MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
awwww I like it. But yeah find him.
A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love
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MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
With Marie asleep, Jennifer headed back downstairs. "How is she love"? "She's fine, fell right to sleep". "I can't believe how well she took it", said Stella. "I know love, but you all have to remember, she never knew her real father, all her life, she grew up under the assumption that Carl was, which makes it alot easier to accept", said Mac.
"So what you are saying, is in her mind, it's just some bad person, who is after her, to take her away". "Exactly love, her mind is to young to understand, which is why, we, all of us, will protect her". "Mommy....said Mackenzie. "What is it sweetheart"? "That man is outside my window again". Running up the stairs, Flack seen the suspect running. "Mac....he's gone down the Northside", get him.
As Mac, Danny, and Hawkes, ran out, they seen the suspect get in the car, and take off. "Damn it Mac, that was too easy", huffed Danny. "The girls"....running back to the house, Mac seen Stella, and Jennifer being held at gunpoint. "Daaaaaddy, cried Mackenzie, elp mommy". Mac grabbed up Mackenzie, and passed her to Flack, "take her upstairs".
Once Flack had all the children together in one room, he told Marie, not to come out, until he came to get them. "Okay daddy, we will stay here". "Good girl Marie, now stay quiet, not a sound". "I know daddy, it's okay, go help". Leaving the kids hidden in the secret closet, Flack headed back downstairs.
"Where is my daughter copper, tell me, or you lose wife number 2". "How do you....". "How do I know your wife, and child died in a plane crash, that's easy, when you adopted my daughter, it was my job to make sure, she was in a loving home, but now, I want her back, she's mine". "You will never get her, now let my wife go". "Sorry detective, I give you five more minute's, than your wife dies".
When the five minutes was up.....**BANG**......
TBC....
"So what you are saying, is in her mind, it's just some bad person, who is after her, to take her away". "Exactly love, her mind is to young to understand, which is why, we, all of us, will protect her". "Mommy....said Mackenzie. "What is it sweetheart"? "That man is outside my window again". Running up the stairs, Flack seen the suspect running. "Mac....he's gone down the Northside", get him.
As Mac, Danny, and Hawkes, ran out, they seen the suspect get in the car, and take off. "Damn it Mac, that was too easy", huffed Danny. "The girls"....running back to the house, Mac seen Stella, and Jennifer being held at gunpoint. "Daaaaaddy, cried Mackenzie, elp mommy". Mac grabbed up Mackenzie, and passed her to Flack, "take her upstairs".
Once Flack had all the children together in one room, he told Marie, not to come out, until he came to get them. "Okay daddy, we will stay here". "Good girl Marie, now stay quiet, not a sound". "I know daddy, it's okay, go help". Leaving the kids hidden in the secret closet, Flack headed back downstairs.
"Where is my daughter copper, tell me, or you lose wife number 2". "How do you....". "How do I know your wife, and child died in a plane crash, that's easy, when you adopted my daughter, it was my job to make sure, she was in a loving home, but now, I want her back, she's mine". "You will never get her, now let my wife go". "Sorry detective, I give you five more minute's, than your wife dies".
When the five minutes was up.....**BANG**......
TBC....
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
I hope you don't wait long to update or I'll have to hurt you lol
At least I can't see you doing that to him again; you're evil but not that evil.
At least I can't see you doing that to him again; you're evil but not that evil.
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Natsky agrees with both those comments Mel- where's the pitchfork? :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
No threatening the writer. 
When everyone looked, they seen Horatio standing with his gun pointed at the other suspect. "Don't do it...put the gun down, NOW!! The suspect could tell, he had no escape, lowering his weapon, he released Stella, and put his hands in the air, placing him in cuff's, Mac turned and asked...."Lt.Caine...how did you know"? "I called Don for some information on a criminal I needed, he informed me about the Marie situation, I thought you could use some help".
"Thanks, but you had to fly over, for more than just to help". "I did, I did...I need help with catching one of my suspect's who fleed Miami". "What make's you think he is here"? "One of my reliable informent's had told me, he had flown to NY". "Okay...let's get this case closed, and we are all yours". "Thanks Mac". "No thanks needed Horatio".
Running upstairs, Jennifer and Stella, checked on the children. "Mommy, is ou okay"? asked Mackenzie. "I'm fine sweetheart, it's all over". "Did you get em mommy"? "We did love", picking her children up, she carried them downstairs. "Daddy...yelled Marie, you're okay"? I am sweetheart, it's all over, no one will ever take you from us again".
