H/Cal #3: Everything was compromised. Everything but you.

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  1. Wyoming

    Wyoming Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Re: H/Cal #3: Everything was compromised. Everything but You

    OMG 0_0 I haven't been here in .............ages! I blame Geni! (Speed_Cochrane and Katie! Speedmonkey2 Because they made me switch, they had cookies I couldn't help it! :( my OTP is now SC........but I still ship my HC! *huggles everyone* I missed you all!

    ETA:
    That's my favorite episode of all time! "Yay! Leeches!" When I first saw that episode I couldn't believe I hadn't heard of it before, it was such a good DuCaine moment! HE MADE HER GIGGLE IT'S AN OMEN lol.
     
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    Hey jess, welcome back :) Yep I'm getting into Miami now lol I liked the H/C ness last night...sooo cute how he worried so much about her. And now I knwo where the title here comes from hehe.
     
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    Ooh lookie its Jess -- Haven't seen you in awhile. You're being evil. You know that right?

    DuCaine is love in Camp Fear, Mo! My favorite eppy ever. {Besides the fact Amber Tambryn is in it} But still that episode is so cute, I can watch it over and over.
     
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    Lol, yeah he did! It was too cute! :lol:

    Lol, Melly I love that your getting into DuCaine, that's fabulous! They are just so hot! I love them! :devil:

    Lol, Lynny yeah I kept thinking while I was watching it..."Yup I see why Lynny loves this eppy!" :lol: There was SOOO much good DuCaine in it...it really DuCaine love in that eppy...totally! :D
     
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    ^^ mMe too! I loved Camp Fear. Hands down one of my favorite DuCaine-loving episodes ever!
     
  6. EmeraldEyes06

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    Hey all!! :D My exams are finished and I'm here to stay!! :) Welcome back to the old DuCainers! I remember you, Grissom Mad, from the old threads! And I did wonder where you'd gone! I love your banner! :) And your avator is so cute!! :)

    @ Casper: Wow, I'm so glad you loved those lines!! I try to write for Horatio as best I can. I always think to myself, "Would he say that?" But I guess I nailed it!! And I love how you imagined classical music in the background!! Something like Mozart or Schubert or Berlioz... they're all Romantic composers!! :D :)
    I'm so sad to hear about Erin... she'll always be a DuCainer, I know. Maybe someday she'll pop in again. Until then, let's spread more DuCaine love!!!

    Greetings to my gutter sisters!! :p And hooray for more smut, Palm! You can do it! What ever you write, I'm sure it'll be great!! CSI Miami, the HBO Experience, I like it!! :) That scene of her holding his hand in "Under Suspicion" has made such an impact on me, that I'm having deams about it!! :eek: X-rated, smut-filled dreams that I can't mention here... use your imaginations!! ;) :lol:

    Umm... when did Horatio say oral sex?? :eek: I don't remember that at all... :eek: :eek: I'll keep replaying it!!! :devil: :devil: *runs off to find "Wet Foot, Dry Foot.* *thud* :devil:

    And since he hasn't commented on anyone else's clothes, DuCaine shippers would have to assume that it's only Calleigh that looks good in black. You never saw Rebecca or Marisol wearing black, didja? Huh, didja didja didja?? Nope... that's exclusively for Calleigh!!! Makes her special!!! :D :) And coffee... sweet, sugary coffee!! :lol:

    "Camp Fear"... gotta love that giggle!!! Soo cute!! It made me giggle!! And I loved that scene in the dark... here's a cap from David Caruso's official site:

    No one's watching...you can hold my hand...

    Must watch it again! It definitely ranks high in the greatest DuCaine eppies of S1... maybe the whole show!! :)

    Alrighty... here's another original DuCaine scene. If Calleigh seems out of character, I apologise. Just trying to make it more romantic... :rolleyes: Here we are, and enjoy! And to Grissom Mad, Grissoms Angel, kissmesweet, Wyoming consider this a welcome back present!! :D

    Synopsis: Calleigh was involved in a shootout at a crimescene. She is cornered with a rifle pointing at her. Luckily, back-up arrives, with Horatio close behind. She is saved, but is whisked away by EMTs to check her out. Horatio arrests the perp, steaming mad.
    It's later that day, and Horatio comes by the lab to check on Calleigh. It's late, and the entire lab is empty...
    What's going to happen??

