A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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In the morning Flack awoke to Marie staring at him. "What is it sweetheart"? "I miss my mommy, she cried. "Aww, sweetheart, come here". As Marie crawled into Don's lap, he held her tight, and told her it would be okay. "Hey Flack", oh, hi Marie, how are you this morning"? "She's missing her mommy". Sitting down beside them, they cooed and cuddled her, when the doorbell rang.


"I'll get it Flack". Answering the door it was the Social Worker. "Good morning Jennifer, how's Marie"? "She's a little emotional but okay". Walking into the living room, she seen Marie wrapped in Don's arms. "She seems to like you Don, which is a good thing, as I have another favour to ask you". "What favour"? "We need you and Jennifer to keep Marie for the rest of the week". "What, why"? "It seems we have no openings till monday". "Well I'm sorry to hear that, but I have to work".


"I understand that, but I could clear it with your Superior". Don breathed deep, cause he knew as much as he'd love a few days off, he wasn't sure if it was such a good idea. "Don", said Marie, I understand if you don't want me". That did it, Don's heart completely broke. "Listen Marie, I'd love nothing more then to watch you, but I'm not sure this is the right place for you". "Sure it is Don, you like me and I like you, that's all that matters", said Marie.


Don was at a loss for words, and looking over at Jennifer he said..."What do you think Jennifer, could you handle staying here for four more days". "Of course, I'd stay with you forever, said Jennifer. Flack looked at her in awe. "What did you say"? "I said....I'd stay with you forever". Never in a million years did Don think he would find love again. "So what do you say Don"? asked the Social Worker. "Okay, we'll keep Marie, but you have to clear it with my boss". "I will, now Marie, I've brought some clothes from your house for you, so you go change".



While Marie was changing Don started breakfast, while Jennifer cleaned. "Jennifer, can you help me tie my shoe". "Sure sweetheart, come here". With Marie's shoe tied they headed in the kitchen for breakfast. "Don, are you taking me to school"? "Yup, so hurry and eat, I've made you a lunch, and Jennifer will pick you up". "Okay, thank-you both for taking care of me". "You are welcome sweetheart, said Don.


On their way to the school Marie asked..."Don, when I grow up do you think I could be a detective like you"? "Of course you can, and I'll help you". "Really, honest you will". "Yup, it will be you and I, Don and Marie Detective Agency". "Oh, that sounds so cool, leaning over the seat Jennifer kissed Don on the cheek. "Bye Don, see you tonight". With a smile on his face, Don knew he was falling for the little girl who had brought back joy to his life.


TBC...
 
while Marie was in school Don checked in at NYPD. "Hey Don, how's it feel to be a dad"? asked his friend. "Very funny, how does it feel to be unemployed in five minutes"? "Oh, aren't we cranky today, no love from Jennifer or what"? "Screw you Macintire, get a life". "Don, called Danny, what are you up too"? "Not alot why"? "I've got two tickets to the game tonight, want to go"? "I can't Danny, I have to watch Marie". "Bring her, what girl doesn't like hockey". "We'll see Danny, it depends what she wants to do tonight". "Okay man, let me know, soon". "I will Danny, and thanks".



Meanwhile Sheldon Jr was just learning how to take his first steps, when Sheldon walked in and found him. "Oh...Jimeka, look at this, hurry love". Running in Jimeka seen Sheldon Jr walking across the carpet while holding the couch. "Oh my God, look at him go". "I know love, isn't it great"? "It is, said Jimeka, as she walked over and Sheldon Jr smiled at her". "Look at mommy's boy, so big and smart". "Maaaama", he said with a smile showing his two front teeth. "Oh God love, I have to get the video camera". As Sheldon grabbed the camera, he began taping his son. "This is amazing love, he's so smart, and look at those smiles". "I see, said Jimeka".



