CSI:Miami RT #12 - 'Road To Nowhere'

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HOLY SH*T....Tom & Speed found out Lori.

So I have to wonder who will tell Scott or will he just happened to be dragged to the "gentleman's club" LOL

Great update Geni!
 
Yeah shes got organizing skills alright Anni! Shes Organizing that coochie for everybody to see! lol!

I just hope that Tom doesn't use her to find out what he wants to know! i'm not real sure Speed will be happy about him doing that anymore than he is happy with Lori shaken her Ta Tas for everybody!

Hey can she make one go one way and the other go the other way at the same time while dancing in a birdbath ! Lol!

great update Geni !
 
Thanks for the reviews! :D

Hehe. :devil:

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Club, dressing room, 11:30pm

Lori: *sits, flips through money*

Alice: *looks over* Wow. They sure liked you.

Lori: *smirks* What can I say, men have certain triggers.

Alice: You want some blow? *holds out paper*

Lori: *looks at Alice* No thanks.

Alice: Bruce is going to make you. It happens to all the newbies.

Lori: Is that all or is there more to this job than lap dances and blow?

Alice: Senior dancers do the escort work.

Lori: *nods*

Alice: You got experience though, you'll be bumped up.

Lori: To escort?

Alice: Yeah. *lights cigarette*

Lori: How many girls does Bruce have doing this?

Alice: Oh one time there was at least 70 of us.

Lori: There's only 30 right now.

Alice: Yep. *flicks cigarette*

Lori: Where'd the rest of them go?

Bruce: You ask too many questions.

Lori: *looks at Bruce*

Bruce: More dancing, less speaking.

Lori: My break doesn't end for another 10 minutes so shove it.

Bruce: *frowns* Some of the guys might like that attitude but I don't. You speak to me like that again, things are going to get ugly for you.

Lori: I'm shaking in my 18-inch heels.

Bruce: *yanks Lori from chair*

Lori: *elbows Bruce in the face*

Bruce: AH! *staggers back*

Lori: Follow your own rules. Don't touch. *walks away*

Bruce: *holding face*

Alice: *staring at Bruce*

Bruce: What the hell are you looking at, bitch?

Back alley

Lori: *walks down steps*

Horatio: How are we doing?

Lori: Bruce seems to be employing mostly underage girls to dance for him while the more experienced girls get sent out on escort duty. There's the usual drug activity inside and I'm hoping to find a larger stash in what I think is a vault upstairs.

Horatio: A vault.

Lori: Yeah, we're not allowed up there but Bruce goes up every so often with cash and returns with drugs.

Horatio: You find out anything else?

Lori: Heard a conversation in Spanish between Bruce and a guy named Sketchy last week about taking out some drug dealer turned witness. Oh and by the way, Tom was here earlier, did you send him?

Horatio: ...What was Tom doing here?

Lori: Asking questions about some murder victim in Liberty City.

Horatio: Liberty City...okay, I'll have a word with him.

Lori: You couldn't hire any cops to do this?

Horatio: Well considering some of the suspected clients are police officers, IAB isn't sure they can trust another badge to do this.

Lori: ...I can still back out at any time?

Horatio: Mhm. Just say the word. However your help is greatly appreciated and essential to this investigation.

Lori: *frowns* Yeah. *pulls open door* So I've heard. *walks away*

Metal door slams

Horatio: *walks away*

TBC.................................
 
Whew! Okay so she does have an ulterior motive and it's not to feed her insane issues...That is a relief, cause I really wanted her to be able to start to grow from where she's been. With that being said though, there's still so much she can get in trouble from to that ass Bruce really putting the iron to her, to someone forcing her to do drugs, to her getting raped, she's just not in the best of places. I hope that she can get out of this okay.

And yes....it was the one that came out of nowhere..lol

Great update!
 
I hope Horatio knows what hes got her into! I don't think that her daddy is gonna be to damn happy about this Horatio!

I just wonder how hes gonna keep Tom or Scott from blowing her cover! Hmm ! should be interesting!

Great update Geni!
 
Thanks so much for the reviews!

^ Glad you're enjoying it so far, lal. :D

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West Miami apartment, 5am

Lori: *frowning, opens door*

Tom: Why did I just get kicked off my case?

Lori: *closes robe, ties it* Do you know what time it is?

Tom: This has something to do with why you're working at the club, doesn't it.

