A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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When Don returned to the house, Stella and Mac were waiting for them. "Dada....we miss ou". "I missed you too my Angel, said Mac. "Did you have fun, with Uncle Don"? "Uhuh...we ayed on the wings, and side". "I take it she means slide, said Mac. "Yeah, she does". "Okay then..let's go get you two washed up, and ready for dinner". "Oh!! I'm going to pass on dinner, I ran into an old friend, and she invited me out". "Oh...really, who"? asked a nosey Stella. "Debbie...I know her from school, years ago, I guess we are going to reminese and stuff". "Okay than, have fun".



With Don gone, Stella and the kids sat down to supper. "Well that's nice, that Don is socializing again", said Stella. "I guess, said a distracted Mac. "What is it Mac..something bothering you"? "A little, I don't remember any Debbie, from Don's past, and we talk about his childhood, and his teenage years". "Hmmm...you think there is something funny about her"? "I'm not sure yet love, I'll know more, when Don comes back". Later that evening Stella went to bed, while Mac waited up for Don. He knew it was silly, but he couldn't shake the feeling something just wasn't right. As time rolled on to one in the morning, Mac heard the door open, looking up, he seen Don.



"Hey....what are you still doing up"? "Oh I was watching the last of the game, must have fallen asleep", said Mac. "How was your date"? "Good, we are going out again tomorrow night". "That's great...but listen Don, I don't ever remember you mentioning a Debbie". "No!! hmmm, guess she wasn't one of the important ones back then". "Okay...well I'm off to bed, I'll see you in the morning" , said Mac. Still having concern, Mac was going to check on her background in the morning. "Is everything okay Mac"? "Don't know yet love, I'll know more in the morning". "Pray Don doesn't find out, you are checking her out, or he'll be pissed". "Don't worry love, he'll never know".



Getting into bed, beside his wife, Mac grabbed her and pulled her on top of him. "Now..this is where you should be love, gives me easy access to your sweet bum". Placing his hands on his wife's ass, Mac caressed and tickled her. "stop Mac...Maaaac....enough, she giggled as she wiggled over his thighs. "Now you've done it love, you've awakened Mr.Jolly". Wiggling somemore, just to annoy him, she tried to climb off, but Mac held her tight. "Going some where love"? "Yes...to the washroom", she lied. "I don't think so, you'll stay, and fix Mr.Jolly, he needs your touch, he craves it". "You Mac Taylor, are insatiable". "From you love, that's a compliment", kissing her passionately, he showed her, how much, he and Mr.Jolly, needed her.



A short time later, Mac still couldn't sleep. getting up, he opened his laptop, and logged in to NYPD. Typing in what little information he had, he looked for clues, into this Debbie person. With no success, he checked the Yearbooks, from Don's highschool years. Looking through the pages, he could only find one Debbie, that matched Flack's description. Logging back into NYPD, Mac checked her out, and found something very interesting. If the information, was correct, Debbie Tellor was deceased, 10 years ago. Not wanting to wake Don, Mac decided he would investigate a little further, to find out, who ,this person really was.


TBC....
 
The following morning, Don had already left. "Sweetheart, where is Don"? "He had a breakfast date, with Debbie., why"? "Did he say where"? "The Bistro", what's going on Mac"? "I'm not sure yet love, but I do know Debbie isn't Debbie, and I need to find Don, and let him know, I'll be back soon love". "Okay Mac...be careful". "I will love, said Mac, as he kissed her. Starting the car, Mac took off, to get to "The Bistro". When he arrived, he could find no trace of Don, or Debbie. "Excuse me, but has Don been here this morning"? Mac asked the waitress. "No...he hasn't Mac, sorry". "Okay...if he shows up, have him call me". "I will". Heading back to the car, Mac called Danny and NYPD, informing them of the situation, and to start searching. With everything in place, Mac headed home, to wait.



