FanFic Poetry

ericloca · Aug 31, 2007

I miss her

I miss her sweet voice , I miss her so much
I remember her eyes , I remember her touch
I can’t forget the love in my heart and soul
Her death hit me hard , destroyed me whole

My tears are falling on the ground
The world is quiet, I don’t hear a sound
I turn and leave , my heart in horrid pain
Little by little my life’s gonna drain

I still feel her breath against my face
Remember how you smiled in my embrace
The way I kissed you gently , short and sweet
I’ll do anything to feel again complete

I hate I have no power over life and death
That’s why I watched you taking your last breath
I couldn’t do a thing to save you
I can’t believe we’ll never going to be two

You took me with you the day you died
I was so depressed , I haven’t even cried
But my soul was bleeding harsh on the inside
I’m so alone , there’s no one by my side

Today you’re here , tomorrow you’re not
I’m lost without you , you were all I got
Should I live or die ? Tell me what to do .
That’s not important ; what I know it’s that I won’t stop loving you .

Another sad Sandle poem . Thanks horstiosangel and I love every one of your poems , luvingmyhoratio . Just wonderful .

MacsLovlyAngl · Aug 31, 2007

Big Thankies Ericloco...and yours are just as beautiful, don't ever think they are not. Poetry comes from the heart, we write how we feel, from our heart and soul. "The truest poet is one who doesn't doubt, his/her own words".

Linda

ericloca · Aug 31, 2007

Yeah , you're right . Poetry means to feel the emotions hiding behind the simple words . Thank you for reminding that to me .
~Dannielle

MacsLovlyAngl · Aug 31, 2007

Just one, from me today...Work calls.

@Ericloco....You are very welcome

horatiosangel · Aug 31, 2007

Wow, LMH, those poems were sooo beautiful... ***sniffs***... I loved them all...

And you're welcome, ericloca...loved your new one too, "I Miss Her". You have a real way with words. Keep up the great work!!!