Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Calleigh misses me...awwww.... :D Ok...Poor Speed. :( And Poor Jess. :( And I hope Alena is ok. :( Yes, I didnt mention myself in the 'is ok' thing, but I like litte kids. :D

Update Super Duper Soon Geni. :D

P.S. I know Geni could never forget about me. I leave too much of an impression. ;) :lol:

Edit: AGH! Poor Delko! :( And they keep saying they're gonna kill me...and Eric stopped them. :) *thinks he's beginning to like Delko* :D

Update super duper with Copper (random, I know. :lol:) soon. :D
 
No not Cooper! I mean...Cooper's awesome. It might be nice to see how Tyler reacts to him.

And oh *waves hands and jumps up and down frantically* I knew Louis was a a bad guy. I knew it! I knew it! ANd good lord stop hitting Eric in the face, the poor guy before the nights over he's going to break every bone in his face.

And hey if I found out I was related to Speed I would be very happy. The Speedle's may have a lot of problems but I mean....its friggin TIm Speedle I mean come on.

Anyways, update soon please!
 
The updates are awesome! Again, so much action, and it's readable! Plus plus in my book any day! So Dapper Louis is playing all sides- who else thinks that this will end badly for Louis? And Stetler has stepped in it with a lot of people on his tail. Leave it up to snake in the grass to have so much action going on and slip out when the heat is on.

Great as always, Geni! And I would pay to see how Tyler reacts to Cooper as well :lol:
 
Yes Colton you leave quite an impression. :lol: I believe it was you, Katie and Anni that were the first readers so I could never forget y'all. :D *huggles*

As for those who have started reading since, I'm glad to still have you guys aboard! This fic wouldn't exist without you guys. :) -- Well it might exist, but it would be pretty lonely.

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Cuba

Fernando: Get in there. *pushes Jess*

Jess: *screams*

Delko: Jess!

Jess: Eric!

Delko: Jess!

Jess: Eric!

Delko: Jess!

Jess: Eric!

Fernando: Enough! You. Sit.

Jess: *sits*

Delko: Weren't you in Miami?

Jess: Louis stole me and took me here.

Delko: What?

Louis: *walks in*

Jess: You jerk!

Louis: QUIET.

Jess: *wide-eyed*

Louis: *points to Jess* I'll deal with you later. *grabs Eric* Get up.

Delko: *stands*

Louis: Now get on your knees.

Delko: I thought you wanted me to get up.

Louis: *kicks Eric*

Delko: AH! *falls to knees*

Louis: *takes out gun*

Jess: What are you doing!

Louis: *points gun to Eric's head*

Jess: STOP!

Louis: You didn't think I'd hurt anyone.

Jess: Obviously I was wrong!

Louis: You love him, don't you?

Jess: Yes I do.

Louis: Then I guess it'll be that much more worse when he gets one in the head.

Jess: DON'T KILL HIM!

Delko: Yeah! What she said!

Louis: Alright. *walks over to Jess, grabs her*

Jess: Don't touch me!

Louis: *points gun to Jess' head* How about you then?

Jess: Eric!

Delko: *stands, runs*

Louis: *cocks gun* Ah, ah. I don't think so.

Delko: *steps back*

Louis: You know the whole time I've been thinking how much of a pain in my ass she's been.

Delko: So let her go.

Louis: You're such a cop.

Delko: That's right.

Louis: Well Jess, say goodbye.

Jess: *screams*

Delko: Hey, cool down a minute.

Louis: *frowns*

Delko: Let's just...Have five minutes to talk. And then you can kill her.

Louis: Five minutes. I'm not on your time, I'm on my time.

Delko: So just chill for a few minutes. Okay? Let's talk about your life. I want to know how bad it was.

Louis: What difference does it make?

Delko: Because I don't think you really want to kill her.

Louis: And why is that?

Delko: You would have done it already.

Louis: I don't have to explain my motives to anyone, especially you.

Delko: That cellphone Fernando crushed...Wasn't crushed. My team's on their way and they'll be here in about five minutes. So you have that long to get out of here.

Louis: I don't need to go anywhere.

Delko: Fine. We'll wait.

Louis: Fine.

Two minutes later

Jess: Um I don't mean to be the kill joy but isn't Colton in the other room?

Delko: ...Yeah.

Jess: And I have to pee.

Louis: We're waiting.

Miami Lab

Tyler: *turns on speaker phone* Lieutenant I'm still trying to pinpoint a location.

Horatio: Okay I need one fast. We're on the street.

Tyler: *typing* It's going to take a wh-

Cooper: *walks in* Hey I'm new here can you direct me to the Audio Visual lab?

Tyler: You're in it man.

Cooper: Oh. Well I hate to break it to you but you're being laid off.

