CSI:Miami RT #12 - 'Road To Nowhere'

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  1. CSISDFlash

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    Lol! Leave it to Katie to get naked at the drop of a hat in front of Tom! lol! Tom is gonna get his but kicked if he doesn't stop telling Steph all the nasty stuff lol !

    Maybe since Katie has fake boobs Speed should get a penis pump implanted to solve his problems! lol! that would be totally funny for him to explain! Of course i'm sure Katie will be more than glad to show it to everyone and explain who it works! lol!

    Hey, Just sayin!

    Great update Geni!
     
  2. Anni Grey

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    Tom is just a barrel of laughs ... And he's surrounded by women... two of which he's been intimate with. YES...this day can't get any more interesting that that.:guffaw: As always, he's being inappropriate in only the cutest ways...LOL


    Gotta love Tom...


    Awesome update!
     
  3. Finch

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    Oh Flash. :lol: You're breaking the PG-13-O-Meter. :p

    Heh. Thanks for the reviews! :D

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    Biscayne Park, house, 11pm

    Anni: *reaches out* Give me baby.

    Tom: *hands over Tayla*

    Anni: *grabs Tayla* You really want another one of these. *sits on bed*

    Tom: *crawls onto bed* Yeah, why not?

    Anni: Babies cost money.

    Tom: We've got plenty.

    Anni: Uh, plenty for us and 2 kids.

    Tom: *nods*

    Anni: Honey, it's just not going to happen.

    Tom: I know.

    Anni: I'm sorry.

    Tom: *smirks* It's okay. Besides, I can just tell by the look of this one that she'll be a handfull.

    Anni: *smiles*

    Gables Estates, house, 12am

    Lori: *sits on couch, sips tea*

    Steph: *walks downstairs*

    Lori: *lifts eyes* Hey. Bed.

    Steph: *climbs onto couch* You're not in bed, Momma.

    Lori: That's because I'm a grown-up.

    Steph: *lies head on Lori's shoulder* ...I wish Tommy was my daddy.

    Lori: *sigh* No you don't.

    Steph: He never leaves me.

    Lori: *wraps arm around Steph*

    Steph: *starts to cry*

    Lori: *hugs Steph*

    Condo, 1am

    Katie: *sits up, turns on light* I have a question.

    Speed: *frowns* Sleep.

    Katie: Do you think I'm getting old?

    Speed: No. Sleep.

    Katie: I'm serious.

    Speed: Katie, who cares.

    Katie: I do.

    Speed: *sits up* Okay, look, you're not 18 anymore. It's a damn shame but hey, we've all moved on.

    Katie: I don't know what that's supposed to mean. Are you saying I'm old?

    Speed: You're beautiful. But you're not a...short skirt kind of woman anymore, y'know?

    Katie: But I hate all that old lady stuff.

    Speed: You don't have to dress like an old lady. You can be classy.

    Katie: Ugh.

    Speed: You're always saying how you want people to respect you. Maybe if you...got naked a little bit less in public...

    Katie: What does this have to do with me being old?

    Speed: It's all about perception. Stop trying to be 18, start trying to be the mature woman that you are.

    Katie: Don't say mature. That's just a PC way of saying old.

    Speed: I give up. *lies down*

    Katie: *turns out light, lies down*

    Speed: *kisses Katie* Love you.

    Katie: *smiles*

    Gables Estates, house, bedroom

    Lori: *kneels, wipes Steph's cheek* Bed time.

    Steph: *sniffs*

    Lori: I know it's hard to be without your father but it's for the best that he's not here.

    Steph: Why?

    Lori: He's sick.

    Steph: But he's getting better.

    Lori: It's going to take longer than 3 months, sweetie.

    Steph: Why?

    Lori: Steph, you need to go to sleep.

    Steph: No.

    Lori: Go.

    Steph: *frowns*

    Lori: Now.

    Steph: *turns around, climbs into bed*

    Lori: *stands*

    Steph: *hugs shirt*

    Lori: Why don't I get you a new shirt.

    Steph: No. Daddy wore it when he helped me build my playhouse.

    Lori: *sigh* Steph...

    Steph: Night, Momma. *closes eyes*

    Lori: *nods* Night.

