CSI:Miami RT #12 - 'Road To Nowhere'

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One word to Riley....NOOOOOOOOO. If you want to survive, YOU will NOT move to Miami. I don't know what it is about the Speedle girls, but they don't really survive. Lori's the exception because, well...she's a badass. I severely hope that Riley doesn't fall prey. That would be so unfortunate.

Lori and Scott are moving along pretty nicely, too bad Stephanie is blocking majorly. I'm sure they'll get their chance to do what they like to do, I can see Lori's very content in his arms. It's just great that they are giving it a chance.

Anni's extremely harsh on herself. I happen to think, if she can do it without dying, she should carry her baby. Tom's such a sweet heart.

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Aww ! Tom and Anni are so sweet! Why do I get the feeling there is gonna be a Speedle female involved in this baby deal! HMMMM! Well I guess they'll figure it out!

Yay Riley is moving to Miami! Wonder how thats gonna work out ! Intresting! I thinks me smell something brewing !

Great update Geni!
 
Thanks for the lovely reviews! :adore:

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Empire State Building, photocopier room, 9am next day

Scott: *presses button*

Hip-hop music plays loudly

Scott: *lifts head*

Main floor area

Bob: *dancing* WHEN I SAY JUMP YOU SAY HOW HIGH!

Scott: *walks out of office*

Bob: I AIN'T NEVER SEEN NOBODY-ODY GET SO HIGH!

Scott: *stares at Bob*

Everyone: *looks at Bob*

Scott: *lifts brow*

Bob: *flips pens, twirls around*

People walk by, stop, look at Bob

Scott: *crosses arms*

Bob: KEEP POPPIN' IN POSITION AFTER MIDNIGHT, MOESE, FLY CHICKENS UP IN NY!

Scott: *looks around*

Bob: JIGGA WHAT, KNOW THE PIMP WAR! HOUSTON, WE'RE GONNA JUMP SHIP, ALL ABOARD PORT OF MIAMI, WOMEN THEY PARL-

Scott: *pulls plug*

Music shuts off

Bob: *turns around, staggers into cubicle*

Scott: *looks at watch* A little early for you to be drinking.

Employees snicker

Bob: Ha. Ha. I'm just putting a little life into this place, that's all.

Scott: *nods* My office. *walks away*

Bob: Sure thing, boss. *runs*

Large office

Scott: *sits*

Bob: What's up?

Scott: You're an accountant, right?

Bob: Yeah.

Scott: *slides paper across desk, grabs pen* I want to set up a trust fund.

Bob: That's okay, I like working for my money.

Scott: *lifts eyes* ...For my children.

Bob: Oh. Okay, how much are we talking?

Scott: *slides paper over*

Bob: *picks up paper* Nice, divided by 2, it's a good start for them.

Scott: Each.

Bob: *looks at Scott*

Scott: Think you can handle that for me?

Bob: Sure.

Scott: Thank you.

Bob: Let me guess, your kids gotta work their asses off and stay clean before they can touch the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.

Scott: Yep.

Bob: Is that what your parents did for you?

Scott: It's probably the one thing they did right.

Bob: *nods*

Scott: Fax me the paperwork when you've finished. *stands*

Bob: So no more hip-hop?

Scott: *smiles, walks away*

Biscayne Park, playground, 11am

Lori: Don't throw sand in your brother's eyes!

Steph: *looks at Lori*

Lori: I'm serious.

Steph: *lowers head*

Tom: *places Brook into swing*

Brook: *claps*

Tom: *pushes Brook*

Brook: *squeals, kicks feet*

Tom: *smiles*

Lori: *leans against swingset* 6 years ago, did you ever picture us having play dates?

Tom: *glances at Lori* You sure like to dwell on the past. Maybe that's your whole problem.

Lori: I don't have a problem.

Tom: And that's why it took you so long to get help.

Lori: *crosses arms* Took you longer.

Tom: I knew I had a problem. I just didn't care.

Lori: *frowns*

Tom: *winks*

Lori: *rolls eyes*

Tom: *pushes Brook*

Lori: Steph! Stop burrying your brother in the sand!

