Hi everyone! It's my first fan fiction and english isn't my first language so don't be rude with me!tell me what u think about it and tell me the english mistake i've made!
After a hard day of work she was standing there in the cloakroom of nyc scientific police , her hair was wet she was lost in her toughts when as she was closing the door of her rack she heard:
" Hey stella"
" You've scared me mac" she says
" Sorry"
" Do u often watch girls while they're taking a bath?she asked to tease him "
" I wasn't watching u or I was but not that way"
" Which way?"
" You're so beautiful"
" You must be kiding me i look like a wet dog when my curly hair is wet"
" I'm serious, u know i'm realizing that i've never looked at u like I should have"
" mmm u 're worring me mac do u feel good?"
" I've never felt that good in my entire life he answered just before taking her in his arms with pasion, they were so closed that she could feel his breath on her face
" R u sure that's what u want mac?"
" Yes i'm sure"
Several minutes after as they were on the floor stellaa little bit out of breath said:
" That was whaouh I didn't know u could be so passioned"
" So do I"
As they were enjoying this moment of tenderness
Mac 's bip rang :
" Damn it it's flack he's got news about my murder case sorry see you later"
" Yes , see u later and as he was crossing the door she said : "Hey mac i l....."
" You what?"
" No nothing take care"
Few days after as they were is their car going back on a crime scene for finding evidence stella finally said :
" So u didn't call me after we ....u know"
" Sorry I was busy"
" That's all u have to answer, we ' ve made love I tought that maybe it 's been as important for u as it's been for me"
" Yep but u know me let's do like if nothing had never happened "
" U must be kiding me mac?nothing , it was nothing ? You know I love u since the first day I've saw u but before u were married but now maybe it's time for u to close this chapter of ur life don't u think?"
" You're right i was married and i'm still i'm not ready for that"
" U know what , forget it nothing happened" she bruttaly answered as she was getting out of the car
As they were in the stair of the building she was just furious after him and he could feel that.
" Let's talk about it later we're here to investigate a murder right"?
" Right if u say so"
They enterred in the appartement and mac said
" Go on the left in the bed room i'll go in the living room we must find something here"
"Ok boss" she answered ironicly, but as she was walking towards the bed room she saw a guy with a gun and she just had the time to said macccccccccccc and bang she felt on the floor.
"Stella" he yelled as he was running towards her and took her in his arms "No not again I won't lose the love my life one more time please stay with me i love u"
" Me to " she said before falling inconsious.
"Stay with me please I need u" whe have a wounded dectective here please send an ambulance here " he screamed on his radio .
As he was hearing the ambulance outside getting closer he was still talking to her "Please, please don't leave me alone in this world I won't ever be able to live here without u" It was the first time he was crying since clair 's died I didn't mean it when i said it was nothing please of course it was important you're my everything please....
3 days after stella was still in coma and mac was walking in the corridor of the hospital again and again near her room when aidan came :
"Have u caught him?"he asked
"No not yet but we will i promise"she said to confort him
" I want every NY officer on this case working day and night until we 've got him!"
"Of course"
" U know I should have been more careful when we came in the appartement"
"It's not your fault"
"Of course it's my fault I wasn't careful enough when , you came on a crime scene you must be really careful even if it's not the first time criminals sometimes came back and I didn't see him but Stella did and she just jump in front of me to protect me she saved me I 'm the one who should be here between death and life not her"
"She knew what she was doing that's part of the job I would have done the same for you or for her we're like a family we are ready to risk our lives to each others you know that and Stella would never let anyone hurt you or anyone else it's tipically her : others come first
"I know but I'm the boss you know when some of you is in trouble I take care of it and i'm the one who's supposed to die for saving your lives to the opposite"
" We're going to find him and he will pay I promise, and she the strongest woman I've ever met she will be fine u won't lose her mac believe me"
" I'd like to be as optimistic as you aidan thanx for coming i'm gonna stay here until she 'll awakes.
Stella was still in coma , Mac was sitting on her bed looking at her, remembering all the good moment they had together, she was the only personn who was able to touch him in his heart mac wasn't the kind of guy who liked to talk about his fellings but with stella it was differents they don't have to talk to understand each other a simple look at her and he know what she thinks and she's also the only one who dares to say " hey mac you're wrong" they often fight that was like their relation was ...
