Snickers Scenario's

Status
Not open for further replies.
you guys!! come on... dont' be shy, just start being creative!! i can't do this allow (i will) but i don't want too!! pleeeeeeeeease post something:)

---
Nick covers his face, hiding the tears and the pain that have taken over his usually happy, bright face. he could hear the pain and horror in every "Nick" that came from Sara's lips. He watched as Grissom tried to calm Sara, not seceeding at all. Frustrated boiled over Nick. Grissom just took Nick away from Sara, the first person she's seen in hours of terror.

G: Nick *looks up at Nick*
N: *wipes the tears away; trying not to show weakness* yeah...
G: *motions with his head toward Sara* tell her I'm here now and everything's gonna be alright.
N: *shakes his head and leans back down to sara* Sar.
S: *sobs* Nick....
N: Sunshine, it's me.
*the CSI team's faces turn to confusion as Nick calls her Sunshine*
N: it's Nick. Now just calm down, honey.
*Grissom's face turns from confusion to anger*
N: I'm here, everythings gonna be alright.
G: Nick....
N: Grissom. *angry now* I'm trying to calm her down. Let me comfort my friend. OK?!
G: *shakes his head*
N: Sar, it's gonna be Ok. We found you *sniffles* Just hang in there. *grabs her hand and kisses it softly* I'll be right here with you.
 
emily i'm jumping.

s: *whimpering* nick help....
n: ooh baby hold on will get you out here okay baby
s: stay please stay and she start moaning in pain.
while nick sooth sara gil start to think of the worse thing that sara is cheating on him.
g: *in angry voice* nick tell her i am here.
n: *deep breaths* sara gil is here okay, *in a fading soft voice* he wants to talk to you.
s: grips nick hand harder, *in a low voice* nick stay for me
n: i will be my sunshine i will baby stay here *tear start to fill his eyes*
g: what sara said, what she saying *being frantic*
w: *holds griss* to avoid let him hit nick. nick stay calm and be strong for sara. *then pushes griss to the side and proceed to bend and touch sara and said* girl be strong i know you can be strong for me and i mean for us okay help is on the way.
s: war, i will hurry soon....
 
aww!! that's so cute!!

N: Sar, we're all here for you. just.... just stay with us. ok?
S: *starts to snob* ok..
W: *says under his breath* where are those damn paramedics? *shouts* LET'S GET SOME HELP OVER HERE!!
N: *whispers* just hold my hand Sunshine, and everything will be ok.
G: Nick *shouting now* what the hell is she saying?
N: *looks at Grissom* She's in pain... there's not much to say!
C: Nick, calm down. *walks over to Grissom* you too.
G: *looks at catherine* what?
N: Nick's being Nick.
G: Has he ever called you 'baby'?
C: *smiles* ha... no.
G: That should be ME helping her.
C: why don't we just save her first. ok?
G: *nods his head and walks back over to Nick and Warrick*
N: they're almost here sweetie. *tears are rolling down his cheeks now* everything's gonna be ok.
S: *nods her head slowly*
*the paramedics FINALLY get there, pushing warrick aside... waiting for NIck to finish*
W: It's about fucken time you guys got here! Now save her ass!
N: Sar, you have to let go of my hand now.
S: I don't want to...
N: I don't want you to either, but you have to so we can get you out.
 
s: no! just hold my hand.
n: ok. *to the paramedic* she needs me more than ever
and the paramedic nodded his head
b: *shouting* we have to lift the car. then bends near nick and says be strong for her.
n: *nodded his head* will do.
s: whos that?
n: it's jim
s: jim
b: i'm here sweetie i'll get this damn car okay stay alive for me will you sweetie.
s: okay.
after the car was lifted sara has several cuts, bruises, scratch and exhausted.
g: let me get to her.
c: no! let the paramedics do their job
g: cath she's my girlfriend
greg (gs): i know grissom
g: you knew?
gs: you said it before you left the lab
g: ooh!
w: guys shes okay
gs: thank god
w: she's a fighter
c: *panic enter in her voice and anger at the same time*where is she? and where's nick?
b: the chopper pick them up bring her to the nearest hospital
g: i need to be there
w: no we need to process
gs: i think we need to solve this mystery.
on the chopper
n: baby breath for me okay
s: *nods her head*
n: sunshine *praying silently* hope nothing bad like broken ribs or something make her normal again oh god i love her more than she knows.
 
