CSI:Miami Road Trip #11: We Ain't Comin' Home

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  1. Anni Grey

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    :guffaw::guffaw::guffaw:

    One true sign that NEITHER of them should EVER drink again....

    Oh boy, I cannot wait to see what the fallout of this is going to be! Speed should've been getting one, but is he even drunk? No? Then he can sit in the corner...the drunk kids are gonna get ink! :lol: THis is soooooooo frickin hilarious...I barely hung on when Katie picked hers....

    Awesome update!
     
  2. texmex327

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    awesome, truly awesome...i think i want Eric's tattoo

    :D
     
  3. Finch

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    Thanks so much for the fabulous reviews. :)

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    Tattoo parlour

    Anni: *lying on table* OW OW OW!

    Guy: I haven't even touched your skin yet.

    Anni: Oh man, it ALREADY hurts!

    Guy: Suck it up and bite a stick.

    Katie: *hands over pencil*

    Anni: *bites pencil*

    Guy: *places needle on Anni*

    Anni: *bites pencil in half*

    Guy: *looks at Anni* Should we knock her out?

    Katie: I'll take care of this. *pinches Anni's shoulder*

    Anni: OW! What the hell are you doing?

    Katie: ...It works on TV.

    Anni: Someone get me some alcohol.

    Carly: Should I just pour it all over your back?

    Anni: ...I was thinking of pouring it down my throat.

    Katie: Just like-

    Anni: *frowns* DON'T.

    Katie: You don't know what I was going to say.

    Anni: Just don't, Katie.

    Katie: Pfft.

    Carly: These things are sterile, right? I mean, we don't have to ask specially or anything...

    Anni: Stop it, guys!

    Hummerhome, 9am next day

    Speed: *drinking water, reading newspaper*

    Anni: *walks over, sits*

    Speed: Hey. Where'd you guys go last night?

    Anni: Ugh, you don't even want to know. The parts I do remember? Definitely not something I want to.

    Speed: *smirks*

    Katie: *runs over* LOOK WHAT I GOT! *lifts shirt*

    Speed: *spits out water, covers mouth*

    Katie: *smiling* Ain't she great?

    Speed: *staring blankly*

    Anni: We sort of had a little too much fun last night.

    Speed: *nods slowly*

    Katie: ANNI GOT ONE TOO!

    Speed: *looks at Anni*

    Anni: *looks down at table*

    Speed: Well let's see it.

    Anni: *lifts head* Huh?

    Speed: I'm sure I'll run into it eventually.

    Anni: *sigh* ...*pushes edge of jeans down*

    Speed: *tilts head* It's nice.

    Anni: ...It is?

    Speed: Yeah.

    Anni: Really?

    Speed: It suits you.

    Anni: *smiles*

    Katie: WHAT ABOUT MINE!

    Speed: *sigh* Yours is...unique.

    Katie: YAY! *runs away*

    Speed: *shakes head* That's hideous.

    Anni: *grabs piece of muffin* I don't know, it's kind of neat.

    Speed: *looks at Anni*

    Anni: *smirks*

    Gables Estates, house, bedroom

    Scott: *squints, looks at window*

    Light pierces room

    Scott: *looks at Lori, places hand on her arm* Lori. The baby.

    Lori: Mm, I already got her 10 minutes ago. She fell right back asleep so I put her back to bed. Steph's watching cartoons.

    Scott: *looks at watch* You waited until 10 minutes ago?

    Lori: No, I was up at 5.

    Scott: I didn't notice.

    Lori: You're a man.

    Scott: B-

    Lori: *covers Scott's lips* You know the rules. Baby's asleep which means pseudo-mommy gets to sleep.

    Scott: *lies head on pillow*

    Lori: *places hand on Scott's cheek* Good boy.

    Scott: *kisses Lori's fingers*

    Lori: *smirks*

    Scott: *smiles*

    Lori: *opens eyes*

    Scott: *kisses Lori's nose*

    Lori: *scrunches nose*

    Scott: *laughs*

    Lori: *ruffles Scott's hair* I'll bite ya next time.

    Scott: Sure you will.

    Lori: You want to test that theory?

    Scott: *kisses Lori's cheek*

    Lori: Sleep.

    Scott: *kisses Lori's lips*

    Lori: *sighs*

    Scott: *smirks*

    Lori: *pushes Scott's face* Seriously, I'm tired. Go away.

    Scott: *traces finger along Lori's arm* How many mornings do you think we'll share together in our lifetime?

    Lori: *opens eyes* What kind of a stupid question is that?

    Scott: You said it yourself. We're not getting any younger.

    Lori: No no no. Don't. Stop. We are both going to die together in this very bed at the age of 100.