    TBC..............................
     
  4. Anni Grey

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    Poor Steph, she's getting the bad end of the stick here. I wish that Scott would just go ahead and get better! Steph needs her Daddy!!!

    -Katie....mature....riiiight...

    -Aww, Speed loves Katie. I'm sure there's something out there to cure that...Jk...It's super sweet he's finally opened up to her :D

    - Tom and babies... I think Brooklyn and Tayla are enough. I think he'll think so in about eighteen to nineteen years too :D The thought be careful what you wish for comes to mind... :)

    Awesome update!
     
  5. CSISDFlash

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    Aww that was a sweet Katie and Speed moment! Maybe she will straighten up and act her age a little more! Not! Its Katie right! Speed would start being like Scott if Katie changed and acted like she should wouldn't he!

    Aww Tom would like to have another baby! How sweet! I say give him one! WTH they deserve it !

    Poor Steph! She so sad and confused about whats wrong with her Daddy and she clinging to his shirt for comfort. Maybe he will get better then again maybe he want. Who knows.

    Great update Geni!

    P.S. I didn't use forbidden sexual references! I said that in a nice way I could have been a lot more explicit! Lol! I just think Speed needs to bust out and get some help with his man problems! Maybe he needs the little blue pill! do something! Help the man Geni! lol!
     
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    Awwwwwww... *huggles Steph* Poor thing. :(

    That fashion show was hilarious! :lol:

    Tom and the freaking steaks... too damn funny. :D

    Katie talking about knowing the full extent of gravity was funny too.

    Great updates! :D
     
  7. Finch

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    Thanks for the reviews. :D

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    Gables Estates, house, backyard, 2 weeks later

    Steph: *swings legs in pool*

    Dominick: *pokes at grass with stick*

    Scott: *steps around back, smirks*

    Steph: *looks back, eyes widen* DADDY!

    Scott: *smiles*

    Steph: *jumps up, runs*

    Scott: *kneels*

    Steph: *hugs Scott*

    Scott: *wraps arms around Steph*

    Dominick: *runs over, grabs Scott's arm*

    Scott: *looks at Dominick, smiling* Hey buddy.

    Dominick: *hugs Scott*

    Scott: Where's Mom?

    Steph: She's upstairs with Bobby.

    Scott: *smile fades* Bobby.

    Steph: Yup. So we're supposed to stay in the backyard and I'm supposed to make sure Dom doesn't get hurt.

    Scott: *brushes hair from Steph's cheek* You guys got so big.

    Steph: Look! *pulls lip down* I lost some more baby teeth.

    Scott: *smiles*

    Dominick: *lies head on Scott's shoulder*

    Scott: *sigh*

    Steph: Are you coming home?

    Scott: Not for a little while.

    Steph: You don't look sick anymore.

    Scott: I'll try to visit as much as I can.

    Steph: Daddy don't go.

    Scott: I have to.

    Dominick: NO.

    Scott: *places hand on Dominick's head*

    Dominick: *starts to cry*

    Scott: It's okay.

    Steph: *looks back* Uh oh, Momma's coming.

    Scott: *lifts head*

    Lori: *steps outside*

    Scott: *stands*

    Lori: What the hell are you doing here?

    Scott: I-I'm back in Miami. Just thought I'd stop by.

    Lori: Get out.

    Scott: *lowers head*

    Steph: Momma let him stay.

    Lori: You need to leave.

    Scott: I just wanted to see them.

    Bob: *walks over* What's goi-...Scott.

    Scott: *looks at Bob*

    Bob: I see you're back in Miami. Nice hair.

    Scott: *looks at Lori*

    Lori: *sigh* ...30 minutes. That's it.

    Scott: Thank you.

    Lori: *sits in chair* Go.

    Scott: *grabs Steph's hand* Let's go hang out, okay?

    Steph: *smiles*

    Grass

    Dominick: *jumps onto Scott's back*

    Scott: Oof. *falls over, smiles*

    Dominick: *cackles*

    Steph: Daddy come play soccer.

    Scott: Oh you're a little sports star now?

    Steph: Yup. *grabs soccer ball*

    Patio

    Lori: *sips iced tea*

    Bob: *sits in chair* Think he knows about us?