Meanwhile...Don woke up in a dark room. Looking around, he had no idea, how he had gotten there. "christ...my head hurts, and as he tried to get up, he passed out again. A short time later, Debbie walked into the room, and kicked Don awake. "Auuugh, Debbie, what's going on"? "Shut your mouth Don, and I won't have to hurt again". "But why...why am I here"? "You killed my sister...she died in that plane crash, with her child, yet you lived, not right if you ask me". "Don tried to clear his head, her sister....Caroline didn't have any sisters". "Oh but she did, she just never liked me, could never forgive me, for killing our mother, but do you know why, I did it"? Shaking his head, Don said..."No". "Because she pimped us out, she sold us to different men, everynight, for cigerette's, alcohol, drugs, do you have any idea, what its like to be raped by men". To have their hands all over your innocence".



"No, I don't, and I'm truely sorry, but I did not kill Caroline, I loved her, and my unborn child". "that's what they all say, but you are all the same, evil and wicked". Flack was begining to realize, this woman in front of him was unbalanced. "Look..I really loved Caroline, so much, that night she died, my heart died with her". "Did it now...than why would you, even offer to go on a date, with me, if you loved her, you wouldn't be thinking about another woman". "We were not on a date, you were a friend from Highschool, who I thought wanted to catch up on old times". "Oh...so I'm not good enough for now, am I"? "I didn't say that, you are putting words in my mouth". Taking her foot, she kicked Don in the head, and knocked him back out. As she left, she said...before this night is done, you will be with caroline and your child, where you belong".



Meanwhile...Danny stopped at Mac's. "Anything danny"? "No..nothing yet Mac, everyone is looking". "There has to be some clue somewhere, let's check Don's room". As Mac and Danny walked in, they seen pictures of him and Caroline. "christ, I didn't realize, he was still hurting this much", said Danny. "neither did I". As they searched the room, they found an address. "I found something Mac, looks like an address". Taking the paper from Danny, Mac called it in to NYPD, and then he and headed out, to find the place. When they arrived, they noticed the windows all boarded up. "What do you think Mac"? "I'm not sure Danny, you take the front, and I'll take the back". As they moved into position, the door opened, and out walked Debbie. With the force, that Mac would use on a man, he dropped her to the ground, and cuffed her.



"Where is my Detective", yelled Mac. "You're to late, he's dead, go see, he's dead, she bellowed. With the officers on scene, Mac took off inot the house, and as he got to the room, he seen Don, laying on the bed, with foam coming out of his mouth. "Christ Mac...she poisoned him, I'll call for the EMT's. As Mac felt for a pulse, he couldn't find one, taking his hands, he started chest compressions, to try and keep his friend alive.


TBC....
 
ack more more...if they can find an antidote he'll be okay...I kinda think there are only a few poisons that work really really fast.
 
When the EMT's arrived, they found Mac still doing chest compressions. As the EMT's began CPR, they asked what kind of poison had been used. "I don't know, we just got here, Danny have a look around". As Danny left to look around , Mac watched them working on Flack. "Is he alive"? "Is he"? Mac wasn't happy being ignored, so he grabbed the EMT, and asked him again, "Is he alive"? "No...not at this time, now please let us fo our job". "Mac...Mac, called Danny, I found it". "What the hell is it"? At that moment Sid arrived. "Sid, what kind of poison is this, quickly before Don dies". "Cyanide, that form and color, Cyanide poison".
Now that the EMT"S knew what poison they were dealing with, they called it in. Once they had Don in the Ambulance, Mac followed behind.



When he arrived at the hospital, Mac waited patiently to hear from the doctor's running about. "Mac...yelled Stella, Mac, how is he"? "Not good love, he was Flatlined, when we got here". "Oh God...this can't be happening". "Shh, it's okay love, let's just hold on, who has the kids"? "Lindsay, she was at our place, when you called". As Stella and Mac waited, Danny and Hawkes arrived. "How is he Mac", asked Danny with concern. "We don't know yet, we're still waiting to hear". At that moment the doctor came out. "How is he doctor"? aksed Mac.
he's critical, could go either way, though he has responded well, to the medication, all we can do now, is wait". "Thank-you doctor, can we see him"? "One of you only, and don't allow him to talk to much".



