Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Jeepers we have a lot of potential psychiatrists in here. :lol: I mean that in the best way possible. :p

I love everyone's take on Lori. I have to say though, that almost everything said is correct. And Lil, you made a lot of sense. :lol:

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Miami Lab, next day

Katie: *runs in* Hey where's Lori?

Speed: Relax, she's at my place.

Katie: You didn't kill her, right?

Speed: Yes Katie she's stuffed in a body bag under the floor boards. How did you ever find out?

Katie: Not funny.

Speed: She's asleep and she'll probably have a pretty big headache when get wakes up. She sure takes after you.

Katie: She was drunk?

Speed: Just a bit.

Katie: I didn't know.

Speed: Yeah well there's a lot you don't know.

Katie: Are you mad?

Speed: Why would I be mad?

Katie: She slept with your best friend.

Speed: I'm not mad at her, I'm mad at Eric.

Katie: Um...It was her fault, not his.

Speed: He wasn't drunk.

Katie: OH. Okay so HA oh man he did what you did to me.

Speed: This is slightly different.

Katie: Oh yeah I can definitely see the differences here. He slept around with a younger, more prettier girl who was successful in seducing him and...Well you slept around with a younger more prettier girl who was successful in seducing you. MAN what a difference.

Speed: He's smarter than I was.

Katie: Really. I thought he's supposed to be the dumb one.

Speed: He's smart enough not to do this.

Katie: Okay but um I'll go talk to Jess so she can kill him when he gets home.

Speed: Deal.

Katie: *runs away*

Speed: *walks into layout room*

Delko: *stares at Speed* Hey man.

Speed: *slams kit onto table*

Delko: *steps backward*

Speed: You have two choices. Closed or open casket.

Delko: Whoa, whoa man hold on.

Speed: *walks over*

Delko: *backs up* I didn't do anything. She came onto me.

Speed: She was drunk she didn't know what she was doing.

Delko: How was I supposed to know?

Speed: You're a cop and you don't know when someone's impaired.

Delko: Geez I guess I should go home and dust off my patrol uniform. Look man everything happened so quickly. I'm not proud of it.

Speed: *shoves Eric against wall* If I see you even talking to her-

Horatio: *standing in doorway*

Speed: *looks at Horatio*

Horatio: *frowning*

Speed: *lets go of Eric*

Horatio: Gentlemen...Is there a problem?

Speed: No.

Delko: *shakes head*

Horatio: Speed, beat it.

Speed: *leaves*

Horatio: You want to tell me what's going on?

Delko: It's nothing H.

Horatio: You sure?

Delko: Yeah.

Horatio: Okay. I'll see you later.

Delko: Right.

Horatio: *leaves*

Delko: *frowns*

Halls

Horatio: Talk to me Speed.

Speed: About what?

Horatio: About the conversation between you and Eric.

Speed: Didn't he tell you?

Horatio: No he didn't. So I'm asking you.

Speed: It's nothing. We had a disagreement.

Horatio: Over what?

Speed: Family.

Horatio: *nods* The next time you decide to argue in my lab, take it outside. Got it?

Speed: Yeah.

Horatio: Good. *walks away*

Lounge

Katie: *jumps on couch* Hey Jess can I talk to you?

Jess: Sure.

Katie: Okay well okay well okay. Well...Okay.

Jess: Get to the point.

Katie: Okay well..Okay. Well...Eric did something bad.

Jess: ...What did he do?

Katie: He slept with Lori BUT she was drunk.

Jess: *stares at Katie*

Katie: *nervous smile*

Jess: ...I will kill her.

Katie: No no! No see she didn't know what she was doing. It's all Eric's fault.

Jess: *frowns* And I shall murder him in his sleep.

Katie: How about you just...Stay here.

Jess: How could he do that?

Katie: I don't know. We always knew he was a little wrong in the head.

Jess: I just can't believe he would do that.

Katie: Honey, he's a man. Of course you would.

Jess: Not helping.

TBC................
 
Haha he is a man. Of course. Men are pigs, as Anni's mom would say.
So I'm confused. Anni had SOMETHING happen and yet Speed is at the lab. Maybe I missed something, but is she alright? What happened? Why is he working if something DID happen? Is it just me who's having a stupid attack?

This was great Geni. Thanks for the update and can't wait for more!
 
whoa things are real tense between Speed and Delko and may I say Lori is a little bitch, whatever happened to the sweet little Lori we used to know huh?