Once Don had everything complete he ran into Jennifer. "Hi sweetheart, what did you want to do tonight"? "Hah...nothing, Mac asked me to work a double as Sheldon is off today". "Oh, okay, then maybe I'll take Danny up on his game with Marie tonight". "That's a good idea, Marie would love that, and I'll stop by around 11pm after my shift". "Sounds good, said Don as he kissed Jennifer while no one was watching". "Hands off my detective", said Mac. "Hey Mac, how are you"? "Good, and how's Marie doing"? "She's doing great, a real sweetheart". "Good, I knew you'd be okay, but you need to stop by soon, Mackenzie misses you". "I'll stop by later with Marie". "Do that, dinner is at six". After Mac left Jennifer said..."there goes the game".



When Don arrived at the school, he found Marie in tears. "Sweetheart, what's the matter"? "The kids are teasing me, calling me an orphan, and a homeless child". "Oh sweetheart, that's not nice, did you let the teacher know"? "No...she's too busy with other things". "Okay, let's go". Walking into the school Don headed for the office. "Excuse me, I'd like to speak with Marie's teacher". "And you are"? "Det.Don Flack, NYPD". "Is there a problem"? "There is yes, her teacher please". "Down the hall to your right, first door". "Thank-you".



Don was getting a really bad impression from this school. "Excuse me, are you Marie's teacher"? "I am, what can I do for you". "What you can do is explain to me why you allow your students to make fun of this child". "Look Mistr.....". "It's detective to you, Don Flack". "Oh...sorry, I watch like 50 children in this class, I don't have time for kids who tease other kids over mediocore problems". "Excuse me, you think it's okay for children to make fun of another child who has lost her parents". "I don't no...but this is a school full of homeless children and troublemakers, I can't watch them all".



"Well then, don't expcet this child to be back, you can transfer her records to "St.Luke's Private School". "You can't do that". "I can, and I just did, so have them there by tomorrow morning". As Don and Marie left the school, the teacher ran to the office and called child services.


TBC...
 
Okay guys, I won't be able to update till weds, or thurs.

Sorry, RL is in the way again

Thanks for all the lovely FB, you guys are great :D
 
Hi everyone, I'm running behind, and promise to update very soon. I miss ya's and will have new chapters up soon.

Thanks Linda :)
 
When Don got home he noticed the light flashing on his answering machine, checking the message he heard...."Det.Flack this is Karen calling, I'd like to set up a meeting this evening to discuss today's events with the school". "Christ, said Don to himself, that didn't take long". Picking up the phone Don called back the Social worker. "Hi Karen, it's Don". "Oh hey Don, how are you"? "Okay, is there a problem"? "There is yes, would be okay to stop by around six"? "Sure, I'll be here". "Thanks Don". After hanging up the phone, Don called Jennifer. "Hey Jenn we have a problem". "What problem"? "I had an arguement with Marie's school, and pulled her out, and that damn Social worker is coming shortly to discuss Marie". "Okay, I'll be there, see you soon".


At six the Social worker knocked on the door. "Hey Karen, come on in", said Jennifer. "Thanks, where's Marie"? "She's doing her homework". "Okay, that's good". "Karen, how are you"? asked Don. "Not to good Don, I had a complaint from the school about you pulling Marie out". "I did, and I've just enlisted her in Private School". "Well, here lies the problem, you can't do that, as you are not her legal gaurdian, we are, and we don't fund that kind of schooling". "I know you don't, that's why I'm paying for it". "Yes, but you see, when Marie leaves here, she's going to be returning to that same school, and that's not good to have her changing districts like that". "Well, excuse me for saying so, but a child should not have to teased, or picked on just because her parents died, leaving her an orphan".