Steph: But he likes it!

Dominick: *crying*

Lori: Dig him out! Now!

Steph: *frowns, digs sand*

Lori: *sigh*

Tom: She's definitely your kid.

Lori: Cute.

Tom: You think you'll ever have any more?

Lori: Not if I can help it.

Tom: *nods*

Lori: Why?

Tom: Just wondering.

Lori: *narrows eyes*

Tom: *picks up Brook*

Brook: *lies head on Tom's shoulder*

Lori: Someone's tired.

Tom: *places hand on Brook's back* Mhm.

Lori: I should head back to the house. Scott'll be on his way home in a couple hours.

Tom: *nods*

Lori: *walks away* C'mon guys, let's get back to the truck.

Steph: But I'm not done havin' fun.

Lori: You can have fun at home. *picks up Dominick, brushes sand from his face*

Dominick: *sneezes*

Lori: *smirks*

TBC.............................
 
OH...MY.>>GOD>>>> BOB! That was the one true thing that lifted me today! I heart Bob so much...This just makes it just that much sweeter! Awesome. Simply awesome.

Lori and Tom had a playdate, and he's apparently scrounging info to see if she'll carry the baby. Do I sense a bit of anxiety from Tom about Anni carrying? Lori put a cork in that one, but I think if Tom asked, she would...OF course there would be the stipulation that this will be done with out the aid of actual intercourse on their behalf, LOL. The play date was cute though!

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HA HA HA HA! I just had visions of some dorky guy dancing around to hip hop...LOL

Oh I hope Tom isn't thinking what I am thinking.

Steph is funny...

YAY for Scott for planning for the kids.

Great update Geni!
 
OMG! Monica ! I had a vision of some short, fat, greasy Italian guy with a bad comb over, a pair of polyester paints, and a paisley seventies butterfly collar shirt with Elton John sunglasses and and a big gold chain and 4inch platform loafers Ala Saturday Night fever look! Lol! OMG! i'll never get that image out of my head now! lol!

Well I hate to say it but it looks like Tom may have his surrogate..Unless....Lol they can get Katie to do it! lol! Somehow I don't think Speed will approve of either one though!

Great update Geni !

P.S. Thanks for the Bob Nightmare Geni! Lol!
 
Thanks for the reviews! :D

LOL Flash. :lol:

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Near truck, playground

Lori: *buckles Dominick*

Steph: Momma, can I sit in the front?

Lori: No.

Steph: Why not?

Lori: *wipes forehead* You don't weigh enough. The airbag won't know your there and if something happens, it won't protect you.

Steph: Don't smush the truck then, Momma.

Lori: Hilarious. *rubs eyes* Can you pass me my water bottle?

Steph: *picks up bottle*

Lori: *grabs bottle* Thanks.

Steph: Can we go to Chucky Cheese?

Lori: No. We're going home. *drinks*

Steph: Can we get lunch?

Lori: NO.

Steph: *frowns*

Lori: *shuts door, leans against truck*

Tom: *walks over* You okay?

Lori: I don't know.

Tom: What does that mean?

Lori: I've switched up medications. I'm feeling a bit...queasy.

Tom: *nods*

Lori: You think you could um...take over the wheel?

Tom: Of course.

Lori: *sigh* Thank you.

Tom: I'll get Brook settled into the truck.

Lori: *nods, walks away*

Gables Estates, house, driveway

Steph: *grabs Dominick, runs into house*

Lori: *slams door, walks around truck*

Tom: You going to be okay?

Lori: You mean until my big strong man gets home?

Tom: *stares at Lori*

Lori: I think I'll manage.

Tom: I just don't want to leave you here by yourself with 2 kids if you're going to pass out or something.

Lori: I'll put on some coffee. *walks away*

Tom: *opens door, unbuckles Brook*

Inside house, kitchen

Steph: *runs over* Tommy!

Tom: *looks at Steph* Yes?

Steph: Can I play with Brookie?

Tom: As long as you stay in the den.

Steph: Kay!

Tom: Hey!

Steph: *turns around*

Tom: Play nice.

