:lol: at Stella saying Mac doesn't return when he puts Michelle to bed.
Loved the Anya/Michael scene.
Loved the Anya/Michael scene.
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
aww love it
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
I'll try and get this updated sometime today.
Thanks for all your reviews, it's much appriciated
Thanks for all your reviews, it's much appriciated
Asprine
Pathologist
Thank you again, Linda for bumping up those threads for me..
Sad to hear that their dogs died. Mac can't manage he's granddaughter well. I hope Stella wins the bet. Serve them right. "Ass is a donkey" This story is really hilarious. I'm glad that Mac don't stare at the girls unlike Flack and Danny. Lol. Ha..Headache! Their dog is really smart. Can sense something was wrong with the bear. Aw, I love post #31. Their little own world really makes me :drool::drool:. I hope to see them in bed. *Day Dreams again* *Quickly shakes away all my stupid thoughts* I never thought Scott was that bad. How i hope to kill him when i first read them. I was like.. "HOW CAN HE RISK HIS OWN DAUGHTER'S LIFE FOR 5 MILLION" That was ridiculous when i read halfway.. Ha! Bad husband who gambles.. I'm glad that Mac is a good father that cares about her daughter. :guffaw:I'm sure Michael is as handsome as Mac. :drool:. How i hope that Scott gets rumble down by Mac and Michael when i first read that part *Punches him on the face**Kicks him on the ***. But in the end it was Stetler. I'm happy for Mackenzie and Michael. Both of them get along well. Unlike my brother and sister. Starts a topic will gets into arguement. "Us Taylor's are strong enough to survive this" << this is a comforting one. Love this. I'm glad that Mac didn't make the move to go after Scott when he is outside somewhere around the beach. He might have risked his own life for that. Aw.. Sara is shy to see Michael. :lol:.
Sad to see Stella in pain.. Ah.. Michelle is a good name. You are good in picking names for your character Linda.. . Mac did a great job in helping Stella breast feeding seriously.. Well, this story is really nice. It is indeed they had enough Taylor's. LOL! Mac haven't returned after taken Michelle.. Ah,Lovely Story.. Can't wait for more!
Sad to hear that their dogs died. Mac can't manage he's granddaughter well. I hope Stella wins the bet. Serve them right. "Ass is a donkey" This story is really hilarious. I'm glad that Mac don't stare at the girls unlike Flack and Danny. Lol. Ha..Headache! Their dog is really smart. Can sense something was wrong with the bear. Aw, I love post #31. Their little own world really makes me :drool::drool:. I hope to see them in bed. *Day Dreams again* *Quickly shakes away all my stupid thoughts* I never thought Scott was that bad. How i hope to kill him when i first read them. I was like.. "HOW CAN HE RISK HIS OWN DAUGHTER'S LIFE FOR 5 MILLION" That was ridiculous when i read halfway.. Ha! Bad husband who gambles.. I'm glad that Mac is a good father that cares about her daughter. :guffaw:I'm sure Michael is as handsome as Mac. :drool:. How i hope that Scott gets rumble down by Mac and Michael when i first read that part *Punches him on the face**Kicks him on the ***. But in the end it was Stetler. I'm happy for Mackenzie and Michael. Both of them get along well. Unlike my brother and sister. Starts a topic will gets into arguement. "Us Taylor's are strong enough to survive this" << this is a comforting one. Love this. I'm glad that Mac didn't make the move to go after Scott when he is outside somewhere around the beach. He might have risked his own life for that. Aw.. Sara is shy to see Michael. :lol:.
Sad to see Stella in pain.
. Ah.. Michelle is a good name. You are good in picking names for your character Linda.. . Mac did a great job in helping Stella breast feeding seriously.. Well, this story is really nice. It is indeed they had enough Taylor's. LOL! Mac haven't returned after taken Michelle.. Ah,Lovely Story.. Can't wait for more!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Awww...thanks for the lovely review Asprine.
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Reading over the file, Mac noticed two things. First, that all three victims were stabbed through the heart with a spear that left behind a little heart shaped diamond. Second thing he noticed, was that all three victims were drugged with barbiturates before being chloroformed.
Lookng up from the file, Mac could imagine how these young girls would have suffered. Walking back into the room, Stella noticed that look on Mac's face.
