Grammar rocks. Which is ironic that I say this, as most of my posts here have horrible mistakes.
Just a quick question: On this board in particular, are we allowed to post R-Rated fics with proper disclaimers?
And in response to characters thinking to themselves, I either show instead of tell (I.E. instead of "He's sexy, she thought to herself" I would write "She looked him up and down" or something, to describe that yes, he's sexy, without actually putting it in so many words. Sorry for the crude example, it was all I could think of short notice. Other than that, if internal dialogue is required, I use single quotation marks. This may be wrong. In fact, it probably is.