Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Lilly cracks me up. "Remind me why we're here again?....Sleep trumps evidence." :lol:

Aww, poor Ryan. Lori's gone. I agree with Lilly, she'll be back. She'll randomly show up at Ryan's door step.

Great update Geni!
 
Apparently, I type way too slow, I was just reading the first posting and then suddenly I find that the review I had so eloquently done was no longer vaild, so to make a long story short. I have to redo everything...just my luck, and it's not even my birthday.

Okay, so...how awkward was the blind date? And Eric and Katie... Katie is such a trip, Abort mission? I thought I was going to lose my breath.

Horatio is a great person to talk to , that is when he's not obsessing over his hummerhome or sunglasses, or pursuit of justice. I think he hit it right on the money about Katie- the outrageous behavior stems from her disappointment at the failed marriage. It's good to know, though that she is working through it, in her own Spider Queen way of course ;) We love you Katie!!!!

Ha, this even solidifies more that I love lily..She is a trip. Sleep trumps evidence...:lol: And the fact that she said with such confidence that she can do anything...She really rocks!!

Awww... Lori went back to Columbia. That has to suck for Ryan, I think he really did like her a lot.I also think that she will return. How soon, I don't know.

All in all, great update, Geni!
 
Sorry i've missed so much Geni!! :(

Oh man, Speed wiping up baby puke. Goody.

Ryan: Horatio ran into another cow.
*gaspage* OH MY GOSH! Don't tell Speed!! He'll flip out, then will turn it into a case, then will refuse to drop it. Crap.

Anni: What killed her?

Lilly: ...Death.
:lol: No diagnoses for that. :lol:

Horatio: *bends over* Well it appears there isn't m-

Pants rip in the middle
GENI! Your being mean....*sulks* Don't be mean to Horatio...please.... :( *blinks* Or i'll do something about it. (dun dun dunnnn)

Katie: *gasp* JESUS DOESN'T SWEAR!

Horatio: I'M NOT JESUS!

Everyone: *GASP*

WELL HE'S NOT! HE'S JESUS'S BROTHER!!

Delko: *grabs cupboards* I'M TOO AWESOME TO DIE!

*brusts outlaughing* (not kidding) Now the whole class is looking at me. A heh heh... (that was hilarious) :lol:

The pink underwear ain't though. *crosses arms*

KATIE! YOUR INSANE WOMAN! HORATIO WILL MAKE YOU DIE A PAINFUL DEATH! AND I'M SUPORTING HIM! (Ok, and old ladies on MySpace too? C'mon...)

OMG before i read on Geni. The ladie Horatio is meeting....is it...*points to self* OMG ONLY ONE WAY TO FIND OUT!! *reads on*

Oh....nevermind. :lol: *holds up fist* Damn you Tina!!

Wow...out of 4 updates Alexx says only 3 things? *whistles* Poor Alexx. :( *huggles*

ANYWAYS, thanks for the updates Geni! Hope i won't miss anymore updates! :D
 
Aww, you can tell that Ryan misses Lori because he’s trying to avoid the conversation. And all-knowing-Alexx sees this, but doesn’t say anything. I wonder if she and Horatio were visited by cosmic beings and were granted with the omniscient ability to see and know what others cannot or will not see or know. *puts down comic book* Or maybe I’m reading too much of these… :rolleyes: :lol: Lori will be back though… right? Right? Hello? *crickets*

Busted! Horatio caught Katie and Eric. See, like Alexx, Horatio seems to know and understand everything! And Katie’s just exploring her newfound freedom; the single life is where it’s at! Ha ha, Horatio sent Eric to the naughty corner. :lol: Although, all jokes aside, Horatio really is thoughtful, and he does seem like someone you can talk to without him passing any sort of judgement, unless he knows you’re hurting yourself or others. He would be a really good person to talk to when you need someone to listen and understand.

Go Lilly, sleep does too trump evidence; how are you expected to process the evidence when you’re half asleep? :rolleyes:

Great update Geni! Can’t wait to see what happens next.
 