Eric should have known better, he's a csi for heaven's sake he must know the difference between sober and drunk. He also must have known that if/when Speed found out about it he would explode with him after all it's still his little girl no matter what age she is.

please let us all know what's happening to Anni and the baby, the suspense is killing me.

great updates Geni!....more please.
 
Speed’s right, Eric should have known the difference between drunk and not drunk. However, since he is under a huge amount of stress right now, I can cut him some slack. But I don’t think Jess will, or should. Jess, you go tell your man who’s boss around here! Just make sure it doesn’t involve knives; I don’t think it would go over very well. :rolleyes: :lol:

But what happened to Anni? :eek:

I kind of hope that all this drama, while I love it, will subside soon; there’s only so much these poor CSIs can take. Love it as always; can’t wait for more!
 
"Honey, he's a man of course he would." Oh man Geni, you crack me up. Awwww I LOVE Speed when he's all up in Eric's face. I dunno what it is about that but it makes me all warm and fuzzy. And leave it to H man as usual to break up the moment. Anyways its all out in the open now sooo...yeah I don't see this blowing over nicely. Update soon.
 
I guess Geni took my order because she posted as I did and her's came out before me, so....:lol:

OMG!!! LORI CHEATED NOWW!!! That is SUPER Cheatalicious!!! And poor Jess. :( *hugs Jess* But wow...deja vu with Katie/Speed. And Delko and Lori are in troooooooooouble. :lol: Well...Not :lol: More like :( but I guess if you were sadistic in a sense, it'd be :lol: *stops rambling*.

Update Soon. :D (Looks above his post.)
 
The drama will soon be over, bird_of_flame. :D

Colton, you crack me up. :lol:

Thanks for the fantastic reviews!

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Apartment, 5pm

Speed: *walks in*

Anni: I made dinner.

Speed: You didn't have to.

Anni: Yes I did. *puts plates on table*

Speed: Where's Lori?

Anni: She's in Alena's room.

Speed: Girls! Dinner! ...So how are you feeling?

Anni: *smirks* I'm fine. The doctor said that I could cramp pretty badly during this whole thing and it's nothing to worry about.

Speed: Good.

Anni: So nothing to worry about. *kisses Speed*

Speed: Okay.

Anni: *places bowl on table* Lori! Alena!

Lori: *walks over* You called?

Anni: Dinner. What were you doing in there?

Lori: Alena wanted to play with my makeup.

Alena: *runs out giggling*

Lori: Suffice it to say, she has a long way to go.

Alena: *jumps into chair*

Speed: How are you feeling, Lor?

Lori: *looks down at table* ...Thanks for bringing me home last night.

Speed: Anytime. *sits*

Anni: Well finally, we're actually sitting down for some dinner.

Doorbell rings

Anni: Or not? *walks to door, opens it* Katie...Hi.

Katie: I brought the gang over, I hope you don't mind.

Anni: Oh. The gang?

Katie: Yeah. Missy, JC, Carly, Colton, Megan, Horatio, Calleigh and Ryan. Except Jess and Eric aren't allowed in here because of Alena so they stayed home to work out their own issues.

Anni: Oh...Hey Tim do we have more room at the table?

Speed: The table takes up half the apartment. I think there's some room.

Anni: Come on in.

Katie: YAY!

Everyone piles in

Half hour later

Calleigh: *laughs* Okay here's the story.

Colton: No I want to tell it.

Calleigh: Too bad I got here first. So we get to Tim's house in New York and his brother is ALL over Eric. I'm telling you, it was insane.

Colton: Yeah! Yeah and he chased him up a tree.

Everyone laughs

Katie: Ah man and the guy couldn't seem to find his eyelash curler.

Calleigh: Hey remember the time we went to Vegas and Eric went to prison?

Horatio: Now that was a great moment.

JC: Didn't we have to go to court for him too?

Horatio: Yeah and now we're banned from Vegas. Good riddance too.

Katie: Oh yeah I remember that trip! Speed professed his love to me.

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Lori: *looks at Katie*

Katie: Or well...I mean...If no one else remembered that...

Anni: SO who wants desert?

Carly: *lifts hand* I DO!

Delko/Jess' house

Jess: I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!

Delko: YEAH WELL YOU'RE NO PRIZE EITHER!

Jess: *throws plates* YOU'RE AN ASS!

Delko: YEAH PEOPLE KEEP TELLING ME THAT! AND STOP THROWING THE PLATES!

Jess: DON'T CHEAT ON ME!

Delko: FINE! BUT IT'S NOT LIKE I'LL GET ANYTHING ELSE HERE!

Jess: What's that supposed to mean?

Delko: Oh I don't know. For the past few years I've slept down here.

