Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"

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I'm ok with everyone except Kayleigh (duh), Stetler (again, duh) and Eric. *everyone starts yelling* I know i knw it's just that he threatened Horatio and all that, i'm really not happy with him.
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Well, I think Eric had good reason to be angry. I mean, Horatio gave a small child, Erics child, to a crazy psychopathic murderer who could do anything to her. I mean, it was really stupid on H's part so I don't blame Eric for being pissed off at him...I mean, i would be :p
And besides, for some reason, I also like Stetler...maybe not the RT Stetler, but real Stetler *huggles real Stetler*

Yay Tyler! *huggles Tyler and never lets go* I miss Tyler... *sigh*

Disneyland? Woah am I glad that we don't have one of those here :lol: Though we do have our fair share of creepy-ish theme parks...not that I've been to one in a looong time...and I think they've shut down anyway :lol:

please update soon!
 
Delko: *walks out into hall* Yelina, hey have you got anything on Kayleigh?

Yelina: I checked flights leaving Miami. There are hundreds going to Europe, Canada, Asia, and Africa.
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WHOA! WHOA! YELINA'S HERE!

Horatio: *walks over* Detectives.

Yelina: You got something?
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Horatio: Yeah. A lust for you.

*makeout scene*

*scene missing*

Yelina: You make the bed and i'll get started on breakfest Horatio...


Horatio: She's not leaving the country, she's staying in Florida the only question is why.

Delko: Disney Land?

Horatio: ...Excuse me?

Delko: Thousands of kids and adults there. It would be pretty hard to find them, like a needle in a haystack.
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My WHOLE LIFE, and i've NEVER been there. :lol:


Horatio: I regard my team as family.
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YAAAYYY! More proof that Horatio is better Stetler! IN YOUR FACE! *punches Stetler in face* Get it? In you face, and i punched him in the face? Get it? Huh? Huh? :lol:


Yelina: *nods* And how do you regard me?

Horatio: *shifts positions* I'm afraid I don't know what you mean.

Yelina: Do you still see me as family?

Horatio: ...
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OMG HORATIO HERE'S YOU MOMENT!! ALL HE HAS TO DO IS SAY YES AND THE NEXT STEP IS DINNER! THEN MAYBE 1ST KISS. And maybe 2nd base... :devil: ;)

Yelina: Do you still see me as family?

Horatio: ...

Stetler: *walks over* Lieutenant Caine, a word.
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DAMMIT! *punches Stetler in face again*

....and Stetler comes in and ruins the moment....classic....


Horatio: Which CSI?

Stetler: Speedle. He'll be fired by the end of the week.

Horatio: Funny Rick, I don't remember you being in charge of this lab.

Stetler: Fire him.

Horatio: What did he do?

Stetler: He pushed me into a wall and threatened me.

Horatio: Did you deserve it?
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YES! YES HE DID! IF YOU KNEW WHAT HE DID HORATIO (which you probably do) YOU WOULD PIN HIM AGAINST A WALL TOO!


Horatio: *nods* Okay.

Stetler: *stares at Horatio*

Horatio: When I find out what you said to her, Speedle's going to be the least of your problems.

Stetler: *frowns* Are you threatening me too?

Horatio: Call it what you like.

Stetler: This isn't over. *walks away*

Horatio: I agree.
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*punches air and Stetler for tradition* YEAH! GO HORATIO! Didya hear that, THE LEAST OF YOUR PROBLEMS. Hopefully, he'll shoot you. maybe in the knee first. LOL

Great part Miss C! Thanks for a sweet part! Yelina, Disney Land, H/Y moment kinda, and Stetler threatened AGAIN. Oh boy this week is just getting better and better. :D

By the way, theres a chance of naming Horatio/DC thread # 12 might be named from a quote from your part, mentioned by me. Head on over there to check it out mabe. :D
 
Hunter said
By the way, theres a chance of naming Horatio/DC thread # 12 might be named from a quote from your part, mentioned by me. Head on over there to check it out mabe :D
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I had been through there earlier and managed to catch that. ;)

And you're welcome for the chapter! I apologize that I didn't get more than one up tonight, but Real Life's been a bit hectic this week, so I should have more by tomorrow. Keep checking back everyone, and thank you so very much for the wonderful reviews. :)
 
It's ok, when i saw that you posted i groaned. Because i can't go to bed until i post a full review, i won't be able to sleep without doing it. But thank Horatio in Heaven that you didn't. i'm tired. Night to all y'all! *guns Hummer*
 
awwwww Geni its ok you only posted one chapter-we still love you!!!! *huggles Geni*

But what a chapter to post???Its was amazing!!!

Delko: Alright Tyler, tell me something good.

Tyler: *typing* I'm trying to track down the GPS in the money bags.

Delko: You have a hit yet?

Tyler: Not yet, the van must have a jamming signal inside of it, but I can decyper the signal.

Delko: How long will it take?

Tyler: A couple of hours.

Delko: You have one.

Tyler: Or one's good. *typing*
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:eek: Tyler's in the RT.....*does WOOOO dance* Yay :D awww I love Tyler...I miss Tyler too *joins in huggles of Tyler and never letting go with Carly*

Delko: Disney Land?

Horatio: ...Excuse me?
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Exactly what I was thinking H!!!But Delko made it work *taps head* Not just a head rank hey Eric???

Horatio: I regard my team as family.

Yelina: *nods* And how do you regard me?

Horatio: *shifts positions* I'm afraid I don't know what you mean.

Yelina: Do you still see me as family?

Horatio: ...
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oooooooo you can just feel the sexual tension-go H kiss her, KISS HER!!!!

