nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Yay- ten years later with kids who can speak their mind 
Poor Girl
Poor Girl
A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When Tereasa's parent's arrived, Mac took them aside. "I'm Det.Taylor, I'd like to ask you a few question's". "Sure, go ahead"? "Can you tell me if Tereasa had any boyfriends, or male friends she may have been close to". "No..none, Tereasa is a good girl, we've never had a problem with boy's, this is our fault detective, I told my husband, to pick her up, after the christmas concert, but he informed me, when he arrived, that Tereasa wasn't there".
"Is that right sir"? "Yes, I arrived about 8:40pm, but everyone had left, I seen the police cruiser's, but thought nothing of it, at the time". "You didn't find it strange, that your daughter wasn't waiting for you"? "No...like I said Tereasa is a good girl, I just figured she went home with her friend". "Okay, that's all for now, you may see your daughter now".
"What do you think Mac"? "I'm not sure yet, but something isn't right, I think we should do a check on Mr.James". "Okay, I'll get started on that now, see you back at the station"? "No...I'm going to head home, give me a call when you have information for me". "I will Mac, say hi to the kids for me". "I will Danny".
When Mac got home, he could hear Mackenzie, and Michael arguing. "Mick and Mac, what's the problem"? "It's my turn dad, and Mackenzie, won't give me the controller". "Listen guy's, if you can't get along, turn it off, and go to bed". "Fine...here, I have homework to do anyway". "How about you son, you have homework"? "Umm...a little". "You know the rule's Michael, now get it done". Turning off the system, Michael headed upstairs.
"Hi sweetheart, how you feeling"? "Fine Mac, how's the girl"? "She'll recover, though it will be a long road". "You know, I can't believe this, she's the same age as Mackenzie, how worry should I be"? "Listen love, you shouldn't worry at all, Mackenzie is smart, she know's not to stray away from the school". "I know, but just to know there is a rapest out there somewhere, praying on little girls". "We'll get him love, don't worry".
*Phone rings*. "I'll get it love, Taylor". "Mac, it's Danny, are you ready for this"? "Ready for what Danny"? "It seems, Mr.James, is not Tereasa's real father". Silence could be heard. "Mac, Mac, you there"? "Yeah Danny, bring Mr&Mrs.James in, let them know we'd like a DNA sample from each of them". "What are you thinking Mac"? "Right now, nothing, just get the DNA Danny". Hanging up the phone, Mac played over his conversation with Mr.James.
TBC...
"Is that right sir"? "Yes, I arrived about 8:40pm, but everyone had left, I seen the police cruiser's, but thought nothing of it, at the time". "You didn't find it strange, that your daughter wasn't waiting for you"? "No...like I said Tereasa is a good girl, I just figured she went home with her friend". "Okay, that's all for now, you may see your daughter now".
"What do you think Mac"? "I'm not sure yet, but something isn't right, I think we should do a check on Mr.James". "Okay, I'll get started on that now, see you back at the station"? "No...I'm going to head home, give me a call when you have information for me". "I will Mac, say hi to the kids for me". "I will Danny".
When Mac got home, he could hear Mackenzie, and Michael arguing. "Mick and Mac, what's the problem"? "It's my turn dad, and Mackenzie, won't give me the controller". "Listen guy's, if you can't get along, turn it off, and go to bed". "Fine...here, I have homework to do anyway". "How about you son, you have homework"? "Umm...a little". "You know the rule's Michael, now get it done". Turning off the system, Michael headed upstairs.
"Hi sweetheart, how you feeling"? "Fine Mac, how's the girl"? "She'll recover, though it will be a long road". "You know, I can't believe this, she's the same age as Mackenzie, how worry should I be"? "Listen love, you shouldn't worry at all, Mackenzie is smart, she know's not to stray away from the school". "I know, but just to know there is a rapest out there somewhere, praying on little girls". "We'll get him love, don't worry".
*Phone rings*. "I'll get it love, Taylor". "Mac, it's Danny, are you ready for this"? "Ready for what Danny"? "It seems, Mr.James, is not Tereasa's real father". Silence could be heard. "Mac, Mac, you there"? "Yeah Danny, bring Mr&Mrs.James in, let them know we'd like a DNA sample from each of them". "What are you thinking Mac"? "Right now, nothing, just get the DNA Danny". Hanging up the phone, Mac played over his conversation with Mr.James.
TBC...
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
I do hope he doesn't hurt her. I had thoughts about it too.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
^^^^And me
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When Mr&Mrs.James arrived, they were taken into seperate rooms. "Excuse me, why are you seperating us"? "It's just for the DNA sample Mrs.James". "DNA sample, what, why"? "We just need to verify, that tereasa is your daughter". "Of course she is my daughter, listen please, don't do this". "Mrs.James, it will only take a minute".