Jess: What, so that gives you an excuse to cheat on me?

Delko: No.

Jess: Do you even love me anymore?

Delko: ...I don't know.

Jess: What do you mean you don't know?

Delko: It's just that we've been having some problems for a while and we're not talking about it.

Jess: Well maybe there's some external force just not getting to our problem because it's spending too much time on OTHER PEOPLE.

Delko: What?

Jess: Nothing. Maybe we should just separate.

Delko: No. No, I refuse to do that. We're going to make our family work. You know what happened to Speed and Katie and you know what happened to Josh and Carly.

Jess: Well you're not gay or a ch...Okay you are a cheater but that's not really the point. It was an isolated incident.

Delko: Exactly. I guess I just snapped.

Jess: Okay good. We're getting somewhere. So what can we do?

Delko: We can spend more time together.

Jess: Like another vacation?

Delko: No, as a group. We do a lot better when we're all together. I think half the problem is we're so isolated from everyone else all the time. If we're both with everyone else, then we personally won't be separated either by work or other friends.

Jess: So you're saying if we're with everyone, we won't be separated from each other because we sometimes run in different circles.

Delko: Yeah. Mine might have been longer and more confusing but essentially that's it.

Jess: Where are the team now?

Delko: Speed's house.

Jess: Forget it. We're not going anywhere yet.

Delko: Then let's spend some time together with each other first. *smirks*

Jess: *laughs* I like how you think.

Delko: *smiles*

Jess: Okay, here's what we'll do.

Delko: Okay.

Jess: You...Can take this...*hands over washcloth*

Delko: *looks at cloth* And wear this?

Jess: ...No. You're going to clean the kitchen while I watch tv with a bottle of wine.

Delko: Oh.

Jess: Sound good?

Delko: Not really.

Jess: *frowns*

Delko: PERFECT! I'll get started right away. *salutes, hits Jess in the eye with cloth*

Jess: AH!

Delko: Oh sorry! Sorry, are you okay?

Jess: *holding eye* I'm fine, really.

Speed's apartment

Katie: Tim, give me the last piece of cake.

Speed: I think you've had enough.

Katie: What makes you think you need any more?

Speed: I called it.

Katie: I don't see your name written in it.

Speed: Yours isn't there either.

Katie: I called it.

Speed: I don't care.

Katie: Be a man and give me the piece of cake.

Speed: Be a woman and stop eating.

Katie: *frowns* This means war, Speedle.

Speed: Bring it on...Katie.

Katie: You don't even know what my last name is?

Speed: I've never asked.

Katie: *GASP* You insensitive pig.

Speed: ...Damn I can't think of an insult.

Katie: HA. Does that mean I get the cake?

Speed: No. *licks cake*

Katie: *narrows eyes* You really think that's going to stop me? I carried your children and mixed spit with you more time than I can c...*looks around*

Everyone: *staring at Katie*

Katie: *coughs* Wow the nostalgia bunny got caught in my throat. *grabs cake, eats it*

Speed: Hey!

Katie: *chewing, cake flies everywhere*

Colton: Ah, Katie!

Carly: Come on, you're spraying cake everywhere.

Anni: ...My tablecloth.

Katie: *wipes face* Mmmm good cake.

Speed: I can't believe you just stole it off my plate.

Katie: Well you'd better believe it, bub.

Speed: You'll be 700 pounds by the end of the night.

Katie: Oh bite me.

Speed: Don't worry I don't want to.

Katie: How insulting.

TBC..............
 
Bwhahahahaha! Katie and Speed at war over a piece of cake, and Katie won! :lol: It is strange that Speed doesn’t know his ex-wife’s last name. Oh well. :rolleyes: I like how everyone can all sit together and have a meal like a happy dysfunctional family even though all this stuff has happened between them.

Aw, Lori and Alena doing girl stuff, that’s so sweet. Lori’s growing up. :)

Go Jess go, you yell at Eric! You make him do all of the housework while you go enjoy yourself. :D

Everyone’s happy (or near happy anyways), and it’s so beautiful. I’m so loving this, you do such a good job with this story.
 
Oh man now I want some cake. But I prefer to keep it in my mouth vs. flying everywhere. lol. And seriously Speed can't remember my last name. Its not that hard its only 4 letters long. lol.

Katie: Oh yeah I remember that trip! Speed professed his love to me.

Oh OH! I remember that! I believe we were both drunk...if I remember correctly. lol. *sighs* I love it when we all get together, all Anni seems to care about is her table cloth. And is it just me does Anni like hate me or something? She didn't seem all to thrilled when she saw me at the door.

