CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

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And there's Carly again! I knew you couldn't stay away.
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Heh, of course I can't *gravitates towards the RT* See, can't get away :lol:

Oh noes! Poor Katie! Ok, seriously Katie, when you get out this, no more dating for you ever, they all turn out to be creeps, weirdos or murderers. *holds Katie back* No. More. Dating. Though Speed really needs to be more emotive. Though if he was, I'd probably just comment on the sexual tension, so maybe he should remain detached and heartless...*shakes head*

please update soon!
 
Lora, you haven't erased your chances. :p

And yes Anni we're all insane! It doesn't matter where you come from, the insane-ness will show up in the end. :D

Thanks for the reviews!

Here's a short chapter since I'm short on time this morning.

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CSI Garage

Anni: Okay so what am I doing?

Delko: You're searching the truck.

Anni: Fun. With what?

Delko: A flashlight.

Anni: Fun. How?

Delko: You shine it around and get evidence.

Anni: Fun. What evidence?

Delko: Any evidence that...Our victim or well...Potential victim was here.

Anni: Like what? Blood? Puke? Spit? Anchovies?

Delko: Anchovies?

Anni: Some people like fish on their pizza. I never understood it but whatever rubs their tummy.

Delko: Well let's say this person doesn't like fish.

Anni: Okay. Wait...What's not to like about fish?

Delko: They're fishy.

Anni: You know, people don't call you 'Humany'.

Delko: They might.

Anni: Name one time they might.

Delko: If I was being served on a plate.

Anni: To humans?

Delko: Fish.

Anni: Ah, smart man. *shines flashlight*

Delko: *opens glove compartment*

Anni: *grabs paper* Hey, I found something. Looks like it was written in eye-liner.

Delko: What does it say?

Anni: Slip 10.

Delko: *looks at Anni*

Anni: ...Does that mean something?

Delko: Peter Alis.

Anni: ...Marco Polo?

Delko: *lifts brow*

Anni: I thought we were spouting off random names.

Delko: No, there's a guy we met earlier by the name of Peter Alis. He lives in Coral Bay Marina at Slip 10.

Anni: You think your vic left a message?

Delko: Yeah. We should check it out.

Anni: Wait...We're not going to get into a shootout, right?

Delko: Probably not.

Anni: Probably not?

Delko: I'll cover you.

Anni: *laughs* Just hand over the gun. I'll cover you.

Bank

Speed: *hands over paper*

Jason: What's this?

Speed: A warrant.

Jason: For what?

Speed: Your truck. We had it towed.

Jason: You had my truck towed? What the hell for!

Speed: We're searching it for evidence.

Jason: Evidence of what? Faulty parallel parking? Just give me the ticket.

Speed: You might be getting a lot more depending on what we find.

Jason: *throws hands in air* I don't know what you want. Frankly I'm feeling a little left in the dark about the whole thing. You won't tell me why you have my truck, you won't tell me what you wanted with my coat which I haven't gotten back by the way and you haven't told me a damn thing about this case. How am I supposed to help you if you won't even tell me what happened?

Speed: Five women were killed.

Jason: I read about that in the newspaper. Prostitutes right?

Speed: No.

Jason: Well I'm sorry about them but what does that have to do with me?

Speed: The coat you provided made for some interesting evidence. Turns out it was raining yesterday around 2pm, probably continued into the night too with light showers. It explains why there was residue on your coat from it.

Jason: So?

Speed: Only the back of the coat appears to have been wet so you were bent over something yesterday while at the park. Vegetation in the collar proves that. What were you doing there?

Jason: I was bangin' your friend.

Speed: Actually you weren't.

Jason: How would you know?

Speed: Most guys take off their coats.

Jason: *frowns*

Speed: Let's try again. What were you doing in the park?

Jason: I already told you.

Speed: *crosses arms* You seem to be in a hurry to get me out of here.

Jason: I'm not.

Speed: Have someone at home waiting?

Jason: No.

Speed: Okay. Which park were you at again? Just to make sure.

Jason: Snap...Coral Bay.

Speed: Whoops. You know what? You are getting more than a ticket. You're under arrest.

Slip 10, Coral Bay Marina

Delko: *opens door, gun drawn* Peter Alis! Miami Dade PD!

Anni: And company!

Delko: *walks inside*

Anni: *covers nose* Wow, smells bad in here.

Delko: It's blood.

Anni: *looks around*

Delko: Whoa, over here. Bedroom. *runs into room*

Anni: *runs over*

Delko: ...