    Scott: *stares at Lori*

    Lori: I will not accept anything less.

    Scott: *lowers eyes*

    Lori: *snuggles closer* We're not going anywhere for a long, long time.

    Scott: *closes eyes* Yeah. Long time.

    Lori: *nestles head in Scott's chest*

    Scott: I love you.

    Lori: Me too. But I also love you.

    Scott: *laughs*

    Lori: *smiles*

    TBC..............................
     
  4. texmex327

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    Aww...Scott & Lori are so adorable. :D

    Speed likes Anni's tattoo...well that's good. I thought he was gonna be mad.

    Eric chickened out :(

    Great update!
     
  5. Anni Grey

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    Awww...Speed likes Anni's tat, and thinks the horny devil is hideous...:guffaw: I guess what Katie doesn't know won't hurt her.

    Lori and Scott are really...they're just too sweet together. But did I detect a hint of foreshadowing there- is there something that Scott's not telling Lori to have him react the way he did to her assertion that they were going to live to be a hundred together? Hmmm...interersting.

    Awesome update!
     
  6. racefh853629

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    Aww... those are nice looking tattoos, but I had the image of Eric looking down and screaming, "THE WUBBA MONSTER GOT ME!!!" :lol: :lol:

    I love how together Lori and Scott are, but I agree with Anni... there's some foreshadowing there... *hugs them*

    Great update! :D
     
  7. CSISDFlash

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    HHmmm ! Maybe Scott is starting to wonder about the Columbians comming to get him ! I think he better let Lori in on that before something bad starts to happen and theres nothing that they can do about it!.

    Ahh ! Speed needs to get a tattoo! Maybe he should have the babies name an birthday tattooed on his arm or maybe have his and Anni's wedding annaversary! Oh what if he had the anniverasary Tattooed on him and come to find out it was the wrong date and it was his and Katie's wedding annaversary! That would be a fight waiting to happen! Lol!

    Great update Geni!
     
  8. Finch

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    Thanks so much for the reviews!

    Foreshadowing? What's this 'foreshadowing' you speak of? :angel: :p

    ...Hehehe. :devil:

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    Hummerhome, 6pm

    Delko: *walks out of bathroom, naked* Show and tell time!

    Everyone: *looks at Eric*

    Speed: ...*puts down hotdog*

    Horatio: What in the hell are you doing?

    Delko: I drew my own tattoo with magic markers.

    Carly: *tilts head* What is it?

    Delko: You can't tell? It's Wubba.

    Katie: What's he doing to your p-

    Speed: *elbows Katie*

    Katie: It's very nice.

    Delko: I'm not sure I captured the eyes well enough.

    Speed: I can't believe I'm still staring at that.

    Horatio: Eric, for God's sake put on some pants.

    Delko: You don't like my Wubba?

    Speed: NO! No, don't you dare start calling that your Wubba.

    Delko: *looks down* Why not? Ryan named his 'Little Detective'.

    Everyone: *looks at Ryan*

    Ryan: ...Let's all assume he's lying instead of looking to me for an explanation.

    Horatio: Eric, cover that up.

    Delko: You guys are no fun. *walks away*

    Speed: I have a new appreciation for women.

    Anni: *pats Speed on the head*

    Gables Estates, house, backyard

    Scott: *measures wood*

    Steph: *sits in lawn chair* Daddy, Mommy says it's...um...*taps chin*...OOH. *smiles* Hopeless.

    Scott: *lifts eyes* She does, huh.

    Steph: *smiling* Yup. She also says I'm gettin' a brother or sister soon.

    Scott: *stares at Steph* ...Really.

    Steph: Mhm. Momma won't tell me where babies come from.

    Scott: Why not?

    Steph: She says you wanna tell me.

    Scott: *looks over at house* How nice of her.

    Steph: *rocks back and forth on chair*

    Scott: Um...I'll tell you when you're older.

    Steph: Why?

    Scott: Because Daddy's busy.

    Steph: You won't be busy when I'm older?

    Scott: *smiles* Exactly.

    Steph: *lifts brow* But you ain't doin' nothin', Daddy.

    Scott: *looks down at measuring tape*

    Steph: *giggles*

    Scott: *smirks* Okay, enough work. Wanna go play catch?

    Steph: *wide-eyed* YA!

    Scott: Great. Go get your ball.

    Steph: *jumps off chair, runs away*

    20 minutes later, lawn

    Scott: *falls over* OOF!

    Steph: *giggling*

    Scott: Oh you got me. I'm down!

    Steph: *grabs Scott's shirt* Get up, Daddy!

