Never gonna let you go (smack again)

why didin't i notice this story before:confused:

it's great Kikii:thumbsup: can't wait to se what's gonna happend next:D
and i really can't wait to Mac and Stella make up:D
 
Thank you soooo much Asprine, lilou, gio, VampireMacsNiblet and csifanhunter! :)

Part 6

“Tony Russo, 52, he has been working security for the Sterling Construction Group for over 10 years. Actually, his job is on the line. His wife and daughter died in car accident six months ago. He became alcoholic since then.” Flack was filling Mac and Stella in when they gathered outside the construction site.
There was no sign of Tony at the security station. Stella stayed to collect possible evidence. She found a bottle of ointment on Tony’s desk. The ingredients label indicated almond oil was added. Stella bagged the bottle. She drew her weapon and notified Mac she was joining the search.
When Stella got closer to the apartment where Alice was dismembered, she heard someone was crying inside. She took a quick peek into it. Tony was sitting on the floor with a can of beer in hand, a shot gun on his laps. There were several beer cans and a wine bottle on the ground. He must be drinking for a while.
“I told you he was a looser. Why didn’t you listen to me?” He roared with rage. “You left me no choice. I love you so much. I love you so much…” He started crying again.
Stella called Mac. Tony heard her. He threw the beer can away and picked up the shot gun.
“Tony Russo, you are under arrest for murdered Alice Mann. Put the gun down.” Pointing her gun at Tony, Stella stepped inside.
“She should’ve listened to me. The looser was using her. I swore to protect her since she was born. She should’ve stayed home when I told her to. I loved her.” Tony was mixing up Alice with his own daughter.
“Tell me about her.” Stella motioned Mac and Flack to stay outside when they arrived.
“She was a sweetheart. She would bring me coffee. But she was not a smart girl. That’s why I was so worry about her. When she was in high school, that little bastard almost rape her. I would’ve killed him if my wife didn’t stop me. And now this looser? Why she always hang out with the wrong guys? I told her to quit the job. Why wouldn’t she listen to me?”
“What happened in that morning?”
“I don’t know. She brought me coffee, we argued. The next thing I know she was lying on the ground, bleeding. I had to hide her, to make sure he couldn’t bother her any more. Oh God, what did I do?” Tony hit his forehead with his palm and sat down again.
“Tony, listen to me. You need help. Put the gun down on the floor. We don’t want any one got hurt, alright?” Stella said softly. Still pointing the gun at Tony, she moved slowly forward. She was two steps to Tony when he suddenly charged forward with the gun. He knocked Stella’s gun away. Stella fell on the floor.
Mac and Flack fired at the same time.
Tony fell. He struggled to stand up. “No! I would kill that bastard!”
Flack cuffed Tony and called for paramedic. Mac checked on Stella.
“Are you hurt?”
“No.” Still sitting on the ground, Stella rubbed her bruised right hand. “Remind me not to buy any apartment here. I fell twice in two days.”
Mac helped her up and checked on her hands. Stella blushed because Mac never took her hand before. She wished the time would stop, he would hold her hands forever. Meanwhile, Mac seemed had no intention to let go of her hands at all. The atmosphere around them became warmer and tense.
Two paramedics with a gurney broke the magic. They bandaged Tony and took him to the hospital.
“Stella, we need to talk.” Mac said.
“Yeah. No matter good or bad, we need to straight things out.” Stella murmured.
 
Kikii, *Blush*. This is awesome!!! Makes me melt.. :D Hmm, finally you solved the case, Kikii. Then, we all could see more Mac and Stella. :D This case is great. Poor Tony. I pity him. He just wanted to protect the girl but he over-reacted. *Sigh* He still is guilty though. I'm glad that Stella is okay and Mac worried about her..*Cute* I love the last part, Kikii. Mac holding her hand and never let go.. That was sweet! I could picture that.. I'm blushing myself.. :lol::lol:. Yeah.. I'm looking forward to their *Straight things out* :adore::adore:.