Anni: Is that the boat owner?

Delko: Looks like he was hit in the back of the head.

Anni: The rest of the boat's empty.

Delko: Yeah and that's bad for us and for the victim.

Anni: Which victim?

Delko: The one about to be..The victim.

Anni: *scratches head* See this is why human beings have names. A lot less confusing.

Interrogation room

Jason: *grabs picture* What's this?

Speed: Your friend's dead.

Jason: Peter?

Speed: Yeah.

Jason: That's terrible.

Speed: Cause of death is blunt force trauma.

Jason: And?

Speed: You were on a lunch break for....*reading folder* Two and a half hours.

Jason: So?

Speed: You must be a slow eater.

Jason: *rolls eyes* I didn't kill my friend, I didn't kill those woman and I didn't kill Katie.

Speed: No one said she was dead.

Jason: That's why I'm here, isn't it? She's your investigation?

Speed: *throws picture* No. Cindy Wallace was killed last night.

Jason: One of the prostitutes.

Speed: Co-ed. Again.

Jason: *staring at picture*

Speed: Each death becomes increasingly violent. The victim is kept for later like a spider coming back to finish off the kill.

Jason: *shakes head*

Speed: We found your friend, and evidence in your car that you were going to his place. What happened? You try to stash Katie there and he didn't want anything to do with you? You get angry and kill him while he had his back turned?

Jason: ...He was supposed to be my friend. Friends don't deny that they knew you. He thought he was...Better than I am.

Speed: And you proved him wrong by killing him.

Jason: He didn't understand. No one does. Those girls shouldn't be going out with strangers. They shouldn't let their guards down. Not once. Someone could take their money, hurt them and no one would ever find them in a secluded area. And you know what? They peg some of them better than others. More valuable.

Speed: That's why you dressed them up like prostitutes. To lower them, make them seem less 'valuable'.

Jason: Nobody pays attention to them. How many less valuable people have to die before someone takes notice?

Speed: *sits in chair* So you're doing the world a favor by kidnapping average women, dressing them as hookers and then killing them.

Jason: People will thank me. I'm doing a service.

Speed: Murder isn't a service.

Jason: Think about it. You take a pretty blonde girl, dress her up like trash and she becomes just another dead woman. You take a pretty blonde girl, dress her up in a cheerleader outfit and the whole world takes notice. We've decided as a society who matters and who doesn't.

Speed: Where's Katie?

Jason: She's dead.

Speed: Where is she?

Jason: *shakes head* She'll become a statistic.

Speed: You're going to be one in a few seconds if you don't tell me what I need to know.

Jason: *leans back in chair* Go to hell.

Speed: Sit tight. *leaves*

TBC..............
 
Oh now , how can you leave us like that, Geni!! Katie can't be dead!!!

On the flip side of that, RT Anni is just goofballs!:D Kinda seems like she is getting back to her old well, goofy self. Maturity apparently lasts only a short while as evidenced by Delko many times over:lol:

This is so spine tingly...I can't wait to see what happens next!
 
Yes! I'm quicker on the update! Hurrah!

This is great postive, since my classmates have re-dicovered the lod art of spitballing.

The victim is kept for later like a spider coming back to finish off the kill.
Don't let Katie hear that one. :lol:

Stupid Jason kid, "go to hell." I just wish CSI's were allowed to punch the suspects. Just grab a crowbar... *mutters under breath*

Lora, you haven't erased your chances.
Aww, thanks Geni!! :D *hugs;doesn't let go*
 
Jason: *shakes head* She'll become a statistic.

Speed: You're going to be one in a few seconds if you don't tell me what I need to know.
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Ohhhhhh! Go Speedy boy!

That whole comment from Jason about him 'banging' me sent shivers down my spine. That guys creepy. But seriously what guy leave his clothes on? Motard. Anyways, all though Jason's sick he still has a point. The world is full of sterotypes and statistics.

Ohhh Anni and Delko crack me up. Humany. But I think "Whatever rubs your tummy" is going to be my new favorite phrase. Can't wait to see where all of this leads too. Update soon please.
 
But... But... Aww.. Where's Katie?

I loved the line "Whatever rubs your tummy."

Delko and Anni together are hilarious. It should be illegal. :)

Fantastic, as usual, Geni! :)
 
AAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH no katie can't be dead it just isn't possible please please please let her not be dead ... who would be our queen of the spider people and our mustard fiene???? who who ....*starts crying* she just can't be dead its just not true ... tell me it isn't true geni!!!!!
Please update soon ... the cliffhanger ... i don't know if I can sleep tonight if if .... OMG please .... just .... eep ... umm ... fragmented sentence....... *passes out*
 
:eek: *gasp* KATIE!