And i'm glad Eric and Jess are starting to work out there problems. All though Eric cleaning and Jess drinking a bottle of wine I don't really think is helping. lol. Anywhosie great update.
 
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Ok, I love how the whole gang is eating in Speed and Anni's tiny apartment. I like how Anni is coping with a small apartment and all the madness even when her mom would let her live in a mansion. She really loves her man. And that was great, with Katie and Speed.

Jess and Eric working out their problems! Yay! And I love you Jess, stick to your guns, your man can clean the kitchen, or give you some love...clean the kitchen! That was wonderful. 'You want me to wear this...' :lol: How did you get so funny? Is there a trick?

:D Ah, a wonderful, RT-filled weekend, almost over. Can't wait for more, and here we go to a long week. *raises apple juice* Thanks for the wonderful update, and I'm so glad Anni is okay. But wasn't she anxious to change subjects?....
 
Okay, had this great review all typed up and ... of course, the darn thing didn't post. Ha, my luck.

But here's the gist of it : Glad that I'm fine, everyone's in the tiniest apartment out there, having a cake fight aparently, and there's awkward tension abound... That just about sums it up. Sucks that I couldn't be witty a second time around...Burn.

But, hilairious updates, as always, Geni!
 
*giggle* I loveth that update. :D That's right, I got all Ancient Roman on you. :lol:

Umm....Holy awkwardness, Batman. :( But there were many dunny parts in there. ;) :lol: I made Geni laugh!!! YAY!!!! *does the cabbage patch* Uh huh...Oh yeah...Woohoo...:lol:

Update Soon. :D
 
Aww it's okay Anni. :D Long reviews or short, it doesn't matter to me. :)

Thanks for the reviews everyone. :D

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Apartment

Katie: *flips through photo album* Okay this is cute. Hey what's this fat guy doing?

Speed: He's eating an ice cream on the beach.

Katie: *laughs* I bet. OH hey what's this guy doing?

Speed: He's sitting on the beach.

Katie: Awesome. Hey what are these people doing?

Speed: *tilts head*

Katie: *tilts head*

Anni: You do realize that's not our photo album right?

Katie: Oh yeah. You know that's an interesting pos-

Speed: Kids in the room Kate.

Katie: Sorry. And don't call me Kate.

Speed: It annoys you. I can call you what I want.

Lori: *walks to door* Well you all seem to be having fun but since the party brigade left, I'll be going too.

Katie: Wait, you're not going to stay?

Lori: Well mom this is a great family...Thing but the only difference is it's not your family.

Katie: But this is fun. We're looking at photo albums from behind the fridge.

Lori: I have a date.

Katie: You do?

Lori: No but...That wasn't a good excuse?

Katie: Come sit.

Lori: *sits*

Katie: Okay here look at this picture.

Lori: Charming.

Katie: *flips page* HEY I know that building.

Lori: What building is that?

Speed: ...That's some guy's ass.

Katie: My mistake.

Lori: *laughs*

Anni: *washing dishes, watches*

Katie: Oh look at that one! *laughs*

Lori: *laughing*

Speed: *looks over at Anni*

Anni: *smile fades*

Speed: *stares at Anni*

Lori: *throws popcorn at Katie* Turn the page you pervert.

Katie: I can't help what's in the album! I want to see how the other half lives.

Lori: Pfft come to my house.

Katie: I would but you never let me go anywhere.

Lori: *punches Katie* Yeah right.

Katie: *pinches Lori* Yeah!

Lori: *laughs* You're so dead.

Katie: As are you!

Lori: *attacks Katie*

Katie: AH!

Lori: *laughing*

Katie: Tim help! She's going to scalp me or something!

Speed: Lori, stop attacking your mother.

Lori: *sits back on couch* Sorry.

Katie: *looks at watch* We should probably go anyway.

Lori: Yeah and I wanted to leave anyway.

Katie: *stands* Well I'll see you guys later. Lori I'll go start the car.

Lori: Okay.

Katie: *leaves*

Lori: *stands*

Speed: *stands*

Lori: I'll see you later.

Speed: Likewise.

Lori: *kisses Speed's cheek* Bye, dad. *waves at Anni* See you around.

Anni: You too.

Lori: *leaves*

Speed: *walks over*

Anni: Well you three seemed to be having fun.

Speed: *grabs plates* Well they're insane. They just drag me along for the fun.

Anni: You seemed to be having fun. Almost...Happy.

Speed: *grabs towel* I am happy.

