CSI:Miami RT #12 - 'Road To Nowhere'

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Go Dom! :D

I love the family time. So cute. :D

I hope Scott and Lori can make it through this... and that Scott's getting better.

Great update! :D
 
Thanks so much for the lovely reviews. :)

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Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 11pm

Lori: *kisses Scott*

Scott: *sigh* I love you.

Lori: *smiles* Love you. *lies on bed*

Scott: *smirks*

Lori: It was sure nice of my parents to keep the kids overnight at their place.

Scott: *lies down* I don't know, I would have liked them to st-

Lori: *kisses Scott*

Scott: -Okay nevermind I get it.

Lori: *laughs*

Scott: *smiles*

Lori: *throws Scott's shirt*

Scott: *grabs at Lori's jeans*

Doorbell rings

Lori: *frowns* No.

Scott: It might be important.

Lori: Nothing else is important.

10 minutes later

Lori: *grabs Scott's hair*

Scott: *rolls Lori over*

Lori: *smirks*

Doorbell rings

Lori: *frowns* NO. *jumps out of bed, runs downstairs*

Scott: *sigh*

Foyer

Lori: *opens door* WHAT!

Tom: ...Are you okay?

Lori: What the hell do you want.

Tom: You weren't answering the door.

Lori: Yes. That's because it's 11 o'clock at night. Go. Away.

Tom: Can I come in?

Lori: No you may not.

Tom: Lori, I'm just trying to-

Scott: *walks downstairs*

Tom: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *stares at Tom, steps over* Everything okay?

Tom: I...I thought you were in the hospital.

Scott: I'm out.

Tom: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *scratches head*

Tom: *looks at Scott* ...I-I'm sorry. I-

Lori: When you were away, Tom stopped by every night after work to make sure me and the kids were okay.

Scott: I see.

Lori: I kept telling him he didn't need to do that but apparently he felt...responsible or some nonsense.

Scott: *nods*

Tom: *lowers head* I didn't mean to interrupt anything. I'm sorry. *turns around, walks away*

Scott: *looks at Lori*

Lori: ...Should I talk to him?

Scott: No it's okay, I'll do it. *walks outside*

Lori: *leans on door*

Driveway

Tom: *opens car door*

Scott: *grabs door* Hey w-

Tom: I don't want to cause any trouble. My intentions were purely out of friendship, nothing more.

Scott: I'm not angry.

Tom: No offense but I'd rather not take any chances on that and end up at the other side of your fist.

Scott: Tom, I get it. You care about her. *tilts head* Most of the time. You aren't forbidden to be worried about your friends.

Tom: So you're just going to ignore the fact that she used to use my bed as her own personal playground.

Scott: Next time use a phone.

Tom: *nods*

Scott: *walks away*

Inside house

Lori: And?

Scott: *shuts door* And nothing.

Lori: *crosses arms*

Scott: He went home.

Lori: Obviously.

Scott: He did this every day?

Lori: I think he feels bad about hurting me.

Scott: Right.

Lori: *walks upstairs*

Scott: *looks at door*

TBC..............................
 
Leave it to Tom...LOL AND just when Lori and Scotty were going to reconnect. At least Tom was stoppingin and checking on them, but he might want to rethink that from now on...and maybe start to understand that his retribution is paid. NOW..GO HOME TO YOUR WIFE..:guffaw:

Awesome update!
 
Thanks so much for the reviews!

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Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 8am

Lori: *sighs*

Scott: *wraps arm around Lori, kisses her shoulder*

Lori: ...Still want to kill me?

Scott: *smiles*

Biscayne Park, house, kitchen

Anni: *drinks coffee*

Tom: *bounces Brook on knee, reading paper*

Anni: ...So you were...in a mental hospital.

Tom: Mhm.

Anni: Trying to save Scott.

Tom: Well it didn't start out that way but the guy looked terrible and the owner of the place was a complete lunatic.

Anni: I knew you were with Lori, I guess I just didn't figure it wasn't your doing.

Tom: *lifts head*

Anni: *digs at cereal*

Tom: ...What's that supposed to mean?