    White flash to:
    [INT - CRIMELAB - NIGHT]

    (Shot of Calleigh in the
    firing range.
    Camera slowly pans from
    behind her to in front of her
    as she fires round after
    round.)

    (When we finally reach to in front
    of her, we see Horatio leaning
    against the door, watching her
    closely.)

    CUT TO:
    (Close-up of Horatio
    as he smiles slowly.)

    Cut back to:
    (Calleigh fires one more
    round.)

    CUT TO:
    (Shot of her as she puts down her
    gun.
    Camera follows her hands to
    her taking off her glasses.
    Camera focuses in on
    her eyes for a moment.)

    Cut TO:
    (Horatio tilting his
    head slightly, still
    smiling.)

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh taking off her earphones,
    shaking her hair a little.
    She sighs, picks up the gun,
    and starts to clean it.)

    Horatio: (o.s) You've improved,
    I see.

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh jumps, the gun
    clattering on the work-table.
    She takes a deep breath,
    giving a small laugh.)

    Calleigh: Don't you ever knock?

    CUT TO:
    (Horatio smiling more, raising
    his hand to the door. He knocks
    3 times.)

    Horatio: Knock, knock, knock.

    Cut back to:
    (Calleigh smiling widely now,
    as she turns back to her
    gun.)

    Calleigh: If this gun was
    loaded...

    Cut to:
    (Horatio walking in a few steps.)

    Horatio: I shudder to think... then
    again, you are the Bullet Girl...
    (He reaches a spot a few feet behind
    her.)

    Cut to:
    (Calleigh smiling, still cleaning her
    gun.)

    Horatio: (quietly) I'd expect nothing
    less...

    (Calleigh puts the gun down,
    tucking her hair behind her ears,
    she turns around, leaning against
    the table.)

    Calleigh: You sure know how to
    flatter a girl, Handsome.

    (Cut to shot of Horatio as he
    smiles, dipping his head.
    But he raises it again,
    serious now.)

    Horatio: Umm... I just came by...
    to see how you're doing.
    (A beat.) Are you okay, Calleigh?

    Cut to:
    (Calleigh lowering her eyes.
    Long beat.
    She raises her head.)

    Calleigh: I am, considering...
    (She bites her lip.)

    (Horatio steps in a little more,
    Calleigh plays with her hands,)

    Horatio: What happened to you
    was unthinkable... no one
    should have to go through it...

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh smiling ironically.)

    Calleigh: I went through it, Horatio.
    What does that tell you?

    Cut back to:
    (Horatio looking at her, hands on
    his hips.)

    Horatio: Today tells me that
    right now... there is a very brave
    woman standing in front of me...

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh shifting, her face glowing.)

    Cut back to:
    (Horatio talking.)

    Horatio: ... who has overcome
    everything that was thrown at her...
    and I am here to tell you, that I'm
    very proud of you, Calleigh.

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh smiling.)
    Calleigh: Aw, Horatio... I'm
    blushing!!

    Cut to:
    (Wide shot of them as they
    both laugh.)

    CUT TO:
    (Horatio talking.)
    Horatio: If you need anything,
    anything at all...

    (Cut to close-up of Calleigh's
    face.)
    Calleigh: I know...
    (Close-up of her eyes.)

    I won't hesitate to call you...

    (Cut to close-up of Horatio's
    eyes.)

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh taking the gun and
    putting it back on the wall.)

    Calleigh: I'm gonna head... good
    night, Horatio.
    (She smiles as she walks up to
    him. He dips his head again,
    and looks up at her.)

    Horatio: Good night, Calleigh.
    (She nods, smiling.)

    CUT TO:
    (Side shot of her walking past.)

    Horatio: Calleigh...
    (He takes her hand as she
    walks by.
    Close-up of their hands.)

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh looking back at him,
    blinking rapidly.)

    CUT TO:
    (Horatio, glancing at their hands.
    He pulls her in a little closer to
    him.
    He gently squeezes her hand.)

    Horatio: You hang in there, Cal.