"You go ahead Mac, said Stella, we'll wait here". "You sure love"? "Positive, go ahead". When Mac entered the room, he heard those damn monitors again, bringing him back to the night, Stella was near death. Walking to the bed, Mac leaned in and whispered....."Don, you need to fight...the kids, Stella and I need you, Caroline needs you, you need to stay strong, for little Caroline". After a few minutes, Mac sat down, and held Don's hand, bowed his head, and prayed. "When he looked up again, Don was awake, looking at him. "Don....can you hear me, Don". Don shook his head yes. Pushing the call button, the nurse entered. "He's awake, get the doctor". As the nurse left the room, Mac kept whispering to Don, that he was alive and safe.



"You are a very lucky man, Det.Flack, a few more minutes, and you would have died". When the doctor left, Don looked at Mac and said...."Why Mac...why did you bring me back"? "What are you talking about Don, you were poisoned, I wasn't going to let you die". "You should have, I was with Caroline, I seen her, it was so warm Mac, and beautiful, and you brought me back to this". "Listen Don, I understand, why you would want to stay, but what about the twins, and Caroline, how would they survive, without their Uncle Don". As much as Don knew, Mac was right, it still didn't make it right. "You should have just let me die". "never Don...and if I had to do it again, I would, not only for the children, but for myself, I've lost enough in my life, and I don't need to lose a wonderful friend".



"I'm sorry Mac, it was just so beautiful there, and Caroline was so beautiful". "I know that Don, but it wasn't your time to go". "I know that....but it doesn't make it any easier, to let go". Reaching over the bed, Mac embraced Don in his arms, and said..."I know Don, I felt the same way, after I lost Claire". A short time later, Mac left Danny to watch Don. "How is he Mac"? "He's going to be fine, it seems he seen Caroline, and was angry, that I brought him back". "Oh Mac...I'm sorry, you've done nothing wrong". "I know that love, but it doesn't make it any easier". "I know Mac...let's go home and see your babies". Walking hand in hand, Mac and Stella headed home.



TBC.....
 
When Mac and stella got in the door, the twins came running. "Uncle On...Uncle On, dada, ehere Uncle On"? "Listen sweetie, Uncle Don is in the Hospital, he got sick, but you, Michael, mommy and I, will go see him after supper, okay"? "K dada". While Mac seen Lindsay and the twins home, Stella got supper ready. "Mac and Mick, supper". The twins came running. "What we aving mama"? "Home made Pizza", smiled Stella. "Mmm...we ove izza", said Mackenzie, can we ake ome to Uncle On"? "Sure love, now hop up, so we can eat. Just as Stella had the kids eating, Mac came in the door.


"Mmmm...is that Pizza, I smell"? "Uhuh..mama, made izza, it ummy", said Michael. Sitting down with the twins, Mac dug in. "Christ love, your pizza is like a slice of Heaven". *Giggling*...Hmm, and here I thought, I was your Heaven". "You are love, but so is your pizza". With dinner out of the way, Mac did the dishes, while Stella, got the kids cleaned up. "Mac....called Stella, can you grab Caroline, and dress her". "Sure love, I'll be right there". With the Taylor family ready to go, Mac grabbed the car keys, and headed out with his family to the Hospital.



When they arrived, Mackenzie ran into the room. "Uncle On...ou okay"? as she ran into his arms. "Hey sweetie, yeah, I'm fine". "On't ever eave us Uncle On...we ove ou". "I love you to Mac, and I could never leave my sunshine now, could I". With hugs out of the way, the nurses, got the twins some coloring pages and crayons. "Mac...may I hold Caroline"? "Of course...walking over, Mac handed Caroline to Don. "She's so perfect Mac...so beautiful and perfect". Smiling Stella and Mac, watched Don interact with Caroline, and they knew, that Don would be fine, with Caroline and the twins, in his life.



After spending time with Don, the Taylor family, were getting ready to leave, when Mackenzie noticed Don crying. Running back over to the bed, Mackenzie said..."What's the matter Uncle On, you crying". Climbing up on the bed, Mackenzie wrapped her arms, around Don, and held tight. "Is okay Uncle On, I hear for ou". As the tears poured, Don squeezed Mac tighter. "Pleae Mac...I want to come home tonight, please let the nurse and doctor, allow me to go home with my family". The whole Taylor family was now in tears. "I'll talk to the doctor, be right back".



