CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Coroner

    Jan 5, 2007
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    Whoo Geni! A response! :lol: Just joking. But on the other hand, i've been entertaining myself with CSI LV S3. :D
  2. cainesugar

    cainesugar Coroner

    Jan 22, 2007
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    Geni, it's so funny. Whenever I message you, you happen to be away. Heather and I were like 'is she okay?' :lol: So glad you're still there, can't wait until this is all over. *hugs*
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Coroner

    Jan 5, 2007
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    Man, i think she's still sick too. AND we're all (most?) studying for the end of the year....*gasps* Geni. Don't go suicidal on us. I KNOW it's hard but we've all been through it.... :lol: JK. Hope you can battle you're way back online.
  4. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

    Jul 30, 2005
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    *pushes through the papers and Nyquil*

    I'm back. ;)

    Sorry for being away so long! :eek:

    And since I'm too lazy to look back, I'll just write the chapters blindly and then when I remember I'll go "OH YEAH" and fill everything in. :p


    Two weeks later, Miami Lab

    Delko: *pulls evidence out of boxes*

    Josh: *walks over*

    Delko: *looks up* Hey man. I...Didn't know you were better.

    Josh: Do you know where Lori is?

    Delko: Yeah she's somewhere around here.

    Josh: Where.

    Delko: Why?

    Josh: Because I need to speak with her.

    Delko: Shouldn't you be at home resting? You look like crap.

    Josh: *walks away*

    Calleigh: *walks over* What was that about?

    Delko: I don't know.

    Calleigh: *sigh* Well anyway, the case has been closed.

    Delko: It has?

    Calleigh: Yeah. Colton and I got back from California last week.

    Delko: How are you two working out anyway?

    Calleigh: What do you mean?

    Delko: Well you two are on and off a lot.

    Calleigh: ...The status of our relationship is private, Eric.

    Delko: I know it's just that well you guys have been together for years but you...Aren't really together.

    Calleigh: *looks down at table* I was actually just about to visit Ryan in the hospital.

    Delko: How's he doing?

    Calleigh: I don't know.

    Delko: We've been kind of busy here.

    Calleigh: Yeah.

    Delko: You seem a little down.

    Calleigh: *smiles* I'm fine Eric.

    Delko: You don't seem fine.

    Calleigh: What happened on that plane, anyway?

    Delko: Ryan basically saved my ass.

    Calleigh: And you didn't trust him.

    Delko: I guess we're all judged on our actions.


    Inside area with pipes

    Ryan: Okay...Something out of the ordinary...

    Adam: *points gun at Ryan* How stupid do you think I am?

    Ryan: *stares at pipes*

    Adam: Your friend Eric tried to distract us but it didn't work. Your feeble attempts aren't going to save these people.

    Ryan: Sorry, it's kind of my job.

    Adam: It's your job to be arrogant and self-riteous.

    Ryan: Pretty much.

    Adam: Turn around slowly.

    Ryan: Why? So you can kill me while I'm facing you? *grabs pipe*

    Adam: Turn around.

    Ryan: *turns around, slams pipe into Adam*

    Adam: AH! *falls backward*

    Device falls out of his pocket

    Ryan: *looks at floor*

    Adam: *reaches for device*

    Ryan: *kicks Adam*

    Adam: *grabs Ryan's foot*

    Ryan: AH!

    Delko: *jumps down* Ryan!

    Adam: *pushes Ryan against pipes*

    Ryan: *falls over*

    Adam: *picks up device*

    Ryan: *yanks pipes*

    Delko: *looking around* Ryan! Where are you!

    Ryan: Get out! *cracks pipe open*

    Smoke starts to spill out of pipes


    Delko: He killed the suspect and almost got himself killed.

    Calleigh: It's not your job to protect him.

    Delko: I was the senior CSI.

    Calleigh: Eric, you're not responsible.

    Delko: I feel responsible.

    Calleigh: You're not.

    Lora: *walks in* So THIS is the Miami Dade Crime Lab.

    Calleigh: *lifts brow*

    Delko: Who's she?

    Calleigh: Meet Lora. DNA Analyst from California.