Mrs.James knew she was going to have too come clean. "Please, listen, my husband doesn't know Tereasa isn't his, I had an affair, he doesn't know, but he will if you continue". Danny listened than said...."Mrs.James, is there any way your husband could have found out"? "No... I don't think so, why"? "has he acted differently towards you, or your daughter"? "No, this is crazy, you don't, oh no way, you are wrong".
"Wrong about what"? "If you think my husband is the one that raped my daughter". "Mrs.James, it seems odd that your.....". "NO!!! I'm telling you, you are wrong, he would never do that, and you can go to hell for your DNA test, get a warrant", storming out Mrs.James and her husband left.
"I'm telling you Flack, he did it, I can feel it". "I know Danny, but we have no grounds to enforce them, and no judge will even attempt to give us a warrant". "So what do we do then"? "The only thing we can, have Mr.James followed, twenty-four seven, until he's caught". "Are you going to call Mac"? "No...you do it Danno, I have to get patrol to follow the James".
Picking up the phone, Danny called Mac, to give him the bad news. "Hey Mac....it's Danny....".
TBC..
Mrs.James knew she was going to have too come clean. "Please, listen, my husband doesn't know Tereasa isn't his, I had an affair, he doesn't know, but he will if you continue". Danny listened than said...."Mrs.James, is there any way your husband could have found out"? "No... I don't think so, why"? "has he acted differently towards you, or your daughter"? "No, this is crazy, you don't, oh no way, you are wrong".
"Wrong about what"? "If you think my husband is the one that raped my daughter". "Mrs.James, it seems odd that your.....". "NO!!! I'm telling you, you are wrong, he would never do that, and you can go to hell for your DNA test, get a warrant", storming out Mrs.James and her husband left.
"I'm telling you Flack, he did it, I can feel it". "I know Danny, but we have no grounds to enforce them, and no judge will even attempt to give us a warrant". "So what do we do then"? "The only thing we can, have Mr.James followed, twenty-four seven, until he's caught". "Are you going to call Mac"? "No...you do it Danno, I have to get patrol to follow the James".
Picking up the phone, Danny called Mac, to give him the bad news. "Hey Mac....it's Danny....".
TBC..
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
more more...I wanna know what's next!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Just to inform you...
Update will be late tonight, or tomorrow, as RL has taken over again.
But I thank you for the fB, and for your patients.
Update will be late tonight, or tomorrow, as RL has taken over again.
But I thank you for the fB, and for your patients.
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
awww ok I hope it goes okay.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
"Hey Mac, it's Danny, I need to let you know, Mr&Mrs.James refused the DNA test, so we had to let them go". "Has Flack got officer's on him"? "He does, what would you like me to do now"? "Go to the hospital, and check on Tereasa". "Okay Mac, I'll call you when I get there". Hanging up the phone, Danny headed over with Flack.
Arriving at the hospital, Danny asked the nurse to see Tereasa James. "I'm sorry Det. Messer, her parent's picked her up, they preferred her to re-coop at home". "Are you telling me, you let her go"? "We did, we have no reason to keep her here". "Thanks....Don, call Mac".
After Mac was informed, he walked into his daughter's room, sat down, and asked her...."Mackenzie, is your homework all done"? "Yup, all done dad, want to see"? "No sweetheart, I trust you, so how are things going in school"? "Good dad, why, what's the matter, you seem upset". "Listen sweetheart, daddy would like to talk too you about Tereasa".
Looking at her father, she tried to understand why, when she hardly knew the girl. "I don't know dad, I very rarely talk to her, she's in grade eight, I've only passed her in the hall a few times". "I know love, but she was assulted tonight, after the play". "Oh no dad, she wasn't the one screaming, was she"? "She was Mackenzie, badly assulted".
Mackenzie looked shocked. "Oh dad, I'm so sorry, it must be terrible". "I want you to understand something, you are never to leave the school for any reason, unless your mother, or I, are there to pick you up, understand"? "Of course daddy, I would never leave the school grounds, and I always stay with my friends, no matter what we do, we do it in groups".
"Good girl, I just want you to be safe". Hugging her dad tightly, Mackenzie said....."I understand dad, I promise never to leave anywhere without my friends with me". "Thanks baby", kissing his daughter, Mac left the room.
tBC...
Arriving at the hospital, Danny asked the nurse to see Tereasa James. "I'm sorry Det. Messer, her parent's picked her up, they preferred her to re-coop at home". "Are you telling me, you let her go"? "We did, we have no reason to keep her here". "Thanks....Don, call Mac".
After Mac was informed, he walked into his daughter's room, sat down, and asked her...."Mackenzie, is your homework all done"? "Yup, all done dad, want to see"? "No sweetheart, I trust you, so how are things going in school"? "Good dad, why, what's the matter, you seem upset". "Listen sweetheart, daddy would like to talk too you about Tereasa".
