MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
mmmmm go Flacky lolol
A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love
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nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Go Flack... I just hope that M and S are finished betime he gets back :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
After saying goodnight again, Don and Jennifer kissed once more, causing the passion of it all to overtake them. Gripping her tighter in his arms, he pushed her up against the wall, and began caressing her beautiful form, as he undid her buttons of her blouse one by one. Once Don had her exposed, he kissed her neck and worked his way down her chest, as she purred and sighed. Taking it deeper, Don unclipped her jeans, and pulled them, down over her ankles, tossing them to the floor.
"God love, you don't wear panties"? "Never, I find them to constricting". "Oh....okay, said Don, as he picked her up, wrapped her legs around his and plunged into her heat, as she clawed his back, causing him to hiss. "Damn Jennifer, easy girl". "Easy wasn't going to happen, she was an complete animal, biting, nipping, scratching up Don's skin. Pumping deeply into her, Don released, as Jennifer did, screaming into the night.
"Take me to my room Don, down the hall to the left". As he carried her to her room, and opened the door, he noticed her room, was done in a jungle scene. "Christ....it looks like the jungle in here, where did you get all those plants, and look at that rug". "You like it big boy"? she giggled. "Oh yeah, it's definetely you". Jennifer giggled, for she knew Don was refering about the way she had clawed and bit him. "I'll get somthing for those scratches". "Okay, thanks, they do sting quite a bit".
As she left to get the cream, Don noticed several other things about the new girl. "Damn Jennifer, are you into S&M"? "A little, why, does that bother you"? "No, not at all, just curious, as you have alot of dark sinister play things". *Giggling*. "Yeah, don't let it scare you Don, most of these are display items, from my deceased husbands store". "You were married"? "yeah, almost made it to ten years, than he died of a massive stroke". "I'm sorry Jennifer, and I can relate". "I know you can Don, now let me tend too those scratches".
TBC....
"God love, you don't wear panties"? "Never, I find them to constricting". "Oh....okay, said Don, as he picked her up, wrapped her legs around his and plunged into her heat, as she clawed his back, causing him to hiss. "Damn Jennifer, easy girl". "Easy wasn't going to happen, she was an complete animal, biting, nipping, scratching up Don's skin. Pumping deeply into her, Don released, as Jennifer did, screaming into the night.
"Take me to my room Don, down the hall to the left". As he carried her to her room, and opened the door, he noticed her room, was done in a jungle scene. "Christ....it looks like the jungle in here, where did you get all those plants, and look at that rug". "You like it big boy"? she giggled. "Oh yeah, it's definetely you". Jennifer giggled, for she knew Don was refering about the way she had clawed and bit him. "I'll get somthing for those scratches". "Okay, thanks, they do sting quite a bit".
As she left to get the cream, Don noticed several other things about the new girl. "Damn Jennifer, are you into S&M"? "A little, why, does that bother you"? "No, not at all, just curious, as you have alot of dark sinister play things". *Giggling*. "Yeah, don't let it scare you Don, most of these are display items, from my deceased husbands store". "You were married"? "yeah, almost made it to ten years, than he died of a massive stroke". "I'm sorry Jennifer, and I can relate". "I know you can Don, now let me tend too those scratches".
TBC....
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
mmmm naughty naughty :devil: :devil:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
It must have been 4am when Don got in, and crashed on the bed. Looking over at the table, he seen Caroline's picture, and getting up he held it, and said...."Caroline, I miss you and our baby, but I need to move on, and live again, I hope you can understand". Then taking the picture, he put it in his drawer, and fell asleep. Just as he was heading into deep slumber, he heard the pitter patter of little feet, and looking up, he seen Mackenzie, staring at him. "What's the matter sweetie"? "I eep wit ou Uncle On"? "Sure love, come on up". As Mackenzie climbed up, she curled into Don, and fell asleep.
In the morning, Stella noticed Mackenzie was missing in action again. Heading down to Don's room, she seen them curled up in each others arms. "What are you doing love"? asked Mac. "Watching our daughter, sleep". "Again...said Mac, we better hope Don never leaves, or Mackenzie will be heart broken". "I know, that's what concerns me". "Try not to worry love, it will be alright". Closing the door, Mac and Stella headed downstairs for breakfast. "Look love, we are all alone, shall we make up for the last interruption, and christine our new counter". Laughing Stella said..."Are you sure, you never know, someone might walk in again". "Oh well, it's a chance I'm willing to take, if you are". "Sure....I'm game, said Stella undressing ahead of Mac.