Tyler: What?

Cooper: Yeah I'm newer and hotter and you're just...Good ol' Stringbean.

Tyler: They never said anything to me.

Cooper: You'd better make like a ghost before they find you in here. *sits down, grabs keyboard*

Tyler: Um hey that's mine. *takes keyboard*

Cooper: Mine now. *grabs keyboard*

Tyler: I was here first. *takes keyboard*

Cooper: It's a well-known fact that it goes "First the worst, second the best" So get lost.

Tyler: Let go of the keyboard.

Cooper: You let go.

Tyler: It's mine.

Cooper: I don't see your name on it.

Tyler: I wrote it in UV ink.

Cooper: Why would you do that?

Tyler: So I wouldn't get fined for vandalism. Give it back.

Cooper: No, get your own crime lab.

Tyler: I was HERE FIRST!

Cooper: NOT ANYMORE BUCKO!

Horatio: Tyler, we need those coordinates.

Tyler: Right away sir. *types*

Cooper: *grabs keyboard*

Tyler: No. *slaps Cooper's hands*

Cooper: Hey. *slaps Tyler*

Tyler: *pinches Cooper*

Cooper: OW! Hey!

Tyler: This lab isn't big enough for the both of us, bub.

Cooper: Yeah so get your fat ass out of here.

Tyler: Did you just call me fat?

Cooper: Yeah and you smell, too.

Tyler: *grabs Cooper by the hair* EW how much gel do you use!

Cooper: At least it doesn't look like I'm going bald! BALDIE! BALDIE!

Tyler: At least I don't look like a Tony Hawk wannabe!

Cooper: HEY at least I don't have stubble!

Tyler: Yeah well your luck with the ladies in this place just went down 98%.

Cooper: Bite me.

Tyler: Eat my hard drive.

Horatio: Gentlemen...

Tyler: *types* I have it.

Cooper/Tyler: Abandoned art and deco museum three kilometers from your position.

Tyler: *looks at Cooper* Jerk.

Cooper: Pfft. Says you.

Art & Deco museum

Delko: This has been an awkward silence.

Louis: Shut up.

Delko: Fine.

Jess: *elbows Louis in the stomach*

Louis: AH!

Jess: *runs*

Louis: *looks around*

Delko: *punches Louis*

Louis: AH! *falls against wall*

Delko: *beating Louis* That's for touching my wife! That's for dragging her here! That's for putting a gun to her head! And that's because you're technically a Speedle and I'll never get this chance!

Louis: *kicks Eric*

Delko: OH NOES! *falls backward*

Louis: Oh noes?

Delko: I...Nevermind.

Louis: *kicks Eric*

Delko: AH! Stop kicking me! *headbutts Louis*

Louis: Oof! *falls over*

Delko: HA!

Louis: *kicks Eric*

Delko: What is it with you and kicking? Geez.

Horatio: *bursts through doors* Eric! Jess!

Delko: Horatio! Oh thank God. I never thought I'd be so glad to see you in my entire life.

Louis: *pulls out gun*

Horatio: Drop the gun, right now.

Calleigh: *runs in*

Speed: *runs in*

Louis: No.

Horatio: It's over.

Louis: It's not over. It's never over with you people.

Horatio: Put down the gun.

Louis: No.

Horatio: Eric, is Colton in the other room?

Delko: Yeah.

Horatio: Speed, go check it out.

Louis: *points gun at Speed* No. He's going to stay right where he is. You go.

Horatio: *nods* Okay. *walks to other room*

Louis: I want you dead first. And then I'm going to kill everyone else.

Speed: Go ahead. One less day of work for me. *drops gun, walks forward* Kill me.

Louis: *frowning* Get back.

Speed: No.

Louis: *puts gun up to Speed's head*

Speed: Go ahead, pull the trigger.

Louis: What kind of a cop are you?

Speed: The kind who doesn't have time for your cowboy bullshit.

Louis: ...

Speed: So you can give me the gun and let them go or you can kill me and deal with the next person in line. Either way you're going to lose.

Louis: ...*lowers gun* I can't stop killing.

Speed: I know.

Louis: How do you fix that?

Speed: You can't.

Louis: *hands over gun*

Speed: *points gun at Louis, pulls trigger*

BAM

Louis: *falls*

TBC..................
 
Man....lots of action, I love it! HAHA OH NOES! I loved that part, and the part where Eric kicked Louis' ass! Although, I must admit that I like Louis a lot...don't know why, I just do. I always like the bad guys..there was someone else that I liked who was evil too...a few chapters back...I donno lol and I'm sure I'll like a lot of villains in the future as well lol. I loved the action-packed chapter, keep it up Gen, great work! Update SOON!
 