"Mac...I'm going to pull out the sleeping bags, and have the children down here with us, I don't think anyone is going to go, back to sleep tonight". "That's fine love". "Daddy...ou's dat"? "This is Lt.Horatio Caine, he's from Miami, and came for a visit". "Ooooh....I Oraio, I's Michael". "Nice to meet you son". "I's not your son, he said, while shaking his head, I's his son". "Why yes you are". "Den why ou call me son"? "It's just an expression Michael", laughed Stella. "Ohhh...k, I ave some milk mama". "You may, and some cookies too".
"Stella...I'm going to head out, I'll be back as soon, as I can". "Okay, I love you". "I love you too, shall we go Lt"? "We shall...it was nice to see you again Stella". "You also Horatio, don't be a stranger". "I won't, I won't".
TBC...
When everyone looked, they seen Horatio standing with his gun pointed at the other suspect. "Don't do it...put the gun down, NOW!! The suspect could tell, he had no escape, lowering his weapon, he released Stella, and put his hands in the air, placing him in cuff's, Mac turned and asked...."Lt.Caine...how did you know"? "I called Don for some information on a criminal I needed, he informed me about the Marie situation, I thought you could use some help".
"Thanks, but you had to fly over, for more than just to help". "I did, I did...I need help with catching one of my suspect's who fleed Miami". "What make's you think he is here"? "One of my reliable informent's had told me, he had flown to NY". "Okay...let's get this case closed, and we are all yours". "Thanks Mac". "No thanks needed Horatio".
Running upstairs, Jennifer and Stella, checked on the children. "Mommy, is ou okay"? asked Mackenzie. "I'm fine sweetheart, it's all over". "Did you get em mommy"? "We did love", picking her children up, she carried them downstairs. "Daddy...yelled Marie, you're okay"? I am sweetheart, it's all over, no one will ever take you from us again".
"Mac...I'm going to pull out the sleeping bags, and have the children down here with us, I don't think anyone is going to go, back to sleep tonight". "That's fine love". "Daddy...ou's dat"? "This is Lt.Horatio Caine, he's from Miami, and came for a visit". "Ooooh....I Oraio, I's Michael". "Nice to meet you son". "I's not your son, he said, while shaking his head, I's his son". "Why yes you are". "Den why ou call me son"? "It's just an expression Michael", laughed Stella. "Ohhh...k, I ave some milk mama". "You may, and some cookies too".
"Stella...I'm going to head out, I'll be back as soon, as I can". "Okay, I love you". "I love you too, shall we go Lt"? "We shall...it was nice to see you again Stella". "You also Horatio, don't be a stranger". "I won't, I won't".
TBC...
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
Sorry
Didn't expect H to turn up :lol: Loved the 'Son' convo!
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
lolol yeah that was fun. Too bad the others couldn't come. Although I know this fic has less than the others.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When they arrived at NYPD, Mac and his team got straight to work on finding Horatio's suspect. "Adam...I need to you to test this sample Lt.Caine brought with him, check all the data bases, and see if you can find a match". "Sure Mac, give me about five". As they waited for Adam, Horatio explained the importance of the case to Mac, and his team.
"We've had a series of murder's, all young male medical student's, sliced from ear to ear, by a scalpel, our suspect seems to enjoy each kill, as he gets more bold, with his slicing, creating designs, in his victim's face's. "Christ Mac, sounds like that killer we had running around NY three years back". "It does, doesn't it Danny". Searching his file cabinet, for the file, Mac pulled the unsolved cases out.
"Start checking through these, he's in here somewhere, we called him the "College Killer". Scanning the files, Danny came across it first. "Here it is Mac, say's....his last kill was January 2nd 2004, then he disappeared". As Horatio looked over the file, he noticed the resemblance in the kills. "I think...we just found where your killer had been hiding out the last few years", said "H".
"Mac....yelled Flack, we've just had a murder, College med student, male, 22 years old, sliced ear to ear". "Looks like your killer, has returned home Mac, shall we bring him down together"? Looking at Horatio, Mac said...."Let's go".
TBC....
"We've had a series of murder's, all young male medical student's, sliced from ear to ear, by a scalpel, our suspect seems to enjoy each kill, as he gets more bold, with his slicing, creating designs, in his victim's face's. "Christ Mac, sounds like that killer we had running around NY three years back". "It does, doesn't it Danny". Searching his file cabinet, for the file, Mac pulled the unsolved cases out.