Thank you so much for this chapter, Kikii. It was :thumbsup::thumbsup::bolian::bolian:. :drool:

Take care - *Hugs* - Asprine :D
 
Hey girls. Finally, I've finished the make up part. Hope all of you would be happy with it. ;)

Part 7

Mac and Stella were at the Sullivan’s. There were not many people because it was late. Mac chose a booth at the corner. They didn’t have much appetite, so they ordered coffees only.
“Stella, I’m sorry for yelling at you this morning. I was shocked. I never dreamt that you would quit the job. You just like dropped a bomb in my hands.” Mac was looking at Stella, who lowered her head and kept stirring the coffee with a spoon.
“I never dreamt that too.”
“Why?” Mac asked softly. “You know you can talk to me about anything. If there is something you couldn’t handle, we could try together. Why you make such an extreme decision?”
“Mac, we’re wonderful work partners. There was nothing we couldn’t handle. But…that’s not all I want. There is something, something that I would never get.”
“What is it?”
Stella sighed heavily. “I know you loved Claire. You still love her although she was gone for so many years. When I dressed in Claire’s clothes, I was jealous of her. I never had that feeling before.” Stella paused briefly. “I was not her. I could tell from your eyes.” Stella looked into Mac’s eyes. “I said from my heart when I told you she would always lives in you heart. Only I didn’t tell you I hope there is a tiny spot in your heart is for me.”
“Stella…”
“I decided I should go without telling you this. I don’t want to compromise our friendship. But you are right, you deserved the truth. No matter what you think, I love you more than a friend.” Stella turned to the window. She didn’t want Mac to see her tears.
Mac gave her a moment to pull herself together. He felt sorry for causing her such pain.
“As a partner, a friend, you understand what I think, what I feel. You would point out my faults and help me to fix it. Being with you is so natural. I know there is something more between you and me. I didn’t dare to explore. I don’t want to compromise our work. I don’t want the integrity of the lab to be questioned. I thought we better be partners and friends.” Mac stopped for a second.
Stella closed her eyes. Mac’s words were like a knife stabbing her heart.
“It was a complicated feeling when I saw you in Claire’s clothes. You looked so familiar but so different. It was not Claire I saw, I saw you. All at once, I realized I need not to explore and it’s useless to hide. I would miss Claire. But you are all I want. I couldn’t think straight when you gave me your resignation.” Mac paused for the second time.
Stella didn’t believe what she heard. She turned slowly back to look at Mac.
“Stella, I told you I’m not good at handling these things. But I like to try if you give me a chance.” Mac took Stella’s hand.
Their gazes locked. No words were needed. Their hearts were closer than ever. Stella was smiling but her tears kept falling. Mac wiped her tears away with his thumb.
“I hope this is the last time you cry. Talk to me whenever you feel the needs. I want a happy Stella.” Mac kissed the back of Stella’s hand.
Stella was falling apart from the minute she decided to quit. She could feel herself again with Mac holding her hands.
“Come on, you needed some sleep. I don’t want to see those baggies tomorrow.” Mac stood up. Hand in hand, they got out of the diner.
Mac took Stella to her place and kissed her goodbye, except the kiss took them a while to end it. They were moving into a new level of relationship. Their first kiss was sweet but hot with all their longings, all their loves. At last, Mac kissed Stella one more time on the lips and leave.
 
i loved this part of part 6
Mac helped her up and checked on her hands. Stella blushed because Mac never took her hand before. She wished the time would stop, he would hold her hands forever. Meanwhile, Mac seemed had no intention to let go of her hands at all. The atmosphere around them became warmer and tense
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that was just sooo sweet:adore::adore: love part 6:D

Yay the made up:D:D*does a happy dance*:D looved the end of part 7:adore: wait Noo i LOVED the whole part 7:D
 
Kikiiiiiiiiiiii.. :adore::adore: THIS IS GREAT!!! :drool::drool::drool: Their make up scene was great. It shows how straight they both are. Straight to the point without going round.. :D Stella confessing to Mac.. Hmm, that was awesome. I'm glad Mac didn't decline her. As in Mac's love for her is also very strong. Sometimes it's worth the risk yeah. :devil:

the last time you cry.
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:lol::lol: She'll cry when Mac impress her. :) (As in show her something that will impress her)

Oh..Oh.. Oh.. I could picture them kissing and not letting go.. until they were breathless. :drool::drool: ONE MORE TIME! *Faints* Thank you for this chapter, Kikii. :adore::adore:

Hmm, I can't wait to see what the future holds.. :)
 
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Dear Asprine, lilou, Gio and VampireMacsNiblet, thank you for the feedbacks. :) I'm happy you gals satified with the make up part. :) Here's the update.