    Lori: Definitely.

    Bob: Think he's pissed?

    Lori: I think his only concern right now is the kids.

    Bob: He looks good. The hair's a little out there for him but I could get used to it.

    Lori: *sigh*

    Bob: What exactly do you plan on telling him about us?

    Lori: *looks at Bob* You're not going to talk to him?

    Bob: *smiles* You're adorable.

    Lori: *frowns*

    Bob: I should take off. *kisses Lori's cheek*

    Lori: Coward.

    Bob: Prudent. *stands* See you tomorrow. *walks away*

    Lori: *sips iced tea*

    Steph: *runs over* MOMMA! I beat Daddy!

    Lori: That's great.

    Scott: *walks over*

    Steph: *whispers* I don't like Daddy's hair.

    Lori: *smirks*

    Scott: *sits*

    Dominick: *climbs into Scott's lap*

    Scott: *wraps arm around Dominick*

    Steph: Where are you gonna be livin'?

    Scott: Just across town. Miami Shores.

    Steph: Can we come see you?

    Scott: I'm not sure, I'll have to ask.

    Steph: Momma, can Daddy stay for dinner?

    Lori: *opens magazine* No.

    Steph: Why?

    Lori: He has to go unpack.

    Scott: *looks at watch* Not for a couple hours.

    Lori: *frowns*

    Steph: *smiles* So Daddy can stay.

    Lori: ...I suppose so.

    Steph: YAY!

    TBC.................................
     
  8. Anni Grey

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    And the ice thaws... I'm so glad that Lori was able to let go and allow him that time. I thought it cute though, that Bob hightailed it out of there. I agree...it was very prudent. Lori has a very complex life now, but she's doing the best she can, which is pretty good right now...

    Awesome update!
     
  9. Finch

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    Thanks for the review. :D

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    Gables Estates, house, kitchen, 8pm

    Lori: *washes plates*

    Scott: *steps over*

    Lori: You can go now.

    Scott: ...He's a good guy.

    Lori: *lifts eyes*

    Scott: Bob.

    Lori: *lowers head* Yeah, he is.

    Scott: Have you uh-

    Lori: It's none of your business.

    Scott: Not saying it's a bad thing.

    Lori: Drop it.

    Scott: He has my company and my wife and you expect me to drop it?

    Lori: *looks at Scott* So now I'm your wife again.

    Scott: *rubs eyes* Okay, why don't I just start over. I'm happy for you.

    Lori: You'd better damn well be after what you put me through.

    Scott: *stares at Lori* Is this how it's going to be between us? Insults and snark? We're separated, fine. I was a complete asshole, I can accept that. But for the sake of the kids, can't we just try to get along like human beings?

    Lori: The kids aren't even in the room.

    Scott: You know what I mean, Lori.

    Lori: I really wish it was as easy for me to forgive you as it is for you to forgive yourself.

    Scott: *laughs* Wow. Nobody said I forgave myself.

    Lori: Sure seems like it.

    Scott: Forget it. I'll call you sometime.

    Lori: Changed my number.

    Scott: *looks at Lori*

    Lori: *crosses arms*

    Scott: Why?

    Lori: In case you decided to harrass me.

    Scott: Why would I do that?

    Lori: Why would you shoot up valium?

    Scott: *sigh*

    Lori: *steps over* I don't know if I want to 'get along' with you after everything.

    Scott: *nods*

    Lori: ...But maybe I'll just have to try.

    Scott: *stares at Lori*

    Lori: *reaches up, runs hands through Scott's hair* Please cut this.

    Scott: I like it.

    Lori: Ergh. *slams head into Scott's chest*

    Scott: *wraps arm around Lori*

    Lori: I'm still mad at you.

    Scott: Understandably.

    Lori: *wraps arms around Scott*

    Scott: *kisses Lori's head*

    Lori: You need to go do your sober house stuff.

    Scott: Right.

    Lori: *steps back*

    Scott: May I have your new number?

    Lori: ...Actually I didn't change it. I was just pissed off at you.

    Scott: *nods*

    Lori: Go say goodbye to the kids.