Meanwhile...Sheldon and Jimeka had just arrived home with Sheldon Jr from the doctor. "I can't believe it, we are pregnant again", said Sheldon. "Either can I, so much for contraception". "Oh, come on Jimeka, I thought you were happy". "I know sheldon, but Sheldon Jr is just learning how to walk, and now we have to start all over again". "I know love, but that's the best part, and by the time the child is born, Sheldon Jr will be two". *Sigh*, I don't know Sheldon, I'm just not ready for another. "What are you saying Jimeka"? asked Sheldon with pain in his eyes. "I'm saying I think we should concider not having this one". Sheldon was pissed, "now you listen to me, you will not abort our child, do you understand, if you don't want to care for it that's fine, I will, but no way in hell are you going to abort our child".



Over at Danny and Lindsay's house the kids were driving them insane. "Linds, handle these kids now". "You handle them Danny, I'm already late, and I still have to drop off the triplets to daycare". "Christ, what a zoo", said Danny. Breathing deep, Danny gathered up DJ, and his brother, and took off slamming the door behind him. "Danny, Danny, wait, you forgot your gun and badge". Knowing Danny was going to need them, Lindsay bundled the triplets, loaded them in the car, and tried to catch Danny. Beeping her horn, Danny finally stopped. "Christ Linds, what is it"? "You forgot your gun and badge". "Shit, thanks sweetheart, see you tonight". "Okay, love you". "Love you to Linds".


TBC....
 
Back at Don's, the arguement with Marie had turned into full blown anger. "NOw you listen to me, there is no way in hell, that this little girl is going back to into that hell hole of a school". "I'm sorry Det.Flack, there is nothing you can do about it". "That's what you think, I'll adopt her then". "Det.Flack, you are a single white male, no judge in the world is going to give you custody of this young girl". "We shall see about that, now if you don't mind, get out". After the Social worker left, Marie came out of her bedroom. "I'm sorry Don, I didn't mean to get you in trouble". "Come here Marie, you've done nothing wrong, and I promise that you will stay with me forever". Squeezing Don tight, Jennifer walked in.



"Hey, what's with all the sour faces"? "The Social worker said Don can't adopt me". "What, what is she talking about"? "I had a fight with Marie's case worker, she saysthat a single man, cannot look after a young girl". "Well, I can see her point Don, she's not your flesh and blood, that's all they are concerned about, is what people would think". "Listen Jennifer, Marie will be ours, and that is that". Jennifer looked shocked, for Flack had said their's. "What did you say"? Looking Jennifer in the eyes Don said...."Jennifer, will you marry me"? "What!!! yeah, okay Don, I don't think so". "Why not"? "Becuase, you only want to marry me, so you can adopt Marie".



Meanwhile Mac awoke to a smashing headache, and fever. "Christ love, I think I'm sick". Walking over Stella felt Mac's head. "Oh my, I'll get you some asprin". As Stella left to get the asprin, she said to herself..."here we go again, one baby Mac on the way". Stella hated when Mac got sick, because all he'd do is whine, driving her insane. "Here you go Mac, do you need anything else"? "No love, thanks". Just as she turned to go out the door, Mac said...."Stel....can I have another blanket"? "Sure Mac, here you go, better"? "Mmmm...yeah thank you". "You're welcome, she said as she left the room.
"STEL"......mac yelled. "What now Mac"? "Can I have some ice water"? In about two seconds, Stella was going to pour it on him. "Here you go Mac, I'm taking the kids to daycare, so you are on your own". "But I'm sick, you can't leave me alone". Walking out of the room, Stella didn't look back. "Love you Mac". "I love you too Stel".



After dropping the kids off at Daycare, Stella walked into NYPD. "Stel....where is Mac"? "He's sick, why"? "We have two dead female bodies, back in the park". "Yeah, so process the scene Danny, you know how it works". "I know, but whoever sliced these girls, has the same MO as those College students three years ago". "Okay, I'll call Mac, though he's sick". "Taylor", Mac said in a groggy voice. "Mac listen, we have a double homicide, two young College students, matching the same MO as those girls three years ago". "Christ, okay, I'll be there shortly". "Okay, he's on his way".


TBC....
 
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