"Mac....Are you okay? You look perplexed."
"Hmm. I'm fine love. Do you happen to know if Eric is still awake?"
"I think so, I heard him and Mackenzie giggling."
Getting up out of the bed, Mac grabbed the file and knocked on their door.
"Eric. It's dad, are you still awake?"
"Yeah dad, why?"
"I'd like to talk to you about the case."
"Okay. I'll meet you downstairs in five minutes."
"Eric...what's going on?"
"Nothing love. Go to sleep, I'll be back as soon as I can."
Kissing her with passion on the lips, eric left the room.
"What is it dad?"
"I've found something in your case file. Have you and the boys checked with the jewelry stores yet?"
"Jewelery stores, why?"
"Well, it seems your preditor leaves a calling card behind. When he kills his victims, he leaves behind a small heart shaped diamond in their hearts."
"What!!! How did we miss that?"
"It's okay Eric. You and your team have been working around the clock on this case, it's normal that you'd miss certain details."
"Okay dad, I'll have Danny and Flack check Jewelers in the morning. Anything else you've found?"
"Yeah. IT seems he likes to chloroform his victims after he's tortured them. Now Chloroform doesn't come easy. Have the team check Pharmasceudical companies, and Hospitals. See if they have someone who's been ordering it in large quantities."
"Okay, thanks dad. this helps us alot."
"One more thing son."
"Yeah dad?"
"I'd like in on this case. You need fresh eyes. I can help."
"I don't know dad. How's mom going to like you working cases again?"
"Hah. Don't worry about your mother, I know how to handle her."
Eric laughed...
"Yeah right. Okay dad. You go ask her and give me the answer in the morning."
Still laughing, Eric headed back upstairs. For he knew Mac would have his hands full not only with the case. But also with Stella who would find her own way to weasel in on the action.
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Reading over the file, Mac noticed two things. First, that all three victims were stabbed through the heart with a spear that left behind a little heart shaped diamond. Second thing he noticed, was that all three victims were drugged with barbiturates before being chloroformed.
Lookng up from the file, Mac could imagine how these young girls would have suffered. Walking back into the room, Stella noticed that look on Mac's face.
"Mac....Are you okay? You look perplexed."
"Hmm. I'm fine love. Do you happen to know if Eric is still awake?"
"I think so, I heard him and Mackenzie giggling."
Getting up out of the bed, Mac grabbed the file and knocked on their door.
"Eric. It's dad, are you still awake?"
"Yeah dad, why?"
"I'd like to talk to you about the case."
"Okay. I'll meet you downstairs in five minutes."
"Eric...what's going on?"
"Nothing love. Go to sleep, I'll be back as soon as I can."
Kissing her with passion on the lips, eric left the room.
"What is it dad?"
"I've found something in your case file. Have you and the boys checked with the jewelry stores yet?"
"Jewelery stores, why?"
"Well, it seems your preditor leaves a calling card behind. When he kills his victims, he leaves behind a small heart shaped diamond in their hearts."
"What!!! How did we miss that?"
"It's okay Eric. You and your team have been working around the clock on this case, it's normal that you'd miss certain details."
"Okay dad, I'll have Danny and Flack check Jewelers in the morning. Anything else you've found?"
"Yeah. IT seems he likes to chloroform his victims after he's tortured them. Now Chloroform doesn't come easy. Have the team check Pharmasceudical companies, and Hospitals. See if they have someone who's been ordering it in large quantities."
"Okay, thanks dad. this helps us alot."
"One more thing son."
"Yeah dad?"
"I'd like in on this case. You need fresh eyes. I can help."
"I don't know dad. How's mom going to like you working cases again?"
"Hah. Don't worry about your mother, I know how to handle her."
Eric laughed...
"Yeah right. Okay dad. You go ask her and give me the answer in the morning."
Still laughing, Eric headed back upstairs. For he knew Mac would have his hands full not only with the case. But also with Stella who would find her own way to weasel in on the action.
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I bet Stella will want in on the case. :lol: Can't wait to see her reaction. Good chapter.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
love it, as always
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When Mac returned to his room, he found his lovely wife still awake.