    CUT TO:
    (Calleigh looking down demurely,
    nodding. She looks up.)

    Calleigh: (quietly) I will.

    (Her eyes flick to their hands.
    Horatio slowly lets her go.
    Slow-motion shot of their hands
    parting.)

    (Shot of Horatio and Calleigh smiling
    at each other.
    Calleigh walks out of the lab.
    Horatio stands there, looking
    after her solemnly.)

    Cut to:
    (Slow dissolve into a shot of
    Calleigh walking through the corridor,
    her head down, eyes lowered.
    Various shots of her in danger,
    fade in and out, accompanied by
    white flashes.
    During this, she slows down,
    her footfalls echoing.)

    Cut back to:
    (Slow motion shot of Horatio,
    looking down, Calleigh's footsteps
    echoing in the lab.)

    Cut back to:
    (Calleigh as finally,
    she stops.
    Camera pans around her.
    Front shot of her, the door to
    the lab behind her shoulder.
    She shuts her eyes, her breathing
    shallow.
    She turns back.)

    CUT TO:
    (Horatio looking to the guns
    on the wall.
    White flash to shot of
    Calleigh with a gun
    pointed at her.
    He sharply looks down,
    his fist clenched.)

    CUT TO:
    (Shot of the lab from Calleigh's
    POV.)

    CUT TO:
    (Shot of the lab door from Horatio's
    POV.
    Front shot of Horatio looking
    down.)

    (There is a sound of clacking
    heels.
    Horatio snaps his head up,
    and sees Calleigh running
    back to him.)

    Cut to:
    (Close-up of Calleigh running.)

    Cut back to:
    (Horatio still standing there.
    His arms open automatically,
    and Calleigh runs into his arms.)

    (Camera pans around them as
    they embrace, various close-ups
    hugging dissolve in and out.)

    Cut to:
    (Front shot of Horatio holding
    her.)

    Horatio: It's okay... it's okay...
    Calleigh: Hold me tighter...
    tighter...
    Horatio: I have you... I have you,
    sweetheart...
    Calleigh: Make me strong... don't
    let go... Horatio...
    Horatio: Calleigh...

    (Camera slowly moves back
    and away from them
    Several white flashes during the
    final shot of them, still holding
    each other in the lab.)

    (FADE TO BLACK.)

    Hope you liked it! There's more where that one came from!

    COMING SOON... on CSI: DuCaine!!!
    :lol: :lol:
    An invitation to dinner?? Will sparks fly??
    STAY TUNED!!

    Bye!
    :)

    Fixed that link. Ought to work now! Sorry 'bout that!!
     
  7. liten

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    I can't see the picture you posted (site offline?) but the way you wrote the scene...absolutely amazing!!

    CSI: DuCaine? Love it!!
     
  8. athens

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    I can't see the picture either..Error on the page..
    Emerald ,I agree with lit !..The way you wrote the scene was fantastic!...really nice..more to come? :rolleyes: ;)absolutely..


    & Ducaine is one hell of a ship that looks good in black..Especially Calleigh ;)!..

    - Mor_ -time to pop in this thread more regularly hon since I'm a Ducaine too!.. :D
     
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    Hey guys. Just wanted to let you know that for the next week Horatio/Calleigh will be the featured ship. Have fun. :p
     
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    Thank you modie. Yo! Lets parta! *runs around in circles and runs into EE* oh my bad.

    That episode is a great ep for them. They have amazing chemistry and it shows alot in that ep. Plus She looks hot in it!

    Athy You should hang out with us more!
     
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    *throws confetti and cheers* Yay us....guess I came in just in time LOL

    btw anyone see the shirtless pics I posted in the Horatio/DC thread? Bet she'd love to see that under her tree Christmas morning LOL
     
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    First of all, YAY for us being the Featured Ship for the week! Wohoo! :D Yay for DuCaine, wohoo...oh yeah, wohoo, yeah baby! **Mo does her happy boogie dancing dance....realizes she looks like a dork and doesn't even care!** :lol: :lol:

