Re: H/Cal #3: Everything was compromised. Everything but You
Hey all!!
My exams are finished and I'm here to stay!!
Welcome back to the old DuCainers! I remember you,
Grissom Mad, from the old threads! And I did wonder where you'd gone! I love your banner!
And your avator is so cute!!
@ Casper: Wow, I'm so glad you loved those lines!! I try to write for Horatio as best I can. I always think to myself, "Would he say that?" But I guess I nailed it!! And I love how you imagined classical music in the background!! Something like Mozart or Schubert or Berlioz... they're all Romantic composers!!
I'm so sad to hear about
Erin... she'll always be a DuCainer, I know. Maybe someday she'll pop in again. Until then, let's spread more DuCaine love!!!
Greetings to my gutter sisters!!
And hooray for more smut,
Palm! You can do it! What ever you write, I'm sure it'll be great!! CSI Miami, the HBO Experience, I like it!!
That scene of her holding his hand in "Under Suspicion" has made such an impact on me, that I'm having deams about it!!
X-rated, smut-filled dreams that I can't mention here... use your imaginations!!
:lol:
Umm... when did Horatio say oral sex??
I don't remember that at all...
I'll keep replaying it!!! :devil: :devil: *runs off to find "Wet Foot, Dry Foot.* *thud* :devil:
And since he hasn't commented on anyone else's clothes, DuCaine shippers would have to assume that it's only Calleigh that looks good in black. You never saw Rebecca or Marisol wearing black, didja? Huh, didja didja didja?? Nope... that's exclusively for Calleigh!!! Makes her special!!!
And coffee... sweet, sugary coffee!! :lol:
"Camp Fear"... gotta love that giggle!!! Soo cute!! It made me giggle!! And I loved that scene in the dark... here's a cap from David Caruso's official site:
No one's watching...you can hold my hand...
Must watch it again! It definitely ranks high in the greatest DuCaine eppies of S1... maybe the whole show!!
Alrighty... here's another original DuCaine scene. If Calleigh seems out of character, I apologise. Just trying to make it more romantic...
Here we are, and enjoy! And to
Grissom Mad, Grissoms Angel, kissmesweet, Wyoming consider this a welcome back present!!
Synopsis: Calleigh was involved in a shootout at a crimescene. She is cornered with a rifle pointing at her. Luckily, back-up arrives, with Horatio close behind. She is saved, but is whisked away by EMTs to check her out. Horatio arrests the perp, steaming mad.
It's later that day, and Horatio comes by the lab to check on Calleigh. It's late, and the entire lab is empty...
What's going to happen??
White flash to:
[INT - CRIMELAB - NIGHT]
(Shot of Calleigh in the
firing range.
Camera slowly pans from
behind her to in front of her
as she fires round after
round.)
(When we finally reach to in front
of her, we see Horatio leaning
against the door, watching her
closely.)
CUT TO:
(Close-up of Horatio
as he smiles slowly.)
Cut back to:
(Calleigh fires one more
round.)
CUT TO:
(Shot of her as she puts down her
gun.
Camera follows her hands to
her taking off her glasses.
Camera focuses in on
her eyes for a moment.)
Cut TO:
(Horatio tilting his
head slightly, still
smiling.)
CUT TO:
(Calleigh taking off her earphones,
shaking her hair a little.
She sighs, picks up the gun,
and starts to clean it.)
Horatio: (o.s) You've improved,
I see.
CUT TO:
(Calleigh jumps, the gun
clattering on the work-table.
She takes a deep breath,
giving a small laugh.)
Calleigh: Don't you ever knock?
CUT TO:
(Horatio smiling more, raising
his hand to the door. He knocks
3 times.)
Horatio: Knock, knock, knock.
Cut back to:
(Calleigh smiling widely now,
as she turns back to her
gun.)
Calleigh: If this gun was
loaded...
Cut to:
(Horatio walking in a few steps.)
Horatio: I shudder to think... then
again, you are the Bullet Girl...
(He reaches a spot a few feet behind
her.)
Cut to:
(Calleigh smiling, still cleaning her
gun.)
Horatio: (quietly) I'd expect nothing
less...
(Calleigh puts the gun down,
tucking her hair behind her ears,
she turns around, leaning against
the table.)
Calleigh: You sure know how to
flatter a girl, Handsome.
(Cut to shot of Horatio as he
smiles, dipping his head.
But he raises it again,
serious now.)