Anni: You've been spending an awful lot of time with her lately.

Tom: She's my friend.

Anni: Katie's also Tim's friend.

Tom: I'm not sleeping with her. I was just making sure she and the kids were okay while Scott was gone.

Anni: Why? She's a strong girl. She doesn't need some guy hanging over her shoulder.

Tom: ...I guess I felt guilty.

Anni: For hurting her.

Tom: Not my most endearing moment.

Anni: I have to wonder what you would have done had I been the one to tell you about the failed pregnancy.

Tom: *lowers head*

Anni: We'll be okay, Tom.

Brook: *grabs newspaper, flips page*

Tom: *kisses Brook's head*

Anni: *takes Tom's hand*

Tom: *squeezes Anni's hand*

Anni: *smirks*

Tom: *looks at Anni*

Miami Lab, trace lab

Speed: *staring through microscope*

Katie: *runs in* Like it?

Speed: *lifts eyes*

Katie: I'm wearing one of these neat business suit thingies.

Speed: *stares at Katie*

Katie: I know how you don't like when the cleavage upstages the female brain.

Speed: It's a nice color on you.

Katie: *looks down, smiles* Oh I know. Grey is definitely something I could get used to.

Speed: *pulls folder over*

Katie: Now will you sleep with me?

Speed: *clicks pen*

Katie: Tim.

Speed: *writes*

Katie: Y'know, when women do this, we're considered bitches.

Speed: I'm not making you do anything and I'm not holding anything back.

Katie: Except you are.

Speed: Just because I'm not crawling all over you 24/7 does not mean I'm being a jackass.

Katie: *rolls eyes* Sober Tim is boring.

Speed: Mhm.

Katie: You aren't even listening.

Speed: You said I'm boring.

Katie: ...Why must you torture me relentlessly?

TBC..................................
 
:guffaw: Katie is trying her best to get Speed to sleep with her. She just doesn't understand that he doesn't want to make the same mistakes over again. I think when she does understand that things would go a lot smoother for her. Really...she's been the sex pot, the 'businesswoman', how about she just be Katie... Novel idea, right?


I'm glad that Anni confronted Tom about his time spent away from her. I'm also glad that while she has her misgivings about their 'friendship', she still gives him trust. She must really love him, and in turn, he loves her. I'm so glad that they can come to terms about it.

How awesome, Lori and Scotty are reconnecting! I'm very glad about it all!

Awesome updates!
 
Oh, man. Katie's trying so hard, and Speed's resisting. :lol:

Scott and Lori are so cute together. I hope they stay that way. Same goes for Tom and Anni. :D

Great updates! :D
 
HA HA HA!! Katie is getting mad, I think I like sober Speed

OH NO, what is Anni getting at..oh wait never mind, I know....LOL

Aww....Scott & Lori
 
Thanks so much for the reviews! :D

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Gables Estates, house, 2pm

Lori: *wiping table*

Katie: You bought groceries. *opens bag*

Lori: Yeah.

Katie: *pulls out can* Oooh you have the high-end soup. *lifts package* And expensive steaks. Is there some sort of Gables Estates grocery store I'm not aware of?

Lori: It was a Wal-Mart in Kendall.

Katie: *looks down at steak* Wow I'm cheap.

Lori: *smirks*

Scott: *walks over* Hey.

Lori: Wow, I thought you went to work.

Scott: *kisses Lori*

Lori: *smiles*

Scott: *places thumb on Lori's cheek* How was your afternoon?

Lori: Mm, it's getting better.

Scott: *smiles*

Katie: *lifts brow*

Scott: I'll be upstairs.

Lori: *sigh* Okay.

Scott: *walks away*

Lori: *staring blankly*

Katie: ...*waves hand* Hellooo. *pinches Lori*

Lori: *blinks* Ow. *looks at Katie* What?

Katie: What's up with the dreamy eyes? You only ever get like that with Tom, not your husband.

Lori: *frowns*

Katie: *reaches into bag, pulls out cans* Why did you buy so many cans of lentils?