Stetler: *walks over* Lieutenant Caine, a word.
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DAMN IT and its Damn Stetler as ever!!!! :grr:

Stetler: He pushed me into a wall and threatened me.

Horatio: Did you deserve it?

Stetler: He's out of control, and I want him out of my lab.

Horatio: Your lab...Agent Stetler you only visit this lab about five times a year, I'd hardly call it yours.
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1)When did Stelter think it EVER became his lab??
2) You can just hear Horatio thinking "Damn wish I had done that!!!" and then "Oh BOYO...this is MY lab!!"

Horatio: When I find out what you said to her, Speedle's going to be the least of your problems.

Stetler: *frowns* Are you threatening me too?

Horatio: Call it what you like.

Stetler: This isn't over. *walks away*

Horatio: I agree.
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YAY.....H and Stelter angry is back...LOVE IT..By the way to warn you Stelter-H ALWAYS finds out the truth and you are going to be in HUGE. major, awesome, mighty, Mahoooooive trouble when he does!!

(Yeah I had time for a bit of a fuller review today...sorry!!!)

look forward to more later Geni :D (but as ever-no pressure)
 
Oh do I know about Real Life. The computer finally bit the dust, so I had to get it cleaned up, and I come back and find some very AWESOME updates!

First...

Poor me... A tumor! I hope like the heavens that it's not a tumor,rather the psychotic break that I've been peddling around lately. What made me feel sooo much better was that Speed was there for me! I'm sure glad he's happily married! <to meee!> ;) I can't thank you enough, Geni :D

And...Oh whizzers, what an action packed scene! Todd threw himself off a building, and it was up to Horatio and Eric to get the bomb difussed...Meanwhile down on the street, Speed is handling his with not one, but two guys, and his gun actually shoots! And he doesn't get shot! How awesome is that? VERY, I tell you, very! The action was very high paced, i thought i was going to have a coronary.

And my my, Eric stepped it up an notch and really read into Horatio... I agree, Speed could've comforted him more , but I understand where Speed was coming from, I mean, look at his family. Of course he knows what it's like.


And Disney World, ...never saw it coming. Very clever, Geni.

Stetler... snake if I ever saw one. I wonder, just how long is it going to take for Horatio to punch his ass out? I love Stettie, but for crying out loud man, you are signing your own death certificate messing around with Speed's only living daughter...

Yelina... what a way to go...Isn't someone presently connected to Horatio? Yelina's asking for it. :p


Loved how everyone interacted , and wow, Carly... some major background on you! Makes for some good reading ;)


Fantazzmic writing, Geni! update soon! And yes, we do love you, no matter how much you write!!!
 
^^ It's okay Hunter, you don't have to review right away when reading. It would just be greatly appreciated if I were able to read what people thought, but it's not required. :)

Still_RIP_Speed, don't apologize for a fuller review! I love reading how everybody feels about the story, and I read all of the reviews and consider all of the suggestions. :)

Awww, Anni I love you guys too. :D *huggles for all*

We shall get to your storyline in just a bit, and we'll also be continuing with Eric's storyline. I have to say that Calleigh should be in the limelight a little more pretty soon, and there will be some more H/Stetler interaction. ;)

I should be back this afternoon!
 
Omg I only went away for a few days but I got so far behind. Great stuff as usual Geni. I've just about caught up now so Update Soon!!!!
 
I'm not sure how to feel about Calleigh being in the limelight. :lol: That makes me a little nervous, but I'm happy that she'll be getting some good attention. :D

Update Soon. :D
 
Here's what I would have done with Stetler and H
Stetler: It's my lab.
H: It's MY lab!
Stetler: It's MY lab!
H: IT IS MY LAB!
Stetler: MY LAB!
H: MINE!
Stetler: MINE!
H: *punches Stetler*
Stetler: *flails, biatch slaps Horatio*
H: Oh no you didn't. *draws gun*
And you get it...
*joins in the huggle* Love love love it and can't wait for an update...I'm leaving for a week this Saturday and I will be RT deprived.... :( What'll happen to me?
Great job thus far Geni and can't wait for this afternoon :D
 
awww thanks Geni :D *huggles back* We love you too :D *huggles tighter* oooo listening to suggestions eh?? *cough* RT to England *cough* (but I think we've already had discussion Geni :lol: :lol:) ANYWAY..........:rolleyes:

I know what you mean saraholic hearin someone will be in the limelight...little nerve wreaking...esp in the RT!!! and you put those little teasers in Geni...keeping on the edge of our toes!!!

can't end without this really can I??update soon :D
 
Stetler: It's my lab.
H: It's MY lab!
Stetler: It's MY lab!
H: IT IS MY LAB!
Stetler: MY LAB!
H: MINE!
Stetler: MINE!
H: *punches Stetler*
Stetler: *flails, biatch slaps Horatio*
H: Oh no you didn't. *draws gun*
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Good one Lilly! I was expecting Stetler to fall down cold after H punched him :lol:

A slap to the face? Who does he think he is, Brittny spears?
 
Well looky there, we got an idea for the H/DC thread.
Horatio/DC #12: It's MY Lab!
*nudges Lora* I'm lazy, you wanna go post it? I can't double post anyways. Oh fine I'll go edit.
I'm arguing with myself.
Sorry for taking up posts in your thread, Geni. :D
 
Nah go post it. :) Oh wait, you already have. Heh.

Well, i'm loooing forward to Stetler doing something drastic to Horatio, so it gives H a reason to beat him up. :devil:

*sings to self and claps* Jess isn't dead....Jess isn't dead..Horatio in Heaven Jess isn't dead....
 
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