MacsLovlyAngl
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Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
FanFic Poetry
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
I'm a GSR myself but enjoyed the poem anyway
And the Crossover one. Nice.
I'm a GSR myself but enjoyed the poem anyway
And the Crossover one. Nice.
SandleDL
CSI Level One
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Ok one more before I go to bed. D/L after "Love run cold".
Danny's pov.
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Look into my eyes
There’s nothing I will ask from you
Won’t hold you back
When you feel you cannot stay
Because loving always goes along
With letting go
I won’t stand in your way
Silently I’ll watch you leave
Maybe I’ll wave
And then I’ll turn around
Realizing with each step
That I have lost
The angel I’ve just found
But I won’t try to pull you back
I’ll give you freedom
If you need me to
But only if you have the guts
To look into my eyes
And say “I don’t love you.”
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Ok one more before I go to bed. D/L after "Love run cold".
Danny's pov.
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Look into my eyes
There’s nothing I will ask from you
Won’t hold you back
When you feel you cannot stay
Because loving always goes along
With letting go
I won’t stand in your way
Silently I’ll watch you leave
Maybe I’ll wave
And then I’ll turn around
Realizing with each step
That I have lost
The angel I’ve just found
But I won’t try to pull you back
I’ll give you freedom
If you need me to
But only if you have the guts
To look into my eyes
And say “I don’t love you.”
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Photo borrowed from TracyLynn Postcard
Photo borrowed from TracyLynn Postcard
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
*Cries at the first one* So sad. The second one...yummy pic and nice work
*Cries at the first one* So sad. The second one...yummy pic and nice work
SandleDL
CSI Level One
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Another one. Sandle!!!! There's nothing more to say about it.
Well ok: Greg's pov.
Now here we go...
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Reason
Reason tells me: let her go.
Give up the fight
For you will fail
Left in the fields of life alone
Listening to your heartbeat fade away.
She’ll turn around
She’ll pass you by
And take your life with her.
That’s what reason says.
But my heart keeps telling me
That there’s a million reasons
For not giving up.
A million reasons
For taking up the desperate fight
Without surrender
To anything but you.
A million reasons
For living each day
As if it is my last
Cause if it was
I’d want you to remember me
The way I think of you each day.
A million reasons for holding on
And only one for letting go.
So why should I give up?
Another one. Sandle!!!! There's nothing more to say about it.
Well ok: Greg's pov.
Now here we go...
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Reason
Reason tells me: let her go.
Give up the fight
For you will fail
Left in the fields of life alone
Listening to your heartbeat fade away.
She’ll turn around
She’ll pass you by
And take your life with her.
That’s what reason says.
But my heart keeps telling me
That there’s a million reasons
For not giving up.
A million reasons
For taking up the desperate fight
Without surrender
To anything but you.
A million reasons
For living each day
As if it is my last
Cause if it was
I’d want you to remember me
The way I think of you each day.
A million reasons for holding on
And only one for letting go.
So why should I give up?
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Sweeter then water,
Sweeter then wine,
Sweeter then heaven,
in your arms so divine
Calleigh you are my hope,
Caleigh you are my dreams,
Calleigh you are everything,
that makes my life complete.
Deeper in my mind,
Deeper in my soul,
Deeper in heaven,
as we soar one more
Horatio you are my world,
Horatio you are my earth,
Horatio you are my flame,
as make my body burn.
Passion in our flesh,
Passion in our nerves,
Passion in our touch,
as we twist & curve.
Sweeter then water,
Sweeter then wine,
Sweeter then heaven,
in your arms so divine
Calleigh you are my hope,
Caleigh you are my dreams,
Calleigh you are everything,
that makes my life complete.
Deeper in my mind,
Deeper in my soul,
Deeper in heaven,
as we soar one more
Horatio you are my world,
Horatio you are my earth,
Horatio you are my flame,
as make my body burn.
