Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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Holy! more wonderful twists and turns, the return of Kayleigh and Jess and Alena are in trouble again! Geni, you seriously know how to keep us on the edge of our seats and keep us guessing! You are amazing!
And congrats to RT Anni on the upcoming baby! I can't believe Speed tore up the check! He'll regret that later.
 
WOW! For a moment there, I thought the worst. But, ... Speed wants to die? But why, he has the family that he wants, a wife that he loves and who loves him...(heehee) and well friends out the yazoo. That aside, it was really cool that he handled his sister- and even more so that she showed a little heart there. Just might be some redemption there somewhere.

I'm still on the edge of my seat here. Great job! :D
 
just echoing what everyone has already said Geni-Loving it loving it loving it....Speed is just amazing

can Kayleigh change...maybe that will bring a shock to the system for her

Update soon....who needs tv (except for CSI Miami etc) when you have the RT-not me thats for sure :D
 
Awwww Speedy can't want to die because well...he just can't. Thats all there is to it. And oh man I needed that Eric/colton/jess storyline thinger to read first thing in the morning. It woke me up. Great job, Geni as always.
 
SO....does Speed want to commit suicide and he can't bring hiself to it so he asks his sister to stab him? Hmm....

Great stuff though Geni! I can't wait for the next update! :D
 
Sorry I've been gone so long everyone. :) Thank you so much for the reviews, they're such a pleasure to read. :D

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Unknown location, Miami

Jess: *handcuffed to a pipe*

Louis: *sits in chair*

Jess: I pictured you to be this fat ugly mobster. What are you, 40?

Louis: Well people say looks can be decieving. And I'm 33. *winks*

Jess: Charming. And I don't picture you to be a 'Louis'.

Louis: I was born with the name Nathan, but changed it when I moved to New York. Anything else you would like to know sweetheart?

Jess: Are you going to kill me?

Louis: *smirks*

Jess: What. You hear that question a lot?

Louis: As a matter of fact I do.

Jess: And what's usually the answer you give?

Louis: *stares at Jess*

Doors open

Thug1: *walks in* Boss, we have a problem.

Louis: Do we.

Thug1: Kayleigh gave you up.

Louis: That's a problem?

Thug1: ...It's..Not a problem?

Louis: *stands* I'm not worried about Kayleigh. She didn't hire me.

Thug1: ...You used to work for her.

Louis: I work for someone else now.

Thug1: That guy in the suit.

Louis: *nods*

Jess: Wait, guy in a suit? You mean Stetler?

Louis: Smart girl. Oh, sorry. Woman. Anyone who can wear a skirt like that deserves all the respect she can get.

Jess: *frowns*

Thug1: He called and said the money's on it's way but it's a little late. He had some trouble with a Cuban guy.

Jess: Eric? Eric's with him?

Thug1: Look boss, the guy's after us too and if the money doesn't get h-

Louis: *lifts hand*

Thug1: ...

Louis: We wait.

Thug1: Yes sir. But um...What do we do with her? Our orders are to kill her once we get the money.

Louis: Right now I want you to pull my car around.

Thug1: Yes sir. *leaves*

Louis: *turns around*

Jess: Did he hurt Eric? Where's Eric?

Louis: I'd worry about yourself right now.

Jess: They're going to find me and you're going to either get killed or go to jail.

Louis: My opponent sounds formidable then.

Jess: My husband will probably skin you alive. And then he'll rip out your eyes and make you watch as he's beating the crap out of you.

Louis: He sounds violent.

Jess: Normally he isn't but when it comes to me, he doesn't waste time.

Louis: I look forward to meeting him.

Jess: And killing him?

Louis: I'm not assigned to him.

Jess: A killer with a work ethic. That's precious.

Louis: *pulls out gun, places it on table*

Jess: *yanks on cuffs*

Louis: *takes gun apart*

Jess: *angry sigh*

Louis: The more you fidget the more uncomfortable you'll be my dear.

Jess: Yeah thanks for the tip.

Louis: *cleaning gun* You have an attitude problem.

Jess: *laughs* Right that's the worst of my problems right now.

Louis: Retorting sarcastically to someone with a gun probably isn't the best way to conduct yourself.

Jess: I figure if I'm going to die anyway it won't make a difference.

Louis: A comforting thought I'm sure.

Noise is heard near back of room

Louis: *lifts eyes* So where did you meet your husband.

Jess: A hotel, why?

Louis: *putting gun back together* You have any kids?

Jess: A daughter.

Louis: I'm sure she's the spitting image of her mother. *walks around table*

Jess: Why are you asking me th-

Louis: *lifts gun, pulls trigger*

BAM BAM

Guy falls over

Jess: ...Who was that?

Louis: *looks around*

Jess: You look worri-

Louis: Shhh.

Jess: ...

Louis: *walks over to Jess, opens cuffs* Come on we're leaving.

Jess: Why? Who was that guy?

Louis: It seems we were followed.

Jess: The cops?

Louis: No. Someone else.

