CSI:Miami RT #12 - 'Road To Nowhere'

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:guffaw: Poor Lori! She can't get a proposal out of Scott to save her life. I loved their conversation though- it was mature and to the point. I can see where Scott's ideas come from, even Lori knows that he's keeping staunch rules for a reason. I happen to think that they are keeping her alive. Although, now that she's getting better, she could do with a bit of freedom, but that's up to them.

Awesome update!
 
Great updates Geni! Holy crap, I am glad everyone is ok...

Katie just needs to stop.

I love concerned Speed

HA HA Tom is as stubborn as ever
 
Thanks for the reviews! :)

Short one. :p

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Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 11pm

Lori: *lies head on Scott's chest*

Scott: *brushes hair from Lori's cheek*

Lori: ...I um...I might be going to a movie tomorrow with Riley.

Scott: That's great.

Lori: It's an opening night show. Midnight.

Scott: *stares blankly*

Lori: Might be fun.

Scott: ...I don't think it's a good idea.

Lori: Objection noted.

Scott: Which theatre are you going to?

Lori: Sunset.

Scott: ...That's not exactly in the best neighborhood.

Lori: Riley picked it.

Scott: *shakes head*

Lori: ...Don't you think it would be good for me to y'know, get out there and socialize with my sister? I mean, I know it's not a great neighborhood but-

Scott: Testing yourself isn't a sound idea.

Lori: I'll be okay.

Scott: Lori, we both agreed on this.

Lori: I know and it's working great but Tom and I were talking and-

Scott: You're listening to what Tom has to say.

Lori: What's wrong with his opinion?

Scott: Where do I begin?

Lori: Yeah, right he's not the best influence but maybe he has a point. Maybe the reigns could use a little loosening. I'm definitely not where I was.

Scott: Exactly. You have a routine, you have structure.

Lori: *sits up* What's wrong with having a little fun?

Scott: You don't know when to end the fun.

Lori: *lowers eyes*

Scott: *sits up* I think it's wonderful that you want to spend time with your sister but do you really trust yourself enough to enter that situation?

Lori: ...I know that I can't hide here my whole life.

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: Besides, this is Riley we're talking about. She doesn't know how to let anyone do anything wrong.

Scott: *nods, lies down*

Lori: *lies head on Scott's chest*

Scott: ...I just don't want to see you fall again.

Lori: *closes eyes* Me neither.

Miami Lab, 11:30pm

Speed: *looks up at plastic*

Calleigh: *walks over* Hey, you alright?

Speed: *staring at plastic*

Calleigh: *places hand on Speed's shoulder*

Speed: *looks at Calleigh*

Calleigh: I just got finished with my shift, you want to go for a coffee?

Speed: Sure.

Calleigh: *smirks*

TBC..........................
 
Ooh...tension. That sometimes is good, just like allowing Lori some space. I think she can do this, she can go out to a movie, with her sister and not get into any trouble. At least she needs to hope that she can, cause I think the chances are runnning thin with Scott. And did I detect a bit of acid in his voice when talking about Tom? I guess it's safe to say that the tentative friendship is over? Hmm..methinks so :)

And what's up with Speed? Is he going to have a break down? Glad he went with Calleigh for coffee... Maybe he just needs someone to talk to?


Awesome update!
 
Why do I question Calleigh's motives here?

Why does Katie have to make the situation worse when Anni first gets to the hospital? That's just mean. :(

I don't wanna see Lori fall either!

*hugs Speed* I hope you're okay.

Yay for Riley! :D

Great updates! :D
 
Well I've spent two days getting my computer back together and I come back to utter chaos and death! What the hell!

And why does Scott think he needs to control Lori now for ! He didn't care about controlling her when she was out turning tricks with Tom and every other druggie that walked the streets of Miami! Oh! I see now hes grown a conscious mind and he thinks she need structure ! Well he should have figured that out along time ago!

And Katie you need to just shut up!

Speeeeeeed! What exactly do you have in your head! You better not be about to go bo-doe-dio with Calleigh again! Well if you do please don't take her back to your place or you'll have a mirror wheedling ease dropping peeping tom named Katie out side your bedroom door tryin to get a look see at whats goin on ! lol! Hell knowing her she'll just take a front row seat on the dresser and eat popcorn and take pictures! Lol!

great Update Geni!
 
Thanks for the reviews. :D

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Sunset Drive, theatre, next day, 2am

Riley: *smiles* Great movie, huh?

Lori: *sips soda* Mhm.

