Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Wow, great job. I like how you tied all of this together, and made it......not confusing lol. I also love the part where I said "You must have felt alone" it hits the nail on the head, seeing as most gang members join because they have no one else.

But omg.........his truck blew up, and we almost DIED lol. AWWW He protected me....how cute. I loved the last two lines, but I should be thanking him! He covered my head and all and saved my life and AWWWWWWWWWWW that's adorable! I wonder what else will happen as we go through our adventures...maybe strike up a friendship? Who knows?! It's the RT anything's possible! WOOT.

Great update Geni, it was awesometastical! Please update soooooooon!
 
Oh man im watchin Empire Records while I was reading those chapters and they were all serious and I was laughing my butt off at the movie...and it was just weird.

But go Jess all jumping out of the car I'd open the door and then close it. But hey i'm a big chicken so that's nothing new. And ohhh Mrs. Speedle...had an affair I'm not sure why but I think thats awesome. Hey if her husband can be in a mob then she can have an affair. lol. I wonder what Timmy will think. Update soon.
 
Oh i love how Horatio and Wayne are working together. The left and the right hand, the good guy and the bad guy, the cop and the Mob boss. Love it. :D

Oh boy...Louis lost his truck...hey it's not really funny. For a woman, it's like losing all of your hair. *shudders* But a guy losing his truck...*shakes head* Tragic.

Great update Geni! :)
 
Yeah, she ruined his car and now his truck? Haha poor Louis. I loves how Jess was brave enough to get away from him but smart enough to go with him when she learned about her father and the Cubans. I mean, she'd be dead if it weren't for him!

It's great when Horatio has to work with someone he doesn't trust because first off, anything can happen, and second off, he doesn't want to work with the bad guy, so it means Horatio scarafices what he wants for the good of...whatever or whoever they're saving. Go Horatio! Go bad guys! (not really)

Can't wait for more Geni! Awesome update! :D
 
:lol: Thanks for the awesome reviews! I really liked the interpretations of Horatio and Wayne. :D

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Hotel room, Miami

Jess: *sits on bed* So we're being followed by a bunch of Cubans. Well gee that just made my day. You know which Cuban I want to be followed by? My husband. You know why? Because he won't try to kill me!

Louis: *loading gun*

Jess: What are you doing?

Louis: What does it look like I'm doing?

Jess: *sigh* So what, do I get stuck in here forever now? Or at least until you get to blow off some guy's head.

Louis: *closes curtains*

Jess: We're 40 storeys up I'm pretty sure no one can see us.

Louis: *dials phone*

Jess: Who are you calling?

Louis: *frowns*

Jess: Fine, I'll shut up.

Louis: *walks into bathroom*

Jess: *looks around* Well this is boring. I'm out of here. *walks to door, grabs handle*

Louis: *grabs Jess*

Jess: Ugh seriously do you know everything?

Louis: *closes phone* You can't leave.

Jess: Why?

Louis: Because I said so.

Jess: I want to leave.

Louis: You can't. I don't get paid if you leave.

Jess: Oh gee sorry for ruining your pay day. *opens door*

Louis: *points gun at Jess*

Jess: ...What are you doing?

Louis: Get on the bed.

Jess: Or what, you'll shoot me? Your job is to keep me alive.

Louis: Oh I can shoot you and you'll still be alive.

Jess: ...

Louis: The bed. Now.

Jess: Shoot me.

Louis: *frowns*

Jess: What are you waiting for?

Louis: *pulls trigger*

Bullet hits wall

Jess: *flinches*

Louis: Next time it'll be a little closer.

Jess: *sits on bed*

Louis: Thank you.

Jess: You all annoy me.

Louis: I'm afraid I don't know what you mean.

Jess: You...Speedles. Well you're not a Speedle but you're part of that whole biological gene pool and you annoy me.

Louis: You know Kayleigh's family?

Jess: Yeah as a matter of fact I've worked with them.

Louis: *pulls curtains, stares out window*

Jess: Have you killed any children?

Louis: No.

Jess: Never had the chance?

Louis: I had the chance once.

Jess: What happened?

Knock on door is heard

Louis: *turns around*

Jess: ...Who is it?