Geni, you can't just leave us like that! What the hell? I loved how Speed was very protective of katie, no matter where she is. Isn't it always when the people you really love are snatched away from you that you realize how much you care about them? Assuming Katie will be okay, because I'm not even going to think about her not being, Speed will learn from this how much he cares for her and loves her. *pushes Speed close to Katie*

Please, find her fast guys! :lol: Delko and Anni. Anchovies? I HATE anchovies, just making that clear. Anchovies are a waste of weight on a pizza, where you could put more cheese, sausage, pepperoni...ect. ect. Anyway I hate them. :lol: Anyway, again, this is so exciting, please update soon and calm my nerves! *kicks wireless internet that likes to die*
 
Well, I have killed in the name of storylines before. :lol:

And I have killed RT Katie in the name of storylines before. :devil:

...So y'all will just have to find out what happens. :D

*kicks Lilly's wireless*

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Marina, 5pm

Delko: Hey he say anything?

Speed: He confessed to killing his friend.

Delko: Alexx just took him so we have the scene to ourselves.

Speed: *looking at cellphone* Yeah, you find anything probitive so far?

Delko: Well he drinks a lot of Red Bull.

Speed: *nods*

Delko: What are you doing?

Speed: Checking my messages.

Delko: ...Katie's missing and you're checking your messages.

Speed: Mhm.

Delko: *lifts brows* She could be dead.

Speed: I know.

Delko: You don't care?

Speed: I'm a CSI. My only job is to process evidence, I don't get paid enough to care.

Delko: I care.

Speed: And that's why you're still a Level One.

Delko: *laughs* So now we're going on ranks?

Speed: *lifts head*

Delko: You've detached yourself pretty far from this case. You did the same thing when Lori was 'murdered'.

Speed: *staring at Eric*

Delko: You shouldn't be working this case, you're a walking time bomb.

Speed: Eric, I'm not going to explode so why don't you get back in there and do your job.

Delko: Right, you're all fixed now. Mhm.

Speed: *narrows eyes*

Delko: Whatever. When we turn up her bits and pieces, I'll let you know. *walks away*

Speed: *looks down at phone*

Near boat

Delko: *shines flashlight* Hey Speed!

Speed: *walks over*

Delko: Check it out. Blood drops on the ground. Peter was killed inside from the look of all the concentrated spatter, so this must be from a different donor.

Speed: It's gravitational.

Delko: Directionality points toward the parkinglot.

Speed: *looks at parkinglot*

Delko: ...Maybe Katie ran that way?

Speed: *looks at ground*

Delko: Might have gone down there to hide.

Speed: *kneels*

Delko: You find something?

Speed: *opens kit, grabs tweezers*

Delko: Is that hair?

Speed: *lifts hair* Long, wavy, dyed but not recently by the looks of the root. Blonde. Tag's still attached so it was pulled.

Delko: There was a struggle out here.

Speed: *stands*

Delko: Katie ran?

Speed: *walks away*

Delko: Okay, fine. I'll just talk to myself and make snappy come-backs while you walk away.

Parkinglot

Speed: *shines flashlight*

Delko: *walks over* She's not here, man.

Speed: *looks in vehicles*

Delko: We do know she's probably injured though.

Speed: Yeah.

Delko: Probably not seriously.

Speed: Mhm.

Delko: ....And then she was poll dancing in Bolivia wearing nothing but knickers and tea cups.

Speed: Maybe you should clean our your DVD cabinet before you get anymore ideas.

Delko: *laughs*

Speed: *looks around*

Delko: What?

Speed: You hear that?

Delko: ...No.

Speed: Over in the park.

Delko: *looks at park*

Speed: Sounds like crying.

Delko: Someone probably lost their cat or something.

Speed: *walks away*

Delko: *sigh* You know, Horatio's more fun to work with than you!

Park

Katie: *sitting, staring at ground*

Speed: *walks over, kneels*

Katie: ...

Speed: *reaches for cellphone*

Katie: *flinches*

Speed: *dials phone*

Delko: *walks over* HAZZAH!

Katie: *looks at Eric*

Delko: I mean, are you okay?

Katie: *looks at Speed*

Speed: *stands, walks away*

Delko: Did Jason do this?

Katie: *nods*

Delko: We have him in custody, you're safe.

Katie: *wipes eyes* I saw....Him kill a woman.