"Start checking through these, he's in here somewhere, we called him the "College Killer". Scanning the files, Danny came across it first. "Here it is Mac, say's....his last kill was January 2nd 2004, then he disappeared". As Horatio looked over the file, he noticed the resemblance in the kills. "I think...we just found where your killer had been hiding out the last few years", said "H".
"Mac....yelled Flack, we've just had a murder, College med student, male, 22 years old, sliced ear to ear". "Looks like your killer, has returned home Mac, shall we bring him down together"? Looking at Horatio, Mac said...."Let's go".
TBC....
nattybatty55
Nadalaholic
And the crime fighting twosome are bac together!
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
uhoh...well now they can catch him together
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
It does, I'm trying to keep this one contained to just NY, as I already have a few crossover's going on :lol: :lol:
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
When they arrived at the crime scene, Danny, and Lindsay were already processing. "Anything Danny"? "Nothing yet Mac, but we've only just started". As Mac looked into the crowd of people standing around, he noticed a suspicious man, watching intently, as they processed.
"H"....have a look over there, see that guy, just standing there, watching, almost admiring the scene". Looking over Horatio noticed the same thing. "You take the left, I'll take the right". As they walked thorugh the crowd, Mac was first to stand in front of the suspect.
Turning around, the guy tried to make a run for it, but came face to face with Horatio. "Don't move son, turn around, and put your hands behind your back". Knowing there was no escape, the suspect allowed himself to be cuffed. "Take him Flack, we'll be right behind you", said Mac.
When they arrived back at NYPD, Mac and "H" interogated the suspect. "Peter Johnson, can you tell us what you were doing at our crime scene, and why you have a set of surgical knives in your possesion"? "I'm a practicing surgeon, I work at various hospital's, covering for other surgeons".
"It show's from your record's that you left Miami two day's ago, can you tell me why"? "Sure, I was asked to fill in at New York General". "I see", said Mac. "Mac...called Danny, we've found traces of the victim's blood on the surgical knives, DNA of at least three of the victim's from Miami".
"Would you care to try again, Mr.Johnson"? "I think...I'd like a lawyer, until then, I have nothing more to say". "Fine, take him to holding Flack". Walking down to holding, Peter decided now was the time, to make a break for it, and as he grabbed Flack's gun, and pointed, Horatio shot him, straight threw the heart.
"Jesus "H", how did you know"? "Just a feeling Flack, just a feeling". With the body removed to the morgue, Mac drove Horatio to the Airport. "So...will we see you again"? "You will Mac, for I think, our path's our alway's meant to cross". "I think you are right "H", take care, and have a safe flight". "I will Mac, I will".
TBC....
"H"....have a look over there, see that guy, just standing there, watching, almost admiring the scene". Looking over Horatio noticed the same thing. "You take the left, I'll take the right". As they walked thorugh the crowd, Mac was first to stand in front of the suspect.
Turning around, the guy tried to make a run for it, but came face to face with Horatio. "Don't move son, turn around, and put your hands behind your back". Knowing there was no escape, the suspect allowed himself to be cuffed. "Take him Flack, we'll be right behind you", said Mac.
When they arrived back at NYPD, Mac and "H" interogated the suspect. "Peter Johnson, can you tell us what you were doing at our crime scene, and why you have a set of surgical knives in your possesion"? "I'm a practicing surgeon, I work at various hospital's, covering for other surgeons".
"It show's from your record's that you left Miami two day's ago, can you tell me why"? "Sure, I was asked to fill in at New York General". "I see", said Mac. "Mac...called Danny, we've found traces of the victim's blood on the surgical knives, DNA of at least three of the victim's from Miami".
"Would you care to try again, Mr.Johnson"? "I think...I'd like a lawyer, until then, I have nothing more to say". "Fine, take him to holding Flack". Walking down to holding, Peter decided now was the time, to make a break for it, and as he grabbed Flack's gun, and pointed, Horatio shot him, straight threw the heart.
"Jesus "H", how did you know"? "Just a feeling Flack, just a feeling". With the body removed to the morgue, Mac drove Horatio to the Airport. "So...will we see you again"? "You will Mac, for I think, our path's our alway's meant to cross". "I think you are right "H", take care, and have a safe flight". "I will Mac, I will".
TBC....
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
Glad they got him although it's too bad they had to shoot instead of him standing trial.
MacsLovlyAngl
Head of the Graveyard Shift
With this case done, we jump ahead 10 years. Mackenzie, and Michael are now 12, and Caroline is 10.