:lol: Thanks for the reviews. :D

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Miami lab, 2 am

Lilly: *laying head on GCMS*

Ryan: *walks over*

Lilly: *snoring*

Ryan: *presses button*

GCMS beeps

Lilly: *lifts head* Not my hotpocket. What? *looks around* What, what's wrong? What happened?

Ryan: You fell asleep.

Lilly: I did not.

Ryan: Yes you did.

Lilly: So? It's two in the morning. Human beings are not nocturnal. Wake me when everyone else wakes up.

Ryan: Well, if you were in Australia...

Lilly: Don't.

Ryan: You can't sleep in the lab.

Lilly: *waves hands* Whatever. I'll go sleep in the lounge.

Ryan: No, you're going to help me with the case.

Lilly: *sigh* Fine. *sits in chair*

Ryan: *sits, looks through microscope* So what did you determine about this plastic?

Lilly: That it's dark blue and it's plastic.

Ryan: Anything else?

Lilly: You tell me, science boy.

Ryan: Well Mass Spec came back on a sample of the paint. It has small silver flecs in it.

Lilly: So?

Ryan: It's reflective, makes the paint shinier and visible.

Lilly: And?

Ryan: Well I called DMV while you were asleep and found out that they only used the special paint in newer models. I got a list of vehicles with that paint job.

Lilly: *grabs paper* People at the DMV were awake?

Ryan: I got the manager out of bed.

Lilly: *looks at Ryan*

Ryan: This is a murder investigation.

Lilly: *sigh* ...*looks back at paper* So two thousand vehicles in the Miami area. Great.

Ryan: Well the tread marks on the street narrow it down to a car.

Lilly: Okay so about 300 cars.

Ryan: We start there.

Lilly: No we start in the morning. I'm going to go to sleep.

Ryan: Lil, if you were dead, would you want the CSIs to wait until morning to solve the crime?

Lilly: I'd be dead, what would I care?

Ryan: Seriously.

Lilly: I'd want them to get some shut-eye.

Ryan: *frowns*

Lilly: Is this how you brainwash people? Deprive them of sleep?

Ryan: I've never brainwashed anyone.

Lilly: Right. *leans head on Ryan's shoulder* Wake me when I can go home.

Ryan: You're not driving home like this. I'll call a cab.

Lilly: And then what? I'll probably fall asleep in the cab and then the guy will use his grabby fingers to get more money out of me.

Ryan: I'll drive you back to your place. Where are you staying?

Lilly: I'm renting out a loft.

Ryan: Downtown?

Lilly: I don't know. But it kind of smells like pee.

Ryan: You're on the bad part of town.

Lilly: If you call gang fights and prostitutes the bad part of town, then yeah.

Ryan: Come on, you can stay at my place. It's empty anyway and the couch is free.

Lilly: No way. You could have grabby hands too.

Ryan: *stares at Lilly*

Lilly: Ah fine. As long as I can get some sleep today.

Hummerhome, 2:30 am

Katie: *sitting in dinette*

Horatio: *walks over* You're up?

Katie: So are you. *drinks coffee*

Horatio: I smelled coffee.

Katie: *looks down at cup* Wow even the smell can wake people up.

Horatio: *sits down* Something bothering you?

Katie: We already went over this.

Horatio: No, I went over it. You denied everything.

Katie: *laughs* Yeah.

Horatio: Done anymore thinking?

Katie: *nods* Should I get my journal out? You can start the timer.

Horatio: *smirks* That won't be necessary.

Katie: You ever wish...You could go back in time and warn yourself about the stupid decision you're going to make?

Horatio: I'm sure everyone wishes they could go back and fix things. Problem with that is we would never learn from our mistakes, just cover them up and hide them. Pretend they never happened.

Katie: Have you ever made a huge mistake?

Horatio: Sure.

Katie: Do you regret it?

Horatio: Every day.

Katie: What happened?

Horatio: Uh...Well, I had a chance to act and I didn't. How's that?

Katie: ...

Horatio: *stares at Katie*

Katie: *smirks* Are you ever afraid of anything?