    Emer I think I say this every time, but I have to say it again...You are AMAZING! That scene was fabulous...seriously...the way you described it with all that detail, I could literally see it happening in my head as I read it! Well done hon! I would LOVE to see that on the small screen...I would smile for a week! :D
    Loved that part...it was especially sweet! Awww!!
    Yeah no kidding, they look amazing in black, both of them! And they are definitely a HOT ship! :devil:
    Yup you should visit us in here more often hon, definitely! ;)
    Uh yeah she did Lynny! I love how she walks too...her hips totally do this sashay thing that you KNOW has got to drive H crazy! :devil: Yeah baby! ;)

    Palm how's that smutty ficcie coming? ;) Anything?! :D
     
  13. EmeraldEyes06

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    *pokes in her head to check things out, and gets knocked over by Lynn!* :p What's all the commotion?? WOW, WE'RE THE FEATURED SHIP!!! YAY!!! :D :) Feels great to be appreciated!! Hey, we'll be the featured ship for Christmas!!! Yay!! :) That'll make my Christmas!! :D

    Awww!!! :D Thank you guys for all the praise!! I do my best!! More to come very soon! :) I try to make it believable, something that could be drafted for the show... that's if Palm and I could infiltrate the impenatrable fortress known as the headquarters of TPTB!!! :lol:

    To celebrate us being the featured ship, here's some caps from "Broken", "Camp Fear", and "Kill Zone"!!! All classic eppies, and my personal faves!! And a little cap from "Lost Son" to round it all off!! Here we are:

    Broken

    I can see you...


    Hey there...


    Working the crime scene...


    H: Hey Cal, the spotlight's on you!! Cal: You can be so darn cute, Horatio... *giggle*


    Don't mess with them!!!


    I'll watch over you...


    What do you want in your coffee?


    Sugar!! H: *chuckle*


    Camp Fear

    Stand by me...


    Shoulder to shoulder...


    And getting closer...



    The perfect team... the tall redhead Lietenant, and the petite blonde CSI... Are you scared?? Guard: Eeepp...


    H: I'll pretend to read this, then we'll head for the Hummer. Cal: What's in the Hummer? H:paradise. Cal: I'm there...


    H: *I love it when she gets down and dirty...* Cal: *Is he watching me again? I love it!!*


    Cal: I need a long, hot shower... H: Be still my heart...


    "That" scene that raised shipper heartrates!! And a giggle from Calleigh!!!


    Kill Zone

    They arrive at the crime scene...


    Looking so hot!! *sizzle*


    A moment alone... *Lot of these in this episode!!*


    Cal: It's so big... H: Well, I think it's quite... Cal: That viewfinder it's the biggest I've ever seen!! H: *Darn!!*


    Cal: I can't believe it... H: Believe it. Cal: The DuCaine thread is featured this week!! H: Mmmhmm...


    Cal: A lot of people believe in us, Horatio...


    H: Yes they do... and so do I, Calleigh.



    Caps taken from Emily Procter Online, David Caruso Online and Miami Style

    A little tribute to our couple there!! DUCAINE 4EVA, WOOO!! Hope the fic is going good for you, Palm. Looking forward to reading it and having X-rated dreams!! :devil: :devil:

    Enjoy the caps, and see you soon!!
    :)
     
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    Broken

    First pic

    Calleigh: Horatio, You know I know you're there right?

    Second pic

    H: Now I wonder how Lynn got a camera into that light?

    Third Pic

    C: Do you really think she's crazy enough to leave us a fingerprint?

    H: You never know.

    *mumbles something about not being crazy*

    4th pic

    H: Hey Cal, You've got a nice ass.
    C: What?
    H: I mean theres a piece of cotton there beside your nice..foot. Yeah, thats what I meant.

    5th pic

    H: Now are you sure she can't figure out a way to get into this to steal our tape?
    C: I'm sure, its completely locked down.

    6th pic

    H: You sleep, I'm here.

    7th pic

    H: She won't get ahold of this tape. I promise.
    C: She'll blackmail us forever if she does.

    *scoffs* i will not!.. oh wait, I will. crap.

    8th pic

    C: She didn't get it! She didn't get it!

    *mumbles something about losing a connection*

    I'll do the other two later :D
     
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    eek! I love DuCaine! I made a DuCaine icon for a friend, check it out , it's on the url in my siggy :)
     
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