Wow Speed...Way to shoot an unarmed man. :lol:

I have to say, I'm glad to know that I was one of the first here. :D I'm also glad to know I wasn't the last. ;) Finally, I'm glad to know that there will be more people that will be reading (in hoping at least).

Update Soon. :D
 
Oh my gosh Cooper! That was awesome! Cooper I love you but Tyler you little stringbean get over here *hugs Tyler* Oh gosh they should just argue the whole RT and keep them BOTH Geni!
Speed...shot...Louis. Louis was no threat and he killed him. Speed...what happened?
I wish I was here back in 2005. You were all different (I reat RT 1...great stuff) back then. There were other people, too. Another Katie. It was different, I like it now just fine.
Am I really the latest rabid RT reader?
Great updates Geni! Thanks for a greaat Sunday!
 
Miss 3 freaking updates...wow!

Ok, since i had a nice long review but then the stupid window shut off and now i'm too lazy to right another one so...sorry Geni.

Louid sucks, Stetler sucks, Fernando sucks even though he reminded me of an awesome song (see if you can guess it) and Speed have better killed Louis. Because if something happened i'm using my M4. :)

Oh yeah, the Tyler and Cooper scene made me laugh. :lol:

Great stuff Geni, keep it coming. But i think your hands are about to fall off...so take a break. :)
 
OH man I was all laughing my butt off and and saying "Heck yes" and stuff and then Speedy had to go and um...kill his half brother. Well i'm guessing Louis is dead. But who knows he could have gotten shot in the arm. Why is it you hate a person for the longest time andthen when they get hurt your like "Awww poor guy" Or maybe thats just me. I am weird.

How funny was that scene with Cooper and Stringbean.

Cooper: Yeah I'm newer and hotter and you're just...Good ol' Stringbean.
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OH YEAH! Oh yeah! WEll he may be newer and and and ok he may be slightly better looking then Brian BUT Stringbean is Stringbean and and and and that just kicks Cooper's butt. In my opinion anyway.

Delko: Jess!

Jess: Eric!

Delko: Jess!

Jess: Eric!
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OH man that reminded me of the whole "Jack! Rose! Jack! Rose!" thinger when we made that Titanic video *sighs* Good times. Hehe. Eric and Calleigh all running around trying to get speed into a tux and slicking his hair back. And *squeals* The trademark handprint. And I still stand by my convictions I am no stick figure! *looks around* Anyways... God bless that movie! Update soon please
 
Holy Crap, Speed actually killed him. I can almost not believe it. And the fight with Tyler and Cooper was great, nothing like a little comic relief to relieve the tension of the story. Now we just need to find Alena and Stetler and we're home free. Very good job, Geni, you are incredible! I'll be back after work tomorrow! (ha, I've never been so happy to say that)
 
Awww, thanks Geni! I've enjoyed every bit of hiliarity and insanity that comes with the RT! Long live the RT! *pumps fist*...Okay, now would be the time to calm down.

Loved the thing between Cooper and Tyler. I laughed so hard at their antics. If pressed to pick, I couldn't, because they both add such,...charm to the job. * good way to say it without getting into too much trouble* :D


And Delko, good job with the fight and all, the comment about the nose , notwithstanding! Fits of laughter at that point as well.


I have to know, whats up with Speed? It seems like he's on a death trip or something, like he doesn't care or want to live. There's something brewwing there, I know it is. But snaps on shooting Louis, who happened to be...wait, Louis was unarmed.... *Gasp* Speed just basically murdered someone! WTF>????

Awesome update, Geni! Can't wait to read more!
 
as always your writing is imaginative and funny at the same time. I love it you never fail to surprise or try outrageous things with the characters.

Keep up the great work Geni, your stories make my day!
 
:lol: I LOVE STRINGBEAN! I mean, don't get me wrong, because I like Cooper too, but stringbean is just so awesome!
Cooper: Yeah I'm newer and hotter and you're just...Good ol' Stringbean.
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Well, ok, he does kinda have a point, but he's stringbean. 'Nuff said. Hee :D
Cooper: HEY at least I don't have stubble!

Tyler: Yeah well your luck with the ladies in this place just went down 98%.

Cooper: Bite me.

Tyler: Eat my hard drive.
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Haha, actually, thats true. Everyone seems to have stubble. Stubbly, wubbly, grubbly...Hehe. I wish that whole converstion with Cooper was actually in the show...I miss Tyler *sigh* But I blame Donahue. Just because I can. :lol:

Man, are all the Speedles crazy? (well, except Joshie of course ;)) Geez, it must be a pre-requisite that if you have Speedle genes, then you have to try to kill people for no reason :rolleyes:

*gasp* I hope the find Stettie. Poor little Alena :( All, lost and...with Stetler and whatnot...awww, poor...everyone. Ok, I clearly had no idea where I was going with that...


