CSI:NY - "The Younger Generation"

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Loved that update Linda :D

Remember what you told me the other night? Well the offers this side too ;)
 
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Wow, that was smart of Mackenzie. I forgot about Adam not being there with the rest of them. :lol: Sharon with Adam was cute.
 
With Adam upstairs, he quietly walked to Mac's room and turned on his compter. As he put in his code for the lab, he examined the wiring that was across the windows. Once he found the match, he knew what he was dealing with.

Looking up he seen King and Kong scratching at the door.

"Sit King...shhh. Kong, no bark, sit."

Knowing the dogs could give him away, he had no choice but to lead them back outside through the closet. Coming back up, he forgot to lock the door.

Meanwhile....

"Okay mom. I need you to breathe. I see the baby's crown. Deep breath now mom. That's it, now....exhale."

"Whooooooooooooooooosh"

"Good mom, now another. Breathe in.......and release. Now puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuush."

"Whooooooooooooooooosh. Auuuuuuuuugh....hehehahahehehaha."

"Okay mom relax now. That's it. Just relax."

"Why isn't it coming Mackenzie?"

"I'm not sure mom. Let me have another look."

As Mackenzie looked, she seen the baby was breech.

"Umm...listen Stelter. You need to get some medical help in here now. The baby is in the breech position. Please, get someone."

"Sorry girl. You have to do it yourself, get Nat here to help you."

"But....I..."

"Too bad. Either the two of you do it together, or the baby dies. Your choice."

Mackenzie's eyes were covered with tears, and sweat. She really didn't think she cold do this.

"Mackenzie...look at me love."

Looking at her dad, he whispered....

"I know you can do it Mackenzie. I'll help guide you through it."

"Okay dad. What do I do first?"

"Wash your hands with soap and water , really well. Now...take your left hand, and push it up in your mothers walls, until you feel the babies feet and knees. Natalia, keep her legs spread wide, that's it."

"Okay dad, I feel his little feet, and his bum."she sobbed

"That's great love. Now you need to turn the baby's bum in a clockwise motion until you see his crown."

Turning the baby in her hand, she could feel it position itself in the birth canal. Removing her hand she noticed all the blood.

"Oh daddy....she's bleeding alot, what now daddy?"

"Very carefully brace your hands on each side of the baby's ears. Now very carefully with gentle care, pull him out."

"Oh daddy, I can see his face. But he's blue daddy, he's not breathing."

"Calm down love. You need to clear the fluid from his lungs and nose."

"Place your mouth over his face, and suck really hard, until his fluid releases in your mouth."

As Mackenzie obeyed her fathers orders, she could taste the blood mixed with fluid filling her mouth. Trying desperately not to gag, she spit it out, as the baby screamed.

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa."

"Oh daddy, mom, it's a girl, another beautiful little girl."

Wrapping the baby in pure white warm towels, Mackenzie went to pass her to her father.

"HEY!!!! Now none of that. Bring the child here."

Knowing she had no choice, she passed her sister to Stetler.

"Now. If I was you, I'd check your mom, she's looks near death."

As they looked, they seen Stella bleeding badly from her opening.

"Oh God mom, hold on please, hold on."

Grabbing somemore towels, Mackenzie packed her hoping it would stop some of the bleeding.

"Come on Stetler, you fucking animal, get my mom some help."

"SHUT YOUR MOUTH AND SIT, I DON'T CARE IF SHE BLEEDS TO DEATH."

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa."

"Now see what you did, you scared the baby. It's okay little girl. Shhh..daddy has you."

It was at those words they realized Stetler was fully insane and there would be no way to save him.
 
What is the rush!! I'm trying to make you guys a very good story.;) All my stories always finish quickly. I wanted to add alot of suspense this time. It will end soon. But not right now.

Be patient Melly:p:lol:
 
Im patient :D *sets up tent*
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As Mackenzie continued to help her mom, Sheldon said...

"Listen Stelter, I'm an ME. Please, let me try and help Stella."

"Looking up from the baby he said.."fine, but no tricks, what do you need?"

"I need my kit, or someones kit."

"I have mine, it's in the closet upstairs," said Mac.

"Hurry and get it Sheldon, come on before her death is on your hands."

Running upstairs, he ran smack into Adam.

"Shit....where the hell did you come from?"

"Long story, just keep quiet. What do you need?"

"Stella's kit. She gave birth, but something is wrong, she's still bleeding massively."

"Oh God. I'm trying to work as fast as I can to figure out his code, to block the detonator."

"Well hurry. Before Stella dies."

Running back downstairs with the kit, he sat beside Mackenzie.

"Let me have a look sweetie."

As sheldon checked her opening, he seen where her wall had been torn.

"Listen to me Stetler, I need sterile dressing, needle and thread, alcohol, and an extra set of hands."

"Mackenzie...you go get what he needs from around your house. Mac..get down there and help the good ME with your wife. Well...hurry."

Getting down on the floor, Mac waited for instructions.

"It's okay love, just hang on, promise me you will hang on."

"SHUT UP. I DIDN'T GIVE YOU PERMISSION TO TALK."

"What do you need me to do Sheldon?"

"Very carefully, with care, I need you to open your wife's pelvic. As wide as you can."

"Stella, I know this is going to be uncomfortable, but try and relax, okay."

Taking the alcohol, and gauze Sheldon carefully cleaned the area wall.

"This isn't going to work Mac. My hands are to large, I'm going to have to C section her."

Crying at the pain he could already see in his wife's eyes, Mac agreed.

