Is it possible to rewrite the covering letter and keep the signatures already on it? If not, that's okay, we can delete the current petition and get all the supporters to sign it again. I have a better covering letter that we can use instead. Apologies to the mods for the current petition; I was not asked to check it over before it was posted and therefore only discovered its content once I signed, myself. Here's the covering letter which I wrote; would all please take time to consider its content and add or remove whatever parts you see fit? I'd like all of the campaigners to have a say in what goes into our covering letter. Remember, it must be professional.
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To: CBS Executives
Re: Bring Back Burn
We, the undersigned, are fans of the character Aiden Burn from the show under your production entitled CSI: New York. We are disappointed that Vanessa Ferlito has chosen to leave the show, and we understand that the parting was amicable. Therefore, we request that you speak with Miss Ferlito regarding her return to the show, as we feel her presence adds to the dynamic of the cast. Her absence has left a void in the show that we, her fans, would like to see eradicated by her return. We understand that she may choose to stay with her decision, but we would like you to inform her that her fans are upset and she is missed.
Thank you very much,
The Undersigned.