Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Aww, Lori, give your mom a little more than just a hello; she deserves more. Although good job in kicking out the oblivious boyfriend. I must say, Lori is defiantly her father’s daughter, except a little more blunt and not as caring. Or maybe she’s hiding her true feelings… *puts on glasses, speaks like Freud* Now why don’t you sit down here and tell me about your true feelings. :lol:

Ha ha, Anni’s been traumatized by the movie (who wouldn’t be), and now she’s having pains. Poor Anni, but are you sure she’s not imagining things from the movie? Either way, Speed; Get up and help your wife! Don’t just sit there like a deer caught in headlights! Geez. :rolleyes: :lol:

Great update! Can’t wait to see what happens with everyone else! :D
 
Hmmm...well those were some very interesting chapters. I hope Anni's ok. Its a little to soon for her to be having the baby isn't it?

And whoa look at the way Lori just kicked Jack out of the House. But she sure does know how to just ruin the moment of....painting pictures of rainbows and bunnies doesn't she?

Anni: What? No. Why? Why? Why would you do that?
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Why did that remind me of Chandler? lol. Ahhh the shopping. I remember the days when Calleigh made Tim carry everything. And seriously Colton and Axe? COuldn't he have said a knife or or or twisers or or or a pine cone or something? lol.

I love the ending to the last chapter, the whole "You still seem dead to me" very nice touch. Maybe that will help her wake up a little. Anyways, great as always, Geni. Update soon please.
 
oh god I hope Anni is alright, isn't it too soon for the little one to be born yet?

I loved the way Tim and Anni's father bonded eventually over the bike!....

Lori kicked Jack out of the house...very fiery just like her dad, shes certainly got his mean streak in her alright.

Lori seems different than she was the last time we heard from her especially towards her mother she seems very hostile.


update soon Geni, need to find out if Anni is alright!
 
Oh wow I leave for one day and llok at all this.

The shopping- funny. I laughed my ass off. Geni, I don't know you come up with new, original, funny stuff every sinmgle update but you do. you're amazing. And when Howard came in I just knew- man thing. Men can get along with other men if they can find a common denominator. :lol: This should go smoothly.

I kind of liked Lori kicking Jack out. He didn't seem amazing from how he talked to Katie. I think she's better off without him. But Lori, come on, she's your mother, talk to her! She hasn't seen you for so long and you know she must be hurting!

ANNI! What's happening to her? Oh my gosh, the suspense is KILLING me. Geni, please update soon.

And Delko is just the funniest guy ever. I loved the lunch, I loved everything, it was great. I really liked when Jess visited Alena, that was great. I can't wait until Eric and Jess can take her home, the poor girl is getting bounced around too much. She needs to be back home with mom and dad.

Anyways, update soon! Thanks Geni! :D
 
Thanks for the wonderful reviews. :D They sure keep me on my toes, sheesh. :p

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Next day, Katie's house

Katie: *vaccuming*

Lori: *looks up from desk*

Katie: *humming*

Lori: *frowns*

Katie: *vaccums closer*

Lori: *reaches down, unplugs vaccum*

Katie: Hey! What happened?

Lori: *lifts plug*

Katie: What was that for?

Lori: I'm trying to work.

Katie: I'm trying to clean my house.

Lori: *stands* Look, I understand you want a clean house but this is about National Security.

Katie: Colombia's National Security.

Lori: Exactly.

Katie: I wasn't finished.

Lori: Now you are.

Katie: *frowns*

Lori: *crosses arms*

Katie: Why don't you take a break for a while and come with me to the beach. We can hang out.

Lori: I have a lot of paperwork.

Katie: *grabs Lori's hand* Come on you need to get out more. I hope you packed a bathing suit.

Lori: Bathing suit? No one wears those.

Katie: Then what did you bring.

Lori: *grabs suitcase, opens it, lifts bikini*

Katie: ...It's a little revealing isn't it?

Lori: It actually has a camera in it.

Katie: *rolls eyes* Let's go and take out the camera.

Lori: Fine.

Miami Beach

Katie: *walks onto sand* Okay here we are.

Lori: *walks over*

Katie: Isn't this fun?

Lori: Should I really be out in public? I faked my death.

Katie: Relax, everyone will find out sooner or later.

Guy: *looks over* Hey babe, what's happenin'?

Lori: *looks at Guy*

Guy: Hot bod.

Lori: Piss off.

Guy: ...*walks away*

Katie: Well this has been a GREAT start.

Lori: I hate it here.

Katie: Oh come on, it's the beach! You can't stay miserable at a beach!

Lori: I can.

Katie: *grabs Lori* Okay here's what you're going to do. Take your hair down, go into the water, and cool off.

Lori: Yeah, and add a stripper pole to the mix?

Katie: You're not understanding this. You need to relax. Oh hey look, there's Eric. ERIC!

