MacsLovlyAngl
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Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
SaraxGrissom
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Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Very nice poetry everyone! ^_^ Now, mine was written before GSR went cannon! ^^' Heehee. <3
So I'm Lost
No matter how much I try,
You always make me cry.
Every time that we’re apart,
It breaks my heart.
Can’t you see what you’re doing to me?
I want to get lost in your deep blue sea.
Always running away to hide,
You’ve twisted my heart until something snapped inside.
I can’t play your games anymore!
I’m finished; I’m out the door,
But you’ve heard these words before,
So you draw me back with that sweet smile
And I’ve fallen back a mile.
All those steps that it took to leave
Are gone and I can’t believe
How lost I am without you.
I’m lost without you.
So I’m lost without your love,
I can find my way back by the stars above.
So I’m lost without that smile.
Don’t you know I’d walk a mile
Just to see you in my heart?
To know we’ll never be apart?
Someone once told me to be free
Is to fly like an eagle over the sea.
Well, if loving you makes me feel this frail,
I don’t want to travel that trail.
How many times must I go through this?
No matter how well I aim, I always miss.
There’s a pain growing deep inside
And I cannot hide
The way I feel for you.
Are my feelings true?
I get lost in the deep blue sea
That is your eyes and know that I am free.
I have to look away
Or I’ll go astray.
When the time is right
You’ll hold me tight,
Other times your heart is cold
And you act so bold.
I can see the real you,
And I want you to know that I’ll be true.
Why do you hurt me so?
Am I never to know?
I’ll wait for the day you come to me.
I’ll wait for all eternity.
Very nice poetry everyone! ^_^ Now, mine was written before GSR went cannon! ^^' Heehee. <3
So I'm Lost
No matter how much I try,
You always make me cry.
Every time that we’re apart,
It breaks my heart.
Can’t you see what you’re doing to me?
I want to get lost in your deep blue sea.
Always running away to hide,
You’ve twisted my heart until something snapped inside.
I can’t play your games anymore!
I’m finished; I’m out the door,
But you’ve heard these words before,
So you draw me back with that sweet smile
And I’ve fallen back a mile.
All those steps that it took to leave
Are gone and I can’t believe
How lost I am without you.
I’m lost without you.
So I’m lost without your love,
I can find my way back by the stars above.
So I’m lost without that smile.
Don’t you know I’d walk a mile
Just to see you in my heart?
To know we’ll never be apart?
Someone once told me to be free
Is to fly like an eagle over the sea.
Well, if loving you makes me feel this frail,
I don’t want to travel that trail.
How many times must I go through this?
No matter how well I aim, I always miss.
There’s a pain growing deep inside
And I cannot hide
The way I feel for you.
Are my feelings true?
I get lost in the deep blue sea
That is your eyes and know that I am free.
I have to look away
Or I’ll go astray.
When the time is right
You’ll hold me tight,
Other times your heart is cold
And you act so bold.
I can see the real you,
And I want you to know that I’ll be true.
Why do you hurt me so?
Am I never to know?
I’ll wait for the day you come to me.
I’ll wait for all eternity.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Wow...I skipped a couple of the Sandle ones (though was unable to resist reading the Fannysmackin' picture one) but all the rest were just awesome.
Wow...I skipped a couple of the Sandle ones (though was unable to resist reading the Fannysmackin' picture one) but all the rest were just awesome.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Very nice...I like it a lot.
Very nice...I like it a lot.