Horatio: Fear is what keeps us grounded, shows us our limits. It can even make us stronger.

Katie: And it can destroy us.

Horatio: *nods* It can.

Katie: There are so many things I'm scared of. It doesn't matter how confident or happy I seem, at the end of the day, I end up feeling the same thing.

Horatio: Why?

Katie: I was hopin' maybe you could tell me.

TBC................
 
great updates geni .... didn't have the chance to get on to much lately been busy with school but i took some time out to read my fav fic. Can't wait for more and i am sorry to hear that you were sick.
 
:lol: I kick major ass Geni! That was awesome! First off, I get to sleep at Ryan's place! I'm so freakin excited! Gimmie those grabby hands... AND I got to be a smartass, people at the DMV were awake, science boy... :lol: Thanks for making RT me awesome Geni! *pretends she's that awesome in RL*

I loved the Katie-Horatio convo. She's really upset and he's really being a great guy and being there for her, with his philosphies and...good God Horatio regrets somethings? Kidding, kidding. I wonder what... *rubs chin* Hmmm.....

Update soon Geni! This one was awesome!
 
Geni...Embarrass Horatio more!!! I've never laughed so hard!!! :lol:

Update Soon with more Horatio embarrassment of course. ;) :D :lol:
 
Lily...that girl is just so cool...

Ryan: We start there.

Lilly: No we start in the morning. I'm going to go to sleep.

There's nothing left to say about her...She rocks...Although, she might be rocking in a cemetary somewhere if Lori got wind. Just so you know.. ;)


And Horatio and Katie, another heart to heart. They seem to be doing that alot, and it's beneficial to Katie to finally be facing this stuff. Regrets are the hardest thing to come up against. Why do I get the feeling that Katie is going to make amends for it, and it's not going to be pretty. You have to admit, there is some tense feelings still left between she and Speed. Can't wait to see how this evolves!!!


Great job, Geni, as always!
 
Wow. Wise words from Horatio/Obi-Wan.

OMG Lilly cranky and sleepy is just too cute. :lol: And it freaking gets you to stay at Wolfe's place! *wolf whistles in background* Lori might disaprove.... ;)

Thanks for the update Geni! :D
 
Lilly is awesome; I can’t come up with a better word than awesome. She says what she wants and does what she wants and doesn’t let others tell her otherwise. But look out Lori, Lilly’s staying at Ryan’s place. :eek: :lol: Oh, I can’t wait to see what comes of this. :D

The more and more Horatio says stuff like that, the more and more I think he’s Socrates reincarnated or something. I swear, when no one is looking, he sits in seclusion and muses about the meaning of life. But he regrets something? Ohh, what could it be? *grabs one of Sherlock Holmes’ hats and pips, and ponders* I must get to the bottom of this…

Don’t leave us hanging like that Geni; come back soon, or I’ll go crazy with conspiracy theories! :lol:
 
:lol: I wouldn't want to be responsible for making y'all crazy. :p

Thanks for the reviews. :D

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Miami Lab, next morning

Yelina: *walks over* You look tired.

Ryan: I didn't get much sleep.

Yelina: Got a brake on the case. I managed to get a hold of our victim's cell phone records.

Ryan: Yeah?

Yelina: He called 9-1-1 at 9:30 pm.

Ryan: Gives us an approximate time of death.

Yelina: He also called this number. *hands over paper*

Ryan: *grabs paper* ...Thanks Yelina.

Interrogation room

Ryan: *sits down*

Josh: *frowns*

Ryan: Ernest called you last night, around 9:30.

Josh: So?

Ryan: Did you know he got out of prison?

Josh: No.

Ryan: He called you, you must have known.

Josh: I must not have been around.

Ryan: He called your cell.

Josh: I left it in the garage. That's what happens when you're taking care of children, things get misplaced.

Ryan: Even your car?

Josh: *lifts brow*

Ryan: You own a Chevy Impala, correct?

Josh: Yeah.

Ryan: Dark blue?

Josh: Your point?

Ryan: We found evidence of dark blue plastic with silver flecs. I checked the stats on the new Impala. The paint used for that model has a highly reflective silver tone.