"I thought you'd be sleeping by now love."
"Come on Mac. You know I can't sleep unless you're beside me."
"Well then, move over and I'll join you," he smiled.
Pulling off his pants, Stella watched as they dropped to the floor, followed by his shirt.
"Stop looking at me like that Stella."
"Like what Mac?" She whispered seductively.
Moving towards the bed, Mac could see she was already excited. Pulling back the covers, he climbed in, and pulled her on top of him.
"This is where you belong Stella. In my arms, with your beautiful hair shielding out the world for a while."
Melting at her husbands words, she lowered her head until she was a breath away from his lips. As Mac tried to reach up to kiss her, she backed up.
"Come on Stel. Don't tease me."
Stella was enjoying the sensual facial expressions Mac was making as she teased him.
"Tell me about the case."
"Aaahhh!!! So that's her game," Mac said to himself.
"What case love. There is no case."
Knowing Mac was fibbing to her, she reached her hand down to the back of his knee, and began tickling him.
As Mac began laughing, and trying to release her, Stella clung onto him for dear life.
"Tell me about the case Mac, and I'll stop."
Still not giving in, Mac wrapped his feet around her ankle, gripped her arms, and flipped her over.
"Now. Now it's my turn."
"That's cheating Mac. Don't, don't you daaaaaaaaaaaaare...."
As Stella began laughing insanely, Mac continued torturing her.
"Okay, okay. I give up. I won't ask about the case."
Bringing up his hands, Mac grabbed her hands, and placed them above her head. Watching the heated look in his wife's beautiful eyes, he passionately kissed her. A soft, sensual tongue dueling kiss. One that spoke of more to come.
As Stella tried to remember how to breathe, Mac broke the kiss, and worked his way down her neck, taking little nibbles along the way.
"Maaaac......"
Hearing the quiver in her voice, Mac knew he should stop, but he couldn't. He needed her love tonight, her passion, her sweet sighs and moans, that spoke of their eternal love.
Taking her deeper into his sensual kisses, he looked up and seen the beauty of their love in her eyes.
"Please Mac. I need to feel you take my soul, please help me......"
As Mac gave her what they both needed, she burst forth in the passion of her husbands touch.
A short time later, Mac could still feel her quivering. Wrapping her tighter in his arms, he whispered his love to her.
"Mac....please tell me about the case. It has to do with those young girls that were found tortured, doesn't it?"
Just as Mac was about to give in, he heard Michelle's cries through the monitor.
"I'll get her love. She's most likely wet."
"Mac!!! I want in on this case."
"There is no case Stella."
Leaving the room, he could hear Stella mumble.....
"That's okay Mac. I'll find out on my own."
With Mac out of the room, Stella seen the case file on the night table. Reaching over for it she began scanning it, reading as much as she could. When she heard Mac coming out of Michelle's room, she placed the file back on the table, not realizing she had dropped one.
"Looks like we have company for the night love."
"Well hello my little Angel, still not sleeping?"
Stretching out her arms, Michelle climbed into them, and laid her head on the pillow.
As Mac neared the bed, he seen the file had been moved, and the page on the floor. Looking up at his wife he said....
"Just couldn't leave it, could you sweetheart?"
Smiling with her beautiful wide grin, she whispered....
"Does that mean I get to help?"
Climbing into the bed, Mac reached over, wrapping his wife and daughter in his arms.
"Just go to sleep Stella."
Laughing quietly she said...
"I love you hon."
"I love you too Mrs. Devious."
"I thought you'd be sleeping by now love."
"Come on Mac. You know I can't sleep unless you're beside me."
"Well then, move over and I'll join you," he smiled.
Pulling off his pants, Stella watched as they dropped to the floor, followed by his shirt.
"Stop looking at me like that Stella."
"Like what Mac?" She whispered seductively.
Moving towards the bed, Mac could see she was already excited. Pulling back the covers, he climbed in, and pulled her on top of him.
"This is where you belong Stella. In my arms, with your beautiful hair shielding out the world for a while."
Melting at her husbands words, she lowered her head until she was a breath away from his lips. As Mac tried to reach up to kiss her, she backed up.
"Come on Stel. Don't tease me."
Stella was enjoying the sensual facial expressions Mac was making as she teased him.