Sara arrives at the hospital, severe concusion. the doctors and paramedics rush her to emergency. they shou nick out of the way, telling him to go behind the glass and watch if he wants. Nick does as he's told, knowing that Sara's life is in these people's hands. Nick walks out of the room and to the quiet lounge, watching as Sara's fradgile body is lifted on to the hospital bed. the doctors start to attact cords and wires to her head and body, trying to get her awake and hopefully prevent a serious concusion. Nick sits down on a seat facing the room, watching every heroic act that the doctors are preforming to his Sunshine. then Nick's cell rings...

N: Stokes
W: hey Nick
N: Warrick...
W: yeah, it's me. how's your sunshine.
N: *nick lets out a light chuckle and smiles... HIS Sunshine* She's in emergency right now. It's not looking the greatest, but she's still alive.
W: that's good. *silence* and... how are you?
N: me? i'm fine. just.. worried.
W: JUST worried? Nick, come on, we've been friends for a long time, i haven't even been able to count the years. what's up man?
N: *shakes his head, clouds forming in his eyes* I'll tell you later man... right now

*at that moment, Nick starts to hear shouting noises coming from Sara's room. he looks in and see's the doctors practicly running around trying to find something. Nick hears a lot 'beeeeeeep' sound and know exactly what that means. without saying another word to warrick, nick hangs up the phone and runs closer to the window, tears running down his already red cheeks. The doctors start to yell 'CLEAR' as they connect Sara's body to the electricity. Nick's breathing gets heavy, praying and HOPING that Sara will make it, that the doctors will proform yet another miracle. within the next few seconds, Nick starts to hear the 'beep, beep, beep' coming from the room and 'congradulations' come from the doctors. they'd better get a doctor over here, nick thought,because i'm about to have a heart attack!
 
Hey you guys! nice job on this one- sorry hadn't realised anyone was updating it (must check more often from now on!) :)
------------

Minutes passed like months and years to Nick, pale and clammy beside an equally white and listless Sara. They had let him in after sara had stabilised, but she was still unconscious from the medication. At that moment, Grissom burst through the door and stopped dead in his tracks taking in the view of his love attached to the hospital machines... and at the sight of Nick, who she had PLEADED for, by her side.

N: Griss... (he choked)
Grissom looked at Nick and for a second his face contorted into a mask of pain and incomprehension- then it was gone, back to the deadpan look of utter concentration
G: Not now
N: I don't want you to think...
G: Don't, Nicky just...
Grissom made his way over to where Nick was clasping Sara's hand and pulled up a chair near her face
N: I... I'm not going to apologise for...
G: Nick (he spoke softly, eyes never leaving Sara's closed ones)... I know you love her too...
Nick's breath hitched in his throat, not knowing what could possibly follow a statement like that...
 
aww!!! smile, that's so cute!! glad to have you here. REALLY nice job!!! *hands a Snickers bar to everyone here* cheers to snickers!!

----
Grissom and Nick sit beside each other in complete and awkward silence, only the continueal 'beep' was keeping them sane...

Nick, holding one of sara's hands, and grissom, holding the other, finally got broken away from their silence as they saw the rest of the team at the window, looking in on their little party. Nick motioned for all of them to come it, hoping the doctors won't mind just a liiittle more company.