    Scott: Ooh I don't think so. *grabs Steph, tickles her*

    Steph: *squeals, giggles*

    Scott: *smiling*

    Lori: *leans against door, smirks*

    Scott: *looks up at Lori*

    Lori: Hi.

    Scott: Hey. Want to play?

    Lori: I'm afraid I wouldn't be any good at it.

    Steph: Momma! *stands* Daddy says I can go to the other grama's house in New York!

    Lori: *looks at Scott* Uh huh...you sure you want to go there? I mean...your uncle Josh wouldn't mind if you stayed over.

    Steph: I don't like Cait n' Ethan. They're meanies.

    Lori: *kneels* Well the other 'grama' is a bitch. Do you know what that means?

    Scott: Lori...

    Steph: *frowns* Momma, that's a bad word.

    Lori: Well she's a bad person.

    Scott: She is not a bad person.

    Lori: *rolls eyes* Mama's boy.

    Scott: Steph, go inside please.

    Steph: *runs inside house*

    Scott: *stands* You might not like her but she's still my mother and she's still Stephanie's grandmother.

    Lori: And how much 'mothering' did she do for you when you were being taken care of by the maid? For all you know, you were a mistake she had the inconvenience to deal with.

    Scott: You weren't there for my childhood.

    Lori: As far as I've heard, neither was she.

    Scott: She's going. *walks inside house*

    Lori: *shakes head*

    TBC.............................
     
  9. CSISDFlash

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    Wow Steph going to grandmaws is not going to be a good subject matter for Scott & Lori to discuss. of couse she will probably try to poison her mind against Lori! Hey but what else is new doesn't Katie try to do that already ! lol!

    OMG ! Eric comming out naked and showing everybody his Wubba ! Lol! that is to much! And Ryan calling his little Detective! LMFO! I can just see Speed tring to look away ! ROFLMAO ! It so horrible but i can't look away its like a train wreck! lol!

    I'm suprised that Anni and Katie didn't break out the Camera and pose fore Pictures holding it for him ! lol! Now that would be totally Katie & Anni ! lol!

    great update Geni!
     
  10. Anni Grey

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    LOL...Leave it to Eric to instill a show and tell moment:guffaw: I half way expected for him to give them an impromtu show or something. Actually pretty glad about that though... It was a near classic scene;)

    And Scott wants Steph to be exposed to his mother...Hmm...let's see the ramifications of this:

    1) Mrs. Finch would end up in a body bag
    2) Mrs. Finch would end up in a body bag
    and three
    3) Mrs. Finch would end up in a body bag.

    Yeah, i think it might be a bit counter productive for their marriage, but Scott's right, it is his mother and he cannot deny her over seeing his grandchild. Now, if Doris really cares...that remains to be a mystery!

    Loved the update!
     
  11. texmex327

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    OMG! You rock! Eric walking out naked for show and tell...that was freakin awesome

    HA HA Steph asking Scott where babies come from and he tells her that he'll tell her when she's older

    Yeah, things aren't going to end well for Scott's mom.

    Great update!
     
  12. Finch

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    Thanks for the reviews! (and the lovely compliment :D)

    LOL. Let's hope 'Mrs Finch' knows what she's getting into. :lol:

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    Gables Estates, house

    Lori: *shuts door* We're not finished.

    Scott: I'm not going to argue with you.

    Steph: *sitting on stairs, looking into room*

    Lori: Well too bad because you can't just decide something without me and then run away when I don't agree. I have family here, she can stay with them.

    Scott: What about my family? They suddenly don't count because you don't like them?

    Lori: Your family is a bunch of rich snobs. And in case you forgot, they were horrible to me. Hell, they certainly don't give you any breaks either.

    Scott: That's just the way they are.

    Lori: *crosses arms* I won't have it. If it means us never leaving this house again, so be it because I'm not putting my daughter within 10 feet of that woman.

    Scott: She has the legal right to see her.

    Lori: I don't care! I have the legal right to get a boob job, it doesn't mean I will!

    Scott: This is a little different.

    Lori: She's not going! End of story!

    Scott: If you just consider it, m-

    Lori: You didn't bother discussing it with me the first time! Why the hell should I consider it now!

    Scott: Because we're discussing it now.

    Lori: Scott, I swear to God sometimes I just want to wring your neck. This is so typical of you! You tell me things at the last second and that's only when I ask what the hell's going on! And then you arrogantly pretend to be diplomatic and calm so I end up looking like the crazy bitch! I'M GETTING TIRED OF THIS!