Steph: *runs away*

Lori: *closes fridge*

Tom: *leans against fridge* You seem distracted.

Lori: Really.

Tom: Mhm.

Lori: *looks at Tom*

Tom: I've seen that look before.

Lori: I thought we weren't dwelling on the past.

Tom: This needs to stop.

Lori: What? You mean the fact that I still care about you? Love you, even?

Tom: You're on thin ice with Scott as it is.

Lori: I know. But I can't help how I feel about you.

Tom: *stares at Lori*

Lori: *reaches up, places hand on Tom's cheek*

Tom: *grabs Lori's arm* I don't know whether it's the medication exchange or the heat outside but I'm not about to stick around and find out. I hope you feel better. *walks into den*

Lori: *closes eyes*

Den

Tom: *picks up Brook*

Steph: Goin' home?

Tom: Yep. I'll see you guys again sometime.

Steph: Bye bye Tommy.

Tom: *smiles* Bye Steph. *walks away*

Kitchen, 5pm

Lori: *staring at table*

Scott: *walks in* Hey.

Lori: *lifts eyes*

Scott: You want me to start dinner?

Lori: Scott.

Scott: Yeah. *opens cupboard*

Lori: ...Nothing. Nevermind.

Scott: *closes cupboard* You alright?

Lori: No but I don't want you pissed at me so I choose not to share.

Scott: *walks over, sits* You can tell me anything, Lori.

Lori: You're a good man and we have awesome kids. So I can't figure out why I still have feelings for some other guy. It's frustrating as hell.

Scott: This other guy being...Tom.

Lori: Yes.

Scott: *nods*

Lori: Don't worry, he wasn't interested in the least bit.

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: So I guess this means goodbye.

Scott: *lifts brow*

Lori: I'll pack my things. *stands*

Scott: Whoa, hold on. *stands, takes Lori's hand* You're sure assuming a lot.

Lori: Scott, I'm a whore.

Scott: I don't care what you are. I'm not about to throw everything away because of this.

Lori: You're an idiot.

Scott: Maybe.

Lori: Ugh. *slams head into Scott's chest* I don't deserve you at ALL.

Scott: *wraps arm around Lori*

Lori: *sigh*

Scott: I'll make us some dinner.

Lori: Okay.

TBC...............................
 
At least she knows where she stands with Tom, and Scott as it happens. Scott must REALLY love her, because she admitted to still loving Tom and yet, he stayed. I commend him on that really, and I hope that because she was able to talk about herself without flipping out means that she's going to try and get better. Well, she has no choice- Tom's not having any of it. It's now up to her to get this taken care of.

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Uhhhh! Okaay! Well that was kinda weird ! I think Lori needs to check the meds again and stay the hell away from Tom! Hes already looking for someone to have his and Anni's baby, and I just don't think Lori needs to go down that road again!

Great update Geni !
 
Steph totally is a mini-Lori... :lol:

I wonder if she finds it weird that her little sister calls her ex-lover, "Daddy"...

It's good that Lori got things settled with Scott and Tom, so that she knows where she stands with them.

Dom's a little cutie. :D

Great update! :)
 
Thanks so much for the lovely reviews!

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I wonder if she finds it weird that her little sister calls her ex-lover, "Daddy"...
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LOL. It's definitely a weird thought.

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Inside car, road, 7pm

Tom: *places phone up to ear, grabs steeringwheel* Yeah I'll be home in about an hour, I just have to stop at the lab for a minute and finish up some paperwork from yesterday.

Anni: I left a small list of groceries I forgot to pick up yesterday, you think you could stop by the store and get them?

Tom: Sure.

Anni: Oh, gotta run! Brook's getting into the flour.

Tom: *smiles* See you in a bit.

Anni: Love you! Bye!

Tom: *closes phone*

Truck barrels through intersection

Tom: AH! *drops phone, slams on breaks*

Truck plows into car

Gables Estates, house, 7:15pm

Steph: *pulls Dominick's hair*

Dominick: *screams*

Lori: *runs over* Stephanie Elizabeth Finch! How many times do I have to tell you not to torture your brother! *grabs Steph, slaps her arm*

Steph: Ow.