Lori: I thought no one was supposed to know I'm here.

Katie: I told him on the phone.

Delko: *runs over* Hey Katie, I haven't seen you in a while. What are you doing here?

Katie: Lori needs to relax.

Delko: *looks at Lori* WH-OW...You...Look...Good.

Lori: *stares blankly*

Delko: *blinks* I mean...Have you been workin' out? I MEAN! Nice melons.

Katie: EW ERIC! *slaps Delko* You're married!

Delko: Sorry!

Katie: I can't believe how inappropriate you are.

Delko: Sorry I didn't mean it! It was impulse.

Katie: Think before you speak!

Delko: Fine!

Lori: *smirks*

Katie: What's so funny?

Lori: *shakes head*

Katie: So Eric are you here with anyone?

Delko: I'm here with Carly and Colton. Missy and JC are around here somewhere too.

Katie: Oh good.

Delko: Yeah I'm actually supposed to be playing volleyball with them. You want to play?

Katie: Nah, I need to get in shape before I do that.

Delko: You're welcome to watch.

Katie: I think that would be fun. Come on Lori.

Few feet away

Carly: Alright Eric, don't serve like a girl this time.

Delko: If anyone's serving like a girl, it's Colton.

Colton: Hey.

Delko: *smacks volleyball*

Carly: AH! *falls over*

Delko: Point. Me.

Carly: That wasn't fair, I wasn't ready!

Colton: Oh suck it up.

Carly: You're on my team!

Colton: Yeah and I'm telling you to suck it up.

Missy: Can we play already?

Colton: If Carly would stop complaining then we could.

Carly: I'm not complaining.

Delko: Just pass the ball over here and I'll serve it again.

Carly: Fine. *throws ball*

Delko: OW! That was my face.

Carly: You asked for it.

Delko: I asked for the ball, not the ball in my face.

Carly: The net screwed me up.

Delko: Yeah sure it did. *serves volleyball*

Benches

Katie: Isn't this fun? I hardly ever get to see them bicker anymore.

Lori: *staring at Eric* Uh huh.

Katie: Wow they're better at this game than I thought.

Lori: Oh yeah.

Katie: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *swallows*

Carly: *jumps* AH! Come on that was too high. COLTON you were supposed to be shadowing me!

Colton: Your big head was in the way.

Carly: My head is not big and it was not in the way.

Colton: Suit yourself.

Missy: Can we take five? I'm going to have an asthma attack.

Delko: We just started.

Missy: Yeah but I'm already tired. Whew. *falls down*

Carly: Yeah I need to get some water anyway. *walks over to benches*

Delko: I'll be at the cabana. *walks away*

Katie: Hey Lori you should play. I'm sure no one would mind.

Lori: Nah, I'm not good at sports. I'll be right back. *leaves*

Carly: Is she having fun?

Katie: I can't tell.

Carly: *nods* Then who knows.

Cabana

Delko: *turns around* AH! Lori. *laughs* You scared the crap out of me.

Lori: *smirks* I brought you a towel.

Delko: Thanks. So when did you get here?

Lori: Yesterday.

Delko: Have you been keeping your mom company?

Lori: I've been working a lot.

Delko: Oh. How's work going for you?

Lori: Perfect. *walks closer*

Delko: Great.

Lori: *smiles*

Delko: Um...Well I'm glad you're back. *steps backward*

Lori: *walks forward* Now I'm glad I came back too.

Delko: Uh...*laughs* Um...

Lori: Want to find out what I learned in Colombia?

Delko: *wide-eyed* ...

Lori: *kisses Eric*

Beach

Katie: Stop being such a nerd.

Carly: I'm sorry but my elbow hurts.

Katie: So? You fell down. Of course it hurts.

Carly: Well do something.

Katie: I can't do anything. It's your elbow.

Carly: Yeah but it HURTS.

Katie: So put a bandaid on it.

Carly: ...You know I never thought of that.

Missy: *washing hands in the ocean* HA I'M LIKE HORATIO!

Colton: *pushes Missy over*

Missy: *screams*

Colton: *laughs*

Missy: You suck. *pulls Colton*

Colton: AH! *falls over*

Missy: *splashes Colton*

Colton: Ah that's salt water! My eyes! It burns!

Missy: Oh I'm sorry, are you alright?

Colton: HA. *splashes Missy*

Missy: *laughs* I am so going to get you back, mister.

Katie: Hey why do I get to miss out on all the fun? *runs into ocean*

Carly: Ew water. I'm not going in.

Katie: Oh stop being lazy. *grabs Carly*

Carly: *screams*

TBC...............
 