Jess: Who?

Louis: Move.

Jess: Where are we going?

Louis: *drags Jess along* Come on.

Jess: You're supposed to be the big killer so who was that?

Louis: That was no one.

Jess: It was someone.

Louis: *stops walking* Someone is obviously after your IAB friend and it isn't just the cops and your husband. My job is to keep you alive.

Jess: I thought your job was to kill me.

Louis: I'm trained to kill. That doesn't mean I was hired to do so.

Jess: So whoever's after Stetler, is after you?

Louis: Come on.

Car, driving down highway

Jess: *looks out window*

Louis: *staring at road*

Jess: ...So am I some sort of bait or something? So that Eric comes to get me and then you kill Eric?

Louis: I told you he wasn't my assignment.

Jess: Who is? Obviously you were hired to kill someone.

Louis: *stares at road*

Jess: ...How did Kayleigh hire you? Were you her friend or something?

Louis: ...

Jess: *sigh* Fine.

Louis: I'm her brother.

Jess: *looks at Louis*

Louis: *staring at road*

Jess: ...She...Never mentioned one.

Louis: *tilts head* That would be like her, wouldn't it?

Jess: No one ever mentioned you.

Louis: That's because I didn't exist.

Jess: What do you mean?

Louis: My mother's husband used to leave on business. Usually mob business that sort of thing. She went to New Jersey one summer and came back pregnant.

Jess: ...She had an affair.

Louis: While my sister were at home with the nanny, my mother stayed in New Jersey until I was born and when that happened, she put me in a box and left me on someone's front steps. Kayleigh found me twenty years later after I finished my service with the Marines.

Jess: ...And she hired you as her hit man.

Louis: The money was good.

Jess: ...Did you find your mother again? Talk to her?

Louis: All I know is I have two half brothers and Kayleigh. She told me that, I didn't ask.

Jess: *smiles*

Louis: What.

Jess: You're not going to kill me.

Louis: You seem so sure about that.

Jess: *kicks Louis*

Louis: Ah!

Car swerves

Louis: What the hell are you doing!

Jess: *kicks Louis*

Car swerves into causeway walls, skids, slides

Jess: *opens door*

Car tips and slides

Jess: *rolls out of car*

Black SUV pulls up

Jess: *stands* Ugh. *holding shoulder*

Louis: *gets out of car, pulls out gun*

Jess: *runs*

Louis: *runs*

Jess: *jumps over edge*

Louis: *runs to edge* ...

Thug1: *runs over* Where'd she go?

Louis: *frowning*

Thug1: What happened?

Louis: *turns around* Thanks for your help jackass.

Thug1: I thought you had her.

Louis: Does it look like I had her?

Thug1: *scoffs* That IAB guy's gonna be mad.

Louis: *glaring* Yeah?

Thug1: *laughing* Yeah.

Louis: *lifts gun, pulls trigger*

BAM

Thug1 falls, dies

Louis: *walks away*

TBC............
 
YAY! Jess is ok and Louis isn't on my shit list! (I'm running out of room) But awesome part, crazy too; had me standing. :lol: Thanks fot the update Geni! ;)
 
HOLY! You're spining an incredible tale, Geni! I'll admit, the first person I thought of when I saw 'Louis' was Danny's brother from CSI:NY (I'm a nerd)! Go Jess! you'll be okay!
Great work Geni!
 
Hmmmmmm I'm split it two over this Louis guy. I like him, even if he did plan on killing me lol. Although, I have a feeling that being on my own will be far worse than if I'd just stayed with him. At least I would have had more time to live lol. I don't know though, I guess we'll all just have to wait to see what happens next. Great update Gen, I love it!
 
Oh go Jess! He was a jackass, find your way back to Eric and Alena. Where is Alena? And who's going to get to save the day? (I'm so obsessed, I automatically think Horatio! Horatio! Or CK ;))
So awesome Geni! Can't wait for another update! *squee* :D
 
AHA! I have a job! I am a stage hand/backstage person at Kelowna Theater. I start on Monday. Now that the job hunt is done, I can hang out here...after work, and before work! Geni! you are an amazing writer! the tension, the drama the twists and turn and unexpected conflict and dynamics! Of all the things I missed during my hunt for a job, this was on the top of the list! Take a bow, my dear, while we give you a standing ovation! *claps* sorry, I'm being dramatic aren't I? Oh, well, it's the actor in me. :D
 
^ Congrats on your job, Chris_miami. Come to Hollywood one of these days, I'll introduce you to my TV/movie producer friends. :lol: Good luck!
 
Congrats on the new job, Chris! :D Good luck! And thanks for the lovely compliments. :)

And thanks for the reviews everyone!

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Miami PD, 9am

Horatio: *shifts positions* You didn't have to come down sir, we could have spoken over the phone about your daughter Jessica.

Wayne: I'm here for a different reason.

Horatio: ...

Wayne: My people tell me they knew who did this.

Horatio: We thought at first it was a man named Rick Stetler.