Once sheldon had opened her, he stitched the tear, and double threaded her stitches till they could get to the Hospital.

"I've given her 70cc of Morphine Mac, she'll be out for a while. I'm also starting an IV of antibiotics to prevent infection."

"Yeah, yeah, whatever, said Stetler. Now everyone back up on the couch, and don't move."


Back upstairs Adam had finally figured the code for the detonator. Calling the dogs, they headed downstairs quietly.

Once they got to the bottom the dogs took off, right into the living room, grabbing Stetler by the throat, as he released the baby, right into Mac's arms.

As they tore at his throat, killing him. Danny seen him squeeze the detonator.

"The detonator, grab it, hurry."

"Relax Danny, I've blocked the signal. It's okay."

Hearing the sirens in the distance, Mackenzie ran to the door.

"Hurry, my mom, she needs help."

When the EMT's walked through the door, they seen what looked like a war zone.

"Ummm...is it safe here?"

"It is now, come on, hurry".

Once the EMT's had everything in order, they left for the Hospital with Stella, Calleigh and the baby.

"Mac you should go with Stella."

"No Sheldon, I'll get there, we need to get everything filed and explain what went on. Danny get those explosives off the kids please."

Once they were all untied, Natalia and Eric took them to the kitchen to eat.

"It's funny isn't it Eric. They seem to have no effects from today."

"I'm sure they will later. But most likely they thought of it as a game."

With everything explained to the IAB and FBI, Mac excused himself to see his wife and child.

"Dad...give mom my love?"

"I will sweetheart."
 
ohh good nobody died well stetler died but he was mean.. and poor stella hope she is going to be fine:)
good chapter anyway:)
 
When Mac arrived at the Hospital, he was shown to his wife's room. Walking in he seen Calleigh holding his daughter.

"Calleigh...where's Stella?"

"She's still in surgery daddy. But here is your little girl."

Passing Mac his daughter, he held her close as her little fist curled into his heart.

"God..she's so beautiful. Look at all those curls."

"I know. She looks like Stella. Have you thought of a name?"

"Michelle Mackenzie Taylor. After all if it wasn't for Mackenzie, the baby would have not survived."

"Excuse me, are you Mac Taylor?"

"I am. How is my wife?"

"She's doing fine. We've cleaned and restitched her tummy. We've also added a few staples, just to be safe. Whoever stitched her up, did a wonderful job."

"That would be our ME, Sheldon Hawkes."

"Be sure to thank him for us. It was his handywork, that saved your wife."

"I will, thank you."

While they waited for Stella to be brought up, all the children, grandchildren, and families came in.

"Papa....is this my new cousin?"

"It is Shannon, her name is Michelle Mackenzie Taylor."

Looking up at his daughter he could see her tears.

"You were very brave today Mackenzie. If not for you and your quick thinking of the situation it could have been worse. You and your daughter saved our lives."

Sharon puffed up. "Cause I got Uncle Adam papa?"

"Yes. Also because your mommy helped deliver and save your new cousin."

Wrapping his daughter in his arms, he just held her while she cried.

"You are our hero Mackenzie. Thank you."

As they all turned they seen Stella.

"Mom....oh mom, how you feeling?"

"Very sore, very tired, and very proud of you. You are an amazing hero Mackenzie."

"No mom. Anyone one of us here would have done the same thing. We all had a part avoiding the disaster that could have happened."

"Sweetheart. If I may interrupt. I'd like to introduce you to Michelle Mackenzie Taylor. Michelle, this is you mom."

Smelling her mothers scent she began to scream, as she faught to find her supper."

Once everything quieted down. Mackenzie and Michael left with their children.

"We'll be back in the morning dad. We're going to go clean up the house, before mom gets released."

"Thank you kids. I love you both."

"We love you too dad, night mom."

"Night sweetheart, drive careful."

"We will mom. Bye."


When they pulled into the driveway, Eric, Danny, and Ryan were disposing of the wires and explosives.

"Hey Mac, how's mom and the baby?"

"Good Uncle Danny. I thought the FBI would have taken all that stuff with them?"

"They are Mac. But we have to get it back to Miami-Dade, it's already been marked, and tagged."

"Hmm..I guess I should start cleaning the carpets, and get rid of the blood stains. How are King and Kong?"

"They're fine. Last we seen Sheldon had given them a big fat steak. Listen Mackenzie, when are you going to deal with Scott's estates?"

"I don't know Uncle Danny. The state will get most of it."

"What about the policy you'll recieve?"

"That will be put away for the girls College funds. Anyways, we will talk more later, I still have to tell the kids."

"I know Mac. If you need me, just call."

"I will Uncle Danny. Thanks you guys. I'll see you later."

"Umm...Mackenzie?"

"Yes Eric?"

"Once I drop this stuff off , I was wondering if it would be alright to bring by dinner. Just some pizza's or something."

"That would be wonderful. Thanks".

"Eric....."said Sharon.

"Yes doll face?"

"Can you bring all cheese pizza? I love all cheese."

"Of course I can. How about you Shannon, Sara, MJ. What kind do you like?"

"We likes all cheese too."

"Okay than. I'll bring back two large cheese, and two large with everything for your mom, Michael and I."

"Yay!!! Thanks Eric."

"You are all welcome."

"Come on Delko, let's go?"

"Coming Messer."

Closing the door, Michael said...."I think someone has a crush on you."

"You're crazy Mic, get lost,"she giggled.

"I'll bet you ten bucks I'm right Mac?"

"Okay bro, you're on. Now let's get down to cleaning this mess."
 
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