Riley: I know chick flicks aren't really your thing but hey *smiles* it's the quality time that's important, right?

Lori: Yeah. *looks around* Quality time.

Riley: Have you thought about coming back to the shop? I could really use a night manager.

Lori: I've got a thing coming up. *digs around purse*

Riley: Oh that's a shame. *grabs Lori's arm* Let's go for drinks!

Lori: Let's not.

Riley: We'll have virgin drinks.

Lori: ...I guess. *smirks*

Riley: Awesome!

Club, 2:15am

Riley: *places drinks on table* You have the tango mango.

Lori: *lifts brow* Interesting. *lifts glass*

Riley: *sits, smiles* Alright, here we go.

Lori: *looks around*

Riley: You seem a bit on edge, everything okay?

Lori: ...I don't really...party that much.

Riley: There's nothing wrong with it.

Lori: *tilts head* You don't party the way I do.

Riley: There's such a thing as innocent fun.

Lori: *nods*

Riley: Relax, Lori.

Lori: *sigh*

2:50am

Riley: WHEW! *runs over* You should have come dancin', it's GREAT!

Lori: *smirks* I don't really dance.

Riley: *grabs Guy* Jason, meet my sister, Lori.

Jason: *lifts hand* Hey.

Lori: *nods*

Riley: Do you and your friend want to join us?

Jason: Sure, if I can find the idiot. *turns around* HEY BRIAN!

Brian: *runs over* Yeah!

Jason: These ladies want a drink.

Brian: Sure, what are y'all havin'?

Lori: Oh I'm not drinking tonight.

Brian: *laughs* Yeah you are. *waves hand* Tequila!

Jason: YEAH!

Riley: *smiling*

Lori: Have you been drinking?

Riley: These fine gentlemen footed the bill so I thought why not!

Lori: *slides along booth* Maybe I should just get goin', I don't want to drag the night d-

Jason: *slides into booth, wraps arm around Lori* Aw come on, stay for a while.

Lori: I'm married.

Jason: So? *laughs* Nobody 'round here cares, baby.

Lori: Riley, I want to leave.

Riley: Have a drink. *places drink on table*

Lori: I don't want a drink, I want to go home. Please.

Brian: *slides into booth* How'd you like somethin' to calm the nerves, huh? *reaches into pocket, pulls out pills*

Lori: *looks at Riley* Why are you doing this?

Riley: Whew, I feel a bit woozy. *laughs*

Lori: *stares at Riley*

Riley: *staggers into booth, falls over*

Jason: *brushes hair from Lori's face, lifts pill* This'll mellow you out.

Lori: *looks at Jason* You drug all your dates?

Jason: Just the pretty ones.

Lori: *shoves Jason's arm* Let me and my sister go.

Jason: But we just started havin' fun.

Brian: *dumps pills into beer* Guess this one's feisty. *lifts beer to Lori's mouth* Drink it up sweetheart.

Lori: *looks at Brian* Piss up a rope, pumpkin.

Brian: *grabs Lori's mouth, dumps beer*

Lori: *elbows Brian in the throat*

Brian: UGH!

Lori: *shoves Jason*

Jason: *grabs Lori by the arm, drags her from booth*

Lori: *kicks at Jason* LET GO!

Jason: *slams fist into Lori's face*

Lori: *falls against wall, drops to floor*

Jason: *grabs Lori* Forget the other one! This one's hot!

Brian: *holding throat* Easy for you to say. *coughs*

Motel room

Jason: *tosses Lori onto bed*

Lori: *rolls over, holds head*

Jason: Get her clothes off.

Brian: No way, this is useless. None of this went according to plan.

Jason: She's not going anywhere.

Brian: We should leave.

Jason: Then get lost and stop bringin' my night down. *walks over to bed, grabs Lori by the hair*

Lori: *kicks Jason*

Jason: AGH!

Lori: *elbows Jason in the face*

Jason: *falls over onto bed*

Lori: *jumps off bed*

Brian: *grabs Lori, rips her shirt*

Lori: *knees Brian in the gut*

Brian: AH!

Lori: *grabs Brian by the hair, shoves his head into wall* ERGH!

Brian: *falls over*

Lori: *runs for door*

Inside club

Lori: *runs, kneels near booth* Riley! *grabs Riley's face* Riley! *looks around* SOMEONE HELP! HELP!

People look over

Lori: HELP!

TBC................................
 