With their clothes shredded, and arms wrapped around each other, Mac lifted Stella onto the counter, and kissed her, with all the passion inside him. "Open for me love, I need to feel your heat". As Stella opened, Mac plunged deep within her. Moving within each other, they purred and panted, not realizing the door was opening. "Mama...dada, said Mackenzie, walking in. *Giggling again, Mackenzie said..."Ook at dada bumbum again". Not sure what do this time, Mac stayed still as he could. "Mackenzie, can you go see Uncle Don for a moment.
Just as Mackenzie turned around to leave, Don walked in. "Oh Christ, not agian, damn Mac, can't you two kids control yourselves, come Mackenzie, Uncle Don read you a book". "But I ungry, Uncle On". "I know Mackenzie, mommy will make you something, and I'll read to you, while we wait". Taking Mackenzie by the hand, Don lead her from the kitchen. "That is it Mac, no more kitchen stunts, from now on, everything stays in the bedroom, unless the twins aren't home". "I know love, you are right", said Mac pulling on his clothes. "I'll get breakfast started", she giggled.
TBC....
In the morning, Stella noticed Mackenzie was missing in action again. Heading down to Don's room, she seen them curled up in each others arms. "What are you doing love"? asked Mac. "Watching our daughter, sleep". "Again...said Mac, we better hope Don never leaves, or Mackenzie will be heart broken". "I know, that's what concerns me". "Try not to worry love, it will be alright". Closing the door, Mac and Stella headed downstairs for breakfast. "Look love, we are all alone, shall we make up for the last interruption, and christine our new counter". Laughing Stella said..."Are you sure, you never know, someone might walk in again". "Oh well, it's a chance I'm willing to take, if you are". "Sure....I'm game, said Stella undressing ahead of Mac.
With their clothes shredded, and arms wrapped around each other, Mac lifted Stella onto the counter, and kissed her, with all the passion inside him. "Open for me love, I need to feel your heat". As Stella opened, Mac plunged deep within her. Moving within each other, they purred and panted, not realizing the door was opening. "Mama...dada, said Mackenzie, walking in. *Giggling again, Mackenzie said..."Ook at dada bumbum again". Not sure what do this time, Mac stayed still as he could. "Mackenzie, can you go see Uncle Don for a moment.
Just as Mackenzie turned around to leave, Don walked in. "Oh Christ, not agian, damn Mac, can't you two kids control yourselves, come Mackenzie, Uncle Don read you a book". "But I ungry, Uncle On". "I know Mackenzie, mommy will make you something, and I'll read to you, while we wait". Taking Mackenzie by the hand, Don lead her from the kitchen. "That is it Mac, no more kitchen stunts, from now on, everything stays in the bedroom, unless the twins aren't home". "I know love, you are right", said Mac pulling on his clothes. "I'll get breakfast started", she giggled.
TBC....
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Don must find it hard to keep it together when he sees them :lol:
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
lololol uhoh yet again :devil: And yes he must :laugh:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Later in the day, Mac and Don headed over to NYPD to meet the new Coroner. As they entered Danny was laughing with her. "Hi Jennifer, said Flack, this is Mac Taylor". Facing each other, Jennifer said...."nice to finally meet you Mac, I'm Jennifer, your new Coroner". "It's nice to meet you too, Danny any news"? "No quiet day so far Mac, no calls". "Okay, I'll be in my office, if you need me, Jennifer, I'm sure I'll be seeing you again soon". "Yes Mac, I'm sure you will".
With Mac out of site, and Danny out fot he Locker room, Jennifer attacked Flack, with her animal instincts again. "JEn...are you insane, stop that, not here, Mac will freak if he found out, this is our work place". "I know, an I'm out to make it our play place too". Flack wasn't usre what to do, she was a handful, and he wasn't sure how to comtrol her. Until the phone rang. "Flack". "Hey Flack, it's Danny, we have murder over at the Art Exhibit, Mac needs us now". "On my way Danny, I'll meet you there".