Lori: Knock it off or you'll get more than a slap.

Steph: *frowns* Stick it.

Lori: ...Excuse me?

Steph: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Where in the hell did you learn that?

Steph: School.

Lori: School. And which little bugger taught you that?

Steph: Hunter.

Lori: Stop listening to Hunter.

Steph: But he's cool.

Lori: He's 6. Guys don't get cool until they reach 30 and that's only because the ratio between their bodies and their brains level off.

Steph: *lowers head*

Lori: Don't tell me to 'stick it' ever again. You got it?

Steph: Uh huh.

Lori: Stephanie.

Steph: ...Yes Momma.

Lori: Good. Now leave your brother alone.

Street, near large tree

Tom: *opens eyes, looks around*

Glass falls from window

Tom: *pushes airbag, rips off seatbelt*

Woman: *runs over* Are you okay?

Tom: *wipes forehead, looks down at hand*

Woman: You're bleeding!

Tom: *blinks*

Woman: What's your name? What happened? Can you hear me?

Tom: *grabs onto door handle, pushes door*

Door creaks

Tom: Get back.

Woman: *stands back*

Tom: *slides out driver side window*

Woman: But-

Tom: *stumbles into side of car*

Woman: *grabs Tom's arm* I called an ambulance, you should really sit down.

Tom: Where's the...the other vehicle, where is he?

Woman: Over there near the median.

Tom: *walks away*

Woman: Where are you going!

Near median

Tom: *looks into truck* Sir! Sir, can you tell me your name?

Man: *blinks slowly*

Tom: *looks down, yanks on door* Christ.

Man: *coughs*

Smoke billows through truck; fire erupts

Tom: *lifts head* ...Sir, I'm with Miami PD, I'm going to get you out of here.

Man: What...happened?

Woman: THE TRUCK'S ON FIRE! IT'S ON FIRE!

Tom: *climbs onto hood* Grab me that big piece of metal over there!

Woman: *throws over metal*

Tom: *smashes windshield*

Woman: Hurry up!

Glass pops, shatters

Tom: Stand back!

Woman: *steps back*

Tom: *climbs into passenger side, grabs Man*

Man: What's goin' on?

Tom: Can you move?

Man: Yeah.

Tom: C'mon. *drags Man upward*

Fire engulfs back seat

Tom: *looks into back seat*

Man: How come it's so hot in here?

Tom: Move! Move!

Man: *climbs through windshield*

Tom: *pushes Man, jumps through windshield*

Street

Tom: *jumps down, grabs Man's arm* Let's go, run!

Man: *limps*

Truck explodes outward

Tom: *shoves Man to the ground, covers him*

Metal flies

Tom: *covers head*

Woman: *screams*

Ambulance pulls up

Tom: *rolls over onto ground, sighs*

TBC............................
 
OMG! TOM! I'm sure that when he's finally calmed down, he's gonna feel every stitch of that accident. I wonder if hitting his head is going to bring his memories back even more? I would hope not, I kinda like him right now. Poor guy though is gonna wish for someone to put him out of his misery. Ugh...he NEVER has good luck!

*snickers* Stephanie was playing with her own mortality. Telling Lori to stick it...Classic...Really....LOL


Awesome update!
 
Thanks for the review! :D

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Biscayne Park, house, 9pm

Tom: *walks in*

Anni: *runs over* Where the hell were you? Oh my God, what happened? *places hands on Tom's cheeks*

Tom: Sorry I'm late. I had a small mishap on the road.

Anni: What kind of mishap?

Tom: An SUV shoved my car into a tree.

Anni: *wide-eyed* Why didn't you go to the hospital!

Tom: I did. Had enough so I came home.

Anni: *hugs Tom*

Tom: I'm fine.

Anni: *kisses Tom*

Tom: Anni.

Anni: *kisses Tom*

Tom: Anni-

Anni: I'm going to make you some tea. *grabs Tom's arm*

Tom: Is Brook upstairs?

Anni: Yeah. She's asleep.

Tom: ...I think I'll go hang out with her for a while.