Louis: *walks to door*

Jess: *sits further back on bed*

Louis: *opens door*

Cubanguy: *runs in, shooting*

Louis: *falls over*

Jess: *screams*

Cubanguy: *grabs Louis, punches him*

Louis: AH!

Jess: *jumps off bed, crawls to night table*

Cubanguy: *throws Louis against wall*

Louis: UGH! *pulls out gun*

Cubanguy: *kicks gun out of hand*

Louis: *looks at guy*

Cubanguy: *points gun at Louis*

Louis: *frowns*

Cubanguy: ¿Es usted listo morir?

Louis: *kicks Cubanguy*

Gun goes off

Louis: *ducks*

Cubanguy: *falls*

Louis: *grabs gun*

Cubanguy: *looks up at Louis*

Louis: *pulls trigger*

BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM

Louis: *staring at body*

Jess: *peers up over bed* ...

Louis: *looks at Jess*

Jess: ...

Louis: *walks over* Are you okay?

Jess: *nods*

Louis: *kneels* You sure?

Jess: ...You just splattered the walls with blood and some guy is lying on the floor with his head ripped open with bullets. I'm as good as can be.

Louis: We have to leave.

Jess: Naturally.

Louis: *looks around*

Jess: What?

Louis: Someone's converging on this location right now.

Jess: How do you know that?

Louis: Shhh.

Jess: ...

Louis: *grabs Jess' hand* Come on.

Stairwell

Louis: *opens door*

Jess: Wh-

Louis: *pulls out gun, turns around*

Cuban2: *pointing gun at Louis*

Louis: *pointing gun at Cuban2*

Jess: ....

Cuban2: Drop your weapon.

Louis: Tell me something. How much are you getting paid for this?

Cuban2: You could never double the amount that I'm b-

Louis: *pulls trigger*

Cuban2: *falls, dies*

Louis: *looks down hall* Oh great.

Jess: What, who is it?

Louis: Cops.

Jess: What? *pushes past Louis* Horatio!

Horatio: *gun lifted, walking* Jess, are you okay?

Jess: I'm fine.

Louis: *lifts gun*

Horatio: Put the gun down son.

Louis: *frowning*

Jess: Louis, don't shoot him. He's my friend.

Louis: He's a cop.

Horatio: Louis, Jess' father is working with us. He told us about everything.

Louis: I'm sure he did. It doesn't change what my job is.

Horatio: Your job is over. We'll take it from here.

Louis: You're not taking anything. I don't give up my assignment for anyone.

Horatio: Is that your room?

Louis: It was.

Horatio: Speed.

Speed: *walks over*

Horatio: Check out the room.

Speed: You got it. *walks into room* Hey H, there's a body in here.

Horatio: Okay. Louis you did well, but we'll take her.

Speed: *walks over*

Louis: *points gun at Speed*

Speed: You want to chill out?

Louis: *frowning*

Horatio: He's unarmed.

Louis: *lowers gun*

Horatio: Jess, come over here.

Jess: *walks over*

Louis: They'll be after her.

Speed: Well it's a good thing we're professionals then.

Louis: I'm a professional.

Speed: Funny I didn't see your job in the Classifides.

Horatio: Speed....

Speed: Sorry H.

Louis: I'd better get paid.

Horatio: You will.

Speed: Unless those Cubans come after you and kill you.

Louis: Do you have a problem with me?

Speed: Not at all. I'm just making sure you know how not to get yourself killed.

Louis: I've been doing this a long time.

Speed: So have I.

Louis: You have no idea what my life's been like.

Speed: Mom had an affair and abandoned you. You grew up on the streets until Jess' dad took you in. I'm crying a river right now just thinking about how hard your life was.

Louis: *lifts brow*

Speed: It could have been a lot worse. You could have grown up in my house. *walks away*

Louis: ...

Horatio: Let's go.

TBC..............
 
Speed: Mom had an affair and abandoned you. You grew up on the streets until Jess' dad took you in. I'm crying a river right now just thinking about how hard your life was.

Louis: *lifts brow*

Speed: It could have been a lot worse. You could have grown up in my house. *walks away*

Oh gosh. Speed, you're going to make me cry. Was Speed's life as a child really that bad? Oh Speed, you need a hug *hugs Speed* Yay! Jess is safe with Horatio (unless he's a Cuban guy disguised as Horatio...in which case, run Jess!) and Speed got to be a smartass. I'm starting to like this Louis guy a bit more, he reminds me of Horatio/Speed.
Spectacular update, Geni. And as long as you keep supplying me with daily laughs, I'll try and write good reviews! Thanks! :D
 
Horatio comes in and saves the day!!