Lori: It's 5 in the morning, Thomas. I'm going back to bed. *pushes door*

Tom: *places hand on door* I saw Horatio's Hummer out back last night.

Lori: You were spying on the club?

Tom: I spent 2 years watching you before we met.

Lori: *lifts brows*

Tom: ...I can't believe I just said that outloud.

Lori: *punches Tom's arm*

Tom: OW.

Lori: *walks away*

Tom: *steps in, shuts door* You're not really stripping.

Lori: Oh yes I am.

Tom: *crosses arms*

Lori: *drops robe*

Tom: *blinks*

Lori: See? It's easy.

Tom: *turns around, stares at wall* Um...I think there's more to it than just...that.

Lori: Really.

Tom: Lori, but the robe back on.

Lori: *smiles* But it's so cute seeing you all flustered and uncomfortable.

Tom: I'm a married man.

Lori: I like married men.

Tom: *frowns* What I'm trying to say is, I don't think my wife would appreciate it.

Lori: *puts on robe, ties it*

Tom: *turns around* Horatio's got you working for him.

Lori: Oooh so smart. Now I have to kill you.

Tom: Why are you helping him?

Lori: *shrugs* I have a heart of gold.

Tom: *stares at Lori*

Lori: I wanted to help.

Tom: And the thrill of exciting men has nothing to do with it.

Lori: *rolls eyes*

Tom: You should be concentrating on your family, not your career as an undercover puppet for the PD.

Lori: If you had the opportunity to help save the people that were falling into the same life you were forced into, wouldn't you take it?

Tom: I guess it depends what your priorities are.

Lori: *lies on couch, covers self with blanket* You can go now. I have a child to pick up in a few hours and I need to finish my beauty sleep.

Tom: *sigh*

Biscayne Park, house, 7am

Anni: Brook! Breakfast!

Brook: *runs over, jumps into chair*

Tom: *walks in*

Anni: Hey, where were you?

Tom: Went to work and found out I'm off my case because of some investigation Horatio's heading.

Anni: He can do that?

Tom: IAB pulled the plug, they aren't saying why.

Anni: *nods*

Tom: Anyway, I'm here until I get called in. *wraps arms around Anni's waist* How's your morning been?

Anni: *smiles* I'll let you know when I fully awaken.

Tom: *kisses Anni*

Anni: Mm, I'm getting there now.

Tom: *smiles*

Brook: *throws bowl of oatmeal*

Bowl smashes into floor

Tom: *looks at Brook*

Anni: She's been doing that all morning. Cranky.

Tom: *walks over to Brook, picks her up* You being cranky for Mommy?

Brook: *smiles*

Tom: *laughs* Thought so.

Brook: *wraps arms around Tom*

Tom: You want me to make you some breakfast?

Brook: *nods*

Tom: Okay.

Anni: I've been shunned.

Tom: Hey she eats your food 98% of the time, it's my turn.

Anni: *smiles* Fine. You can be Mommy today. I'm going to run a bath and read a book all day.

Tom: Have at it.

Anni: Great! *runs*

Tom: *smiles*

Brook: *grabs at stove*

Tom: Hey, I don't think so. *grabs Brook's hand*

Brook: *frowns*

Tom: *kisses Brook's fingers* Mwah!

Brook: *giggles*

Tom: *smiling*

Empire State Building, office, 9am

Scott: *sips coffee, staring at television*

Steph: *staring out window* How come Dom's gotta stay home?

Scott: Your mother's spending the day with him.

Steph: *jumps down from ledge*

Scott: *places cup on desk* I have to head to a meeting, so I want you to stay here.

Steph: *nods*

Scott: You can watch TV or play on the computer but don't let anyone in and keep the window closed. Understand?

Steph: Yes Daddy.

Scott: Good. *kisses top of Steph's head*

Steph: *smiles*

Scott: *walks away, shuts door*

Steph: *jumps into chair, grabs mouse*

TBC......................................
 
Lori and Tom seem to like pushing each other's buttons, but just so Tom knows where to lay his head *and everything else mind you* it's ok. I see that this is turning into more of a concern for her well being on Tom's part. I can definetly get why Lori's doing it though. I just hope she can get out before it gets too heated.

I absolutely adore family time, no matter who it's with! Tom, Anni and Brook are just so adorable together...It's just so great to see that type of thing!