Part 8

Flack was happy for Mac and Stella. They were his good friends. They had a big conflict three weeks ago. Flack knew the tension between them was increasing day by day. It was matter of time when they had to deal with it. He wished neither of them would get hurt. But it turned out was a turning point in their relationship. Although they kept it low-profiled, Flack noticed the sweet moments between them.
“Good morning.” Flack waved to them.
“Good morning.” Mac and Stella answered at the same time.
“What do we get, Detective?” Mac asked.
“Emma Clark, 35, married to a Wilson Clark, her husband came home from business trip and found her dead in the bed. There is a broken window in the kitchen. But nothing missed.” Flack filled Mac and Stella in.
“Hope we could solve it soon enough. It’s Christmas Day. We have a Christmas Party in the lab this afternoon. People are going to parties tonight.” Stella said. “Husband’s alibi checked out?”
“It depends. He’s a project manager. He needs to go to New Jersey every Wednesdays and come home every Fridays. There’s a lot of time to come back, killed his wife and went back to Jersey. I’ll call his company to verify his whereabouts when Sid figured out the TOD.” Flack said.
Danny showed up when they were talking.
“Danny, take the kitchen.” Mac said.
“You got it.” Danny answered and headed to the kitchen.
They went into the bedroom. A woman was lying face down in the bed. There was a glass with some liquid on the carpet beside the bed.
“Face down. Fully dressed. She was not going to sleep.” Stella checked the woman’s hands. “No defensive wounds. No visible trauma.”
“Stella.” Mac motioned her to join him. He was checking the woman’s head. “Vomit.”
“Maybe she ate or drank some poison? Suicide?” Stella said.
“No suicide note. If she committed suicide, she should’ve lie on her back or sit on the bed. We should check whether she had some health issues.”
“OK. Let’s find out if there is foul play.” Stella picked up the glass, swabbed the vomit and collected a few bottles of drug.
They went to the kitchen.
“Danny, got anything?” Mac asked.
“Someone threw a stone from outside to break the window. I’ll fume it later in the lab.” Danny showed them the stone. “Nothing special other than that.”
“Bagged the leftovers and all the other food and seasonings. Our vic might be poisoned.” Mac ordered.
“Looked like Mrs. Clark was a serious cook. She got all kind of cooking utensils, cook books and seasonings.” Stella said.
“The Chinese said you want to keep the man you love; you have to bribe his stomach.” Mac said.
“Aha!” Stella smiled and patted Mac slightly in the chest.
Flack looked at them with a smirk. Danny leaned closer and whispered. “I knew something was going on in the last few weeks. Am I always the last one to know?”
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Mac interviewed the husband in the sitting room.
“Mr. Clark, I’m sorry for your lost. Did your wife have any health problems?”
“No. She only ate organic food and she jogged everyday. She had annual check last month. She was healthy.”
“Is there any reason she might commit suicide?”
“Suicide? No.” He was too calm for a man who just lost his wife.
“Someone broke the kitchen window from outside. Do you know why?”
“No. Was it a burglary?”
“We’ll find out. We need your DNA sample and fingerprints for elimination. And we need your schedule in New Jersey, too.”
 
Thank you, VampireMacsNiblet. :)