Speed: *walks over*

Louis: *points gun at Speed*

Speed: You want to chill out?

Louis: *frowning*

Horatio: He's unarmed.

Louis: *lowers gun*

Yeah right, Speed's unarmed when they're doing this.

Ok, Cuban Guy number 1 got his head ripped apart with bullets? That is SO cool. Imagine having an open casket funeral. :lol:

Speed: It could have been a lot worse. You could have grown up in my house. *walks away*

*eyes tear up* Oh my God...that's so sad... :(

Thanks for the update Geni. :)
 
Ohhhhhh go Speedy boy. And I just yelled that really loud and i'm not really sure why. lol. I'm glad that Jess is ok and long live H man for saving the day!

I'm still not sure if I like this Louis guy though. I dunno I've been wrong in the past about people in the RT but I just don't like him for some reason. Update soon please.
 
Well Speed's life at home was...Questionable, Lilly. :lol: It was explained in the 6th RT I think. Although I'm not quite sure so who knows. :D

Katie you crack me up! I can just imagine you in your home yelling things out at the computer and people looking at you strangely. :lol:

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PD

Jess: Is Eric okay?

Horatio: We actually haven't heard from him.

Jess: What do you mean you haven't heard from him?

Across room

Speed: *looks up from paperwork*

Few feet away

Horatio: He...Might have been killed.

Jess: ...

Horatio: He hasn't called and neither has Colton. Both of them are MIA.

Jess: When was the last time you heard from them?

Horatio: Three days ago when they were on Stetler's trail.

Jess: And you haven't looked for them?

Horatio: We think they're still in Cuba.

Jess: *sigh* So they could both be dead.

Horatio: It's possible. Which means we need to get you safe or we'll run into the same problem with you.

Jess: What about Alena? Where is she?

Horatio: We don't know. But you won't be any good to her if you're dead so we have to get you somewhere safe.

Jess: Where?

Horatio: You let me worry about that. I want you to go with this officer.

Patrolcop: *walks over*

Jess: Find them.

Horatio: I promise.

Jess leaves

Speed: *walks over* She sounded upset.

Horatio: When we find Alena Jess and Eric won't be around to take care of her.

Speed: Are you asking me to take care of her?

Horatio: You have legal guardianship if they're both incapacitated. This would fall under that heading.

Speed: I think someone else would be better suited to t-

Horatio: Legally, it's your job.

Speed: What if you don't find her?

Horatio: We'll find her. *walks away*

Speed: *nods*

Layout room

Ryan: They were last seen here.

Calleigh: Havanah, Cuba. Okay we can open the grid from there.

Ryan: The thing is Calleigh, once we find them how do we get them out and Stetler without a bunch of Cuban gangs shooting at us?

Calleigh: We just have to be careful.

Ryan: ...Careful.

Calleigh: Mhm.

Ryan: What if they're already dead?

Calleigh: We're CSIs Ryan, we don't use the term 'what if'.

Ryan: *nods*

Calleigh: Okay I've spoken to Tyler and he's been trying to get a signal from Eric's cellphone, assuming it's still on.

Ryan: Has he had any luck?

Calleigh: Not so far.

Ryan: What about Colton?

Calleigh: *stares at map*

Ryan: ...Calleigh?

Calleigh: Um...Nothing either.

Ryan: Are you okay?

Calleigh: *smiles* I'm fine.

Ryan: You don't look fine.

Calleigh: *smile fades* ...Eric's one of my best friends and Colton...He means a lot to me.

Ryan: I'm sure we'll find them.

Calleigh: ...Yeah.

Ryan: You going to take the day or something?

Calleigh: No. No, I want to find them, I need to help. So we'll start with this location and we'll continue to check if Eric's phone is on. The GPS will narrow us down further.

Ryan: Right.

Tyler: *runs in* You're in luck, I have a hit.

Calleigh: You do?

Tyler: Yeah come check it out.