"You better get your bag Jen, I'm sure you are next on Mac's list for the call". "Okay, I'll meet you there too, as I have to bring the Coroner van". Once Flack had left, Jennifer grabbed her bag and headed out. As she arrived, she noticed the body had been hung on the sword of the Knight. "Well this is interesting, isn't it". "I'll your help guys, when I see three, we lift him off together, ready...one, two, three". With the four of them lifting the body, they had trouble releasing it.
"Listen Jennifer, please ensure you get the body tagged, and use a new bag, due to the amount of spectator's we have watching". "No problem Mac, I'll get right on it". "Danny process the scene, and I'll check with Flack on possible suspects". Walking outside Mac noticed a child crying. "Hi there, I'm Det. Mac Taylor, see my badge, where is your mom and dad"? "I can't find them, she cried, I got lost in the crowd". "Okay, why don't you come with me, and we will find your mom, and dad, okay"? "Okay", said the child.
When they got back inside, Danny ran up to Mac and informed them they had another victim, female. Putting two and two together, Mac was begining to think, this could be the childs parents. "Okay Danny, take this child to my car, and stay with her, understand". "Yeah Mac, sure, come on sweetie, come with me". With the child out of sight, Mac checked the female body, and found the wallet, opening and looking inside, he found the picture of the girls family. "Great....said Mac, just what I need to start my week". Walking back outside, he thought of the best way, to let this child know, her parents were dead".
tBC....
TBC..........
With Mac out of site, and Danny out fot he Locker room, Jennifer attacked Flack, with her animal instincts again. "JEn...are you insane, stop that, not here, Mac will freak if he found out, this is our work place". "I know, an I'm out to make it our play place too". Flack wasn't usre what to do, she was a handful, and he wasn't sure how to comtrol her. Until the phone rang. "Flack". "Hey Flack, it's Danny, we have murder over at the Art Exhibit, Mac needs us now". "On my way Danny, I'll meet you there".
"You better get your bag Jen, I'm sure you are next on Mac's list for the call". "Okay, I'll meet you there too, as I have to bring the Coroner van". Once Flack had left, Jennifer grabbed her bag and headed out. As she arrived, she noticed the body had been hung on the sword of the Knight. "Well this is interesting, isn't it". "I'll your help guys, when I see three, we lift him off together, ready...one, two, three". With the four of them lifting the body, they had trouble releasing it.
"Listen Jennifer, please ensure you get the body tagged, and use a new bag, due to the amount of spectator's we have watching". "No problem Mac, I'll get right on it". "Danny process the scene, and I'll check with Flack on possible suspects". Walking outside Mac noticed a child crying. "Hi there, I'm Det. Mac Taylor, see my badge, where is your mom and dad"? "I can't find them, she cried, I got lost in the crowd". "Okay, why don't you come with me, and we will find your mom, and dad, okay"? "Okay", said the child.
When they got back inside, Danny ran up to Mac and informed them they had another victim, female. Putting two and two together, Mac was begining to think, this could be the childs parents. "Okay Danny, take this child to my car, and stay with her, understand". "Yeah Mac, sure, come on sweetie, come with me". With the child out of sight, Mac checked the female body, and found the wallet, opening and looking inside, he found the picture of the girls family. "Great....said Mac, just what I need to start my week". Walking back outside, he thought of the best way, to let this child know, her parents were dead".
tBC....
TBC..........
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
oooh this should be interesting. More, more! lol at Flack and Jen :devil:
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
poor girl 
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Hello Bex
Yes, I'm for real, but my story is only fiction. Please try not to take it seriously, this is fantasy, we all know these stories, are not real. Just like the TV Show is not real life, it's just great actors, playing their roles. The story is for enjoyment, and fun. So please....if it offends you, do not read it. But please remember this is FanFiction
Thanks LMH
As Mac headed out, to the car, he the little run calling mommy, mommy". As he ran after, he seen her clinging to her mom. "Excuse me, I'm Det.Taylor, this is your daughter"? Yes, she is". Now Mac was confused, for the victim was carrying a picture of the young girl. "Mrs... can you come with me for a moment please". "Of course Detective". Leaving her daughter with the Officer, she headed back into the building with Mac. "What is this about detective"? "We have to victims, male and female, the female was carrying a picture of your daughter, which is why I was confused when you said you were her mother".
