Re: Nick Fic Song Ch #7 - "It Was An Accident"- Now up!
Well, I think it is about time that I start giving reviews to all of your stories, since Mom is impatient again and gave us a deadline for the reviews this time :shifty: :lol:
First of all thank you again Egeria for the website
One can never say enough thanks for it, it’s amazing
I also wanted to thank you all for your great stories I really enjoyed reading them
I promise to be back on board for the next round. That damn pneumonia kept me from writing anything useful but since I feel better now, I should be able to write something for the next round
And now the reviews…
Family Ties
This was a sweet story but so sad Poor kids… first of all they loose their father and now they loos mom too I like how you have Nick being there for them. And again I think he would be a great father.
I’m pretty sure who you are… and I like how you write Nick together with children. I also like how you write the children… just sweet
That you let Cynthia die gives the story an even bigger amount of drama… it was sad to read that Cliff physically abused Cynthia and the kids but that you let the kid’s loose their Mommy makes me cry
I know it was you because I read something similar to this from you before… not the same story of course… but it had some similarities
I Didn’t Mean To Do It
Well, this one was just funny It was refreshing to finally read something light hearted. As much as I enjoy reading Nick angst fics, sometimes I need a good laugh too
I could actually really see it happen. You described it all so well. And even though the main part of the story was full of humour you managed to bring a little seriousness in too without making the story any less funny. It was amazing
I could picture Nick playing videogames as a stress reliever… I like doing that too
Yeah… Catherine has this special site on her and you described it so well in your story. But I think Nick isn’t as innocent as people think he is either…
You wrote all the characters so well… and it wasn’t easy because you had many of them acting in your story… you had Nick, Greg, Catherine, Jim and Archie… and you wrote them all absolutely in character, kudos for this one :bolian:
Fantastic job on this one… and I need to say I had a hard time guessing who wrote this one… but somehow after reading all the stories four times… let’s say I have a better guess on who you are
When Elephants Grieve:
Aww someone is watching Animal Planet, huh??? And I don't mean Nick :lol:
That was a great fic... It takes a lot of guts to write an episode differently and to come up with a good story. This one is good, definitly.
You stayed absolutely in character and wrote your story very detailed. It is all very well thought through from the beginning to the end.
I really liked the part with the elephants... You painted us a picture of what Nick's and Warrick's friendship looked like and using the elephant part for it made it all so believable and one could only say 'Yes, that's what there friendship is like.' That was cool
And with Grissom you chose exacly the right person to create this picture for us But the best thing for me was that you had Nick knowing exactly what the elephants do That was something I really can imagine Nick knowing
Thank god you let it all be okay at the end... I don't think Nick could have ever found piece in knowing that he killed a man, even if he was the man sho shot his best friend. McKeen doesn't deserve to live that's for sure but killing someone no matter if the person deserved it or not will be a burden and I'm just glad that Nick does not need to carry it.
Perspective:
Wow that was a hard one to get for someone who is no English native... I had to read it twice to understand what you want to say... but don't worry it's not because of you or your writing, it's just because I need some time to get things :lol:
Your story is full of deep thoughts and I really like that. I always have problems to bring my thoughts in order enough to write a fic... and you obviously got it done and did a very good job
I can say that I have never seen a short fic like this which has as much thinking behind it This story belongs to a very intelligent writer... someone who really knows his way around CSI and not just the character of Nick but the other characters too. Not all of us can say that from themselves... I can't... or at least I don't think I can.
You should get kudos for this one, not only because you were able to write a very well thought out story but for the fact that you tried to write Keppler... He wasn't that long on the show and you were able to write his character. And you wrote him very in character... like we got to see him on the show... that was amaizing
Great work, really
Well, I think it is about time that I start giving reviews to all of your stories, since Mom is impatient again and gave us a deadline for the reviews this time :shifty: :lol:
First of all thank you again Egeria for the website
One can never say enough thanks for it, it’s amazing I also wanted to thank you all for your great stories
I really enjoyed reading them I promise to be back on board for the next round. That damn pneumonia kept me from writing anything useful but since I feel better now, I should be able to write something for the next round
And now the reviews…
Family Ties
This was a sweet story but so sad
Poor kids… first of all they loose their father and now they loos mom too I like how you have Nick being there for them. And again I think he would be a great father. I’m pretty sure who you are… and I like how you write Nick together with children. I also like how you write the children… just sweet
That you let Cynthia die gives the story an even bigger amount of drama… it was sad to read that Cliff physically abused Cynthia and the kids but that you let the kid’s loose their Mommy makes me cry
I know it was you because I read something similar to this from you before… not the same story of course… but it had some similarities
I Didn’t Mean To Do It
Well, this one was just funny
It was refreshing to finally read something light hearted. As much as I enjoy reading Nick angst fics, sometimes I need a good laugh too I could actually really see it happen. You described it all so well. And even though the main part of the story was full of humour you managed to bring a little seriousness in too without making the story any less funny. It was amazing
I could picture Nick playing videogames as a stress reliever… I like doing that too
Yeah… Catherine has this special site on her and you described it so well in your story. But I think Nick isn’t as innocent as people think he is either…
You wrote all the characters so well… and it wasn’t easy because you had many of them acting in your story… you had Nick, Greg, Catherine, Jim and Archie… and you wrote them all absolutely in character, kudos for this one :bolian:
Fantastic job on this one… and I need to say I had a hard time guessing who wrote this one… but somehow after reading all the stories four times… let’s say I have a better guess on who you are
When Elephants Grieve:
Aww someone is watching Animal Planet, huh??? And I don't mean Nick :lol:
That was a great fic... It takes a lot of guts to write an episode differently and to come up with a good story. This one is good, definitly.
You stayed absolutely in character and wrote your story very detailed. It is all very well thought through from the beginning to the end.
I really liked the part with the elephants... You painted us a picture of what Nick's and Warrick's friendship looked like and using the elephant part for it made it all so believable and one could only say 'Yes, that's what there friendship is like.' That was cool
And with Grissom you chose exacly the right person to create this picture for us
But the best thing for me was that you had Nick knowing exactly what the elephants do That was something I really can imagine Nick knowing Thank god you let it all be okay at the end... I don't think Nick could have ever found piece in knowing that he killed a man, even if he was the man sho shot his best friend. McKeen doesn't deserve to live that's for sure but killing someone no matter if the person deserved it or not will be a burden and I'm just glad that Nick does not need to carry it.
Perspective:
Wow that was a hard one to get for someone who is no English native... I had to read it twice to understand what you want to say... but don't worry it's not because of you or your writing, it's just because I need some time to get things :lol:
Your story is full of deep thoughts and I really like that. I always have problems to bring my thoughts in order enough to write a fic... and you obviously got it done and did a very good job
I can say that I have never seen a short fic like this which has as much thinking behind it
This story belongs to a very intelligent writer... someone who really knows his way around CSI and not just the character of Nick but the other characters too. Not all of us can say that from themselves... I can't... or at least I don't think I can.You should get kudos for this one, not only because you were able to write a very well thought out story but for the fact that you tried to write Keppler... He wasn't that long on the show and you were able to write his character. And you wrote him very in character... like we got to see him on the show... that was amaizing
Great work, really
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