So....Scott's leaving Stephie in the office alone....Hmmm questionable by any standards. I mean, I know Stephie's very well capable of keeping herself out of trouble, but I seriously don't think that CPS would smile lightly at the fact that she's being left alone. That's just my observation...lol.

Awesome update!
 
Thanks so much for the review! :D

Hehe...Steph's related to Lori. That should be warning enough. :lol:

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Empire State Building, elevator, 11:30am

Steph: *pushing buttons* Go up. *pushing buttons* Go down. *pushing buttons* Go up. *pushes button*

Emergency alarm goes off

Steph: Oops.

Telephone rings

Steph: *picks up phone* Hi, my name is Stephanie Finch. Who is this?

Officer: You pressed the emergency button. Do you need help?

Steph: Um...*scratches head* nope.

Officer: Is there anyone else in the elevator?

Steph: Just me.

Officer: How old are you?

Steph: Almost 6. I'm a big girl.

Officer: Where are your parents?

Steph: Momma's in Miami. That's where I live. She's sick in the head.

Officer: What are you doing here?

Steph: Daddy took me but he left.

Officer: Where did he go to?

Steph: A meeting.

Officer: So he works here.

Steph: He works in Miami.

Officer: ...Hold on.

Steph: *rocks back and forth on feet*

5 minutes later

Steph: *straightens out t-shirt*

Officer: Stephanie? Still there?

Steph: Yup.

Officer: A couple of security guards are going to come get you.

Steph: 'Kay.

10 minutes later; elevator doors open

Steph: *lifts head*

Guard: *grabs Steph's arm*

Steph: Where we goin'?

Guard: We're going to contact your parents. You know your phone number?

Steph: Yep.

Guard: What is it?

Steph: Can't tell you.

Guard: Why not?

Steph: Not supposed to talk to strangers.

Guard: You spoke to the officer over the speaker.

Steph: He wasn't really there. Oop. No more talking. *covers mouth*

Security area, 30 minutes later

Scott: *runs over*

Guard: You her father?

Scott: Yes, is she okay?

Guard: She's fine.

Scott: Why didn't you call me?

Guard: She wouldn't tell us your phone number.

Scott: *looks at Steph*

Steph: *swinging legs*

Scott: How the hell did she get here? Where was she? I've been looking for her everywhere.

Guard: She was playing in the elevators. Stopped on some restricted floors and then pressed the emergency button.

Scott: *sighs, rubs eyes*

Guard: You can go see her.

Scott: *walks away*

Inside room

Scott: *walks over*

Steph: *lifts head*

Scott: Get up, let's go.

Steph: *stands*

Scott: *grabs Steph by the collar*

Steph: *winces*

Scott: *walks, drags Steph*

TBC.......................................
 
Ooo! Man Steph is in big trouble now ! I just hope Scott can hold his temper down! I think he should have thought about this a little more before he left her alone in his office in a very large building! Lori is not gonna be very happy about this either !

great update Geni!
 
LOL...Well, you did warn us! Stephanie is every bit of Lori's child, and precocious to boot! I can only imagine Scott's reaction to her activities, and judging by the snatch of the collar move (one I employ OFTEN), he's none too happy. I simply cannot wait to read more!

Little memo to Scott:

Just look into her eyes and smile, you've got at least twelve more years of this. LOL

Excellent update!
 
Thanks for the reviews. :D

:devil:

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Empire State Building, office

Scott: *walks in*

Steph: Daddy let go!

Scott: Sit.

Steph: No.

Scott: You have 3 seconds.

Steph: Or what?

Scott: *looks at Steph* Or you'll find out that your mother isn't half as scary as I am.

Steph: *sits*

Scott: *pulls chair over, sits* What did I tell you?

Steph: *pouting*

Scott: Stephanie, what did I tell you.

Steph: You said to stay here.

Scott: And what did you do?

Steph: I left.

Scott: Exactly.

Steph: *lowers head*

Scott: It's my job to make sure you're safe so when I tell you to do something, you need to do it. If I tell you not to do something, don't do it. Otherwise, you could get lost, you could be hurt or you could die. Your mother and I don't want that to happen and I'm sure you don't either. This isn't a playground, understand?

Steph: *nods*

Scott: Okay. The next time I have to spend my entire afternoon looking for you because you decided you weren't going to listen, there's going to be some serious consequences.

Steph: *crosses arms*

Scott: *stands, walks around desk*

Steph: ...Sorry Daddy.