Delko: He's not going to hurt anyone else, Katie. Ever.

Speed: *walks over* Fire Rescue's on the way. Horatio said he'd meet us here.

Delko: Haven't seen him in a while.

Speed: Apparently he got side-tracked with a different case. Colton and Calleigh had to head out of town.

Delko: So what do we do with her now?

Speed: *looks at Katie* Can you stand up?

Katie: ...Yeah.

Speed: Stand up.

Katie: Why.

Speed: You're evidence.

Katie: Charming. *stands*

Speed: *lifts camera* You fight him back?

Katie: Yeah.

Speed: *snaps pictures* Lay your hands out flat, please.

Katie: *reaches out hands*

Delko: *lifts brow* Well this has been a heart-warming reunion.

Speed: *lowers camera* He hurt you anywhere else?

Katie: I don't know, I just got out of there.

Speed: There was blood near the boat.

Katie: I don't remember being cut or anything.

Speed: Lift up your shirt for a second.

Katie: Why?

Delko: We're first on the scene, we just want to make sure you're okay.

Katie: I'm fine.

Speed: Then you won't mind lifting your shirt.

Katie: *lifts shirt*

Speed: Okay.

Katie: *straightens out shirt* Happy?

Speed: That means it wasn't your blood.

Katie: I told you that.

Delko: Did you get into a fight?

Katie: Yeah I fought with that guy in the boat.

Delko: Did you hurt him?

Katie: I smacked him over the head with a two-by-four.

Speed: *looks at Eric, walks away*

Delko: Excuse us.

Few feet away

Delko: What?

Speed: Jason confessed to killing Peter.

Delko: Maybe Katie took the first hit and he finished it inside the boat.

Speed: Yeah if he was running, the blood would be gravitational.

Delko: Maybe when Jason was off to finish Peter, Katie ran off into the park.

Speed: *nods* Doesn't explain why he didn't come back for her. He went back to work.

Delko: Yeah she could have escaped.

Speed: *sigh* Something's not right.

Delko: Yeah tell me about it.

Speed: It seems a little convenient that she just got dropped on our proverbial doorstep.

Delko: Yeah.

Katie: *walks over* You boys finished yet?

Speed: *looks at Katie* Sit.

Katie: Excuse me?

Speed: Sit on the bench.

Katie: Why?

Speed: You're not going anywhere yet.

Katie: Why, what did I do wrong?

Delko: We just want the paramedics to check you out.

Katie: I'm fine.

Speed: You were crying a minute ago.

Katie: I wasn't fine a minute ago. You guys are here now, so what do you want me to do? Continue crying for my life?

Delko: You seemed pretty frazzled when we first got here.

Katie: What the hell is with you two! Yeah, I was scared a few minutes ago. I thought he was going to come back and kill me! And now Miami-Dade's finest just found me and you expect me to stay scared like a little damsel in distress?

Speed: Did he hurt you? Threaten you?

Katie: No!

Speed: Where did he go after you ran off?

Katie: I ran down here. I didn't see where he went and I didn't care.

Delko: Why didn't you call us?

Katie: Yeah allow me to pull my cellphone out of my ass.

Delko: You could have gone to find help.

Katie: I didn't want to be seen, he might have still been out there looking for me. Look, I don't have to explain myself to you.

Delko: We're just making sure everything checks out.

Katie: Then why do I feel like a suspect?

Speed: Victim.

Katie: *frowns*

Speed: You're a victim, not a suspect.

Katie: I'm not a victim. He didn't do anything to me.

Speed: Alright, we'll get a medical exam and make sure for the sake of the investigation.

Katie: No.

Speed: If he didn't do anything to you, you don't have to worry about it.

Katie: The exam would be pointless.

Speed: Humor us.

Katie: No.

Delko: We can get a warrant.

Katie: Why is my word not good enough? I wouldn't lie about something like that!

Speed: *stares at Katie*

Katie: He just took me to his truck, then we went to the boat and he tied me there. The other guy didn't want anything to do with it so he let me go and Jason got mad, ran after me, and the other guy ran too, so I grabbed a stick and hit the first thing I could see. I didn't mean to hurt the boat owner.

Delko: *nods* That's all we needed to know.

Katie: *sits on bench*

Speed: Paramedics are here, I'll go talk to them. *walks away*

Delko: *sits on bench*

Katie: *shakes head* I don't know why he didn't just kill me when he had the chance.

Delko: We believed he was saving his victims for later.

Katie: *nods*

Delko: You and Speed seem to be...Getting along well.

