ I hurt", looking down Mac realized he was naked. "Oh damn". Pulling back the covers Mac got under them, and continued to shiver.



Stella walked in with the kids, later that afternoon. "Mmmm....Stella could here the moaning from the bedroom. "Stay here guys, mama be right back". When Stella entered the bedroom she could feel the cold draft. "Damn you Mac, you trying to kill yourself"? The room was like an iceburg. "So cold Stella, I hurt so bad, and ache". Feeling his head, Stella noticed he was beyond fevered. "Let me get the thermometer". Heading into the bathroom Stella heard the crash from the living room. "Damn, what are they up too". "Macster, what was that"? "Nothing mama, is okay, I clean it".



Looking around Macster grabbed the broom, and began cleaning the glass. "That bad sis, mama be mad". "Waaaawaaaaaaa she screamed. "Hold on Mac I'll be right back". "Aww come on Stel, I'm so sick, don't leave me again, Steeeeeeeeeeella".....said Mac. When Stella seen her vase smashed on the floor, she told Macster...."just leave it son, mommy will clean it later". Heading back into Mac, she put the thermometer into his mouth. "102 degrees, I'll get you more Tylenol".


TBC........
 
Back at Don's the arguement continued. "Jennifer that's not true, I told you before all this that I loved you". "Listen Don, this is a huge responsibility, to raise a young girl". "You think I don't kow that, isn't it you Jennifer that comes from a broken home, and swore you would never wish that on anybody else". "Damn you Don, this is different". "Why is it different, tell me"? "It's different because......what if I don't make a good mother". "Awww, sweetheart, you will make a wonderful mother, I can it see it in your eyes, and your heart, just have faith in us, it will all work out". "Please love, do this for Marie".



Meanwhile Stella was at the end of her ropes. "Steeeeeeeel, yelled Mac....can I have some more ice water"? Mumbling to herself Stella said...."Ice water, sure Taylor, I'll give you ice water, right down your.....". Grabbing a glass with water and ice Macster walked in. "Hi mama, is that for daddy"? "Yes love, why"? "Cause daddy said he wants uice instead". "Oh, did her now". Changing the glass, Stella filled it with orange juice. "I take it mama, I can do it". "Are you sure sweetheart"? "I sure mama, I's strong". "Okay, take it daddy then".



Walking towards his mom and dad's room, Macster noticed "Bugs Bunny" was on TV, forgetting to take the juice to his dad, he sat down and watched the cartoon. "Steeeeeeeeeeeeeeella"....Mac yelled again. "What now Mac"? "I want my juice please". "What are you talking about, Macster brought it to you"? "No he didn't love, he hasn't even been in here". Walking out of the kitchen, Stella seen Macster watching the cartoon. "Macster, did you take daddy his juice"? "Ooh, orry mama, I go now".



"Hi daddy, ere is your uice". "Thank you son, said Mac as he took a drink. "Is you getting better daddy"? "Soon son, daddy be better soon, why"? "cause mama said you driving er cazy". "What, what did mama say"? "Mama said ou driving er cazy". "Did she now, thank you Macster, daddy loves you". "I love you to daddy, get better". Leaving the room, Macster went back to watching cartoon's, with Stella none the wiser, that Macster had told his dad what she said.


TBC.....
 
Later that evening after Stella had the kids bathed and in bed, she went to check on Mac. As she walked into the room, she could feel the chill of the cold air hit her feet. "Damn you Taylor, are you seriously trying to kill yourself"? Knowing she wouldn't get a response, she closed the window, felt her husbands head, and headed for the shower. "God I'm so tired, Stella said to herself, it's been one hell of a day". As the water sprayed on her body, she breathed a sigh of relief, and that's when she felt the hand, the heat of it, the largeness of it, as it wrapped around her waist, and pulled her back.



"Hello sweetheart, miss me"? whispered Mac seductively. Leaning back against her husband, Stella said..."mmm..more than you know". "Well than, let's fix that, shall we". Pulling back her hair, Mac exposed the nape of her neck, while tracing his tongue across, causing Stella to purr. "Please Mac.....she whispered, it's been so long". Knowing his wife needed release quickly, Mac turned her and leaned her against the shower wall. "Shh!!! I'm hear for you sweetheart, I'm going to give you, what you need". Picking her up, and wrapping her legs around his waist, Mac gave Stella what she needed,craved ,and missed, his love.



Meanwhile Flack, Marie and Jennifer, were enjoying their movie when the phone rang. "Flack". "Hey Flack it's Danny, up for a game of cards tonight"? "No Danny, you know I have Marie, and it's a school night". "Yeah, I know, it's just a couple hours". "Sorry Danny, not tonight". "Okay, bye". "bye Danny". "Oh Flack, you missed the last of the movie". "That's okay love, let's get you ready for bed, you start your new school tomorrow". "Flack...do you think they will allow you to adopt me"? "You know what sweetheart, I gaurantee it". Giving him a kiss on the cheek, Marie fell asleep with a huge smile upon her face.