Lori: Excuse me. *walks upstairs*

Katie: Oooh oreos. *opens box*

Upstairs, bedroom

Lori: *runs in, shuts door*

Scott: *turns around*

Lori: We got 10 minutes.

Scott: *smirks*

Kitchen

Katie: *munches on oreos*

Dominick: *stares at Katie*

Katie: You want a cookie? *dangles cookie*

Dominick: *grabs at cookie*

Katie: *pulls cookie away* HA HA!

Dominick: *frowns*

Katie: Here, have a cookie. *dangles cookie*

Dominick: *reaches up*

Katie: *pulls cookie away* HA HA! LOSER!

Dominick: *starts to cry*

Katie: *wide-eyed* No no! It was a joke! Just a joke! Here, have the cookie.

Dominick: *takes cookie, sniffles*

Katie: Aw you poor thing, I'm sorry. *hugs Dominick*

Dominick: *yanks Katie's hair*

Katie: OW!

Dominick: *giggles*

Katie: *frowns* You little manipulative bast-

Lori: *runs downstairs* Back!

Katie: *looks at Lori*

Lori: *straightens out clothes* Did you put my groceries away?

Katie: No, I ate half of them though.

Lori: *looks at Dominick*

Dominick: *nibbles cookie*

Scott: *walks downstairs*

Katie: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *opens fridge*

Katie: So...did y'all get that out of your system?

Lori: I don't know what you're talking about. *grabs oreo box* Stop eating my groceries.

Katie: Just like you didn't know what I was talking about when I caught you with Tom in the back seat of your truck.

Lori: *looks at Katie*

Scott: *lifts head*

Katie: ...Or maybe that's what happened on Days of Our Lives last week. I can't remember.

Lori: *frowns*

Katie: OH! But you did tell Tom about that STD, right? You're supposed to tell all your partners.

Lori: Clearly Dad wasn't the only one who needed therapy.

Katie: Scotty, you should get tested. I hear gonorrhea is a bitch to get rid of.

Lori: *stares at Katie*

Scott: *closes fridge* I'm fine but thanks for the suggestion.

Katie: *smiles* Just trying to help.

Lori: *slams box onto table, walks away*

Katie: *takes box*

Scott: *sits at table* Why do you do that?

Katie: Do what? *eats oreos*

Scott: Dig at her like that.

Katie: *shrugs* It's all in good fun.

Scott: ...You accused her of having an STD.

Katie: *laughs* Not like she's never had one before. You should have seen her when she first got back to Miami, she was a mess inside and out.

Scott: And you think jokes like that are funny.

Katie: Mhm. She gets a real kick out of 'em.

Scott: I don't. Refrain from that behaviour in my house.

Katie: *stares at Scott*

Scott: Otherwise you'll no longer be welcome here.

Katie: You're telling me what to do.

Scott: *stares at Katie*

Katie: I can tell my daughter whatever the hell I want.

Scott: Not in my house and not in front of me.

Katie: *frowns* And to think I almost considered having an affair with you. *stands, leaves*

Scott: *shakes head*

TBC................................
 
KATIE !!! Jeeezus~! Does she ever quit! Give it a rest! would someone please call the loony bend and reserve the little padded room for her please! Damn ! Is their knowone that can calm her down!

Note to Speed!

Speed could you please do something with your woman! I don't know tie her to the bed post or something and tell her you will dance naked if she shut up and lays off the Lori bashing!! My god that woman needs some major therapy!

Poor Lori! She finally gets Speed to back off of her and she still has to put up with Motor mouth! If I were her I would accidentally cause her to take a one way trip somewhere and pretend I never knew her at all!

Great update Geni!
 
I agree with Flash. Katie's clearly inappropriate and clearly needs help. Seriously, she needs help. I love how Scott took up for Lori, well....I wouldn't say take up for Lori, bc if Lori wanted to, she'd let her mother out of the front door in her own little way*smirks* . And that is the reason why I so love Lori.

I'd say, seriously....Get some help Katie. Seriously.
 
Does Katie not quit. WTF is her problem. She needs to leave Lori & Scott alone. Can't the girl get a break!