Looking at her father, she tried to understand why, when she hardly knew the girl. "I don't know dad, I very rarely talk to her, she's in grade eight, I've only passed her in the hall a few times". "I know love, but she was assulted tonight, after the play". "Oh no dad, she wasn't the one screaming, was she"? "She was Mackenzie, badly assulted".
Mackenzie looked shocked. "Oh dad, I'm so sorry, it must be terrible". "I want you to understand something, you are never to leave the school for any reason, unless your mother, or I, are there to pick you up, understand"? "Of course daddy, I would never leave the school grounds, and I always stay with my friends, no matter what we do, we do it in groups".
"Good girl, I just want you to be safe". Hugging her dad tightly, Mackenzie said....."I understand dad, I promise never to leave anywhere without my friends with me". "Thanks baby", kissing his daughter, Mac left the room.
tBC...
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
I hope she stays safe. Post soon!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Walking into the den, Mac seen Stella snoozing on the couch. "Stel...wake up love, why don't you go to bed"? "Hmm...no, I'm not tired, are you hungry"? "A little, but I can get myself something, don't worry". "I think the kids left some chili in the fridge, I made tonight, I'll heat it for you". "I'll do it love, you just relax".
Heating the chili to boil, Mac lathered garlic spread onto some rolls, and placed them in the oven to bake. As he waited he thought of the events from tonight, and wondered how Tereasa was doing, being back at home. "Mac....what's burning"? "Shoot! sorry love, removing the burned rolls from the oven, Stella told Mac to sit, and she'd make him more.
"What's going on hon, it's not like you to be distracted". "I know, this James case is bothering me, I know deep down it's the step father, but we have no way to prove it". "You will Mac, you're the best at what we do, just do me a favour, try not to think to hard while heating supper, I need my kitchen, she smiled, as she passionately kissed him.
"Hey dad, are you coming to see my ballgame tomorrow"? "Of course I am son, I wouldn't miss it, is your homework done". "Yeah, it took a while, math is getting harder now". "Have you been listening to the teacher's instructions"? "Yeah, most of the time, but sometimes my friends and I fool around, while he's teaching a lesson". "You know Michael, it's very important to listen, to your instruction's, you don't want to fall behind". "I know dad, I'm going to grab an apple, and head to bed". "Night son". "Night dad".
TBC..
Heating the chili to boil, Mac lathered garlic spread onto some rolls, and placed them in the oven to bake. As he waited he thought of the events from tonight, and wondered how Tereasa was doing, being back at home. "Mac....what's burning"? "Shoot! sorry love, removing the burned rolls from the oven, Stella told Mac to sit, and she'd make him more.
"What's going on hon, it's not like you to be distracted". "I know, this James case is bothering me, I know deep down it's the step father, but we have no way to prove it". "You will Mac, you're the best at what we do, just do me a favour, try not to think to hard while heating supper, I need my kitchen, she smiled, as she passionately kissed him.
"Hey dad, are you coming to see my ballgame tomorrow"? "Of course I am son, I wouldn't miss it, is your homework done". "Yeah, it took a while, math is getting harder now". "Have you been listening to the teacher's instructions"? "Yeah, most of the time, but sometimes my friends and I fool around, while he's teaching a lesson". "You know Michael, it's very important to listen, to your instruction's, you don't want to fall behind". "I know dad, I'm going to grab an apple, and head to bed". "Night son". "Night dad".
TBC..
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
aww I hope they can find the stuff to get the guy
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
The call came in at 3am.
"Taylor". "Mac, it's Don, I have some bad news for you". "What is it Don"? "Tereasa has disappeared, she left her home sometime last night, and hasn't been seen since". "What...where the hell were the officer's"? "They were here Mac, she slipped out the back door". "Who told you she slipped out"? "Her mother, she seen her leave, when we questioned the mother, she said she let her go, she's now confessed, her husband raped her daughter".
"Christ....are there cars out looking for her"? "There are Mac, but we have one more problem". "What's that"? "It seems, Mr.James, is also missing, he left shortly after Tereasa". "Great...I'll be right there Don, try not to let the mother disappear, and call the team, see if they can't find anything in her room, to help us find her". "I will Mac, see you soon".
After hanging up the phone, Mac awoke Stella. "Stel...Stel, I have to go love". "Hmmm...where"? "To find the James girl, she's run away, and it seems Mr.James, isn't to far behind". "Oh Mac, that poor child, you want my help"? "No, you stay with the kids love, I'll be back soon". "Okay Mac, stay safe". "Always Stel, kissing his wife, he left.