Mac was holding her hand thinking how beautiful she was when she slowly moved her hand ....
After a hard day of work she was standing there in the cloakroom of nyc scientific police , her hair was wet she was lost in her toughts when as she was closing the door of her rack she heard:
" Hey stella"
" You've scared me mac" she says
" Sorry"
" Do u often watch girls while they're taking a bath?she asked to tease him "
" I wasn't watching u or I was but not that way"
" Which way?"
" You're so beautiful"
" You must be kiding me i look like a wet dog when my curly hair is wet"
" I'm serious, u know i'm realizing that i've never looked at u like I should have"
" mmm u 're worring me mac do u feel good?"
" I've never felt that good in my entire life he answered just before taking her in his arms with pasion, they were so closed that she could feel his breath on her face
" R u sure that's what u want mac?"
" Yes i'm sure"
Several minutes after as they were on the floor stellaa little bit out of breath said:
" That was whaouh I didn't know u could be so passioned"
" So do I"
As they were enjoying this moment of tenderness
Mac 's bip rang :
" Damn it it's flack he's got news about my murder case sorry see you later"
" Yes , see u later and as he was crossing the door she said : "Hey mac i l....."
" You what?"
" No nothing take care"
Few days after as they were is their car going back on a crime scene for finding evidence stella finally said :
" So u didn't call me after we ....u know"
" Sorry I was busy"
" That's all u have to answer, we ' ve made love I tought that maybe it 's been as important for u as it's been for me"
" Yep but u know me let's do like if nothing had never happened "
" U must be kiding me mac?nothing , it was nothing ? You know I love u since the first day I've saw u but before u were married but now maybe it's time for u to close this chapter of ur life don't u think?"
" You're right i was married and i'm still i'm not ready for that"
" U know what , forget it nothing happened" she bruttaly answered as she was getting out of the car
As they were in the stair of the building she was just furious after him and he could feel that.
" Let's talk about it later we're here to investigate a murder right"?
" Right if u say so"
They enterred in the appartement and mac said
" Go on the left in the bed room i'll go in the living room we must find something here"
"Ok boss" she answered ironicly, but as she was walking towards the bed room she saw a guy with a gun and she just had the time to said macccccccccccc and bang she felt on the floor.
"Stella" he yelled as he was running towards her and took her in his arms "No not again I won't lose the love my life one more time please stay with me i love u"
" Me to " she said before falling inconsious.
"Stay with me please I need u" whe have a wounded dectective here please send an ambulance here " he screamed on his radio .
As he was hearing the ambulance outside getting closer he was still talking to her "Please, please don't leave me alone in this world I won't ever be able to live here without u" It was the first time he was crying since clair 's died I didn't mean it when i said it was nothing please of course it was important you're my everything please....
3 days after stella was still in coma and mac was walking in the corridor of the hospital again and again near her room when aidan came :
"Have u caught him?"he asked
"No not yet but we will i promise"she said to confort him
" I want every NY officer on this case working day and night until we 've got him!"
"Of course"
" U know I should have been more careful when we came in the appartement"
"It's not your fault"
"Of course it's my fault I wasn't careful enough when , you came on a crime scene you must be really careful even if it's not the first time criminals sometimes came back and I didn't see him but Stella did and she just jump in front of me to protect me she saved me I 'm the one who should be here between death and life not her"
"She knew what she was doing that's part of the job I would have done the same for you or for her we're like a family we are ready to risk our lives to each others you know that and Stella would never let anyone hurt you or anyone else it's tipically her : others come first
"I know but I'm the boss you know when some of you is in trouble I take care of it and i'm the one who's supposed to die for saving your lives to the opposite"
" We're going to find him and he will pay I promise, and she the strongest woman I've ever met she will be fine u won't lose her mac believe me"
" I'd like to be as optimistic as you aidan thanx for coming i'm gonna stay here until she 'll awakes.
Stella was still in coma , Mac was sitting on her bed looking at her, remembering all the good moment they had together, she was the only personn who was able to touch him in his heart mac wasn't the kind of guy who liked to talk about his fellings but with stella it was differents they don't have to talk to understand each other a simple look at her and he know what she thinks and she's also the only one who dares to say " hey mac you're wrong" they often fight that was like their relation was ...
Mac was holding her hand thinking how beautiful she was when she slowly moved her hand ....
