FanFic Poetry

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  1. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Here is a poem I would like to share with other members. Once you read this please feel free to add your own poetry about any of the CSI shows or characters.

    Shadows

    Standing in the shadows, of where I can't be seen,
    as I secretly watch you , wishing I could have you loving me.
    You know I share your heartache and your memories of hate,
    of how much you have lost, "please handsom" let me ease your pain.
    You no longer need to walk your hurtful past alone,
    "because I am with you handsom", in the shadows by your side,
    As we brave this storm together,hand in hand throughout our passionate lives.
    Allow my heart to attach to yours, "handsom" can you feel me hold you tightly in my embrace?
    Now cry your tears handsom, let the pain escape from the flow, as I kiss them from your face.

    Love your Calleigh
     
  2. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    I like :)
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    Calleigh In memory of Speedle...

    "Why"

    "Speedle, you know I miss you, now that you've gone away",
    "Why didn't you listen and clean your gun each day.
    I don't understand how you could forget after the first close call that you had,
    "God Speedle" the pain of never knowing, makes me feel real
    sad.
    I keep remembering the look, upon Horatio's saddened face,
    knowing he lost a son that he could never replace.
    "Why" Speedle? "Why" did you do this to us all,
    because now we're left with only your memories in our hearts and on our memorial wall.

    Love calleigh
     
  4. sissi59100

    sissi59100 CSI Level Three

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    hmmm....I'm confused, you started your thread before sending me your PM? that's kinda illogic....
    Next time wait a fex i always answer my PMs ;)

    PS: excellent poem especially the second one
     
  5. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    :( Sorry :( I sent it last night and was very excited to get started this morning.:)

    P.S Thank -you I'm glad you liked it.
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    :)Thank-you soooooooooo much. :)
     
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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    Very nice. Love both poems, hope to see more soon.
     
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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    Lovely!! :) Both of them had real emotion. You don't mind if I add 2 DuCaine poems I wrote? I don't want to rain on your parade...
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    Sure, feel free to post your poems. This post was made for everyone to enjoy and add too. Have fun, and it's always great to read other members poems. You can write about any of the three CSI's and their characters.
     
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    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    nice job on the second one too!
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    Thanks, Macsgirlme. I'm glad I was given another chance to start a new post. My last one flopped.
     
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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    Horatio to calleigh

    You make...

    Calleigh my love, you make my heart float right up to the sky,
    and you make my spirit shine in the brightest light.
    You understand my dreams and try to make them come to life,
    and you understand my fears and pain that come to me each night.
    You always feel my teardrops fall and never look at me in shame,
    for showing all my feelings that I live with every new day.
    You've become my only lifeline, without you I cannot breath,
    So I will forever thank God in heaven, if you would marry me.
    Love Horatio
     
  13. sissi59100

    sissi59100 CSI Level Three

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    LuvingmyHoratio: you can use the "EDIT" button within 24 hours if you want to change your post.
    The double posting is forbidden on board, it's against the rule.
    Now i warned you, next time i'll give you an official warning
    Be careful!

    Emeraldeyes, i can't wait to read your poetry!
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    sissi59100 CSI Level Three

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    Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio

    I understand ;) now that you know it, you have no reason to keep double posting :)

    Sissi
     
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