Flack's secret crush
I know I have but many flaws
I know I only see you when buisness calls
but i think about you
I crush
I dream of you
and I laugh like some silly little child
your beauty takes me, your hand graces me
I feel relaxed when you smile
Ever since your ordeal with Frankie
I was there, yes you did thank me
but all that night, I thought about your eyes
thats the night I realized
I think about you
I crush
this seems so highschool
I know we are grown
my heart races like a fool
whenever we are alone
from your smile, your hair
even the clothes you wear
makes me sweat
why can't i remember not to forget
to tell you....
i think about you
I crush
I know I have but many flaws
I know I only see you when buisness calls
but i think about you
I crush
I dream of you
and I laugh like some silly little child
your beauty takes me, your hand graces me
I feel relaxed when you smile
Ever since your ordeal with Frankie
I was there, yes you did thank me
but all that night, I thought about your eyes
thats the night I realized
I think about you
I crush
this seems so highschool
I know we are grown
my heart races like a fool
whenever we are alone
from your smile, your hair
even the clothes you wear
makes me sweat
why can't i remember not to forget
to tell you....
i think about you
I crush
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Re: Flack's secret crush
Oooh Smacked poetry. Good job
Now if only they could go beyond crush to love lol...
Oooh Smacked poetry. Good job
Now if only they could go beyond crush to love lol...
SandleDL
CSI Level One
Re: Flack's secret crush
My Sad Sandle Poem of the Day...
Felt like I had to write something after last night's episode, but whatever Grissom feels for Sara, I still haven't given up on Sandle!
So this is, of course, Greg's pov.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Just a few words
It’s just a few words
Out of nowhere
Echoing in the room which is
Suddenly empty and cold
And I’m losing ground
My world shatters
As I fall to the floor
With nothing to hold on to
Anymore
I want to look into your eyes
And try to seek the truth
But you’re not here
I am alone
Drowning in the icy sea
Of loss and despair
I’ve felt so before
But then you were there
Holding me tight
Not letting me go
Pulling me back to the surface
Making me breathe again
Now you’re gone
And I’m losing this fight
Cause my strength to resist
Was taken away
By just a few words out of
Nowhere
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My Sad Sandle Poem of the Day...
Felt like I had to write something after last night's episode, but whatever Grissom feels for Sara, I still haven't given up on Sandle!
So this is, of course, Greg's pov.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Just a few words
It’s just a few words
Out of nowhere
Echoing in the room which is
Suddenly empty and cold
And I’m losing ground
My world shatters
As I fall to the floor
With nothing to hold on to
Anymore
I want to look into your eyes
And try to seek the truth
But you’re not here
I am alone
Drowning in the icy sea
Of loss and despair
I’ve felt so before
But then you were there
Holding me tight
Not letting me go
Pulling me back to the surface
Making me breathe again
Now you’re gone
And I’m losing this fight
Cause my strength to resist
Was taken away
By just a few words out of
Nowhere
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: Flack's secret crush
This is one of the first poems I did out here, I thought it would be nice, to post a picture with it, for all the new TalkCSI fans of Speed.
This is one of the first poems I did out here, I thought it would be nice, to post a picture with it, for all the new TalkCSI fans of Speed.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Both poems are very nice.
And about that one poem a few back, I never realized it was a Flack one lol, I saw the Stella part and assumed Smacked. My bad. Still a good job.
And about that one poem a few back, I never realized it was a Flack one lol, I saw the Stella part and assumed Smacked. My bad. Still a good job.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
SandleDL
CSI Level One
My Sandle poem, hope you like it. It's about how Greg deals with Sara being missing.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
For you
I don’t know how
To smile like
Nothing’s happened
And everything’s just like
It used to be.
I don’t know how
To go on like
Nothing has changed
And everything will some day
Be forgotten.
I don’t know how
To fight like
Nothing can harm me
And everything’s a dream like
Those I loved.
I don’t know how
To live like
Nothing can kill me
And everything will be
Just fine.
I don’t know anymore
Since you are gone.
But still I try to do it all
To smile, go on, to fight and live
For you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
For you
I don’t know how
To smile like
Nothing’s happened
And everything’s just like
It used to be.
I don’t know how
To go on like
Nothing has changed
And everything will some day
Be forgotten.
I don’t know how
To fight like
Nothing can harm me
And everything’s a dream like
Those I loved.
I don’t know how
To live like
Nothing can kill me
And everything will be
Just fine.
I don’t know anymore
Since you are gone.
But still I try to do it all
To smile, go on, to fight and live
For you.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Lovely job on both poems Both of you are good.
Both of you are good.- Status