*pumps fist at Anni, chants* Long live the RT! *jumps around in a shirt with a big 'R' on it* ;)

please update soon!
 
Thanks for the fantastical reviews! :D

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Apartment next day, 9am

Anni: *walks out of bedroom* You're up already? I thought you were off.

Speed: *flips page of newspaper*

Anni: Louis is in the hospital. He's okay?

Speed: The last I heard.

Anni: How are Eric and Jess?

Speed: Alena hasn't been found and neither has Stetler, how do you think they are?

Anni: You seem tense.

Speed: I'm fine.

Anni: How's therapy going?

Speed: *frowns*

Anni: I'm just curious. You've seemed agitated lately.

Speed: Agitated.

Anni: Yeah. Ever since you ripped up the cheque.

Speed: Work's been stressful.

Anni: *sits at table* I went to the doctor yesterday afternoon...The appointment you said you'd...Accompany me to.

Speed: ...I...Completely forgot, I'm sorry.

Anni: It's okay.

Speed: What did the doctor say?

Anni: She said everyone is perfectly healthy.

Speed: Good.

Anni: *nods* I also found out the gender.

Speed: *reading paper* Right.

Anni: *grabs newspaper* You want to know what it is?

Speed: Why?

Anni: Because most people would like to know.

Speed: What does it matter? Our child will end up six feet under in less than ten years.

Anni: No he won't.

Speed: ...He?

Anni: *smiles*

Speed: ...

Anni: *smile fades* Tim...Say something.

Speed: Um...Boy.

Anni: *laughs* Yes it's a boy.

Speed: Well that...Never happens.

Anni: Surprised?

Speed: No, I always have a look of cluelessness on my face whenever someone speaks to me.

Anni: Clueless about what?

Speed: Well...It's a boy.

Anni: ...And?

Speed: *staring at Anni*

Anni: He won't have cooties.

Speed: *frowns* I know that. It's just...Girls are more simple to raise.

Anni: How so?

Speed: They go to their mother with their...Girl things. Who do you think the boy is going to go to when he has a problem like that? Me.

Anni: So tell him the truth and be done with it.

Speed: Okay I don't think you understand. I'm not good at explaining...Things that involve my children and something they should probably just see on the Discovery Channel.

Anni: I think you have quite a few years before that's even an issue.

Speed: I'm giving you a heads up.

Anni: Oh.

Speed: *nods*

Anni: ...Thought of any names?

Speed: No. You?

Anni: Not really.

Speed: *looks at watch* Well look at the time, I have work.

Anni: You're off.

Speed: ...I am?

Anni: Yes.

Speed: Well this is a great conversation and all but I promised I'd cover Eric's shift. I should have mentioned that.

Anni: Okay.

Speed: Bye. *leaves*

Anni: *sigh* Bye.

Miami Lab, 1 hour later

Katie: *walking down hall*

Speed: Hey! *runs over*

Katie: Hey there.

Speed: How have you been?

Katie: Fine. Why?

Speed: I haven't seen you in a while.

Katie: I've been busy.

Speed: With what?

Katie: A case.

Speed: You worked solo on a case?

Katie: *smiles* Despite what you think, I can do things on my own.

Speed: I don't doubt that. You're a strong woman.

Katie: Thank you. Hey I thought you were off today.

Speed: I'm covering Eric's shift. He's still searching for Alena.

Katie: I wish there was something I could tell Jess and Eric about the whole thing but nothing I can say will help.

Speed: I know the feeling.

Katie: So Anni called me. I hear you two are expecting a boy. *stops walking, grabs file, signs signature*

Speed: *stops walking* Yeah.

Katie: Congratulations Speed. *hugs Speed*

Speed: Thanks.

Katie: *lets go* I wish you two all the best.

Speed: *nods*

Katie: ...Something wrong?

Speed: No.

Katie: Good. I have to get back to work but I'll see you later. *leaves*

TBC.............
 
OMG! Time warps! Eric drama! Bombs! Cuba! Kidnappings! Drugs! Million dollars! Hit men! Murders! Evil Stetler! Speed shooting someone! Wubba! ( I had to add that in) I’ve missed so much, I don’t even know where to begin. *pants* Ok, um, wow you type really fast; took me an hour to catch up. Great stuff, I just can’t believe I’ve missed all of the excitement!

Don’t throw Speed in jail! And don’t kill him! He doesn’t want to die… right? Hello? … Anyone?

Pretty please update! I’m dying over here!

EDIT: :lol: You beat me to a post. Aww, it's a boy. Yay! But something is really bothering Speed. And poor Alena :( I hope someone saves her. Again, great update!
 
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