C: *whispers* how is she.
G: Alive...
GS: that's a start...
W: *puts his hand on Nick's shoulder and whispers* you ok?
N: *looks up at warrick and nods, not really able to put any words together at this point.*
W: *nods and looks back up* so... what's her condition?
D (doctor): serious.
*everyone turns to newest member of their party*
C: serious? she was just under the car for...
D: a very long time. she was starving, it rained... making her colder then ever, he got a cut on her lower leg. lots of dirt and bacteria got into the wound, given that she was under that car for hours without anything to give the wound help.
*everyone shook their heads, understanding what the doctor was saying*
D: I think it'd be best if Miss Sidle was left alone for awhile. With all the meds she's on, it'd just be overwhelming to have so many people here.
C: ok...
W: yeah, we should all get back to the lab. prosess?
G: yeah *standing up and letting go of Sara's hand, walking over to his team.* thank you doctor. can you just phone CSI when she wakes up. I think we all just want to know if sh'es going to be alright and safe.
D: can do *takes Grissom's card* thanks
G: no problem *looks down at Nick* Nick...
N: yeah,
G: let's go..
N: *nods his head slowly* k. *lets go of Sara's hand, not kissing it or anything, afraid he'd be the next victim. his killer: gil grissom.*
*they all walk out of the room, but Nick stops by the doctor and says...*
N: thank you. please, just... make sure she'll be alright.
D: Will do Mr. Stokes.
 
after a long tendous shift and processing and it time to clock out the heat of the afternoon sun feels like burning the city of lights. Nick walk out the double door run towards his car not caring his stomach aches turning to different knot of hunger and feeling of unknown. Drive towards the hospital. when he reach their he was greeted by the doctor.
n: doc, how is she?
d: still resting, you can go visit her if you want.
n: thanks. * he walk toward the room where sara is* and she was taking care of tina brown, hey tina
t: hey nick.
n: how's she doin'?
t: she's doing good.
n: will she wake up?
t: oh! nick she will, dont worry as soon as warrick told me that sara was here, i see to it i will be here to take care of her.
n: thanks tina, sits on the empty chair and holds sara's hand and kiss it.
t: (did not go unnotice of his affection for sara) you really do love her, dont you nick.
n: yes i do tina more than she'll ever know. ooh wait !!! beet red
t: ooh was that a secret.
n: yeah! how can... can you tell.
t: cause warrick alway hold my hand and kiss it when i'm sleeping it alway wakes me up and give me the sense of completeness and i'll give him... (was cut off by nick)
n: clears throat that's too much.
w: what was too much.
n: you and her... ;)
 
Nick started to look uncomfortable, uncertain whether tina would share her discovery with rick or not. He pulled away from sara and started to get up
N: i...uh...need some water
W: (catching on) aw no you dont...
Warick glances at tina and one look from her and he changes his mind :)P)
W: actually, how bout me and tina leave you two alone for a while
Tina smiles and walks over to Warick in the doorway
T: maybe you have one or two things you'd like to tell her?
N: uh... ummm (smiles, not knowing quite what to say)
W: (smiling mischievously) Yeah man, i mean, we all love the girl but its not like she called out our names as she was being rescued or anything...
As Warick and Tina swung out the door, Nick heard the beeping of the heart monitor suddenly increase. whirling around he saw Sara slowly opening her eyes
S: (hoarse) N..Nick
Sara smiles weakly and tries to pull herself up the bed. Nick is dumbstruck for a moment, until the words begin to tumble from his mouth. rushing forward, he helps Sara to sit up.
N: oh no you don't, let me help you, your throat- ice chips- where'd they go? i should get the nurse, warick and tina just left, the rest of the team, we're so worried...
Smiling more stronly now, Sara held up her hand to stop nick, wincing at pain in her ribs
S: Stop, Nicky... I'm ok... Ice chips- would be good (she coughed)
Finding the ice chips next to the bed Nick nimbly helped Sara to snag one. Nick wasn't sure whether he should bring up her rescue, and more importantly her calling his name non-stop...
S: what? what's wrong?
N: aw sunshine, dont you dare start worrying about me- it's YOU we're all worrying about
Sara shook her head, eyebrows raised
N: ... you- you said my name
 