Wayne: Stetler.

Horatio: ...You know him?

Wayne: Yeah. He put a few of my men away back in the day.

Horatio: You work for a mob.

Wayne: We're located in New Jersey. As soon as I heard about Jessica, I hired someone to find her. It turns out he's working for Stetler already.

Horatio: Louis Batone.

Wayne: He's part of my organization.

Horatio: So you knew Jess was with him.

Wayne: Well she isn't anymore, is she? He called me this morning and said she took off.

Horatio: Did she.

Wayne: Louis' job is to protect her from Stetler even though Stetler hired him to kill her. It's a good thing he contacted me first when he found out who she was. And now I hear Rick has my grand daughter.

Horatio: He does. My team are trying to get her back.

Wayne: Someone else is after my team. A Cuban organization.

Horatio: I was able to get Stetler's phone records and bank statements. Apparently he had been selling the cocaine that he stole from this lab to the Cubans.

Wayne: *lifts phone to ear* Louis. Information please.....Okay thank you. *closes phone* I just got word from my team that the Cubans were expecting more merchandise than they were being given.

Horatio: Mhm so Stetler has an abundance of cash and the Cubans don't have their drugs well that makes for a sticky situation doesn't it? So he hired Louis to keep Jess so that Eric and Colton would be baited to find her and Stetler could fix his problem with the Cubans without being followed.

Wayne: Too bad for him it's going to land him in more trouble. He has my daughter's baby girl. I take that very seriously. I don't want cops in this.

Horatio: My CSIs are involved already.

Wayne: *nods* Well I won't cheat you out of your cut.

Horatio: Thank you.

Wayne: We have to find Jess before the Cubans kill her. If Stetler doesn't have her, then he doesn't have Eric killed which means he'll be caught by the cops and the Cubans want him all for themselves. They'll go through anyone to get to him.

Horatio: Then you call up Louis and have him find her.

Wayne: *nods*

One hour later, Biscayne Bay

Jess: *running*

Louis: *running*

Jess: God how did he even find me?

Louis: Stop running!

Jess: No! *jumps into boat*

Louis: *jumps into boat*

Jess: *jumps out of boat, runs*

Louis: *runs*

Jess: *trips on grass* AH! *falls*

Louis: *runs over, grabs Jess*

Jess: I survived a fall into the ocean from a bridge. I won fair and square so stop looking for me.

Louis: I can't. You're my assingment.

Jess: Yeah, right. You're supposed to protect me.

Louis: Exactly. Which means you need to stay in my sight.

Jess: *stands* Just kill me already.

Louis: I would if those were my orders. But it's too bad your dad loves you too much.

Jess: ...What?

Louis: Your dad hired me.

Jess: I thought Stetler hired you.

Louis: He did. And I choose not to listen to him.

Jess: My dad actually cares?

Louis: All I know is he wants you safe.

Jess: ...We haven't spoken in years.

Louis: Hey be glad you actually knew your parents.

Jess: *sits on grass* I can't believe he's here. For me.

Louis: *sits* You ruined my car.

Jess: ...Is that all you care about?

Louis: That car costs half a million dollars.

Jess: I'm sure you can buy a new one.

Louis: *looks around*

Jess: What?

Louis: I have to keep an eye out. There's a bunch of Cubans looking for you.

Jess: Great. So you're the least of my problems.

Louis: For now.

Jess: *nods*

Louis: *looking out over ocean*

Jess: ...So you're part of my dad's mob.

Louis: Something like that.

Jess: That means Kayleigh was part of it.

Louis: *nods* Until she branched out.

Jess: How many people have you killed?

Louis: Are you expecting a disassociated and unemotional response?

Jess: Why?

Louis: I'm supposed to be this big executioner, right?

Jess: ...

Louis: I still know the difference between justice and murder.

Jess: You think what you were doing was justice.

Louis: No. It was murder.

Jess: And you're okay with it?

Louis: Absolutely not.

Jess: So why did you do it?

Louis: It was kill or be killed in my world.

Jess: You could have left.

Louis: And go back to what? The box on the front steps of the people who took me in? They kicked me out when I was old enough to take a bus by myself. I had no one.

Jess: It must have made you angry.

Louis: *stands* Come on, we're leaving.

Jess: Where?

Louis: Wherever I take you.

Jess: *stands* Fine.

Louis: *looks around* Walk to the truck.

Jess: *walking*

Louis: *walking*

Jess: *grabs doorhandle*

Louis: *looks down at ground*

Light flashing underneath truck

Louis: ...Jess.

Jess: *looks at Louis*

Louis: Don't open the door.

Jess: Why?

Louis: *grabs Jess, runs*

Jess: What are you d-

Truck blows up

Louis: *pushes Jess to ground*

Jess: OOF!

Louis: *covers Jess' head*

Dust settles

Louis: *looks back*

Jess: ...What was that about?

Louis: *frowns, stands*

Jess: *stands*

Louis: My truck.

Jess: *rolls eyes*

TBC.............
 
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