Anni: Is your shirt burned? *lifts Tom's shirt*

Tom: There was some...fire involved.

Anni: *lifts head*

Tom: It was nothing.

Anni: *wraps arms around Tom*

Tom: *sighs*

Anni: I'm taking you right back to the hospital. We have to make sure you're okay.

Tom: Don't worry, I'm only on my...6th life? I've got 3 more to spare.

Anni: *lets go* Tom, you're in pain.

Tom: So I'll take a couple aspirins. It's not a big deal.

Anni: You might have internal injuries.

Tom: And I might not. I'm going to go see Brook. *walks away*

Anni: *grabs phone*

Upstairs, bedroom

Tom: *sits in chair, stares at Brook*

Kitchen, 9:30pm

Anni: *scratches head*

Doorbell rings

Anni: *runs over to door, opens it*

Scott: What's going on?

Anni: *steps back*

Scott: *walks in*

Anni: Tom was in a car accident.

Scott: *turns around* Is he okay?

Anni: He's upstairs. I want to get him back to the hospital. He refuses to go.

Scott: That's his right.

Anni: He hit his head, he might not be thinking clearly. He won't listen to me but I was thinking hopefully he'd listen to the both of us.

Scott: You don't need me to get through to him.

Anni: This isn't a man vs woman thing. You're his friend, he trusts you.

Scott: ...Doesn't he trust you?

Anni: I'd like to think so but...I don't want to wait another hour trying to figure it out while he's bleeding out internally or something.

Scott: Okay. I'll see what I can do.

Upstairs, bedroom

Tom: *strokes Brook's cheek*

Scott: *steps in* Hey.

Tom: *lifts head*

Scott: I heard about your...adventure.

Tom: I'm not going to the hospital.

Scott: Looks like you're in some pain.

Tom: Some. Not enough to get excited over.

Scott: *walks over* May I?

Tom: Go for it.

Scott: *sits*

Tom: *stares at Brook*

Scott: What happened?

Tom: Guy ran the red light. I barely had enough time to react.

Scott: He still got you.

Tom: ...You know what it's like to see something coming at you and there's nothing you can do but watch it happen?

Scott: *stares at Tom*

Tom: ...Nevermind. In any case, it sucked.

Scott: Right.

Tom: And I'd rather spend my night at home with my family than in a sterile room with bad food and 20-minute checks.

Scott: Anni will probably check on you twice that much.

Tom: *looks at Scott*

Scott: Go with her to the hospital. I'll drop you guys off.

Tom: What about Brook?

Scott: I'll give Tim a call. I'm sure he wouldn't mind watching her tonight.

Tom: Why can't you watch her?

Scott: It seems to make sense that her father watc...*clears throat*

Tom: *narrows eyes*

Scott: I spoke to him on on the way over here. He's just watching movies with Katie.

Tom: Fine. I'll go. *stands*

Scott: You look like hell, by the way.

Tom: Piss off. *walks away*

Scott: *smiles*

TBC...........................
 
Ha Ha Ha ! Steph telling Lori to stick it! Lol! Thats about like Richie telling Fonzie to siit on it! Lol! I think she had better check her attitude before she gets her mouth washed out with soap!

Well thanks for tuning to another exciting episode of Action Tom! I keep waiting for the personality change that is sold separate to come out anytime now ! He gonna be doing that Dr. Jekle Mr. Hyde thing when we least expect it!

Well at least Tom didn't tell Scott to Stick it! lol ! Wel this should be interesting to say the least! Tims actually gonna watch Brook! Hmm ! Thats a new one for him ! Whats up with the sudden "I want to be a daddy syndrome!"
Well I'm sure brook will cry for tom the whole time shes there ! I don't know how this is gonna make Tim feel to her his child call Tom daddy!

Great update Geni !
 
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Anni called in the calvary in the form of Scott. At least he was able to talk Tom into going to the hospital...Now, what will they find when he goes back? And how is he going to deal with being somewhere he doesn't want to be...And how is he going to interact with Anni now that she's put him there? So many questions... Great way to keep us enthralled!


Awesome update!
 
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