Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Hey! I would seriously start asking questions if there wasn't a dramarific moment with the Speedle's! lol. That whole thing with H and Eric about calling Frank Francis cracked me up. The first time I heared Horatio say that on the show I was like "....Did he just...oh ma lord"

And holy hell I am one woman on a mission. So Lori's not dead!? YAY! I still have two kids alive now I don't feel so alone. WEll...RT Katie feel so alone. Oh you get what I men. But awww I could so see me doing something like that though, just rambling on and on and someone trying to convince me that it wasn't true. Seriously give me the box of Speed's crime scene stuff in it and I'll prove he's alive *raises fist*

Anywhosie...Stetler's back...this ought to be interesting. Please update soon this is getting really good!
 
OH i agree with Carly...Drama drama drama...But it's damn good drama! Now that Lori's alive, what does this mean? What will happen between Speed and Katie when she confronts him about it? What will this mean for Anni and Speedle boy? Why am I asking questions like I'm on a soap?... Hopefully, these will be answered soon!


Awesome, as always, Geni! Now you have me at the edge of my seat!
 
OMG!
Okay. Loved the 'Triple Threat' reference. I didn't even catch the 'E' thing but people say it happened. And the 'bright colors and babes...' Priceless. You're a genius, Geni. Forget Hawthorne and all them. You could make this like the great American... I mean Canadian novel. :D

And Lori's alive? Wow, I always liked her (from what I've read) and it was really sad to read about her death. So many faked deaths, I mean Raymond, Lori, Speed...
This is fantastic! So excited now! Thanks for making my night! :D Great job!
 
Colton, you won't admit, but does that mean you're thinking it anyway? :p

Great updates Geni, I've never read about Lori, but I knew she was coming back. You slipped it :lol: More soon!
 
Woah, Lori's alive? Plot Twist! :D Loved Katie working her detective stuff and then confronting Carly, who knew all along. But what is it with these Speedles faking their deaths? Lori sure is taking after her father.

No! Don’t kill Alena! She’s too cute! And small! And innocent! And she’s a Delko; they can’t be killed! *remembers Marisol*… well… damn…

Don’t leave us hanging like this! Update soon!
 
:lol: Lilly. Well American, Canadian, they're all the same to me :D

:eek: Nikki, I slipped it? :eek: ...Hmm you know, I think you're right. This is what happens when people get me on MSN. :lol:

Colton! *attacks and hugs* Love the use of the word 'gaspilicious'. :D And I shall update soon!

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Trace Lab, next day

Katie: *runs in* Okay I know that you're mad at me but hear me out.

Speed: *looking through microscope* Okay. I've heard you. Out.

Katie: This is important.

Speed: Why, you found more bruises on a corpse?

Katie: You knew I wouldn't.

Speed: That's because I don't beat my children.

Katie: No, because she's alive.

Speed: *lifts head* Are you off your meds or something?

Katie: She wasn't in the casket. It's been three years!

Speed: Yeah a lot of her wouldn't still be there after this long.

Katie: She's in Colombia, Alexx confirmed she signed off the death certificates there.

Speed: Alexx can't sign death certificates.

Katie: Well whatever she signed. And she's alive.

Speed: So...The coroner signed 'death certificates' for someone in Colombia and that means she's automatically alive.

Katie: She is. I tested the murder weapon and found fish poison on it.

Speed: *nods slowly*

Katie: She faked her death!

Speed: ...Did you and your boyfriend steal some drugs?

Katie: No. Why aren't you listening?

Speed: Because you're insane.

Katie: Oh come on you knew she was alive. Don't tell me you're a CSI and you can't even tell the difference between a dead body and a live body.

Speed: That whole sentence didn't make sense.

Katie: I'm a bit hyper.

Speed: I can tell.

Katie: We have to go to Colombia.

Speed: We are not going anywhere.

Katie: You won't even help me?

Speed: I don't get paid enough to help you.

Katie: Funny.

Speed: Why don't you just calm down with the faked death scenario and go have a cookie or something.

Katie: *frowns* You were angry that she left. That she had to do this to help other people. You were mad that she betrayed our family and you probably want nothing to do with her.

Speed: Katie, enough.

Katie: Carly said the same thing. So are you two in on it?

Speed: In on what?

Katie: This whole thing. I mean, the fact that cocaine is illegal and she went to a country undercover to help out mob boss prostitutes probably won't spark a lot of conversation with everyone else.

Speed: You have way too much time on your hands.

Katie: Exactly. If I didn't, the whole conspiracy would still be covered but I exploited it and no one believes me.

Speed: Maybe it's because you're wrong.

Katie: I thought you knew she was alive.