Lori. KICKS. ASS! I agree, this was a bad idea, and it got worst when Riley got drugged, but damn if her suvival skills didn't kick in and in the appropriate time too. Now, she has to weather the repercussions of this jaunt and questions to answer. Thankfully, Lori nor Riley was hurt, that's what counts.


Awesome update!
 
Hi ah! look out her comes Action Lori again with the Kung fu grip! Lori use your head for something besides a hat rack! I'm sure one of you has a cell phone on you ! Call your Husband and his boyfriend other wise known as your Father to come and get you guys out of there now! Make it snappy girl before you have to fight your way out of there next!

Boy somebody's gonna be pissed,, and Sombody's gonna have a big headache in the morning when they get up!

Great update Geni !
 
Thanks so much for the reviews! :D

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Outside club, police cars & ambulances swarm

Scott: *slams truck door, pushes through crowd* Excuse me. *pushes past people* Excuse me, thank you. Lori!

Lori: *lifts eyes*

Scott: *walks over, wraps arms around Lori* Are you okay?

Lori: *stares blankly*

Scott: *lets go* What happened? Tom called, he said there was an incident.

Lori: ...I should have listened to you.

Tom: *walks over, writing* We got one of them but the other's in the wind.

Scott: *looks at Tom*

Tom: Riley's been taken to the hospital.

Scott: What happened?

Tom: Couple of guys have been going around clubs over the past few weeks drugging and raping women. We think the same guys were here tonight. I guess Lori fought them off when they took her to their motel room. CSU's processing the room.

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *lowers head*

Tom: I uh, need to process her for evidence. Why don't you take her to my car, it's parked out back.

Scott: Sure. *places hand on Lori's back*

Back parkinglot

Tom: Have a seat please.

Lori: *sits*

Tom: *pulls on gloves* Could you open the blanket?

Lori: Where's Scott.

Tom: You want him here for this?

Lori: I don't want you here for this.

Tom: *looks at Scott, nods*

Scott: *walks over*

Tom: *pulls camera from kit*

Lori: I don't want to do this.

Tom: We can't put the guy away unless you do.

Lori: *rolls eyes, opens blanket*

Tom: *lifts camera, snaps pictures*

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *crosses arms*

Tom: Okay, we're finished.

Lori: That's it?

Tom: That's it.

Lori: You're not going to swab or X-ray me or something?

Tom: Sorry, my kit's only big enough for the camera.

Lori: *frowns*

Tom: But you should go to the hospital and get checked out.

Lori: Why?

Tom: *smiles* They have special kits for you.

Lori: I got out before any of that could happen.

Tom: Good. I hope you kicked their asses.

Lori: *tilts head*

Tom: You can go.

Lori: *stands*

Tom: Good luck. *gets into car, shuts door*

Lori: I don't like cop Tom.

Scott: Really. I don't like regular Tom.

Lori: Before you say 'I told you so', I want you to know that I tried to leave.

Scott: Lori, this wasn't your fault.

Lori: ...I don't understand. You told me not to do this and I did and I got in trouble.

Scott: You didn't choose to be attacked.

Lori: I chose to go to a club. You know what, I've learned my lesson. I'm not doing this anymore. Everytime I try to do anything innocent or good, it gets fucked up. *walks away*

Scott: *sigh*

Miami Lab, layout room, 11am

Calleigh: *walks in* Hey do you have my dead girl's effects? Alexx said she sent them up here to be processed.

Speed: Yeah, I was just about to start.

Calleigh: Great. *pulls labcoat from rack*

Speed: *unfolds clothes*

Calleigh: This was what she was wearing when Eric grabbed her from the canal.

Speed: Yeah.

Calleigh: *lifts jeans* Oh, you know, I have these in black.

Speed: *looks at Calleigh*

Calleigh: I got them downtown from Levine's, they were having a sale.

Speed: *looks at jeans*

Calleigh: Hey doesn't your daughter own that place?

Speed: Riley owns the company, yes.

Calleigh: *shrugs* Small world.

Speed: Looks like there's something in the pocket.

Calleigh: *places jeans on table, reaches into pocket*

Speed: What is that, a receipt?

Calleigh: *opens paper* All the ink's been washed off.

Speed: So we don't know where it came from.

Calleigh: You know what, I think we can still track the place down. *turns receipt over* Some stores imprint barcodes on the back of the paper so if someone's returning an item, that information is stored on the paper.

Speed: Seems a little redundant.

Calleigh: Well, it stores the name of the customer and their phone number so if someone has the receipt and it doesn't belong to them, the store can verify that to deter theft.