"Tell me about the case."
"Aaahhh!!! So that's her game," Mac said to himself.
"What case love. There is no case."
Knowing Mac was fibbing to her, she reached her hand down to the back of his knee, and began tickling him.
As Mac began laughing, and trying to release her, Stella clung onto him for dear life.
"Tell me about the case Mac, and I'll stop."
Still not giving in, Mac wrapped his feet around her ankle, gripped her arms, and flipped her over.
"Now. Now it's my turn."
"That's cheating Mac. Don't, don't you daaaaaaaaaaaaare...."
As Stella began laughing insanely, Mac continued torturing her.
"Okay, okay. I give up. I won't ask about the case."
Bringing up his hands, Mac grabbed her hands, and placed them above her head. Watching the heated look in his wife's beautiful eyes, he passionately kissed her. A soft, sensual tongue dueling kiss. One that spoke of more to come.
As Stella tried to remember how to breathe, Mac broke the kiss, and worked his way down her neck, taking little nibbles along the way.
"Maaaac......"
Hearing the quiver in her voice, Mac knew he should stop, but he couldn't. He needed her love tonight, her passion, her sweet sighs and moans, that spoke of their eternal love.
Taking her deeper into his sensual kisses, he looked up and seen the beauty of their love in her eyes.
"Please Mac. I need to feel you take my soul, please help me......"
As Mac gave her what they both needed, she burst forth in the passion of her husbands touch.
A short time later, Mac could still feel her quivering. Wrapping her tighter in his arms, he whispered his love to her.
"Mac....please tell me about the case. It has to do with those young girls that were found tortured, doesn't it?"
Just as Mac was about to give in, he heard Michelle's cries through the monitor.
"I'll get her love. She's most likely wet."
"Mac!!! I want in on this case."
"There is no case Stella."
Leaving the room, he could hear Stella mumble.....
"That's okay Mac. I'll find out on my own."
With Mac out of the room, Stella seen the case file on the night table. Reaching over for it she began scanning it, reading as much as she could. When she heard Mac coming out of Michelle's room, she placed the file back on the table, not realizing she had dropped one.
"Looks like we have company for the night love."
"Well hello my little Angel, still not sleeping?"
Stretching out her arms, Michelle climbed into them, and laid her head on the pillow.
As Mac neared the bed, he seen the file had been moved, and the page on the floor. Looking up at his wife he said....
"Just couldn't leave it, could you sweetheart?"
Smiling with her beautiful wide grin, she whispered....
"Does that mean I get to help?"
Climbing into the bed, Mac reached over, wrapping his wife and daughter in his arms.
"Just go to sleep Stella."
Laughing quietly she said...
"I love you hon."
"I love you too Mrs. Devious."
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Asprine
Pathologist
I love the way you write this Linda. Its really making me :drool::drool:. "Stop looking at me like Stella" << :lol: Ah..I love the way they understands each other and they can read each other's mind too. Mac is really good in handling Stella Huh? I can't wait for more eh. Hopes Stella don't get herself in danger again if she joins the case. *Crosses Finger* Thank you Linda.. For not teasing me completely.. At least you updated this story's chapter.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
I love Stella's impatience :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
In the early morning hours Michelle awoke wrapped in between her mommy and daddy. Turning to face her daddy, she began poking at his eye.
"Eye dada. Dada's eye?"
Feeling his daughters pokes Mac awoke.
"Yes Angel, that's daddy's eyes."
Taking her little finger she poked his nose.
"Nose dada. Or nose."
"Yes Michelle, daddy's nose."
Removing her finger she poked it towards Mac's mouth. But before Michelle could say mouth, Mac teasingly bit down on her finger.
*Giggling* "No bite dada."
"Kisses for daddy?"
Lifting her head, she kissed her daddy smack dab on the mouth.
"Ove ou dada."
"I love you too my Angel. You want some breakfast?"
Nodding her head yes, she turned to try and wake up mommy.
"Michelle, how about we let mommy sleep."
Climbing down from the bed with her daddy's help, they headed downstairs where they found the Delko troops already up.
"Morning dad."
"Morning Mackenzie, where's Eric?"
"He's in the den with Danny and Flack. Why don't I take Michelle?"