Speed: Look, I might have...Taken a second look a couple of times because you always hope that they'll still be alive but she was clearly dead. And I know it sounds stupid for a CSI to admit that they wish a victim lying on a table in the morgue wasn't really dead but it happens when it's your child. I was angry because it was my fault, nothing more.

Katie: So you don't think she's alive and you haven't the entire time.

Speed: I said I thought she might be. I wasn't going to...Do what you did over it. You're insane, I'm not.

Katie: Well I have evidence that she is.

Speed: Do you have physical evidence or just theories?

Katie: Oh look who's curious.

Speed: No, it's an actual question. If you have nothing then stop wasting my time.

Katie: How about if we go to Colombia and find her?

Speed: Do you know how big Colombia is?

Katie: Yes. This is why I got information out of Alexx. Arauca is near the border of Venezuela.

Speed: And?

Katie: And that's where Alexx told me to look.

Speed: So she confirmed that she's alive.

Katie: Yeah.

Speed: Why didn't you start with that part?

Katie: I like to present my findings first like any good CSI. I want to be interesting.

Speed: Yeah I think you have to actually be 'good' for that to be interesting.

Katie: *blank stare* Do you want to find your daughter or not?

Speed: Not particularily. If she wanted to leave her life behind, that's her decision.

Katie: Oh you are so pissed inside.

Speed: No I'm not.

Katie: She faked her death! I'd be pissed. Okay I am pissed. I should stop saying pissed. I kind of have to pee now. I can't believe you aren't showing any emotion toward this. She's ALIVE.

Speed: I can't change what she did.

Katie: What the hell is wrong with you? Therapy has turned you...Responsible and accepting. You're supposed to be rebellious and dramatic with a pinch of insanity!

Speed: That's your department.

Katie: So when you see her you're just going to stare at her and then say "Hi".

Speed: I'm not going to see anyone. I have work this week.

Katie: Next week?

Speed: No week.

Katie: Too bad. I have plane tickets. We're going tonight.

Speed: I'm not going anywhere.

Katie: Don't you want to see your daughter?

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: HA. You ARE angry. I knew it.

Speed: I'm trying not to be angry.

Katie: Oooh so that's what the therapy is for. I SO KNEW YOU KNEW.

Speed: Where do you get your information from?

Katie: My head.

Speed: Well that explains everything.

Katie: *puts on shades* WE'RE GOING TO COLOMBIA!

Speed: Where did you get those shades from?

Katie: My pocket.

Speed: Naturally.

DNA lab

Delko: *taps fingers against table*

Valera: *staring at computer*

Delko: *looks around*

Valera: *typing*

Delko: *sigh*

Valera: Just because you want it to go faster, doesn't mean it will.

Delko: Sorry I'm just...Anxious about the results.

Valera: I understand that. But could you please stop hammering your fingers on my table? You're vibrating everything.

Delko: Sorry.

Computer beeps

Valera: ...

Delko: What is it?

Valera: No match. The victim in The Everglades isn't a match to your DNA.

Delko: *nods* Okay that's good. Thanks.

Valera: No problem.

Halls

Delko: *walking* Hey H.

Horatio: *walking* You got the results?

Delko: Not a match.

Horatio: So the question becomes who is this little girl?

Delko: We still have to find Alena.

Horatio: Okay. I'll send Colton and Carly out on this case while you and I will continue with Alena. Right now I have to meet with Stetler.

Delko: You're going to arrest him?

Horatio: I'm not sure what his intentions are but I'll get to the bottom of it. *walks away*

Delko: Right.

Atrium

Horatio: *frowning, walks over*

Stetler: Horatio, I-

Horatio: Don't you 'Horatio' me, Rick.

Stetler: I know you're angry b-

Horatio: Angry? This is beyond angry. You're lucky I don't have a trigger finger or you'd be pushing up daisies right now.

Stetler: Is that a threat?

Horatio: I haven't even made my threat yet. How dare you get my CSIs involved with your little drug mission and steal a child, Rick. A child. I want to know where she is.

Stetler: I don't know.

Horatio: That's a load of garbage.

Stetler: Do you always speak like this to your superiors?

Horatio: I wouldn't care if you were the President, I want that child back and I want her back here right now.

Stetler: I don't have her.

Horatio: You better have her.

Stetler: Or what? You'll kill me? The mighty Horatio Caine will pop one off and send me swimming with the fishes? That, is the term you New Yorkers use, right?

Horatio: *frowning*

Stetler: I gave her to someone else after I took her.

Horatio: Hmm you never cease to amaze me with your idiotic mistakes, you're under arrest.

Stetler: What for?

Horatio: Copping to kidnapping and child endangerment. That and cocaine distribution, theft, destroying county property, felony murder, shall I continue?

Stetler: You can't prove it.

Horatio: I'm a CSI, I can prove anything. *walks away*

TBC............
 
