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  1. Rizzoli

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    Lifesize cut out of Lindsay that she had left him to keep him company whilst she was in Montana...
     
    Rizzoli, Aug 26, 2011
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    Flack helped Danny up from the floor. They all heard a noise coming from outside. It was...
     
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    Mac coming in with his gun drawn to see what all the shooting was about. When Mac saw what was going on he...

    As far as the shooting Mac was coming to see about, refer to my previous post in this thread (post #449).
     
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    started laughing. "Those weren't even real spiders, you scaredy-cats". Sid looked at Mac and...
     
    GregNickRyanFan, Aug 26, 2011
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    Finally managed to stutter out "Y-Y-Y-You're k-k-kidding, r-r-r-right?"
     
    Carolyn_333, Aug 26, 2011
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    "No, they are robotic spiders made by our suspect".

    "Why are they here?"

    "Because he's spying on us," Mac said as he began to...
     
    GregNickRyanFan, Aug 26, 2011
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    Pick one of them up to show everyone. However, he dropped it when...
     
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    there was a loud explosion across the street from them. Everyone began to...
     
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    Push and shove each other trying to get out of the building so they could...
     
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    So that they could all save themselves, instead of helping each other...
     
    robotnik22, Aug 27, 2011
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    "What is going on in the hallway?" Mac said, walking out, seeing everyone trampling over each other. "Hey!" He shouted. "Stay calm! We don't know if its safe to leave the building yet. Let's wait for word from...
     
    GregNickRyanFan, Aug 27, 2011
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    Jo. She's on the scene right now. She said she'd call me when...
     
    Carolyn_333, Aug 27, 2011
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    she had some news".

    Hawkes looked out the window and saw...
     
    GregNickRyanFan, Aug 27, 2011
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    Jo talking to Stella Bonasera. Hawkes said to everyone in the room...
     
    Carolyn_333, Aug 27, 2011
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    "Stella's outside". Everyone ran to the window and didn't see anyone but Jo and a fireman. Danny looked at Hawkes and said...
     
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