It was another cold damp night in NY, as Mac, and his family, left the christmas play, the kids were in. "Did you like us Dad, did we do great"? "You did sweetheart, all of you did great". Heading to the car, Mac heard the screams. "Mac...what was that"? "I'm not sure Stel, get the kids in the car, I'm going to have a look".
With the kids safely in the car, Stella called Flack, and had him send out a couple officer's incase Mac ran into trouble. Running towards the screams, Mac found a young girl, brutally raped, and stabbed. "It's going to be okay, just relax", said Mac, as he took of his jacket, and covered the young girl. "Did you see who did this to you"? "Nooo...she cried, please help me, I hurt so bad".
As Mac checked her over best he could, without getting personal, the EMT's, and Flack showed up". "What have we got Mac"? "Young female, 15 years old, raped, and stabbed, mostly superficial wounds". "Christ, leave it to you Mac, not to have a nights peace". "Listen, I want you guy's not to touch or remove anything, she is not to be touched, till the SART arrives".
With the young girl on her way to the hospital, Mac checked on his family, and informed Stella to head home with the kids. "You go ahead love, I'll be home as soon as I can". "Okay Mac". Kissing his wife, and kids, Mac headed over with Flack to the hospital. When they arrived the nurse came out with the rape kit. "Danny, get this back to the Lab, have everything processed, including the clothes".
Walking into the room with Flack, Mac began asking the young girl question's. "Excuse me...can you tell me your name"? With a whisper sound, she said..."Tereasa James, I live at 444th East 42nd street, my phone number is 555-555-5555". "Okay, can you give me any idea, what your attacker looked like"?
"Noo..he wore a mask, a halloween mask of a pumpkin, but he smelled bad, like he had been drinking, all I remember is the pain, and how much it hurt, when he raped me". "Listen Tereasa, I've called your parent's, they are on their way". "Thanks". "Tereasa, just one more question, and I'll let you rest up, it's a little personal, but I need to know". "Yes Det.Taylor, I was a virgin". Looking away in shame, the young girl curled up, and faced the wall.
As Mac and Flack left the room, Mac said...."We need to catch this bastard, fast". "Are you thinking serial"? "I am, and we need this bastard off the streets".
TBC....
It was another cold damp night in NY, as Mac, and his family, left the christmas play, the kids were in. "Did you like us Dad, did we do great"? "You did sweetheart, all of you did great". Heading to the car, Mac heard the screams. "Mac...what was that"? "I'm not sure Stel, get the kids in the car, I'm going to have a look".
With the kids safely in the car, Stella called Flack, and had him send out a couple officer's incase Mac ran into trouble. Running towards the screams, Mac found a young girl, brutally raped, and stabbed. "It's going to be okay, just relax", said Mac, as he took of his jacket, and covered the young girl. "Did you see who did this to you"? "Nooo...she cried, please help me, I hurt so bad".
As Mac checked her over best he could, without getting personal, the EMT's, and Flack showed up". "What have we got Mac"? "Young female, 15 years old, raped, and stabbed, mostly superficial wounds". "Christ, leave it to you Mac, not to have a nights peace". "Listen, I want you guy's not to touch or remove anything, she is not to be touched, till the SART arrives".
With the young girl on her way to the hospital, Mac checked on his family, and informed Stella to head home with the kids. "You go ahead love, I'll be home as soon as I can". "Okay Mac". Kissing his wife, and kids, Mac headed over with Flack to the hospital. When they arrived the nurse came out with the rape kit. "Danny, get this back to the Lab, have everything processed, including the clothes".
Walking into the room with Flack, Mac began asking the young girl question's. "Excuse me...can you tell me your name"? With a whisper sound, she said..."Tereasa James, I live at 444th East 42nd street, my phone number is 555-555-5555". "Okay, can you give me any idea, what your attacker looked like"?
"Noo..he wore a mask, a halloween mask of a pumpkin, but he smelled bad, like he had been drinking, all I remember is the pain, and how much it hurt, when he raped me". "Listen Tereasa, I've called your parent's, they are on their way". "Thanks". "Tereasa, just one more question, and I'll let you rest up, it's a little personal, but I need to know". "Yes Det.Taylor, I was a virgin". Looking away in shame, the young girl curled up, and faced the wall.
As Mac and Flack left the room, Mac said...."We need to catch this bastard, fast". "Are you thinking serial"? "I am, and we need this bastard off the streets".
TBC....
MacsGirlMel
Mac's Personal Assistant
yeah they better get him.