When Mac found the doctor, he talked to him, about Don's situation, and the doctor agreed he could home, as long as he rested. When Mac returned to the room, the gang was sitting on Don's bed. "Okay Don...we have the okay, but you need to rest". "I will Mac...I promise". Once Don was dressed, the whole Taylor family headed home. When they arrived, Stella put Caroline down for the night, while Mackenzie and Michael, helped Uncle Don get comfortable. "Ou ave my Eddy Ear, to seep with, Uncle On", said Mackenzie. "Thank-you sweetie, but you keep your bear, he needs you". Cuddling the bear, Mackenzie climbed up on the bed, and cuddled into Don, where she fell asleep.



When Mac walked in, he seen Mackenzie, sound asleep, and Michael whispering to Uncle Don. "Come on Michael, bed son". "What bout Ackenzie"? "I'll get her, after I put you down, okay"? "K dada, night Uncle On". "Night Michael".
Once the room was quiet, Don curled up against Mackenzie, and whispered. "I know if I had of had my child, I'd want her to be, just like you Mackenzie", then giving her a soft cheecked kiss, he fell asleep. When Mac walked in to get Mackenzie, he seen how curled into each other they were, and instead of disturbing them, Mac covered them with a blanket, and whispered..."Sleep well Don, and may my Mackenzie, keep you safe".



TBC....
 
When Mac returned to his room, Stella was sound asleep, in the rocking chair. Walking over, Mac picked her up, and carried her to the bed. Placing her on the sheets, Mac took off his clothes, and climbed in. Covering himself and Stella up, he pulled her into his arms, and held her tight. "Mac...you're so warm". "And you are so cold my love, from sitting in that rocker, half bare". "Then maybe you should warm me up", giggled Stella. "MMmm...well then love...c'mer", said Mac as covered his body on top of hers. "Oh!!! looks like Mr.Jolly is awake, and ready to play", said Stella , as she grabbed him. "Hiiiiiiiis", said Mac. "Come on Macky-poo....give Stel what she wants, I need to practice sexual healing", she purred.



"You my dear...are a tease". "And you sir are my reason for teasing", said Stella as she grabbed him again. "That's it sweetheart, prepare to be fired", said Mac, as he pulled up Stella's gown, as she braced herself for his invasion. "Just as Mac got to the tip, Stella said...."Don't tease me baby....please...now...please Mac". Knowing Stella needed what he needed, he plunged into her heat, causing her to bite down, on his shoulder. "Auuuuuugh...said Mac, as Stella suckled were she bit. "Damn you Stel...you know how much I hate being bit". "Awww... poor little Macky...he no like Stella Wella biting him, during playtime".



"That's it love...said Mac, as he clamped down on her neck, and hissed, mmmmm......more Mac, bite me again", she purred. MAc was so excited, he liked this new wild Stella, and he had to admit, the little S&M game she was playing, was driving his soul insane. Needing more of each others captive sensuality, Mac plunged, as Stella pushed, faster and faster, deeper and deeper, until they both exploded, in ecstacy. "More...I need more Mac...pleae...give me more". As Mac began again, he pulled stella on top of him, and allowed her to take the lead. , Stella felt Mac's soul, and hers come apart in beautiful warmth. With one final push, Mac and Stella collapsed against each other.



A Short ime later, Mac asked Stella..."Are you warm now love"? "Mmhmm....very warm". Kissing his wife goodnight, They fell asleep in each others arms. As night went on, Mac could hear Caroline crying, but it sounded far away. Getting up , Mac walked over to the cradle and noticed Caroline was gone. Trying not to panic, Mac walked down the hall, and heard Don talking. "Hey my sweet Caroline, who's Don's Angel"? "Yeah...you are...such a pretty little Angel"., said Don as he walked the floor with Caroline. "Everything okay Don"? "Oh!! hey Mac...yeah, she's just a little restless". "She's most likely hungry, I'll take her to Stella". While Mac took Caroline to Stella, Don, went back to bed, and for the second time that night, Mackenzie, turned and curled herself into her Uncle Don. "I ov ou Uncle On". "I love you too Sweetie".


TBC.....
 
naughty naughty :devil: I just hope there aren't any troubles with the meter. You so love pushing the meter lol
 
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