*never thought he'd say this* GO Horatio!!!!!! :D You tell Stetler what an evil person he is! :) I'm soooo glad that it isn't Alena. I really hope she's ok. :(

I add licious at the end of all of my words now. :lol: *shakes fist at Fergie* :lol:

Update Soon. :D
 
He can prove anything! ANYTHING! ANYTHING! He is Horatio Caine.

Hehe Colton I've got that song stuck in my head. :D

Anyways, I so hope Alena is okay, hope Stetler evaporates, and hope that you, Geni, publish a book and send me a free copy. I'll give you my address. And ya know, Katie is becoming Horatio, with the whole *sunglasses* thing. :D Speed, go to Columbia and find Lori! Miami-style.

Awesome! Update sooooon. :)
 
Yay! Alena might still be alive! Oh, do hurry and find her alright.

*pulls out pom poms* Go Horatio! Go Horatio! Go Horatio! If he can't prove it, no one can! Go kick Stetler's ass Horatio!

And thus the plot thickens. Can't wait to see what happens next!
 
Oh Geni you crack me up to no end I swear. Horatio not have a trigger finger? I would never have thought such a thing. And yay! The body of that little girl isn't Alena. That must be atleast some relief for Eric and Jess.All though now they still have to find her.

That whole scene with me and Speed was hilarious. I swear if that man calls me insane one more time I just might start to believe it.

Katie: What the hell is wrong with you? Therapy has turned you...Responsible and accepting. You're supposed to be rebellious and dramatic with a pinch of insanity!

Speed: That's your department.

I laughed so hard I snorted. I think I can actually see me saying something like that. All talking fast and spitting words out and then Speed just standing there cool as a cumber. But I swear I am NOT insane....ok well...on a good day.

Anyways, I can't wait to see what happens when we see Lori again and I hope that Alena is alright. Update soon please!!
 
You know what I hate? These reviews get me all pumped and excited, but I never know what to write next. :lol: Well I know what to write next but I have so much going on in my monkey brain that I never quite makes it to the keyboard fast enough and then everything seems like I'm just throwing it out there and....Well there's an example right there. :p

But hey I'm sure y'all love my ramblings. :D And if you don't....*shakes fist*

Thanks for the reviews!

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Next morning, Colombia, Foreign Affairs Building

Katie: Okay Alexx told me she'd be here. *looks under garbage can* LORI!

Speed: *grabs Katie* Stop it.

Katie: Sorry, too much coffee. Man this place makes a mean cup of java. *tears plants apart* LORI!

Speed: Knock it off.

Katie: I am, I am.

Security: *walks over* Excuse me, are you two looking for something here?

Katie: A woman, blonde hair, green eyes, about 5'7'' MAN she's tall. I wish I was as tall as her. She might be tanned too. MAN I'm shaking.

Speed: Excuse her, she's off her meds.

Security: *nods*

Speed: We're with Miami PD. We're just following leads.

Security: Are you here for one of the staff members, or a visitor?

Speed: That depends on whether she works here or not. Her name's Lori.

Security: *smiles* Ah yes, head of Foreign Affairs here. She's quite a beautiful woman if I do say so myself.

Katie: *giggles* Oh thank you. I made her.

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: I'll shut up.

Security: Do you both have an appointment?

Speed: No but if she isn't busy we just have a few questions for her.

Security: I'll page her. *grabs radio, walks away*

Katie: *jumping up and down* I'M SO EXCITED AND I JUST CAN'T HIDE IT I'M ABOUT TO LOSE CONTROL AND I TH-

Speed: Enough.

Security: *walks over* Top floor, down the hall and to your right. She'll be in there.

Speed: Thank you.

Security: *walks away*

Katie: HAHA! AND YOU DIDN'T BELIEVE ME!

Speed: I'll believe it when I see it.

Katie: Oh come on lighten up. Let's go up there.

Speed: *looks around*

Katie: What? You nervous?

Speed: I haven't seen her in...A long time. I thought she was gone and now she isn't.

Katie: How come you didn't mention this on the plane?

Speed: I didn't think we'd actually get in here.

Katie: She won't bite....I hope.

Speed: Funny.

Katie: Come on.

Upstairs

Katie: *knocks on door* OPEN IT! OPEN IT!

Speed: Calm down.

Katie: I am calm.

Voice: Come in!

Katie: *opens door, walks in*

Speed: *stands in doorway*

Lori: *placing things in shelves* Whatever you're delivering, set it on the floor. I don't want any more rotting bananas ruining my desk. *turns around* ....

Katie: LORI!

Lori: ...

Katie: We found you, we win. Hey this game is fun. It's like you leave for a few years and then I leave for a few years and then we meet up in between and low and behold we're all "ZOMG NICE TO SEE YOU" and HOW ARE YOU!