Great update Geni
 
Oh, man. Katie needs to freaking learn what a mental filter is and how to use it. My goodness... Poor Lori. :(

And poor Dom, too. At least he eventually did get the cookie... :)

Great update! :D
 
Thanks so much for the reviews! :)
 
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Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 6pm

Scott: *knocks on door, steps in* ...Lori? *looks around* ...*walks over to bathroom, knocks on door* ...Lori. What your mother said, it...it was completely uncalled for and you didn't deserve that.

5 minutes later

Scott: Lori. I'm coming in. *opens door, steps in*

Lori: *lifts eyes*

Scott: Jesus. *shuts door* Have you been sitting in the tub the whole
time?

Lori: ...It was a shower half the time.

Scott: *walks over, sits on floor* This is about what your mother said.

Lori: *runs hand through hair* ...She always tries to make me feel filthy.
Maybe it makes her feel better about her problems.

Scott: Maybe.

Lori: *sniffs, wipes eyes* Pass me a towel.

Scott: *grabs towel*

Lori: *takes towel* Give me a hand.

Scott: *stands, extends hand*

Lori: *wraps towel around self, steps out of tub, staggers forward*

Scott: Whoa. *looks into tub* How many glasses of wine did you have?

Lori: Enough.

Scott: Obviously.

Lori: *grabs bottle*

Scott: I think you've had enough. *takes bottle, places it on counter*

Lori: *wraps arms around Scott's neck*

Scott: You know this won't fix anything.

Lori: *smiles* I know.

Scott: *sigh*

Doorbell rings

Scott: That'd be Tom.

Lori: What'shewant?

Scott: He and Anni are here for dinner.

Lori: *blinks* ...I thought you already ate.

Scott: The kids ate.

Lori: *looks at wrist* ...Where's my watch?

Scott: Maybe you should stay up here while we eat.

Lori: No. No I'm fine. I just need to get dressed.

Scott: I don't really think you're in any condition t-

Lori: *pushes Scott, staggers away*

Scott: *rubs forehead*

Downstairs, 20 minutes later

Scott: How's Brook?

Anni: *smiles* Learning new words every day.

Scott: That's wonderful.

Tom: Unfortunately a few of them have been Daddy's words.

Anni: *smirks*

Tom: I really need to watch my language.

Scott: You should have seen Steph's mouth after 24 hours straight with Lori.

Tom: *smiles*

Anni: Where is she, anyway?

Scott: Uh...she's getting dressed.

Tom: *looks at watch* ...I've never known Lori to take more than 5 minutes.

Scott: She's not really feeling well.

Anni: Is she okay?

Lori: *walks downstairs* I'm fine. *trips over carpet*

Scott: *grabs Lori*

Lori: *smiles, wipes hair from face* Whew, hey y'all. Who's hungry?

Scott: Why don't you go sit in the dining room, I'll be out with the food.

Anni: *takes Lori's arm* C'mon.

Lori/Anni walk away

Tom: *looks back* She's um...drunk.

Scott: Yeah.

Tom: What happened?

Scott: Her mother happened.

Tom: *nods*

Scott: *walks away*

Table, 7pm

Lori: *molds potatoes with spoon*

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Tom: *squints*

Anni: ...Lori, would you like some gravy?

Lori: Not ready for the lava yet. *digs at potatoes*

Scott: You're really supposed to eat those.

Lori: You wouldn't tell Vivaldi he had to eat his paintings.

Scott: *lifts brow*

Anni: I think Vivaldi's a composer.

Lori: Oooh Madame Frufru knows more about art than I do. *takes Tom's beer, drinks*

Tom: I-

Lori: *places finger on Tom's lips*

Tom: *frowns*

Lori: *slams beer onto table* I'd like my lava now. *reaches for gravy*

Tom: No. *takes gravy* No you can't have your lava. You're going to eat the potatoes.

Lori: I don't have to listen to you, you're not my father. *grabs at gravy*

Tom: Lori, st-

Lori: *takes bowl, dumps it onto plate*

Gravy splashes everywhere

Scott: *rubs eyes*

Anni: I'll get the napkins.