Arriving at the James home, Mac stepped out, as Don shook his head, at Mac. "It's not good Mac, we've found Tereasa, I'm sorry Mac, she's dead, patrol found her, bound and gagged, dumped in Central Park, right out in the open, almost as if he wanted her found quickly". "Sick son of a bitch, did you catch him"? "No...he's on the lose Mac, making all the children in this city, his target".
Sighing deeply, Mac told Don, to double the patrol's, inform the news station's, and have them show his picture around the clock". "Okay Mac, how about the mother"? "Get her out of my sight, she could have prevented this, had she spoke up". Dropping her head in shame, Don walked her to the squad car.
tBC....
"Taylor". "Mac, it's Don, I have some bad news for you". "What is it Don"? "Tereasa has disappeared, she left her home sometime last night, and hasn't been seen since". "What...where the hell were the officer's"? "They were here Mac, she slipped out the back door". "Who told you she slipped out"? "Her mother, she seen her leave, when we questioned the mother, she said she let her go, she's now confessed, her husband raped her daughter".
"Christ....are there cars out looking for her"? "There are Mac, but we have one more problem". "What's that"? "It seems, Mr.James, is also missing, he left shortly after Tereasa". "Great...I'll be right there Don, try not to let the mother disappear, and call the team, see if they can't find anything in her room, to help us find her". "I will Mac, see you soon".
After hanging up the phone, Mac awoke Stella. "Stel...Stel, I have to go love". "Hmmm...where"? "To find the James girl, she's run away, and it seems Mr.James, isn't to far behind". "Oh Mac, that poor child, you want my help"? "No, you stay with the kids love, I'll be back soon". "Okay Mac, stay safe". "Always Stel, kissing his wife, he left.
Arriving at the James home, Mac stepped out, as Don shook his head, at Mac. "It's not good Mac, we've found Tereasa, I'm sorry Mac, she's dead, patrol found her, bound and gagged, dumped in Central Park, right out in the open, almost as if he wanted her found quickly". "Sick son of a bitch, did you catch him"? "No...he's on the lose Mac, making all the children in this city, his target".
Sighing deeply, Mac told Don, to double the patrol's, inform the news station's, and have them show his picture around the clock". "Okay Mac, how about the mother"? "Get her out of my sight, she could have prevented this, had she spoke up". Dropping her head in shame, Don walked her to the squad car.
tBC....
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
they better get him soon. More more!
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
After searching all night, Mac and his team were tired, worn out, and hungry. "Christ Mac, I've had it, I need to refuel". "I know Danny, let's all head home, I already informed Stella, she'll have breakfast ready for us". "Mmm.. God love your wife Mac", said Sheldon. "That goes double for me",replied Danny.
Arriving at home, Mac kissed his lovely wife, as he poured coffee, for his boy's. "Daddy, why is the team here"? "Well sweetheart, remember last night, I talked to you about Tereasa". "Yeah, she was assulted, by her dad, you thought". "That's right love, last night Tereasa was found in the park, she died honey".
"Oh daddy, that's so sad". "I need you to be extra careful today, stay in a group, and if you see anyone who looks suspicious, or like he doesn't belong, inform your teacher, right away". "I will daddy, what about Caroline, who's going to watch her"? "The school's have been informed, she'll be fine, all the younger children, are being kept in for recess". "Okay dad". *HONK*. "Okay guy's there's the bus, have a good day".
"Think they'll be okay Mac"? "They'll be fine Danny, we'll stop by the school on and off, throughout the day". Finishing up breakfast, Don, and Sheldon helped Stella with the dishes. "You son't have to do this guy's". "we know, but you made us the wonderful breakfast, so now, you sit, and we wait on you". "I feel so spoiled". "Come now Stella, you're not spoiled by your team, you are loved by them", said Don. "Aww...so sweet, I love you guy's too".
TBC...
Arriving at home, Mac kissed his lovely wife, as he poured coffee, for his boy's. "Daddy, why is the team here"? "Well sweetheart, remember last night, I talked to you about Tereasa". "Yeah, she was assulted, by her dad, you thought". "That's right love, last night Tereasa was found in the park, she died honey".
"Oh daddy, that's so sad". "I need you to be extra careful today, stay in a group, and if you see anyone who looks suspicious, or like he doesn't belong, inform your teacher, right away". "I will daddy, what about Caroline, who's going to watch her"? "The school's have been informed, she'll be fine, all the younger children, are being kept in for recess". "Okay dad". *HONK*. "Okay guy's there's the bus, have a good day".
"Think they'll be okay Mac"? "They'll be fine Danny, we'll stop by the school on and off, throughout the day". Finishing up breakfast, Don, and Sheldon helped Stella with the dishes. "You son't have to do this guy's". "we know, but you made us the wonderful breakfast, so now, you sit, and we wait on you". "I feel so spoiled". "Come now Stella, you're not spoiled by your team, you are loved by them", said Don. "Aww...so sweet, I love you guy's too".
TBC...