Josh: *stares at Ryan*

Ryan: *looks down at file* Says here you worked undercover for narcotics before.

Josh: I'm not a cop anymore.

Ryan: I know that. Must have pissed you off, leaving your life behind for him and coming back to nothing after he screwed you over.

Josh: I'm not that kind of person.

Ryan: *reading file* You got into a 'brawl' with a bunch of local men at a gay bar downtown, beat a guy in the face. *lifts head* But...You're not that kind of person.

Josh: *leans back in chair* I do what needs to be done.

Ryan: Does that include vengeance?

Josh: No.

Ryan: But it's okay to beat innocent people.

Josh: I was looking for Ethan. You wouldn't understand that.

Ryan: You're right, I probably don't. But it doesn't explain why you don't seem to have an alibi.

Josh: You didn't ask for one.

Ryan: Where were you last night around nine?

Josh: Shooting up in a back alley.

Ryan: *frowns*

Josh: I was putting my kids to bed.

Ryan: So why was your phone in the garage?

Josh: I had groceries in one hand and a kid in the other so I left the phone out there and forgot to go and get it.

Ryan: So you wouldn't mind if I checked your car.

Josh: I would.

Ryan: I can get a warrant.

Josh: Then get the warrant.

Ryan: *nods* ...Are your kids here?

Josh: Cait's here. Ethan's at school.

Ryan: Mind if I speak with her?

Josh: Go ahead.

Ryan: Thanks. *stands, leaves*

Interview room B

Ryan: *sits down* Hi Cait.

Cait: *stares at Ryan*

Ryan: Your dad's here.

Cait: *nods*

Ryan: I just wanted to ask you a few questions about last night. You were at home?

Cait: Yup.

Ryan: About what time did you go to bed?

Cait: I didn't.

Ryan: What do you mean?

Cait: Dad put Ethan to bed. I went in my room but I didn't go to sleep.

Ryan: Why not?

Cait: I wasn't tired.

Ryan: Was your dad home all night?

Cait: No. I looked out my window and he was outside.

Ryan: What was he doing outside?

Cait: Talking to a man.

Ryan: Do you know who the man was?

Cait: ...He shot him.

Ryan: *stares at Cait* Who shot who?

Cait: The man shot daddy.

Ryan: ...Could you sit tight? I'll be right back. *stands leaves*

Morgue

Ryan: *runs in* Alexx, tell me our victim isn't gone yet.

Alexx: No, why? What's wrong?

Ryan: Did you process the body?

Alexx: For what, exactly.

Ryan: GSR, fibers, that kind of thing.

Alexx: Oh honey that's your job.

Ryan: I need to see him and his clothes right now.

Alexx: Sure. *walks over to drawer*

Ryan: Did you take any X-rays.

Alexx: I always do before I start an autopsy. I was going to call you last night about it and this morning I got three more bodies.

Ryan: What did the X-ray say?

Alexx: A mouthful. Five broken ribs, broken leg, fingers and dislocated hip.

Ryan: Consistant with a crash...There was no blood pooling at the scene.

Alexx: Not uncommon, the bullet went in but didn't come out the other end. Skin snapped back, causing minimal bleeding.

Ryan: Yeah but he could have died somewhere else.

Alexx: He could have.

Ryan: *looks down at body* What are these markings?

Alexx: I found that after I removed his clothes. Looks like a rash or a burn.

Ryan: Like rug burn. *tilts head* They move across his stomach and across his arms.

Alexx: Bruises didn't come up until this morning.

Ryan: That looks consistant with ligature. So he was tied up yet he was in some sort of crash or endured trauma of some kind.

Alexx: You have any suspects?

Ryan: I think so. Thanks Alexx.

Josh's house

Garage

Ryan: *opens car door, shines flaslight*

Lilly: *walks over* You got the warrant?

Ryan: Yeah.

Lilly: So this is his car.

Ryan: *looks around* Nothing out of the ordinary in here.

Lilly: Well, besides the chipped frame down there near the tire.