Lori: *frowns* You aren't supposed to be here.

Katie: Well I ain't a CSI for nothin'. I uncovered everything. You think I'd just not do anything? But AHA I did something and here I am. Well here we are. I tried to get your father on a plane but he kept arguing but HAZZAH I win again and we're both here.

Lori: You didn't tell anyone else about me?

Katie: No way. Only the people involved know. I just happen to be overly dramatic and curious so I found out.

Lori: *nods*

Katie: Oh look at you, all business suit and OH MY GOD YOU DYED YOUR HAIR DARK BROWN! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM!

Lori: I work undercover, it'll seem a little odd for me to be here with blonde hair.

Katie: YOU GOT A BOOB JOB!

Lori: What? No I didn't.

Katie: Well that suit certainly compliments that area there. Whoo boy I bet the men come a runnin'. Well it's not really a suit, I mean it's a blouse and skirt but it's very pretty is what I mean to say.

Lori: Finished?

Katie: Oh yeah I was just lettin' off steam. Okay I kind of have to pee now. Where's the washroom?

Lori: Down the hall.

Katie: Thanks. *runs*

Lori: *walks over to desk, sits down, puts on reading glasses*

Speed: *looks around*

Lori: *opens file, grabs pen* I don't need another doorstop, you're either in or you're out.

Speed: *walks in*

Lori: *writing things down* You have a ring. Still Anni this week?

Speed: Yeah. Baby on the way too.

Lori: Well gee you must be quite the stud then. *flips page*

Speed: *frowns*

Lori: *writing* So did you come here to stand in my office or did you actually need something?

Speed: Katie dragged me here in case you missed that part.

Lori: Sorry she ruined your day off.

Speed: I'm actually supposed to be at work right now.

Lori: Well I'm pretty sure the red-haired wonder won't mind. Besides, with all of the girlfriends you seem to collect, work probably isn't priority number one for you anyway.

Speed: My family is.

Lori: Good luck with them.

Katie: *runs in* I'M BACK! DID YOU MISS ME? OF COURSE YOU MISSED ME! DID YOU KNOW THEY HAVE COFFEE IN THE BATHROOMS?

Lori: *looks up* ...That's not coffee.

Katie: Oh. Now I'm not sure I want to know what it was. Okay so did you two bond?

Speed: Yeah there were oodles of bonding fireworks going off in here.

Katie: Good. So Lori do you have a boyfriend? *winks*

Lori: *takes off glasses, sets them on desk* Would you two like to go out for lunch or something? Because I have a lot of paperwork to take care of. I'll buy.

Katie: You won't come with us?

Lori: Unfortunately I can't.

Katie: But....You're the boss.

Lori: Yeah and behind every good boss, is another more powerful and bitchy boss so sorry.

Katie: I flew all the way out here to have lunch with a man I don't even want to share a cab with?

Lori: *leans back in chair* I can't break away.

Katie: Then I'll stay here and visit.

Lori: I have two clients coming in this afternoon, I need the chairs.

Katie: Oh...

Lori: Look, I'm sorry but this was a really bad day.

Speed: Make time.

Lori: *looks at Speed* Excuse me?

Speed: Make the time for her.

Lori: *looks at Katie*

Katie: *staring at desk*

Lori: Okay. I guess I can call up my clients and tell them to take a hike.

Katie: Really?

Lori: *smiles* Yeah.

Katie: YAY! Okay okay okay. We are going out for lunch. I'll be downstairs waiting. DON'T GET STINGY, GIRL! *runs, knocks over chair*

Lori: ...Is she off her meds?

Speed: *places hands in pockets*

Lori: *stands* Are you going to join us?

Speed: Why?

Lori: Because I'm paying. That's what Americans call a bargain if I'm not mistaken.

Speed: Look, she just wants to know that you're okay. She dragged me along because she hates planes.

Lori: Right and you were just miserable all the way here. You know what I do for a living, besides being the head of this department? I read people. I observe them and I can tell whether or not they're hiding something or lying.

Speed: Really.

Lori: Fortunately for you, I can't tell a damn thing about what you're thinking for feeling. It's a defense mechanism to hide your emotions. You're either really talented, have a therapist or I don't know, maybe you hit your head really hard. Maybe you're still just a stubborn jackass.

Speed: Katie's waiting downstairs, you'd better not leave her down there or she'll drink all of the coffee in Colombia.

Lori: See you later. *leaves*

TBC..............
 
Hmmmmmmmmm Speedy boy wants to be there, so why doesn't he show it? That's interesting, and I like how Lori is being a bit of a bitch, I think it's in her personality. *whispers* She gets it from Katie hehehe Just kidding love you Katie!

Great update Geni, good Job.
 
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