Scott: No it's alright, I'll do it. *stands, walks away*

Lori: *smiles* I win.

Tom: You're an idiot.

Lori: *frowns* Meanie. *throws potatoes at Tom's face*

Tom: AH! Jesus Christ!

Lori: *laughs* Mister Potato Head! *leans over, licks Tom's cheek*

Tom: Ugh! *pushes Lori*

Lori: *giggles* Tastes better that way.

Tom: *wipes face*

Anni: *frowns* That's really inappropriate, Lori.

Lori: He likes it.

Tom: No I don't.

Scott: *walks over* Wipe it up. *places napkins on table*

Lori: I'm not your little housewife. You wipe it up.

Scott: *stares at Lori*

Lori: *shoves bowls over*

Food spills everywhere

Lori: *leans back in chair, crosses arms*

Scott: *looks down at table*

Lori: You going to punish me?

Scott: *sits*

Lori: *looks at Tom* How about you. I'm sure this warrants a spanking. *smiles*

Tom: *looks at Scott*

Scott: *staring at table*

Anni: Lori, let's go upstairs and clean you up. *stands, takes Lori's arm*

Lori: *shoves Anni* NO!

Anni: We're going. Stand up.

Lori: Get out of my house, bitch!

Anni: *grabs Lori, yanks her up*

Lori: ERGH! *scratches Anni's face*

Anni: *drags Lori* Upstairs.

Anni/Lori leave

Scott: ...I'm sorry.

Tom: Could be worse. She could have been naked.

Scott: That's not funny.

TBC.....................................
 
Now... this is the result of Katie's inappropriate thoughts and sayings. Not that it's an excuse for Lori to go out and get plastered and then proceeed to express herself via mashed potatoes, but still....Katie has a way of pushing buttons. I hope through everything, Lori has a way to get what she feels out, inappropriate works aside.
I commend everyone else for remaining cool- poor Scott though, this is something he didn't need. But i feel like if he could understand what that did to Lori, then he's able to look past this and try and help her*when she's sober, of course*

Awesome update!
 
Thanks for the review! :)

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Gables Estates, house, bedroom, 8pm

Lori: GET OUT!

Anni: I'm taking you to my place tonight.

Lori: No you're not.

Anni: Scott doesn't want you here around the kids.

Lori: You have kids at your place.

Anni: Brook's with Tim.

Lori: I'm not going.

Anni: This isn't a negotiation. You are.

Lori: SCOTT! *jumps over bed* SCOTT! GET UP HERE!

Anni: *grabs Lori's arm* Get your bag, we're leaving.

Lori: *frowns* No.

Anni: You can leave here on your own and come to my place or the police can take you to the drunk tank and you can spend the night on a steel bench surrounded by junkies and prostitutes.

Lori: *glaring, picks up bag*

Anni: Move.

Lori: *walks away*

Inside car, 8:30pm

Lori: *lies on seat*

Tom: *looks back* Sit up.

Lori: Go to hell.

Tom: *slaps Lori's leg* Sit up.

Lori: *kicks Tom's arm*

Anni: Don't bother, Tom.

Tom: You know Scotty said she was drinking because of Katie.

Anni: I'm not surprised. There's a few times Katie's made me want to down a few shots.

Tom: It's situations like these that make me thankful my parents are dead.

Anni: *looks at Tom*

Tom: *stares ahead*

Biscayne Park, house, 11pm

Lori: *opens fridge*

Tom: *walks downstairs* What are you doing?

Lori: *pulls out wine*

Tom: *walks over, takes bottle* Get back upstairs. You're supposed to be passed out.

Lori: Sorry to disappoint. *reaches for bottle*

Tom: *dumps bottle into sink* You want to turn into your father, is that it?

Lori: Better than being my mother.

Tom: I don't know what the hell she said to you but it's not worth ruining your sobriety over.

Lori: What do you want me to do? Never speak to her again?

Tom: If that's what it takes.

Lori: She's my mother.

Tom: Yeah and that doesn't automatically make her a good one.