Ryan: What?

Lilly: *points*

Ryan: *kneels* I would have seen it.

Lilly: Better late than never I guess.

Ryan: *frowns*

Lilly: So he killed him.

Ryan: *stands* Cait said Josh was shot.

Lilly: He looked fine when I walked by. Although he was holding his shoulder.

Ryan: We need to take a look at the front of the house.

Front lawn

Ryan: *looks up* Cait's bedrrom is above us, allowing her to see the events down here so we're in the right place.

Lilly: *looks around* Muddy footprints everywhere. Looks like a scuffle took place.

Ryan: Okay you stand here where these prints are. *pushes Lilly* I'll be Ernest.

Lilly: Sure.

Ryan: Alright, so I just got out of prison, probably hackled with some lawyers and looked pretty in front of a judge. I come by here, why?

Lilly: Maybe you wanted to apologize for stealing the kid.

Ryan: This is supposed to be realistic.

Lilly: Fine. Maybe you came over here to finish the job, take the kid.

Ryan: Alright so you go back to the garage to get your cellphone because that's where you left it and you see me outside. What do you do?

Lilly: Well I'm a former cop and you're a convicted pedophile just released from prison who happened to find my new home and harass me on my cell, so I grab my spare gun.

Ryan: I have a gun too.

Lilly: So it's fair game. Why do you shoot me?

Ryan: Maybe we have an argument, I get angry and I shoot.

Lilly: And what are you doing while I'm bleeding everywhere?

Ryan: *looks down* Footprints lead up to the house. I run inside...To take what's mine?

Lilly: Ethan.

Inside house, up stairs

Ryan: *looks around* Muddy footprints lead up here to Ethan's room.

Lilly: *nods*

Ethan's room

Lilly: Wow. Talk about a fight.

Ryan: Glass everywhere. Were there any framed pictures in here?

Lilly: I don't see any evidence that there was.

Ryan: *walks over to window* Glass over here.

Lilly: Blood spatter on the wall.

Ryan: So I run up here to grab Ethan, I turn around and you shoot me point blank in the head. You're not going to bother running to me, you just fire.

Lilly: Explains the distance.

Ryan: So I fall out the window and land down there, breaking bones and dying. *looks at ground*

Lilly: So how did he get across town?

Ryan: *looks at Lilly*

Interrogation room

Lilly: *sits down* You were trying to protect your children.

Josh: *looking at table*

Lilly: What I don't understand is what happened after he fell out the window. Most people call 9-1-1.

Josh: I did. From his cell but it died.

Lilly: Why didn't you drive him to a hospital?

Josh: I shot him in the head and he fell two storeys. What was a doctor going to do?

Lilly: You could have gone back inside and called the police. Like any cop would do...But you weren't thinking like a cop. You were thinking like a father.

Josh: I grabbed him and tied him to the roof of my car.

Lilly: So you wouldn't leave any evidence on the inside because blood can wash off of metal but not out of fabric so well.

Josh: It was dark, I figured no one would see him.

Lilly: Where were you going with him?

Josh: I don't know. I was barely thinking straight. I just killed the guy.

Lilly: You hit a pot hole.

Josh: Yeah. The rope came loose.

Lilly: You didn't go back for him.

Josh: Well it wouldn't exactly make me look innocent if I was standing over a dead guy in the middle of the street with bloodied rope hanging off my roof.

Lilly: *closes folder* Okay.

Josh: So what now.

Lilly: You're free to go.

Josh: ...I murdered someone.

Lilly: No. It was self defense, he even shot you.

Josh: I tried to get rid of the body.

Lilly: As far as I'm concerned, you tried to get him help. Nothing more.

Josh: ...

Lilly: An officer will drive you home.

Josh: Thanks.

Lilly: *nods*

Josh: *stands, leaves*

TBC....................
 
Poor little kid. Cait saw her own father shoot someone, poor kid. She's too young to see death. :(

And Ryan is handling like this a pro! Like, an actual pro. :lol: Thanks for the update Geni, made school a bit more pleasent. :D
 
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