Part 9

Danny was fuming the stone he collected from the Clark’s kitchen.
“Danny. Any luck?” Stella waltzed in.
“Let’s see.” Danny took the stone out. “Yep, a print.” He took photos and sent it into the AFIS.
Danny stared at Stella when they were waiting for the result. “You are happy!”
“I’m always happy. What?” Stella was puzzled.
“It’s good. I’m happy that you’re happy.”
“Thank you!” Stella put an arm around his shoulder.
The system beeped. They got a match.
“Andy Hudson. Vandalism and domestic violence. Ha! He lives next to our vic.” Danny said.
“OK. Let’s talk to Mr. Hudson.”
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“Mr. Hudson. NYPD. Open up.” Danny banged on the front door.
“What do you want?” A lanky man opened the door. It was hard to imagine such a skinny man could brutally beat his wife unconscious.
“I’m Detective Messer and this is Detective Bonasera. We want to ask you some questions about your next door neighbor, Mrs. Clark. We know you broke her kitchen window with a stone.”
“If it wasn’t that nosy bitch, my wife wouldn’t leave me. She’s lucky I didn’t burn her house.”
“When did you break her window?” Stella asked.
“I saw her in the kitchen last night. I just made fun of her. Scared the hell of her.” Andy said with a satisfying smile.
“Did you see her this morning?”
“She was picking up the paper when I left for the park around eight.”
“You didn’t pay her a little visit?” Danny asked.
“Why? To give you guys another excuse to lock me up?”
“Ok. Turn around.” Stella said while she was taking out her cuffs. Danny stepped backward with his hand on his weapon.
“What is this?”
“Vandalism, for starter. If we proved you have anything to do with Mrs. Clark’s death? You’re facing murder. And I’ll be happy to send you straight to hell.” Stella cuffed him tightly.
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Stella and Danny were walking by Mac’s office.
“Stella.” Mac waved a file to Stella.
“I’ll be in the trace lab with Lindsay.” Danny said.
Stella got into Mac’s office.
“It was Arsenic Trioxide poisoning.” Mac said.
“The leftovers are clean. The liquid in the glass is distilled water. It’s clean too. Let’s see if Lindsay got anything on the drugs.” Stella turned to leave but Mac stopped her.
“Stella, what time is the Christmas party in the lab?”
“Around four. What?”
“We’re leaving at five. Our dinner reservation is at seven.” Mac smiled.
“OK. Not much time for me to prepare though.”
“Come on, let’s finish the work first.” Mac left the office.
Stella followed him to the trace lab.
“Hey guys. I was about to call you. We found some white powder in a bottle of Vitamin E. Maybe the killer spilled it when he filled the capsules. Danny is testing it.” Lindsay said.
“Arsenic Trioxide. Bingo!” Danny announced loudly.
“Good. Let’s dust the bottle.” Stella put on her gloves.
Stella lifted several overlapping fingerprints. Mac separated them and compared them to the Clarks and Andy Hudson. The prints belong to the Clarks and some unknown donors.
“There maybe a dozen people had touched this bottle. How could we tell who the killer is?” Lindsay was upset.
“Not necessarily. The size of the bottle is small. I think it’s a sample package. It’s not in the market yet.” Stella said.
“Now is time to talk to Mr. Clark again.” Mac said.
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Mac and Stella sat across from Wilson Clark in the interrogation room.
“Mr. Clark, did your wife take vitamins?” Stella asked.
“Yes. Organic food, distilled water, vitamins and other healthy stuff.”
“How about you?”
“No. I don’t like pills.”
Mac took out an evidence bag with the bottle of Vitamin E in it. “Why are your fingerprints on this bottle if you don’t take the pills?”
“You took it from my house. Of course my fingerprints are on it.”
“Where did your wife buy it?”
“She didn’t.” Wilson started shifting uneasily in the chair. “My friend gave it to me. What is this about? Am I a suspect?”
“We found trace of poison in this bottle. You want to tell my why?” Mac asked.
“What? What…what do you mean…” Wilson was shocked. “Oh, oh my god!”
“Who gave it to you?” Stella asked.
Wilson held his head with both hands. “My secretary. We have an affair. She wants me to file for a divorce. She said it’s a new brand’s promotional pack. Oh god! She knows I don’t take that stuff.”
Mac and Stella left.
“So much for bribing his stomach.” Stella said.
 
aww i missed part 8... soo i'll make it up now:D
“The Chinese said you want to keep the man you love; you have to bribe his stomach.” Mac said.
“Aha!” Stella smiled and patted Mac slightly in the chest.
Flack looked at them with a smirk. Danny leaned closer and whispered. “I knew something was going on in the last few weeks. Am I always the last one to know?”
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looved that part:D lol at Danny:lol: i liked the part 8:D

part 9:D
Christmas party
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the only thing i can think of now is Mistletoe:D
im soo looking forward to their dinner reservation:D and looved this part too:D
 
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