s: (nodded her head and smile)
n: you should rest up. (interupted)
w: hey girl (walks over and give her a hug)
s: hey gorgeous.
w: it never fails, (shoots nick a glance) she loves me.
t: aww!! i thought i'm your girl (pretending to be hurt.)
w: baby your my woman.
n: chuckles
s: *chuckles* but cough
t: check her bp, her pulse and monitor. (to both nick and warrick) guys she needs her rest.
w: and yeah nick i think you should take a bath and eat.
s: (worried) nick you should go and eat and rest.
n: sara you dont have to worry about me
s: you have done more than you should have
n: but...(cut off)
s: no but. (softly) you need to rest to and that goes for you to war.
w: yes mother.
t: i let you rest and the doctor will be right her to check up on you.
s: okay
warrick walks up to her and give sara a hug and a kiss her temple and say
w: dont scare us like that again nick is so worried.
sara just nod her head to warrick's shoulder. and he step out of the hug.
n: you, sure you'll be alright (she nod her head again)
(walks over and give her a hug and a kiss on her cheek.
t: okay boys you said good bye to your favorite girl.
w&n: bye sara.
sara drift back to sleep.
 
since no one is adding i will add again.
please add a line or two.

nick could not sleep when he arrived home when he close his eyes all he can see is sara. he made a decission to tell her what he feels even if she going to reject him or accept him and leave grissom for him. what a wishful thinking.
he groan and took a shower and leave to see sara.
he arrived at the hospital carrying food and a book. he open the door.
n: sara
s: mmm
n: ooh sory did i wake you up
s: no.
n: food
s: thanks
 
sorry cocoa was kinda stuck for the previous post...

N: so... uh hows it goin? feeling any better?
S: (Swallows a mouthful) nicky, i've known you long enough to know when you have something you want to say...
Nick swallows, terrified
S: (getting worried) what? it can't be that bad- what is it?
N: no, no... i- uh- shouldn't be so nervous about this but i mean you said my name, not grissom's- that's gotta mean something right?...
S: i...
N: (lost in his train of thought)and grissom knows how i feel and i'm pretty sure warrick does- ha, almost certain catherine does... greg's probably oblivious poor guy, but...
S: NICK
she holds out her hand and holds his arm gently
S: calm down okay... about the name thing
She looks uncertain and puts the sandwich down on the bedside table, turning to concentrate on Nick. Sara lets out a breath slowly
S: I- I don't remember much about the accident, but they told me i almost died
Nick feels a stab of pain at the not-so-distant memory
S: What i do remember is thinking of you- always, for the whole time under that car it was as if my mind was a film reel of all the time we've spent toghether over the last 7 years. i've been trying to give myself time to think about what the hell that means but...
she looks up at him, honest emotion shining through her brown eyes
S: but i guess i've known for a long time what it means

---
cocoa- enjoy! :)
 
Ok I'm going to give this a shot.

N: ( he took Sara's hand in his, wanting her to contiue ) Look Sar I know what was going through my mind the whole time you where missing.
S: ( she placed her hand against his lips ) Let me finish here Nick. I know that I have always had feelings for you. But I guess that I did'nt relize how strong they where until now.
N: ( he looked into her eyes and could see into her soul ) Oh Sar you know that I have feelings for you to.
S: Nick let me finish please. I need you to know that while I love Grissom, I'm not "In Love" with him.
 
great job smile and sf01 and yes i am enjoying it very much.

n: (happy voice) really... (was cut off again)
s: nick you really need me to finish this. while gil is in love with me i love him like any good friend. we're on a break for awhile now, i guess it start when he stayed over at heather's.
n: and what's it to me...
s: nick, i just talk to grissom and we're over now for real.
n: can i ask you out on a date?
s: are you asking me now
n: yeah, let me do this right, ms. sara sidle, would you like to go out on a date with me.

someone can take the story from here.
 
OK here goes...

S: Yes I would, I thought that you would never ask me out. ( she's smileing at Nick )
N: I guess that it took me almost loseing you to relize that I can't live without you.
S: ( places hand over her mouth ) OH Nicky, I never relized how strong your feeling are for me. ( sara's crying now )
N: ( places his hand on her cheek, wips tears away ) You are my Sunshine Sara, and you always will be...
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top