    Scott: Lori, I didn't mea-

    Lori: *slams fist into Scott's face*

    Scott: *staggers back, holds chin*

    Steph: *staring blankly*

    Scott: *looks down at hand*

    Lori: *frowning*

    Scott: Excuse me. *walks away*

    Lori: *rubs forehead*

    Bedroom

    Lori: *opens door*

    Scott: *reading book*

    Lori: ...Can I come in?

    Scott: *flips page*

    Lori: *steps in, shuts door*

    Scott: *staring down at book*

    Lori: ...I reacted badly.

    Scott: *turns page*

    Lori: I know what I did was wrong and there is no excuse.

    Scott: *closes book, lifts head*

    Lori: I apologize. It won't happen again. So. *smiles nervously* All is forgiven?

    Scott: *staring at Lori*

    Lori: *smile fades* Um...*scratches head*...you're supposed to tell me that I'm forgiven and everything will be okay.

    Scott: *shakes head*

    Lori: *runs over, sits on bed* I'll make it up to you. I'll do whatever you want.

    Scott: I want you to leave me alone for a couple hours.

    Lori: *stares at Scott*

    Scott: Please.

    Lori: *nods* Sure. *stands, leaves*

    Scott: *sigh*

    Miami café, 2 hours later

    Scott: *sips coffee, reading newspaper*

    Amy: *looks over* Scott?

    Scott: *lifts head*

    Amy: *smiles* Scott Finch! *laughs, walks over* Funny running into you.

    Scott: *smiles, stands* It's nice to see you, Amy.

    Amy: *wraps arms around Scott* How are you?

    Scott: I'm alright. And yourself?

    Amy: *lets go* Oh I'm fine. Decided to come down and get some sun. You mind if I join you?

    Scott: Please, have a seat. *pulls out chair*

    Amy: *sits*

    Scott: *walks around table, sits*

    Amy: I was hoping to visit Tom this evening, do you know if he's working?

    Scott: Tom. Uh...I don't think it's such a good idea.

    Amy: Why not? Is he okay?

    Scott: A little while ago, he was...shot. Trying to save a family.

    Amy: Oh my God. Was he killed?

    Scott: No. But he lost a lot of blood and his brain was without oxygen for some time. He doesn't remember any of it.

    Amy: Wow. That's awful.

    Scott: The thing is...he's lost maybe a couple years.

    Amy: *stares at Scott*

    Scott: He probably doesn't even know you exist.

    Amy: ...Geez.

    Scott: Aside from that, he's his usual self. He's back at work.

    Amy: I guess it's a good idea I didn't just head straight there, huh.

    Scott: Probably.

    Amy: *shakes head* The things that can happen in this life, y'know?

    Scott: *nods*

    Amy: Would I be crazy if I said sometimes I wish I had been knocked on the head so I didn't remember some of the things I've seen?

    Scott: No, not at all. I know how you feel.

    Amy: Have you tried? I mean, have you done anything stupid to make it all go away?

    Scott: *looks down at table, nods*

    Amy: *scoffs* I'll tell you mine if you tell me yours.

    Scott: I tried to kill myself.

    Amy: *stares at Scott*

    Scott: Lori stopped me.

    Amy: ...If she hadn't, would you have done it?

    Scott: I don't know. But I'm thankful she was there. *lifts eyes* When I'm with her...when I wake up next to her...sometimes that's enough to make me forget there's anything wrong in this world.

    Amy: You must love her very much.

    Scott: *nods*

    Amy: *fiddles with paper*

    Scott: So what about you?

    Amy: I tried to buy a time machine from Ebay.

    Scott: *smiles*

    Amy: *laughs* Yeah apparently those don't exist. What can I say, I was desperate and hoped things would play out a little differently.

    Scott: Well you never know what kind of technology the human race will come up with in the next 50 years.

    Amy: 50? Screw that, I'll probably have alzheimers by then. Job well done I say.

    Scott: *smiling*

    TBC.......................................
     
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    Wow Lori just knocked him in the chin! What the hell was she thinking! I hope they can get this shit woked out before she stabs him with a knofe or shoots him with a gun!

    Hmm Que Amy stage right! Will she be getting re aquanted with Tom, or will she go for the gusto and try to move in on Lori's turf this time. Things may get really interesting!


    Great update Geni!
     
  14. racefh853629

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    *hugs Steph* Poor sweetie. :(

    And poor Scott too, for getting decked. And poor Lori too... she does have a point, though, that every time they get into a fight, she looks like she's insane. Whether she actually is or not is another story... :lol:

    Oh, Lord, Eric's nicknamed his junior, "Wubba"... That's only going to lead to more trouble... :lol:

    Great updates! :D
     
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    OMG! She decked him!

    Great update. Hmm....this'll be interesting.

    Can't wait to read more :D
     
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