As they neared the bodies, the woman screamed. "Oh my God, that's my ex husband, and his new wife, what happened"? "That's what we are trying to figure out". "Oh my God, this can't be happening, I just talked to them not more then half an hour ago, they asked me to come pick up Sarah, because they had something to take care of". "Any idea what"? "No...we don't talk that often, so I'm not sure". "Okay...you can go, but please give your information to the Officer, we may need you later". "I will, please Det.Taylor, find out who did this". "I will, you can count on it".
"Mac....what's going on, who was she"? asked Danny. "It seems it was her ex husband and his new wife that were murdered". "Huh...then what was she doing here"? "She said she got a call to pick up her daughter". "You don't believe that, do you Mac"? "I'm not sure Danny, I'll know more at post". Watching the woman walk away with her daughter, Mac wondered exactly how much of her story was the truth".
Meanwhile...Hawkes and his son, were playing blocks, when Mac called. "Hey Mac, what's up"? "Listen Sheldon, can you come in and do a post for me"? "I'd love to Mac, but I'm home with Sheldon Jr, and Jimeka is out". "I know Sheldon, but this is a very weird case, and I'd like you on it". "Okay Mac, I'll bring Sheldon Jr, and be down shortly".
"Thanks Sheldon, I owe you one for this".
TBC.....
Yes, I'm for real, but my story is only fiction. Please try not to take it seriously, this is fantasy, we all know these stories, are not real. Just like the TV Show is not real life, it's just great actors, playing their roles. The story is for enjoyment, and fun. So please....if it offends you, do not read it. But please remember this is FanFiction
Thanks LMH
As Mac headed out, to the car, he the little run calling mommy, mommy". As he ran after, he seen her clinging to her mom. "Excuse me, I'm Det.Taylor, this is your daughter"? Yes, she is". Now Mac was confused, for the victim was carrying a picture of the young girl. "Mrs... can you come with me for a moment please". "Of course Detective". Leaving her daughter with the Officer, she headed back into the building with Mac. "What is this about detective"? "We have to victims, male and female, the female was carrying a picture of your daughter, which is why I was confused when you said you were her mother".
As they neared the bodies, the woman screamed. "Oh my God, that's my ex husband, and his new wife, what happened"? "That's what we are trying to figure out". "Oh my God, this can't be happening, I just talked to them not more then half an hour ago, they asked me to come pick up Sarah, because they had something to take care of". "Any idea what"? "No...we don't talk that often, so I'm not sure". "Okay...you can go, but please give your information to the Officer, we may need you later". "I will, please Det.Taylor, find out who did this". "I will, you can count on it".
"Mac....what's going on, who was she"? asked Danny. "It seems it was her ex husband and his new wife that were murdered". "Huh...then what was she doing here"? "She said she got a call to pick up her daughter". "You don't believe that, do you Mac"? "I'm not sure Danny, I'll know more at post". Watching the woman walk away with her daughter, Mac wondered exactly how much of her story was the truth".
Meanwhile...Hawkes and his son, were playing blocks, when Mac called. "Hey Mac, what's up"? "Listen Sheldon, can you come in and do a post for me"? "I'd love to Mac, but I'm home with Sheldon Jr, and Jimeka is out". "I know Sheldon, but this is a very weird case, and I'd like you on it". "Okay Mac, I'll bring Sheldon Jr, and be down shortly".
"Thanks Sheldon, I owe you one for this".
TBC.....
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
more, more, I wanna know what really happened
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Yeah more...
Quote: "Yes, I'm for real, but my story is only fiction. Please try not to take it seriously, this is fantasy, we all know these stories, are not real. Just like the TV Show is not real life, it's just great actors, playing their roles. The story is for enjoyment, and fun. So please....if it offends you, do not read it. But please remember this is FanFiction"
I know what fanfiction is; I write a lot, and beta even more. I understand your story is a work of fiction (and that TV is also a work of fiction!), and this it is all just for fun, but I am curious as to how serious you are with this particular story. Grammar, characterisation, plot, etc. Are you being particular with your style, content and composition? In other words: is it an intentional crackfic or just a general work of fiction?
I know what fanfiction is; I write a lot, and beta even more. I understand your story is a work of fiction (and that TV is also a work of fiction!), and this it is all just for fun, but I am curious as to how serious you are with this particular story. Grammar, characterisation, plot, etc. Are you being particular with your style, content and composition? In other words: is it an intentional crackfic or just a general work of fiction?