Speed: And you'll be able to pull up the barcode?

Calleigh: *smiles* I'll get it to QD. *walks away*

Speed: *nods, looks down at clothing*

Questioned Documents Lab, 1pm

Calleigh: *typing*

Speed: *walks over, sits* Hey. Just got back from Alexx. Cause of death was drowning. Monica tested the water, it's consistent with water from a treated source so it's not the Glades.

Calleigh: She died before she was dumped.

Speed: *nods*

Calleigh: Well, Katie worked on the receipt and she pulled up a partial barcode from the back.

Speed: Can we use that?

Calleigh: I'll run it.

Speed: *looks at screen*

Calleigh: *types*

Speed: Where is Katie, anyway?

Calleigh: She's working on some security camera footage across the hall.

Speed: *looks across hall*

Calleigh: Ah! Here we go. Got a result.

Speed: *staring across hall*

Calleigh: Levine's. Same place she got the jeans.

Speed: *looks at screen*

Calleigh: Digital receipt. She bought the jeans yesterday at 4pm.

Speed: So we have a timeline. *opens folder, looks down* Time of death was between 7:30 and 8pm.

Calleigh: 4 hour window. You want to check out Levine's?

Speed: I'll catch up with you. *stands, walks away*

Calleigh: *blinks* Okay.

A/V Lab

Katie: *staring at screen*

Speed: *walks over* Hey.

Katie: Hey. *looks down at table, swings image up to wall*

Speed: New system?

Katie: Horatio ordered it.

Speed: It's nice.

Katie: *types* Can I help you with something?

Speed: We've barely spoken over the last couple weeks. I just wanted to see how you were.

Katie: I'm fine. *smiles* Thanks for asking.

Speed: *scratches head*

Katie: ...I'm sorry.

Speed: *looks at Katie*

Katie: I know I haven't been the greatest person to everyone. Especially Lori. I guess I have some issues.

Speed: *stares at Katie*

Katie: *sigh* Anyway. *looks up at screen* I have work to do.

Speed: *nods* See you tonight.

Katie: Yeah.

Speed: *walks away*

Katie: *lowers eyes*

TBC...............................
 
I see that Lori's come to the same conclusion that I have. It's just best to be safe than sorry. This could've ended up far worst than it did. I thought that Scott would be upset, but it turns out Lori was and with good measure. She never seems to get a break. Im glad that Scotty was understanding.

Speed and Katie talking again....it's a good step in the right direction, especially when Katie just admitted that she may have issues, although I beg to question the maybe...I'm pretty sure she has issues....

Awesome update!
 
woo hoo! i made the story again :D more me & delko please....LOL ok, maybe not

You go Lori, kick some ass...I likey her

Speed & Katie, awkward...

Great updates Geni!
 
Well at least the girls will be ok! kinda surprised Speed wasn't called for Riley though! I think he needs to have more interaction with the girls! Maybe they should go on a trip together or something, But leave Katie out of it! She could ruin the whole thing!

Lol! The two girls should kidnap Speed and take him to Disney World! Lol! make him go on all the rides ! That would be funny!

Great update Geni !
 
Thanks so much for the reviews! :)

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Levine's Fashion, 12:30pm

Calleigh: *steps up to counter* Hey I was wonderin' if I could speak to you for a minute.

Riley: *lifts head, smirks* Sure.

Calleigh: I'm Calleigh Duquesne with Miami PD, I'm investigating the homicide of Nina Brasen.

Riley: *nods* Riley Levine.

Calleigh: *smiles* You're Riley. Tim Speedle's daughter.

Riley: *stares at Calleigh*

Calleigh: *places photo on counter* This is the victim. She had a receipt in her pocket from this store. We believe she was here yesterday about 4 hours before her death.

Riley: *looks at photo* I may have seen her. Yeah, she wore the jeans out of the store.

Calleigh: Was she with anyone?

Riley: *scratches forehead* Um...she was with a man. They spent some time in the lingerie department and then she tried on some jeans.

Calleigh: Did anything seem strange or were they fighting?

Riley: I-I really couldn't tell you. I was dealing with an irate employee. *rubs forehead*

Calleigh: ...Are you okay?

Riley: Bad night.

Calleigh: I'm sorry to hear that.

Speed: *walks in*

Riley: *looks at Speed*

Calleigh: I was just asking Riley about the victim.

Riley: It's unfortunate what happened.

Speed: Do you have any security cameras?