    Scott: *walks away*

    Lori: Ugh. *leans against fridge*

    Inside car, 10pm

    Speed: *grabs binoculars*

    Tom: See the suspect yet?

    Speed: Correct me if I'm wrong but Calleigh was supposed to be given this detail.

    Tom: I switched with her.

    Speed: *looks at Tom* And she just agreed.

    Tom: Yeah, I said you'd be looking out for me. *smiles*

    Speed: Great.

    Tom: *opens folder*

    Speed: *lowers binoculars* ...You've seen a lot of women, right?

    Tom: *laughs* Yeah. You could say that.

    Speed: Do you find Katie...attractive?

    Tom: *looks at Speed*

    Speed: For her age, I mean.

    Tom: Did she tell you about the naked thing?

    Speed: *lifts brow*

    Tom: Sure, she's hot. Why?

    Speed: She thinks she's too old.

    Tom: What did you tell her?

    Speed: ...I told her she should act her age.

    Tom: No no no. That's the wrong answer. Never tell the truth.

    Speed: I shouldn't even be asking you. Your idea of a beautiful woman is her ability to be inflated.

    Tom: Ouch.

    Speed: *looks out window*

    Tom: Katie was your first love, huh.

    Speed: Yeah.

    Tom: Must be nice to love somebody for that long. I can't stand her for more than 10 minutes.

    Speed: She's an aquired taste.

    Tom: *nods*

    Speed: How about you? You have any 'first loves'?

    Tom: Lori.

    Speed: Forget I asked.

    Tom: If it makes you feel better, Anni's way more classy. Not a wh-

    Speed: *looks at Tom*

    Tom: ...I'm just not going to finish that sentence.

    TBC.......................
     
  10. Anni Grey

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    At least they are on the same path...well...maybe not on the same path, but looking down the same road. It's cool that Lori's still got hesitancies, but also cool that she's willing to over look them. She didn't seem like the type to hold grudges.

    Speed and Tom...seriously...you should've done this waaaaaaaaaaay earlier! The two of them together...hysterics. I couldn't stop laughing... That's just the way I like my RT...


    Awesome update!
     
  11. CSISDFlash

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    Well i'm not sure I like Scott and Lori anymore! Hmm ! I was kinda diggin the Bob & Lori thing thats going on. I don't know I sorta like their vibe they have together. I really think Bob should fight for her. I really think they make a great couple! Scott can always find another woman to make him happy for a while.

    Now Speed asking Tom about what he thinks about Katie is just to damn funny. whats wrong with Speed, hes sleeping with her does he have to have another opinion to back up what he feels for her! Oh Speed you silly silly man! trust your gut, you obviously think shes still hot and you obviously still love her or you wouldn't be living with her, but you and Tom talking about her thats just so damn funny!

    Great update Geni!
     
  12. racefh853629

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    I really do love Tom and Speed together. They are freaking fantastic. And hilarious. :lol:

    I can't decide- Scott and Lori or Bob and Lori. Because I want everyone to be happy.

    Scott and the kids are adorable. Dom's quite the troublemaker, huh? :lol:

    Awesome updates!
     
  13. Finch

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    Hee. :) Thanks for the reviews!

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    Biscayne Park, house, 6am

    Tom: Thanks for the ride back.

    Speed: *nods*

    Tom: *picks up Tayla*

    Speed: She's getting bigger.

    Tom: Yeah. She's looking more and more like her mother everyday. Thank God.

    Speed: *smirks*

    Tom: *wipes Tayla's cheek*

    Brook: *runs downstairs* DADDY!

    Speed: *looks at Brook*

    Tom: Shh, you'll wake everyone.

    Brook: *jumps onto couch* I'm hungry.

    Tom: I'll get you some cereal. C'mon. *walks away*

    Brook: *jumps off couch, falls over*

    Speed: *blinks*

    Brook: *stands, straightens out clothes*

    Speed: *smirks*

    Brook: *runs away*

    Speed: *looks back*

    Kitchen

    Tom: *places bowl on table*

    Brook: *climbs into chair*

    Tom: *dumps cereal into bowl*

    Brook: Daddy I want milk.

    Tom: Right. *walks away*

    Speed: *stares at Brook*

    Brook: *lifts eyes*

    Speed: Hey.