Lori: *lowers head* ...Y'know, when I was 13...she told me it was my fault that I was sent away. I was a bad daughter.

Tom: *stares at Lori*

Lori: She said it was my fault that my dad drank...and that no decent man would ever love a crack whore.

Tom: ...That's rough.

Lori: *stares blankly*

Tom: *wraps arms around Lori*

Lori: *lies head on Tom's chest*

Tom: I'll take you back upstairs.

Lori: *nods*

Bedroom

Tom: *flips on lamp* If you need anything, wait until tomorrow so you don't break anything.

Lori: *smirks*

Tom: *turns around* You're all set.

Lori: Thanks.

Tom: Sleep.

Lori: *flops onto bed*

Tom: *walks away*

Lori: *grabs Tom's arm*

Tom: *looks at Lori*

Lori: Sit.

Tom: No.

Lori: Please, just sit here until I fall asleep.

Tom: *sigh* Lori, you don't need me to do that.

Lori: *yanks Tom down*

Tom: Okay. *sits*

Lori: *lies down*

2am

Tom: *stands*

Lori: *grabs Tom's hand* Not asleep yet.

Tom: Lori, I want to go to bed.

Lori: Then sleep.

Tom: I want to sleep in my own bed. With my wife.

Lori: *pulls Tom down by the collar*

Tom: *frowns* L-

Lori: *kisses Tom*

Tom: *sits up*

Lori: *climbs into Tom's lap*

Tom: *pushes Lori*

Lori: *slides across floor*

Tom: You're lucky you're drunk.

Lori: *pushes hair behind ear*

Tom: *stands, walks away*

Kitchen, 9am

Anni: *sits at table* Where's Lori?

Tom: You didn't hear her in the bathroom?

Anni: ...That was her? Sounded like a cougar being gutted.

Tom: *blinks* Yes because that happens an awful lot outside our bedroom window.

Anni: *smiles, grabs toast*

Tom: I'll take her home when she's feeling better.

Anni: Thought you had to work.

Tom: I do. *smiles* She's coming with me.

Anni: I think she's been punished enough.

Tom: *stands* Oh I think there's room for more.

Anni: *shakes head* You're horrible.

Tom: *kisses Anni's forehead* See you later.

Anni: *smirks*

Miami Lab, hallway

Tom *walking*

Lori: *places hand on chest* Why um...why am I here?

Tom: You're getting some air. Put this on. *hands over tag*

Lori: I'd like to go home now.

Tom: I'll only be a few minutes. You look like hell, by the way.

Lori: Thanks.

Trace lab

Speed: *staring through microscope*

Tom: *walks in* Detective Duquesne paged me, she said you wanted to see me.

Speed: *hands over folder* Results from your houseboat murder.

Tom: Excellent. *opens folder*

Lori: *places hand on stomach*

Tom: ...Wood polymer.

Speed: Yeah.

Tom: So the victim had pieces of wood under her nails.

Speed: Treated wood. That specific chemical makeup is used for high moisture areas, which is common in Miami.

Tom: She scratched the floor of her houseboat. Okay so she was dragged or was trying to crawl away.

Speed: *lifts eyes, looks at Lori*

Lori: *crosses arms*

Speed: What's your problem?

Lori: You really want an answer to that?

Tom: I'm taking her home soon.

Speed: I didn't know you were still partying.

Lori: I'm not. At least...I don't think I am.

Speed: *nods*

Lori: I don't really remember what happened last night. *lowers head*

Tom: Thanks for the results. *places hand on Lori's back* Let's go.

Speed: She stays.

Tom: *looks at Speed*

Lori: *scratches head*

Tom: Sure. *walks away*

Lori: It's not an everyday thing.

Speed: What happened?

Lori: I don't remember.

Speed: Katie visited you yesterday.

Lori: *frowns*

Speed: What'd she say to you?

Lori: Nothing.

Speed: *stares at Lori*

Lori: I don't know why you still love her.

Speed: Katie and I are...no longer together.

Lori: *lifts brow* Since when?

Speed: *stands, pulls off gloves* I'll take you home.

TBC..................................
 
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