Katie: *laughs* Yeah, right.

Delko: Something going on between you two?

Katie: I just don't feel like talking to him right now, that's all.

Delko: Okay.

Katie: He's just...Always in your face! I can never catch a break around him.

Delko: He was concerned.

Katie: No, he was being a...Cop.

Delko: That's kind of in his job description.

Katie: *sigh* You know, we used to be so good together. He actually used to care and...Now I'm just evidence.

Delko: *laughs*

Katie: *smirks*

Delko: Well you're more than evidence to me.

Katie: Thanks.

Delko: *hugs Katie* I'm glad you're okay.

Katie: Me too.

Speed: *walks over*

Delko: *lets go* What's the word?

Speed: We don't need the medical exam.

Delko: Why not?

Speed: Jason just commited suicide.

Delko: What?

Speed: He got a hold of a shoelace in his cell and strung himself up.

Delko: In the holding cell?

Speed: Yeah, the officer stepped out for a coffee.

Delko: Is Horatio here?

Speed: Yeah he wants to talk to you.

Delko: Sure. *leaves*

Katie: *stands* That's unfortunate.

Speed: Yeah, the easy way out is unfortunate.

Katie: So, how are you?

Speed: *lifts brow* What do you mean?

Katie: ...How. Are. You.

Speed: Shouldn't I be asking you that?

Katie: I'm just making conversation.

Speed: I'm fine.

Katie: Good.

Speed: And you're right, by the way.

Katie: What do you mean?

Speed: You do have terrible taste in men.

Katie: *smiles* At least I already knew it.

Speed: Why don't you do us all a favor and stay away from the kidnappers.

Katie: *smiling* Deal.

Speed: *nods*

Katie: I'm surprised you didn't kick down doors and kill people on your way to find me.

Speed: *lifts brow* Why would I do that?

Katie: Oh I don't know...

Speed: *frowns*

Katie: I'm teasing you. Geez, you're so gullible.

Speed: I treated this case like any other.

Katie: I'm sure you did.

Speed: *angry sigh*

Katie: *smiles*

Speed: What.

Katie: Nothing.

Speed: *looks around*

Katie: Y'know, I don't think Eric understands how to find people. I mean, it's not hide and seek, he doesn't have to yell "HAZZAH!" when he finds them. *laughs* Although, it's probably better than screaming Wubb-

Speed: *kisses Katie*

TBC..................
 
He. They. She. Oy Vey. *smacks forehead*

At least I got to read this before I went to class. Ah, this is my last week of school then I'm off for *counts fingers* 7 months. *happy sigh*

You know what my absolute FAVORITE song is? :devil:

______ and _______ sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G. And this time it was Speed and Katie. I still can't believe that one.

*gasps* So, what about Anni? :(

Fantabulous as usual, Geni. Rock on. ;)
 
KATIE! She's okay!

(And thank you Geni, your kick seemed to have brought it back to life. I came home and it WORKED!)

Anyways...

Katie! And Speed! And she, and they-! Yeah! Holy crap I knew it, he's so madly in love with her. AND, that's why he can be an insensitive man-ish man sometimes, because he doesn't want to give anything away. Or it's just me speculating. They're so cute together. (Sorry Anni... :) *hugs*)

I'm so glad Jason is dead. He's such an ass, and so not right for Katie even if he wasn't a murderer. What a waste of space (speaking of wastes of space, Ann Donahue...)

Awesomeness, glad Katie's safe! And MAN do I LOVE Delko. He's the coolest character ever. :D And Horatio's coming back, I'm involved in a murder investigation...can't wait for more Geni! Update soon!
 
Well, I have killed in the name of storylines before.

Yeah you DID kill Rick. But we were happy about that. Even though you brought him back. :(

Delko: *walks over* HAZZAH!

Katie: *looks at Eric*

Delko: I mean, are you okay?

:rolleyes: Nice save Eric. (yeesh...)

Although, it's probably better than screaming Wubb-

Speed: *kisses Katie*


*falls off chair* I HATE it when he does that! He's just Mister Surprises isn't he?? *picks self off floor* Anyways, i guess things are pretty much rekindled aren't they? Or maybe we should wait for the next update... :devil:

Oh and speaking of update, i wasquicker to reply to this one too! Huzzah! :lol: Thanks for the update Geni. :)
 
Eric is just too weird!:eek:
but you have to love him!
i think that Speed had that "Spidey sense" if you know what i mean
maybe thats why he wasnt talking to Eric while they were searching the boat
 
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