Anni: I know. *looks down into sink*

Speed: Something wrong?

Anni: *shakes head*

Speed: What is it?

Anni: *places plate into sink* Y'all seem to fit. I'm just the odd man out. Granted I'm not a man...

Speed: I thought you were okay with them visiting.

Anni: I'm okay with Lori visiting.

Speed: ...But not Katie.

Anni: ...She's just...*sigh* I'm sorry. I trust you, I do. It's her I don't trust. I know she still loves you. I don't want to have to compete with her because I know how much she's offering and it's a hell of a lot more than I am.

Speed: *places towel on counter* And what exactly is she offering?

Anni: A family.

Speed: She made it clear that we couldn't work things out and she's the one that wanted the divorce. I'm not going to go back to her because she 'thinks' she loves me, family or not.

Anni: You just seemed so happy with them.

Speed: I'm not allowed to be happy with anyone but you?

Anni: That's not what I meant.

Speed: So you just want me to stop seeing them, is that it?

Anni: No, of course n-

Speed: I can't have a conversation or be happy with them unless YOU say it's okay.

Anni: N-

Speed: Obviously you're having a trust issue and it's not with Katie.

Anni: Tim, if you would just liste-

Speed: I've heard enough. *drops plate*

Anni: *flinches*

Speed: Everything has to be a competition with you two. Ever since I met you and Katie. And you don't trust me, why? Because I slept around on her?

Anni: I don't know, maybe you're doing that now.

Speed: I'm not, for your information.

Anni: Why did you do that to her then?

Speed: I don't know. I was a lot angrier back then and I did everything I could to hurt her. I'm not even sure why I wanted to hurt her. Maybe I'm just like my father, who knows.

Anni: What, so did your dad lock you in dark closets as a child? It has nothing to do with Katie! YOU are responsible for your actions.

Speed: He did a hell of a lot more than lock me in dark closets.

Anni: Yeah so that explains why you're so damn miserable all the time. You know, except when you're with Katie but then you hurt her when you're too happy. So I'm a bit confused. It seems to me like you're just making excuses. I think you hurt her all those times just because you could.

Speed: *frowns*

Anni: Then maybe you're right, you are like your father. Hell, your sister's a psychotic murderer, why not you?

Speed: That's enough.

Anni: Or what, you'll hit me? Lock me in a dark closet?

Speed: Forget it.

Anni: *laughs* Oh so now you're not so tough. You know what, I'm doing what Katie never could do. Stand up to you and your temper.

Speed: Temper? You call this a temper?

Anni: You're just pathetic. It all has to be drama with you, doesn't it? You get that from your dad? Your mom? Your sister? Or is that just another one of your royal excuses? Because King Tim has to have EVERYTHING his way!

Speed: My way? You're the one who has a problem with everyone!

Anni: Yeah keep telling yourself that. I'm sure it's your parents' fault that you're such a stuck up jackass!

Speed: *shoves Anni against fridge*

Anni: *screams, falls*

Fridge falls over

Anni: *touches back of head*

Blood drips onto floor

Anni: *looking at hand* Get the hell out of my house.

Speed: Anni, I-

Anni: GET OUT!

Speed: *kneels* Anni, what's going on?

Anni: *blinks* What are you talking about?

Speed: I heard a scream so I came in and found you here.

Anni: What?

Speed: No one else has been in the kitchen.

Anni: *looks around*

Speed: What were you screaming about?

Anni: You. We were having a fight.

Speed: ...I was in the room. I came out here and you were by yourself.

Anni: *blinks* But you were here and we were fighting about Katie.

Speed: What time was it the last time you checked?

Anni: Seven.

Speed: ...Anni, it's midnight.

Anni: Katie and Lori weren't here?

Speed: No they left with everyone else three hours ago.

Anni: But...You pushed me into the fridge.

Speed: I haven't touched you. Maybe we should get you to a hospital.

Anni: *nods*

Speed: *grabs Anni's hand* Come on.

Anni: *stands*

TBC...............
 
*is dizzy* I'm a tad bit lost. So did Anni fight...with herself? And push herself against the fridge? *tries connecting the dots* Ok...I think I got it know...maybe. :lol:

Update Soon. :D
 
It's okay Colton, I' completely lost. Either Speed is making excuses or Anni is hallucinating or I don't know. :lol: I'm so confused, but I hope Anni is okay. That fight...or fake-fight...was a huge deal. They both said a ton of stuff they really wanted to say...unless it didn't happen and in that case I sound nuts, don't I?

:lol: Thanks, Geni. Update soon. :D
 
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