Horatio: Umm... I just came by...
to see how you're doing.
(A beat.) Are you okay, Calleigh?
Cut to:
(Calleigh lowering her eyes.
Long beat.
She raises her head.)
Calleigh: I am, considering...
(She bites her lip.)
(Horatio steps in a little more,
Calleigh plays with her hands,)
Horatio: What happened to you
was unthinkable... no one
should have to go through it...
CUT TO:
(Calleigh smiling ironically.)
Calleigh: I went through it, Horatio.
What does that tell you?
Cut back to:
(Horatio looking at her, hands on
his hips.)
Horatio: Today tells me that
right now... there is a very brave
woman standing in front of me...
CUT TO:
(Calleigh shifting, her face glowing.)
Cut back to:
(Horatio talking.)
Horatio: ... who has overcome
everything that was thrown at her...
and I am here to tell you, that I'm
very proud of you, Calleigh.
CUT TO:
(Calleigh smiling.)
Calleigh: Aw, Horatio... I'm
blushing!!
Cut to:
(Wide shot of them as they
both laugh.)
CUT TO:
(Horatio talking.)
Horatio: If you need anything,
anything at all...
(Cut to close-up of Calleigh's
face.)
Calleigh: I know...
(Close-up of her eyes.)
I won't hesitate to call you...
(Cut to close-up of Horatio's
eyes.)
CUT TO:
(Calleigh taking the gun and
putting it back on the wall.)
Calleigh: I'm gonna head... good
night, Horatio.
(She smiles as she walks up to
him. He dips his head again,
and looks up at her.)
Horatio: Good night, Calleigh.
(She nods, smiling.)
CUT TO:
(Side shot of her walking past.)
Horatio: Calleigh...
(He takes her hand as she
walks by.
Close-up of their hands.)
CUT TO:
(Calleigh looking back at him,
blinking rapidly.)
CUT TO:
(Horatio, glancing at their hands.
He pulls her in a little closer to
him.
He gently squeezes her hand.)
Horatio: You hang in there, Cal.
CUT TO:
(Calleigh looking down demurely,
nodding. She looks up.)
Calleigh: (quietly) I will.
(Her eyes flick to their hands.
Horatio slowly lets her go.
Slow-motion shot of their hands
parting.)
(Shot of Horatio and Calleigh smiling
at each other.
Calleigh walks out of the lab.
Horatio stands there, looking
after her solemnly.)
Cut to:
(Slow dissolve into a shot of
Calleigh walking through the corridor,
her head down, eyes lowered.
Various shots of her in danger,
fade in and out, accompanied by
white flashes.
During this, she slows down,
her footfalls echoing.)
Cut back to:
(Slow motion shot of Horatio,
looking down, Calleigh's footsteps
echoing in the lab.)
Cut back to:
(Calleigh as finally,
she stops.
Camera pans around her.
Front shot of her, the door to
the lab behind her shoulder.
She shuts her eyes, her breathing
shallow.
She turns back.)
CUT TO:
(Horatio looking to the guns
on the wall.
White flash to shot of
Calleigh with a gun
pointed at her.
He sharply looks down,
his fist clenched.)
CUT TO:
(Shot of the lab from Calleigh's
POV.)
CUT TO:
(Shot of the lab door from Horatio's
POV.
Front shot of Horatio looking
down.)
(There is a sound of clacking
heels.
Horatio snaps his head up,
and sees Calleigh running
back to him.)
Cut to:
(Close-up of Calleigh running.)
Cut back to:
(Horatio still standing there.
His arms open automatically,
and Calleigh runs into his arms.)
(Camera pans around them as
they embrace, various close-ups
hugging dissolve in and out.)
Cut to:
(Front shot of Horatio holding
her.)
Horatio: It's okay... it's okay...
Calleigh: Hold me tighter...
tighter...
Horatio: I have you... I have you,
sweetheart...
Calleigh: Make me strong... don't
let go... Horatio...
Horatio: Calleigh...
(Camera slowly moves back
and away from them
Several white flashes during the
final shot of them, still holding
each other in the lab.)
(FADE TO BLACK.)
Hope you liked it! There's more where that one came from!
COMING SOON... on CSI: DuCaine!!!
:lol: :lol:
An invitation to dinner?? Will sparks fly??
STAY TUNED!!
Bye!
Fixed that link. Ought to work now! Sorry 'bout that!!
aradise. Cal: I'm there...