"How is she Don"? asked Jennifer. "She's going to be fine, listen Jennifer, I would like to go to the Courts tomorrow and file for adoption". "Don, we discussed this, I'm not sure I'm ready to be a mom". "How can you say that, when you and I have looked after Marie for two weeks now, and you've done an amazing job". "No Don, you've done an amazing job". "Please Jennifer....help me save this little girl". Looking into Don's eyes, Jennifer could see the pain and need pouring through. "Fine, we'll go in the morning". Picking up Jennifer in his arms, he kissed her smartly on the mouth, and carried her to bed. "I love you Jennifer Flack". "I love you too Don".
 
mmmmm yummy naughty Macky :devil:

I wonder if there will be anymore 'surprises' for Stella lol...oh wait this isn't the game I thought, she can have more kids lol
 
The following morning Flack dropped Marie off at her new school. "Okay sweetheart, this is a very good school, and you will make alot of friends here, and no one is going to tease you ever again". Looking into Flack's eyes with complete trust, Marie leaned up and kissed his cheek. "I love you Don". "I love you too sweetheart, you have a good day, okay". "Okay, bye". As Don watched her leave, he knew in his heart, that no one was going to take away his little girl.



Arriving at the Court House, Jennifer was already there. "You ready sweetheart"? "Ready as I'll ever be, said Jennifer. Walking in, they stopped at the reception desk. "Det. Don Flack, to see Judge Perry". "Down the hall, firast door on the right". "Thank-you". Taking Jennifer by the hand, they walked into the Chamber together.



"Good morning your Honor". "Good morning Det. Flack, how are you doing"? "Good your Honor, and you and yours"? "Fine Don, how's your dad doing"? "he's great, healthy and happy". "Perfect, have a seat, and we will discuss your adoption of the child". Sitting down, Jennifer could sense Don's nervousness. Reaching over, she took his hand in hers, and squeezed.



"Don, I've talked with the Social Worker, and she seems to have some concern with the adoption". "Your Honor, may I ask what these concerns are". "Of course, her main concern is that a single man should not be raising a child on his own, especially one he has no relation too". "I understand that your honor, but it just wouldn't be me, Jennifer will be with us, she's agreed to be my wife". Looking over at Jennifer the Judge said...."You and Don are to be married"? "Yes your Honor, as soon as possible".



Please your Honor, I have grown very fond of this child, and she loves me just as much, we need each other your Honor, all three of us, together". The judge could tell how serious Don and Jennifer were about this child, and taking his pen, he signed the papers. "Okay Don, your adoption of Marie is granted, I'll send the papers to the Social Worker this afternoon. "Thank you your Honor, thank you ver much". "Ummm...listen Don, when is the wedding"? Looking over at Jennifer he said..."In about five minutes, across the hall". "Well than, good luck to you both, and enjoy parenthood".



TBC..........
 
Leaving the Chamber's, Don and Jennifer headed across the hall where Danny and Lindsay were waiting. "What are you two doing here"? asked Jennifer. "We are here as your witness", said Lindsay. "Boy, had everything planned there, didn't you Don", said Jennifer. "Of course love, I know how much we love each other, and this is meant to be". Looking into Don's eyes, she knew he was right, for she felt it too. "Come on...let's get it done, and then we can pick up Marie".



With the marriage done and complete, Don and Jennifer waited outside for Marie. "Ring*, went the school bell. Watching the stairs, Don seen Marie running down them in her school uniform, and he felt complete in his decission. "Hi Don, hi Jennifer", said Marie. "Hi sweetheart, said Don, listen we have some news for you". "News, what news"? asked Marie. "Jennifer and I have adopted you, and you are now our child forever". Marie looked in shock, and then without warning, she jumped into Don's arms, and hugged him tight. "Really, you are now my dad, and Jennifer is my mom". "We are sweetheart, forever you are a Flack".



Heading home Don asked Marie...."What would you like for supper tonight Marie"? "Oh, can we have Pizza again, that deep dish stuff, with all those toppings and yummy cheese". "Hmmm....what do you think Jennifer, you feel like Pizza"? "Sounds good to me, and we should grab a couple movies too". "Yeah...I love movie night, thank you Don and Jennifer for everything". "You're welcome sweetheart, said Don, as he looked forward to the one day, she would call him dad.



When they parked in the parking lot of the video store, Marie got out, and took Don's hand. "Come on Don, let's hurry before all the good movies are gone". Don smiled down at her, and said..."Marie, this is one of the largest video stores in NY, trust me, they are not going to run out of movies". "Okay...but come on, tell him Jennifer". "Let's go Don, speed it up, she said as she grabbed Marie's hand and started running with her. "Hey you two, get back here, yelled Don, as he ran to catch up.


TBC...
 
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