Haha the gang at the beach. I love to see them bicker. I love to see Lori get out and have some real fun (not. really). And I LOVE to see Delko make a complete fool of himself (that's the best) :lol: :D

And now I'm really worried about what happened to Anni. Oh gosh Geni you know how to make me worry about a fictional story. I can't wait for more, and this update was absolutely fantastic! Keep up the great work, and update ASAP.
 
*sigh* Eric's an idiot sometimes. At least say 'nice rack', not melons. That just sounds weird. :lol:

OMG they're kissing! Ooo...Dude. Your screwed. Your one to kiss and tell man, you won't shut up. *shakes head*

Missy: *washing hands in the ocean* HA I'M LIKE HORATIO!
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:lol: That's funny! :lol:

Thanks for the update Geni hon. :lol:

A gift for the update. :D

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Awesome updates, Geni! I have to admit, I'm a bit worried too, I'm not supposed to give birth this early, am I? And what's with the no act with Speed, shouldn't he be a pro at this by now? Very edge of my seat.... but liking it! :D

And Lori... wow, where to start. She's so much like Speed, it's a pure shame. The line, " You still feel dead to me..." was solid. Loved the tension and yes, at one point the sarcasm that Lori so aptably provided. How Speed like to kick Jack out. :lol:


And what's with this odd attraction to Eric? Whoa....

Excellent update, I still have a lot of questions, but that isn't surprising. I'll stay tuned, cause I have to find out what's going on with the baby and apparently Bambi who is just sitting by my side while I freak out. :lol:

Great job, Geni!
 
Oh lord, Anni have I mentioned how much I love you? :lol: *hugs* You always make me smile.

Thanks for the reviews, everyone. :)

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Miami Beach, 9 pm

Carly: Alright well I have to head back to your house Katie. I'm still trying to find a real estate agent that won't screw me out of ten grand.

Katie: Good luck.

Delko: I have to head back to my place too...I'll see you guys later. *leaves*

Missy: I'm soaked from head to toe and this heat doesn't seem to be doing much. Colton, you're comin' with me to get a towel.

Colton: Yes ma'am.

Missy/Colton leave

Lori: *walks over*

Katie: Where have you been?

Lori: I've been enjoying what the beach has to offer.

Katie: You've been gone for like four hours.

Lori: Was it that long?

Katie: Yeah. And Eric was gone for a while too.

Lori: Really.

Katie: ...You wouldn't know anything about that would you?

Lori: *smiles*

Katie: What did you do.

Lori: Well it's not really a question of 'what'.

Katie: *frowns* He's married.

Lori: Don't you find married guys more fun?

Katie: Are you kidding me?

Lori: We're both consenting adults.

Katie: Um YEAH that's not the point.

Lori: Oh come on mom, you have to live a little.

Katie: I can't believe you.

Lori: Believe it.

Katie: I'm going to tell your father.

Lori: *laughs* What's he going to do, ground me? I'm not that scared of him.

Katie: I just can't believe you did that. You could have ruined a marriage.

Lori: No one has to know.

Katie: Does this work in Colombia? Because it ruins peoples lives here.

Lori: *laughs*

Katie: It's not funny.

Lori: You know, I think I'll take a cab back to a hotel.

Katie: Yeah, you and what money?

Lori: Your money.

Katie: I'm not paying.

Lori: I memorized your credit card number while you were in the jon.

Katie: I'll drive you to a hotel. But we're going to the lab first.

Lori: Why?

Katie: Because I said so. Move.

Lori: Fine.

Miami Lab, one hour later

Trace Lab

Katie: *walks in* Do you have a minute?

Speed: *lifts head* Sure.

Katie: Lori's here.

Speed: ...Why.

Katie: Because I asked her, and she happens to have a case.

Speed: *nods*

Katie: *grabs Lori* I'll leave you two alone. *elbows Lori* You tell him or I will. *leaves*

Lori: *sigh*

Speed: Okay what's going on.

Lori: Nothing.

Speed: Your mother brought you here.

Lori: She's insane.

Speed: Well I think we both know that but for once her heart seems to be in the right place.

Lori: *shakes head* This is idiotic. I'm not talking to you.

Speed: Why?

Lori: Because I don't need to explain myself to you.

Speed: Did you break the law?

Lori: *laughs* Spoken like a true cop. Why don't you go get shot or run over.

Speed: Why don't you just tell me why you're here. Then you can leave.

Lori: You don't need to know.

Speed: Your mother thought otherwise.

Lori: She's just a little witch.

Speed: Watch it.

Lori: Or what. You'll raise your voice? Oh call the Coast Guard.

Speed: You know what, just stop wasting my time. You obviously don't want to tell me what the hell you did so-

Lori: I slept with your best friend.

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Don't worry it wasn't his idea, believe me.

Speed: *glares* Get out.

Lori: Awww, I made daddy mad.

Speed: *stands*

Lori: *smirks*

Speed: *walks over* You'd better be lying.