Passion in our flesh,
Passion in our nerves,
Passion in our touch,
as we twist & curve.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
ooh I love your imagery in that one. Nice work LMH The one before it is good too, SandleDL.
ooh I love your imagery in that one. Nice work LMH
The one before it is good too, SandleDL.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
I am loving the poems and the pics. I'd like to share this one.. For Sandle-shippers! Just something I put together. Hope you like it. Hi Kat!
Greg loved her
But he didn't know how to say it
Sara loved him
But she didn't know it yet
She was hurt
Because of guy who turned her down
He was there
And turned her frown upside down
He loved her
And he finally said it
She loved him
And she finally knew it
He leaned close
Hoping she knew where it was going
She leaned closer
And she finally kissed him
He broke the kiss
And he gave her a smile
She kissed him again
And the kiss lasted a while
He beamed
And whispeared in her ear
"Sara, I love you
And losing you is what I fear."
Sara held his hands and
She couldn't help but smile
"I've fallen for you, Greggo"
I'll love you till the end of time."
Well, it's Sandle..
I am loving the poems and the pics.
I'd like to share this one.. For Sandle-shippers! Just something I put together. Hope you like it. Hi Kat! Greg loved her
But he didn't know how to say it
Sara loved him
But she didn't know it yet
She was hurt
Because of guy who turned her down
He was there
And turned her frown upside down
He loved her
And he finally said it
She loved him
And she finally knew it
He leaned close
Hoping she knew where it was going
She leaned closer
And she finally kissed him
He broke the kiss
And he gave her a smile
She kissed him again
And the kiss lasted a while
He beamed
And whispeared in her ear
"Sara, I love you
And losing you is what I fear."
Sara held his hands and
She couldn't help but smile
"I've fallen for you, Greggo"
I'll love you till the end of time."
Well, it's Sandle..
SandleDL
CSI Level One
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Hey Pau! Ok so here's another one of mine, Sandle of course! Sara's pov. Oh yes, she would never admit her feelings for Greg...
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THE TRUTH
To tell you the truth
You don't mean anything to me
I can pass you by without shaking inside
And you can touch me without
Causing shivers down my spine
Talking to you doesn't make me tremble
You can look at me and I don't care
The truth is what you need to know
So listen to my honest words
It's not that I don't like your company
But I could as well be without you
And when I sleep alone at night
I dream of anything but you
Take my words, they are all true
And the biggest truth of all is that
I am a liar
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Hey Pau!
Ok so here's another one of mine, Sandle of course! Sara's pov. Oh yes, she would never admit her feelings for Greg...---------------------
THE TRUTH
To tell you the truth
You don't mean anything to me
I can pass you by without shaking inside
And you can touch me without
Causing shivers down my spine
Talking to you doesn't make me tremble
You can look at me and I don't care
The truth is what you need to know
So listen to my honest words
It's not that I don't like your company
But I could as well be without you
And when I sleep alone at night
I dream of anything but you
Take my words, they are all true
And the biggest truth of all is that
I am a liar
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Had to make a change to the wording, due to content above PG13. That's why you'll see the jump in the second verse
Had to make a change to the wording, due to content above PG13. That's why you'll see the jump in the second verse
SandleDL
CSI Level One
Re: FanFic Poetry... Calleigh to Horatio
Promise
You’re close to me
I feel your touch
I know your scent
And I hear your soft voice
Forming words of an angel
They erase the coldness
That’s crawling underneath my skin
And all my fears vanish
Within seconds
Because I know you’re here
You’ll stay with me
And make sure I will be okay
This promise is made
With your touch
And your scent
And your angel voice
I don’t need to hear the words
To know you’ll keep it
Forever, for me
Promise
You’re close to me
I feel your touch
I know your scent
And I hear your soft voice
Forming words of an angel
They erase the coldness
That’s crawling underneath my skin
And all my fears vanish
Within seconds
Because I know you’re here
You’ll stay with me
And make sure I will be okay
This promise is made
With your touch
And your scent
And your angel voice
I don’t need to hear the words
To know you’ll keep it
Forever, for me
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