Riley: A crime didn't happen here. You got a warrant?

Speed: *stares at Riley* ...We'd just like to piece together our victim's final hours.

Riley: She came in, she bought some stuff and then she and her boyfriend left.

Speed: Calleigh, excuse us please.

Calleigh: Oh sure.

Riley: No. She can stay.

Calleigh: *looks at Speed*

Speed: Calleigh...

Calleigh: *smiles* I'll be outside. *walks away*

Riley: *frowns*

Speed: What's up?

Riley: Just because I'm not beaming from ear-to-ear one day means there's something wrong? You can't just come in here and demand my security tapes because we know each other. You have to go through the proper channels.

Speed: ...Okay, I'll get a warrant.

Riley: Good. At least someone around here follows the law.

Speed: *squints* Are you okay?

Riley: No. No I'm not okay. I woke up in the hospital this morning and I don't know how the hell I got there. One of the doctors said I had GHB in my system.

Speed: How did that happen?

Riley: ...*shakes head* I don't know. I went to a movie with Lori and then we stopped off at a club and the next thing I know, I'm waking up in the hospital by myself.

Speed: ...You went with Lori.

Riley: Yes.

Speed: Were you hurt?

Riley: Apparently not but it's not like I wanted to be drugged.

Speed: Of course.

Riley: What do you care anyway? The only time you speak to me is when I initiate the interaction. You're my only family and you don't even call me.

Speed: Riley, y-

Riley: I'm your first-born child for christ's sake!

Speed: Calm d-

Riley: GET OUT!

Speed: *blinks*

Riley: NOW!

Speed: Alright. *walks away*

Riley: *leans on counter*

Outside

Calleigh: What was that about?

Speed: Rough night. Let's go.

Calleigh: ...Right.

APL Manhattan Miami, 1pm

Scott: *walks into office* I'll just be a minute.

Lori: That's fine. *steps in*

Scott: *opens cabinet, grabs file*

Lori: *walks over*

Scott: *turns around, opens desk drawer*

Lori: *peeks into cabinet*

Scott: *writes*

Lori: *pulls out folder, opens it*

Scott: *flips page, writes* Just have to send this off to HR and then we can go.

Lori: ...Divorce papers.

Scott: *lifts head, looks at Lori*

Lori: You really considered it.

Scott: ...Yeah.

Lori: And you just...never got around to throwing this away or...do you forsee yourself needing this?

Scott: *closes folder, stands straight* I was moving a lot of stuff around. That should have been in the shredder.

Lori: Mhm. When I saw your condo in New York, my first thought was 'organized'. You don't seem like the kind of guy who accidentally leaves something where it shouldn't be.

Scott: It was an honest mistake, Lori.

Lori: *stares at Scott*

Scott: *takes folder* I'll get rid of it.

Lori: *nods*

Scott: Ready to go?

Lori: Sure.

Elevator

Scott: *presses button*

Lori: *stares at doors*

Scott: *grabs Lori's hand*

Lori: Trying to get yourself out of the doghouse?

Scott: No.

Lori: *narrows eyes*

Elevator doors open

Scott: *steps off elevator*

Lori: *follows* Where are we going for lunch?

Scott: We're not going for lunch.

Lori: *lifts brow* We're not?

Everglades, air strip, 1:40pm

Lori: *looks up at plane* Uh, Scott, I know you're a busy guy but lunch on a plane isn't exactly my idea of quality time with my husband.

Scott: I told you, we're not going for lunch. We're going for dinner. *walks up steps*

Lori: *follows* Um...where?

Inside plane

Scott: *gestures to chair*

Lori: *sits*

Scott: Paris.

Lori: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *sits*

Lori: *blinks* You're taking me to Paris for dinner?

Scott: Yep.

Lori: Why?

Scott: *smiles, grabs champagne glass* Because I love you.

Lori: What about the kids?

Scott: Your father's taking them for the night.

Lori: We're staying overnight?

Scott: *lifts eyes, pours champagne*

Lori: ...How long have you been planning this?

Scott: Never you mind. *hands over glass*

Lori: *eyes Scott, takes glass*

Scott: *drinks*

Lori: I hope you know French.

Scott: *lifts English/French dictionary*

Lori: *laughs*

Scott: *smiling* First thing one learns in Boy Scouts. Be prepared.

Lori: You were a Boy Scout.

Scott: Mhm. Although, not a very good one.

Lori: *smirks, sips champagne*

TBC...................................
 
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