    Brook: Hi.

    Tom: *walks over, pours milk into bowl*

    Brook: *picks up spoon*

    Tom: *walks away*

    Brook: Daddy's spinny.

    Speed: That he is.

    Brook: *smiles*

    Anni: *walks over*

    Speed: *looks at Anni*

    Anni: ...It's 3 years ago.

    Speed: Don't worry, I think Tom just went to change the baby.

    Anni: *smiles* How was the steakout?

    Speed: Unproductive. Tom kept pointing out all the hookers he slep-I'm sure someone will pick up where we left off.

    Anni: *places hands on hips*

    Speed: So um...how'd you sleep?

    Anni: *steps over* Fine.

    Speed: Good.

    Anni: Did you eat on the way over here?

    Speed: Yeah, why?

    Anni: You've got sauce on your shirt.

    Speed: *looks down*

    Anni: *walks over to sink, grabs cloth* Come here.

    Speed: *steps over*

    Anni: *turns around, wipes shirt*

    Speed: *lowers eyes*

    Anni: I guess a bib wouldn't have been manly enough.

    Speed: Not at all.

    Anni: Hm. It's probably going to stain anyway.

    Speed: At least it's not blood this time.

    Anni: *smiles*

    Speed: *looks at Brook*

    Brook: *munches on cereal*

    Anni: *smile fades* ...Katie's probably waiting for you.

    Speed: Yeah.

    Anni: You should...take her for a night sometime.

    Speed: *lifts brow* Brook?

    Anni: How 'bout it?

    Speed: *lowers head* I don't think so. It'd just be uncomfortable for everyone.

    Anni: *places hands on Speed's cheeks* Please take her.

    Speed: *looks at Anni*

    Anni: She's been driving me insane.

    Speed: *nods*

    Tom: *walks over*

    Anni: *turns around, smiles* Good news. Tim's taking Brook home.

    Tom: What? Why?

    Anni: Oh relax, he's going to bring her back.

    Tom: *looks at Speed*

    Speed: *crosses arms*

    Tom: *nods*

    Condo, 8am

    Katie: Can you explain to me why there's a child in my house?

    Speed: I thought you wanted kids.

    Katie: Uh yeah, some of my own.

    Brook: *climbs onto couch*

    Speed: *whispers* Yeah well this one is one of my own.

    Katie: Scott's coming over to pick up some sheets.

    Speed: Why?

    Katie: He moved across town and they didn't provide the bedding.

    Speed: He has money.

    Katie: Lori locked him out, he's as poor as we are.

    Doorbell rings

    Katie: *walks away*

    Brook: *tugs on Speed's shirt*

    Speed: *looks down*

    Brook: I want cartoons.

    Speed: Sure. *walks around couch, grabs remote*

    Brook: *sits*

    Speed: *sits, flips on channel*

    Brook: *stares at television*

    Upstairs, hallway

    Katie: *opens closet, grabs bedding* How does it feel to be like us normals?

    Scott: ...I wasn't normal before?

    Katie: Um...no. *turns around* And for pete's sake, boy. Get a haircut. *shoves bedding into Scott's chest*

    Scott: *grabs bedding*

    Katie: You look like a lion.

    Scott: *smiles*

    Katie: Oh don't give me that million dollar smile, I'm not buying it. You go get better.

    Scott: Yes ma'am.

    Katie: *slaps Scott on the back*

    Scott: *walks away*

    Katie: *narrows eyes*

    TBC......................................
     
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    Oh aww...Speed gets to bond with Brook! I think it's going to be a good thing. Brook needs all the support and help she can get, and having two fathers isn't that bad of a deal. I think things will work out.

    I see no one likes Scott's hair all long...I say, let him be free and wild while he's getting himself together, and the first time he's back, then you can slam him into the barber's chair:guffaw: ...So much change, so many dynamics...What a web, Geni, what a web:D


    Awesome update!
     
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    Aww Yay! Speed's actually bonding with his child! I think its a good thing. He needs to have some time with Brook. Katie need to take a chill pill and learn to seal with it!

    Scott you need to go get that mop cut off ya head boy! We don't want none of them hippy boys runnin round here ! lol!

    great update Geni!
     
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