Scott: *looks at Steph*

Steph: *swings legs*

Scott: Apology accepted. *sits*

Miami, club, 1am

Lori: *zips up jacket*

Alice: *walks over* Bruce wants to talk to you upstairs.

Lori: I'm going home.

Alice: He said it's urgent.

Lori: Great.

Cathy: *runs over*

Alice: *lifts head*

Cathy: *crying*

Lori: *looks at Cathy*

Alice: What's going on? What happened?

Cathy: He killed her. He killed Liz.

Alice: What?

Cathy: She's upstairs in the bathroom. She didn't want to go out with that grubby 60-year old so he strangled her. I saw it.

Lori: Did he see you?

Cathy: No, I-I don't think so.

Bruce: LORI!

Lori: *looks back*

Alice: You'd better get up there before he does the same to you.

Lori: *looks at Alice*

Upstairs, hallway

Lori: *steps into hallway, looks into bathroom* ...

Bruce: *slams door* Lori.

Lori: *lifts head*

Bruce: Where's my 5 grand?

Lori: We agreed that I'd get to keep 40%.

Bruce: You're making more money than the rest of the girls.

Lori: That's not my problem. You want more from them, talk to them.

Bruce: Here's how this works. You don't get to talk back to me. Women don't talk to me like that.

Lori: Is that right.

Bruce: Yes.

Lori: Did Liz talk back to you? Is that why she's lying dead in the bathroom?

Bruce: *stares at Lori*

Lori: I know what you've been doing around here. I know that you've got people behind that door down there bagging drugs, mostly for clients in law enforcement and I know you've been hiring underage girls to work for you.

Bruce: You don't know anything.

Lori: Let me tell you something. I've been playing this game a lot longer than you and you know what I've learned? Drug dealers and pimps have a very short life expectancy. I get the feeling you won't be any exception.

Bruce: Is that a threat?

Lori: Call it whatever you want. Either way, none of this ends well for you.

Bruce: *grabs Lori by the neck, shoves her against wall*

Lori: *staring at Bruce*

Bruce: Unfortunately, the same can be said for you. You're nothing more than a glorified hooker. And you're going to die one. *squeezes Lori's neck*

Lori: *kicks Bruce*

Bruce: UGH! *staggers back*

Lori: *runs downstairs*

Bruce: *pulls out gun*

Dressing room

Lori: *runs in* Get out!

Alice: What? Why?

Lori: *grabs Alice's arm* Go across the street and wait there. There should be a detective on his way, he'll be in a Hummer.

Alice: How?

Lori: Hit the silent alarm on the way in here. Go.

Cathy: C'mon girls.

Girls stand, run

Lori: *turns around*

Bruce: *walks in, lifts gun*

Lori: *slams door closed*

Bruce: *pulls trigger*

BAM

Lori: *ducks, runs*

Bruce: *points gun, pulls trigger*

BAM BAM BAM

Lori: *dives behind couch*

Bruce: *walks over*

Lori: *turns head*

Bruce: Don't make this harder for yourself.

Lori: *rolls eyes, pulls knife from jacket*

Bruce: *walks up to couch*

Lori: *stabs Bruce in the ankle*

Bruce: AH!

Lori: *elbows Bruce in the gut*

Bruce: Oof! *drops gun*

Lori: *grabs at gun*

Bruce: *kicks Lori in the face*

Lori: *falls back*

Bruce: *pulls knife from leg*

Lori: *holding face*

Bruce: *yanks Lori up*

Lori: *frowns*

Bruce: Not so impressive without your little knife. *swings knife*

Lori: *smashes hand into Bruce's throat*

Bruce: *coughs, falls back*

Lori: *steps back*

Bruce: *falls over, holding throat*

Lori: *kneels* You're going to die.

Bruce: *looks at Lori*

Lori: How many more bodies are out there?

Bruce: *closes eyes*

Lori: *nods* Fine. *rolls Bruce over, picks up knife* It's been fun.

TBC.................................
 
LORI!!!! OMG... I knew something like this was going to happen! But in true Lori fashion, she takes her punches and then she punches the hell back! Gotta love her determination. Poor Bruce just didn't know what was coming to him. I only hope that this is Lori's last forray into the underbelly of Miami. It's time for her to focus on Lori, and try and get her life right. She deserves it!


EXCELLENT update!

LORI kicked ASS....as always ;)
 
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