"Thanks sweetheart."
Heading into the den, Mac checked on Stella first to make sure she was still sleeping.
"Good. Stay put." He whispered into the room.
When Stella was sure he was gone, she got dressed, combed her hair, and made her way down to the den.
"Good morning everyone, where do we start."
Shaking his head Mac sighed.
"Fine Stella, you win, you can help."
Sitting herself down between Flack and Danny she said...
"Morning boys, how are you?"
Danny howled. "Nice Mac, good to know who's boss in your house."
Looking at Danny sinisterly, he said...
"Shut up Messer."
Laughing again, the others couldn't help but join in.
"It's okay dad. The more fresh eyes the better. You are more then welcome to help mom."
"Thank you son. See Mac, Eric understands."
Turning his glare on Eric, Eric smiled as he shrugged his shoulders.
Meanwhile.....
He had another young girl on his boat.
"Wow, this is a great yacht you have. I love the tiger design on your sheets."
Not saying anything, he mixed her drink with the barbituates. Walking towards her, he handed her the glass.
"You don't talk much, do you?"
Sitting down across from her, he watched as she took a drink. When she had finished, she began getting drowsy. Laying her head upon the pillow, she started feeling her body tingle.
"Mmm...so hot."
Getting up he walked towards her, laid down and began his torture. Hearing her screams caused him to become erect, as he continued his torture. Then grabbing a cloth with chloroform he put her out. Picking up his spear, he jabbed it into her heart, leaving the little diamond behind.
As he looked at her, he picked her up, tied her to the back of the yacht, and started the motor.
"Eye dada. Dada's eye?"
Feeling his daughters pokes Mac awoke.
"Yes Angel, that's daddy's eyes."
Taking her little finger she poked his nose.
"Nose dada. Or nose."
"Yes Michelle, daddy's nose."
Removing her finger she poked it towards Mac's mouth. But before Michelle could say mouth, Mac teasingly bit down on her finger.
*Giggling* "No bite dada."
"Kisses for daddy?"
Lifting her head, she kissed her daddy smack dab on the mouth.
"Ove ou dada."
"I love you too my Angel. You want some breakfast?"
Nodding her head yes, she turned to try and wake up mommy.
"Michelle, how about we let mommy sleep."
Climbing down from the bed with her daddy's help, they headed downstairs where they found the Delko troops already up.
"Morning dad."
"Morning Mackenzie, where's Eric?"
"He's in the den with Danny and Flack. Why don't I take Michelle?"
"Thanks sweetheart."
Heading into the den, Mac checked on Stella first to make sure she was still sleeping.
"Good. Stay put." He whispered into the room.
When Stella was sure he was gone, she got dressed, combed her hair, and made her way down to the den.
"Good morning everyone, where do we start."
Shaking his head Mac sighed.
"Fine Stella, you win, you can help."
Sitting herself down between Flack and Danny she said...
"Morning boys, how are you?"
Danny howled. "Nice Mac, good to know who's boss in your house."
Looking at Danny sinisterly, he said...
"Shut up Messer."
Laughing again, the others couldn't help but join in.
"It's okay dad. The more fresh eyes the better. You are more then welcome to help mom."
"Thank you son. See Mac, Eric understands."
Turning his glare on Eric, Eric smiled as he shrugged his shoulders.
Meanwhile.....
He had another young girl on his boat.
"Wow, this is a great yacht you have. I love the tiger design on your sheets."
Not saying anything, he mixed her drink with the barbituates. Walking towards her, he handed her the glass.
"You don't talk much, do you?"
Sitting down across from her, he watched as she took a drink. When she had finished, she began getting drowsy. Laying her head upon the pillow, she started feeling her body tingle.
"Mmm...so hot."
Getting up he walked towards her, laid down and began his torture. Hearing her screams caused him to become erect, as he continued his torture. Then grabbing a cloth with chloroform he put her out. Picking up his spear, he jabbed it into her heart, leaving the little diamond behind.
As he looked at her, he picked her up, tied her to the back of the yacht, and started the motor.
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MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Come on, fix it!!!!
Great chapters. :lol: at Stella. She's a determined woman!
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
I love how you write Stella as a character :lol:
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