Lori: I never realized how fun Miami was. Maybe I'll just hand in my reports late and have some more fun.

Speed: You have five seconds to get out of my sight.

Lori: And you really think I'm scared of you? You're just a weak man. Like all the rest of them. *looks at watch* Oh look, the five seconds are up. Is the bolt of lightening supposed to come down now? *laughs*

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Wow, that threat sure pulled through. Yikes I'd better watch myself now. NOTHING might happen and well I-I don't know what I'd do. I'm petrified.

Speed: I have to get home, excuse me. *walks past Lori*

Lori: Home, to your wife? Your perfect bright and shiney new wife? Your new child, your new life. Now that's the crap that would make my life a great country song.

Speed: You weren't like this when we came to see you.

Lori: What, you think it's drugs? OH CRAP. I'm BUSTED.

Speed: Are you taking anything?

Lori: *frowns* No.

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: *rolls eyes* I had a few drinks before we left for the beach. And a few more after we got there. I was at that mini bar for...Hours.

Speed: Okay. I'm going to take you home. *grabs Lori*

Lori: No. No no no. No, you don't understand. I finally feel like I can do anything!

Speed: Well right now you're going home.

TBC..................
 
OMG HUNTER! THAT IS LIKE THE BEST AVATAR EVER! LMAO!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Loved the update Geni. HOLY CHEATALICIOUS LORI KISSED DELKO!!! And the volleyball match was just too funny. :lol: The ocean thing was hilarious too. :D I love being included in these hilarious storlyines. *hugs Geni Supertight* Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thankkkkkk youuuuu!!!! :D

Update Sooner than the soonest you can possibly update! ;) :D
 
Awww, thanks, Geni! And i love you too... :D *huggles* It's soo cool to be loved.

Speaking of, Delko got him some Lori lovin'. And Lori grew a pair over night or something, she really stood toe to toe with Speed , but it makes sense that she's toasted while she's doing that. Any sane woman wouldn't do it... I think I know what the deal is with Lori, despite being a spiteful son of a gun, she's jealous of what her father has now, that he didn't seem to try with their family. You can hear it when she speaks mockingly of his new life. It's written all over her face,...I think. So, there's my overblown psycho babble for the week,... tip your waitress! ;)



Awesome as ever, Geni! Waiting patiently for the update! :)
 
0_0. Lori needs a really big reality check and that reality check is going to be my hand. God I'm glad i'm young and don't have and kids because...wow even if a story kid gets on my nerves I'd hate to see what I was like with my own kids.

But seriously I can't believe that Lori slept with Eric. Eric and Jess already have enough problems. But I guess Eric could have stopped it as well. Alochol or no alochol its still wrong.

Update soon please!
 
Lora, that is the coolest avatar ever! *snags* Wow, nice job. :lol: :)

I was reading and thinking that mega-bitch Lori has returned, but now I sort of agree with Anni. Lori ran away from this life that she keeps saying she doesn't want, but she does. She misses being free to do things, which is why I think she slep with Eric, not because she loves him, but to prove she can still do what she wants. Does that make sense? :lol:

Ah, the gang's headin' home. Loved everyone at the beach, it seems that RT is the funniest wen everyone's together. And we still don't know what happened with Anni, I mean, Speed was at the lab, so things should be Ok...right? Oh the tension is building, Geni. Thank you, and can't wait for an update! *glues self to chair* :)
 
Wow, Lori’s taking the rebellious daughter stereotype to epic levels. Good on Katie for trying to get her daughter to open up, bad on Lori for thinking she can get away with anything. I understand why she ran away from her old life (don’t approve of it though), but that doesn’t mean she should be running around doing everything she can because she feels invincible or something. Bad bad Lori for sleeping with Eric, even if you were drunk.

When she was being very rude to Speed in the lab, I was afraid that he was going to hit her or something. But then I realized that Speed wouldn’t raise his hand against his own children. Then I realized that even if he had made an exception, I wouldn’t be angry with him; Lori needs to smarten up and realize that consequences go hand in hand with actions.

Ah, the Lori drama continues; what can possibly happen when Jess finds out? Or worse, Horatio? Update soon!
 
WOW

*applauds Katie*

*slaps Lori*

My goodness, so much drama. As soon as she started eyeballing Eric I knew that he was going to cheat on me *sigh* what else is new lol We have enough problems but I can see why Eric would do that. His wife and kid were put in danger twice, and he comes home to the same problems he left with. If I was his therapist, I think I'd scream TALK TO HER in his face and then say "okay, session over" lol.

But MAN Lori is a bitch. I think she's just rebellious. She still hasn't been able to shake off what happened to her in those...what, 8 years of her childhood? It doesn't surprise me that she went back, and it doesn't surprise me that she's seeking the comfort of a man when she got back.......but why did it have to be MY man? lol

Update Soon Gen, I love it.
 
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