A/V Lab

Calleigh: *leans over chair* Looks like the Cienfuegos province.

Ryan: *crosses arms* Can you narrow it down further, Tyler?

Tyler: I can try. *typing* Hey did you know that the name 'cienfuegos' translates to 'hundred fires'?

Calleigh/Ryan: Yes.

Tyler: ...Well...Good. *clears throat, types*

Calleigh: Wait, is that the GPS?

Tyler: Yeah I'm narrowing in on it now. *typing*

Ryan: Looks like a city.

Tyler: Yeah. Castillo de Jagua. Hey did you know that the full name is actually C-

Calleigh/Ryan: Castillo de Nuestra Señora de los Angeles de Jagua.

Tyler: ...I hate it when you do that.

Calleigh: I'll call Horatio.

Ryan: Great job Ty. *leaves*

Calleigh: *leaves*

TBC.............
 
TEE! LOL I can so imagine that happening. That would probably make me the only one is this thread, but I take what I can get :p

Aww see Colton, she hasn't forgotten about you. And poor Jess! Speedle taking care of Alena? Ok...:lol:

Oh, and YAY for Tyler!
 
I'm just glad my dad didn't come into my room lik last time.

Awww poor Tyler. Wait a second STRING BEAN heck yes! *Coughs* Anyways, awww poor Tyler he just wanted to say something cool and Ryan and Calleigh couldn't even let him do that. But why did that remind me of National Treasure when Riley said something they didn't know. lol. Anyways! Eric can't be dead..Colton I still haven't forgave him for the whole stealing my kid thing but Eric I mean..*sighs* I guess i'll just have to wait to see. Update soon please.
 
I miss Tyler. He was awesome, and he just...evaporated.
I like how Ryan is begining to fit in more...I always liked him but wished he could fit in because while Speed kicks his ass, he's still great, and he deserved to be treated so. I love him and Calleigh working together *dodges rocks thrown by Colton*
Calleigh/Ryan: Castillo de Nuestra Señora de los Angeles de Jagua.
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Call me the geography idiot but was that 'Los Angeles' I caught? Where are they, Cuba or CA? Man I need to pay attention in History. great update Geni! Loving it. Thanks for updating so soon!
 
Woo! Everyone seems to like Tyler. :D Hmm I wonder if I should bring on my homeboy from Canadia. :p (Aka. Cooper)

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Cuba, Abandoned art&deco building next day

Delko: *tied to chair*

Fernando: Where is Rick Stetler.

Delko: I don't know.

Fernando: You were seen with him.

Delko: I don't know where he is.

Fernando: ¡Donde!

Delko: ¡No sé!

Fernando: *laughs* You are Cuban after all.

Delko: *frowns* You've kept me here for three days. If I knew where he was, I would tell you. I'm not your enemy.

Fernando: If I don't get my cocaine, you die. Understand?

Delko: Perfectly.

Fernando: He is American and you are American, therefore you understand why I cannot trust you.

Delko: You think I'm working with him? He stole my daughter.

Fernando: I can guarantee you my cocaine is worth a lot more than your little Hija.

Delko: Wait...If you let me go and you allow me to find her then I'll hand him over to you.

Fernando: I thought you didn't know where he was.

Delko: I don't but he has my daughter and...He put a GPS transmitter in her pocket. I think she still has it. If I can track her, then I can track him.

Fernando: No. No.

Delko: Why not?

Fernando: We will find him. I want to know everything about this transmisor.

Delko: I'd need to know the frequency at which it functions and I don't know that. I'd have to contact my lab.

Fernando: You have one hour to remember what it was.

Delko: What happens after an hour?

Fernando: Whitey back there dies. *points to door*

Delko: Colton?

Fernando: I will return in one hour. Buena suerte. *leaves*

Delko: *sigh* Great.

Cellphone starts to ring

Delko: What? *looks down* Who ties someone up and doesn't take their phone? *brushes side against chair*

Phone falls, opens

Delko: Um...Hello?

Calleigh's voice: Eric! Eric are you alright?

Delko: Uh...I'm tied to a chair.

Calleigh: But you're okay?

Delko: Yeah I'm fine.

Calleigh: Where's Colton?

Delko: He's in the other room. I don't know what they're doing to him. Cal, I'm in a city.