    Delko: Don't we have enough?

    Lora: Hey. You can never have enough people that actually WANT to be around blood all day long.

    Evidence room

    Lori: *flipping through files*

    Josh: *places hands in pockets* What are you doing?

    Lori: *turns around*

    Josh: *frowning*

    Lori: You're...Back.

    Josh: You're not supposed to be in here.

    Lori: I needed a file.

    Josh: *looks at folder* Bomb fragments.

    Lori: You have great eyes.

    Josh: What do you need that for?

    Lori: Just going over some things.

    Josh: *staring at Lori*

    Lori: Have I mentioned how...Handsome you look today?

    Josh: Put the folder away.

    Lori: What crawled up your ass?

    Josh: A building.

    Lori: Ouch.

    Josh: You've been working this case, right?

    Lori: Yeah until they closed it.

    Josh: You want to explain something to me?

    Lori: ...Explain what?

    Josh: I spoke to the LAPD who interrogated Adam a while back, you know, the guy who was about to kill 200 people on a plane.

    Lori: Yeah.

    Josh: He said something about a Columbian agent.

    Lori: So?

    Josh: I checked his records. He owned a home 35 yards from your house.

    Lori: *laughs* Wow the paranoia that passes through this family. I live a few yards from a killer who mentioned a Columbian agent in Columbia. Whew those must be hard to find. So now I'm guilty of something because of this.

    Josh: You don't exactly have a squeaky clean past.

    Lori: No, I don't and it's none of your damn business what I do.

    Josh: Your mother's in prison, your father is God knows where and Ryan Wolfe is in the hospital.

    Lori: Not my problem.

    Josh: See, I'm a little tired of you popping up everywhere when something goes to hell.

    Lori: Why don't you go get yourself a boyfriend and get lost.

    Josh: You're ruining lives.

    Lori: Whose? Anni's? Katie's? They could have it a lot worse.

    Josh: You and Adam had a relationship.

    Lori: *leans against wall, crosses arms* Had being the operative word.

    Josh: So he skips out on you, you take it out on everyone else.

    Lori: I wasn't the one who decided to kill a bunch of people on a plane.

    Josh: You were the one who planted the bombs in the warehouse.

    Lori: I was trying to destroy his work not kill anyone.

    Josh: You wanted to kill him.

    Lori: So what if I did? One ass out of a billion, dead. I should get a medal.

    Josh: Why don't you just get out of here.

    Lori: *nods* Fine.

    Josh: You belong in Columbia, not here.

    Lori: I was thinking the same.

    Josh: Get out.

    Lori: *walks over to door* ...Will you tell me when you find my dad?

    Josh: No.

    Lori: *nods*

    Josh: Goodbye Lori.

    Lori: *leaves*

    Josh: *glares*


    Horatio: *takes off shades*

    Stetler: *walks over*

    Horatio: Reinstated I see.

    Stetler: IAB knows a good man when they see one.

    Horatio: Good tell me when they find him.

    Stetler: *smirks* Your lab sure got caught up in a mess.

    Horatio: The case is closed.

    Stetler: Mhm. One CSI in prison, one in the hospital, another one MIA.

    Horatio: And you think IAB could be of any help.

    Stetler: Take a vacation Horatio.

    Horatio: Vacation.

    Stetler: Your damn Hummer....Thing's out back. I'll clean up all of the garbage.

    Horatio: How commendable of you Rick.

    Stetler: Well it'll give me a chance to make some changes.

    Horatio: *smirks* Of course it would.

    Stetler: Get going.

    Horatio: *looks at Stetler* If you say so. *leaves*

    Stelter: Have fun on your road trip and don't come back until I say!

  5. that_girl1

    that_girl1 Coroner

    Mar 5, 2007
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    Colton's missing!
    Great chapter by the way! It took me a while to remember what I was reading about
  6. cainesugar

    cainesugar Coroner

    Jan 22, 2007
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    Geni! You're back! *tackles, chains to desk* Don't scare us like that again.

    Gah, Horatio just left when Stetler is ass-waving all over creation? Good God what the hell happened to him in the desert! He's lost his appetite for Stetler pie. It was the heat, I tell you.

    Oh my poor Ryan *huggles Ryan* in the hospital after saving 200 people and Delko...how brave is he? And Speed's missing, Lori's been shunned and Josh is back (very happy about that, too). Thanks so much for clearing this big mess up (but starting another one...grr Stetler). :D Welcome back. :)
  7. calleighspeedle

    calleighspeedle Coroner

    Sep 9, 2005
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    It's great to have you back Geni and as always a great chapter. :D

    update soon.
  8. that_girl1

    that_girl1 Coroner

    Mar 5, 2007
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    Okay now I feel kinda stupid since cainesugar just pointed out that Speed is the one missing.
    I guess I have a lot of things on my mind that are affecting my reading comprehension.
  9. HellsBells

    HellsBells Tormenting Camp Counselors

    Feb 27, 2007
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    Geni!! *makes sure Lilly's chains are tight enough.* good. Aww.

    New Drama! Speed's missing, Lora's hilarious, Ryan's in the hospital, *sigh*

    *huggles* Feel better soon!

    By the way:

    The other night Lilly and I were talking about how funny Road Trip is. For instance how I fall out of my chair, quite often.


    I came up with: Warning: May cause spontanous laughter. Has been known to throw people out of furniture

    And since great minds think alike, and the thinking is even better when its two heads instead of one we came up with::


    :D :lol:
  10. cainesugar

    cainesugar Coroner

    Jan 22, 2007
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    Ah, Heather. :lol: Geni, there's your welcome back present. Please enjoy. :lol: It's beautiful, Heather. :D
  11. Anni Grey

    Anni Grey Coroner

    Jun 22, 2005
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    Geni, Welcome back! Awesome update...Josh is pretty pissed at Lori. I guess that she's on her way back to Columbia. And Calleigh's a little down eh? Wonder what that's all about, Ryan became Horatio incarnate, and Speed is missing. Wow, a lot happened in two weeks... Wonder where Speed's gone off to? And wait.... reinstated Stetler? Welcome back indeed, Geni!

    Awesome of course! I'm giddy with excitement!

    ps nice sign :lol:
  12. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

    Jan 15, 2006
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    HEey there mister! *points finger at Josh* Lori's not your daughter you can't tell her what to do. She just got back and RT Katie didn't get to spend any quailty mother daughter time with her. Well unless you count me all freaking out that she was pregnant and stuff.

    And whoa hold the phone I'm in jail! I can't live in the big house. I'm a skinny blonde hair 18 year old! Ok well RT Katie's older then that but still...and where's Speed?

    Aww for once I'm actually sorry that Ryan's in the hospital. I think the Zantac the doctor gave me is getting to my head.

    Anyways, glad to see that you are back to updating. Can't wait for more.
  13. CSI_in_training

    CSI_in_training CSI Level Two

    Jun 21, 2005
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    Ouch! Josh, Lori, brutal much! That was painfully mean. It must be a speedle thing...Speed's missing? Ryan's in the Hospital? Horatio's LISTENING to Steler? something horribly bad is about to happen, I can feel it. GENI! you're better! *glomp* we missed you!
  14. Hunter

    Hunter Coroner

    Jan 5, 2007
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    *rubs head* Ah first i have to skip back a page and read those updates again. I'm forgetting what's happening. :lol:

    Horatio in Heaven Delkotorsky hasn't MET me?? :lol: ANd i'm back. YES! Thank you Geni! (And i bless you...)

    Haha Lori. Lori: What crawled up your ass? Josh: A building. :lol: Ok so let me get this straight. Lori's under suspici-ion! Ooo not cool.

    First, shut up Stetler you aren't allowed to talk. And second....YAY! Road trip! A lot more chances of me getting with Horatio! :D ;) Love ya Geni.
  15. Chris_miami

    Chris_miami Hit and Run

    Jan 29, 2007
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    Ouch, Harsh much Josh? Speedle family tension and Horatio and Stetler banter and a guilty delko and all the fun things that make RT the best. Really needed the update Geni, RT world beats Real World any day. Glad you're feeling better. :p
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