Calleigh: I know. We pinpointed the town but we're having a hard time finding out exactly where.

Delko: I'm in an abandoned museum or something. Is Jess okay?

Calleigh: She's fine Eric. We have her.

Delko: Good. Listen Cal, there was a GPS transmitter on Alena, I need to know the frequency or Colton dies.

Calleigh: I won't know unless I find out exactly what kind of transmitter it was. I can give the information to Tim and he can work with it.

Delko: It was a Bluenose T80.

Calleigh: Okay great, I'll pass it along.

Delko: Good.

Doors open

Fernando: *walks over* What are you doing?

Delko: *looks up*

Fernando: *steps on phone breaking it, punches Eric in the face*

Delko: AH!

Fernando: *beating Eric*

Delko: *falls over in chair*

Fernando: *takes out gun* Now you will die.

Louis: *walks in* Stop.

Fernando: *turns around*

Louis: We want him alive.

Fernando: *backs up* Yes sir.

Louis: *grabs chair, sits Eric up* You're a smart guy Eric but...Not smart enough.

Delko: *looks up*

Louis: Your wife...She's very pretty. Unfortunately she's not as safe as one would believe.

Delko: What did you do with her?

Louis: Nothing yet. *smirks*

Delko: You son of a bitch let me go!

Louis: *punches Eric in the face*

Delko: AH!

Louis: Watch your tongue.

Delko: *frowning*

Louis: Fernando.

Fernando: Yes sir.

Louis: Kill the other man.

Fernando: Yes sir.

Delko: Wait!

Louis: *stares at Eric*

Delko: Don't kill him. He's not a threat to you.

Louis: And I suppose you are.

Delko: I know where Stetler is.

Louis: I don't believe you. You see, I'm working for three sides, well four now. I have your team wrapped around my little finger. Stetler hired me while I was already working with the Cubans and then Jess' father recruited me to this case because I was down here. Yet, I was already aprised of this case seeing as I'm the major player in every side.

Delko: So you know where he is.

Louis: No. He seems to have evaded every side. And that pisses me off. No one, wants to see me pissed off. Do they?

Fernando: No sir.

Louis: You know how many people I've killed to get to this point? Dozens, maybe even hundreds. Do you know how many friends of mine he's put away for crimes they didn't commit? Well...They commited the crimes but I like to think they were innocent because I have a problem with cops.

Delko: *shakes head*

Louis: We all have something in common. We all want this bastard dead. Well, maybe you don't. But I sure as hell do. And so do the Cubans. Jess' father just wants the entire family safe, including little Alena. He'd do anything for his family, did you know that?

Delko: No I didn't know.

Louis: He has a funny way of showing it though. He disowned her years ago because she didn't want to be part of the 'organization' as he put it. And now all of a sudden he's flown down to Miami to make sure that she's safe. I wouldn't trust his motives if I were her.

Delko: Why are you telling me this?

Louis: I like to hear myself speak. Is that good enough?

Delko: You're insane.

Louis: That's a little subjective, isn't it?

Delko: If we all want Stetler caught, we should work together.

Louis: I told you I don't like cops. I'm already working with the Cubans and Jess' father but since he seems to have found loyalties in Miami-Dade PD, I guess I have to cut him off too.

Delko: All of this over some cocaine?

Louis: *laughs* It's always about the drugs isn't it?

Delko: Is it?

Louis: No. This is about a man I've hated since I was 17. Not only did he arrest my friends, but he took my best friend out into a field and beat him to death with a two by four. He calls himself a cop.

Delko: I'm on your side here. You don't have to kill me to get to him.

Louis: You know what I found out yesterday? I'm related to a bunch of cops, Eric. Your friend. Your best friend. Should I take him out to a field and beat him to death too? Just to make things even?

Delko: ...Speed?

Louis: Speed, Tim, Bob, Clarence whatever the hell you want to call him. My own flesh and blood, part of those people.

Delko: So go kill yourself.

Louis: You know, you kind of remind me of my best friend.

Delko: Yeah?

Louis: Yeah. He always had a way of pissing me off. *beats Eric with butt of gun*

Delko: AH!

Louis: I guess the only difference is, you're still alive. For now. *walks away* Don't touch him until I say so.

Fernando: Yes sir.

TBC...............
 
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