sissi59100
CSI Level Three
awwwwwwwwwwww i have an hyper creative writer, i'm so proud of you Geni **sniff** lol
Seriously, your fic rocks my socks
Luv ya dear!
Seriously, your fic rocks my socks
Luv ya dear!
Road Trip - CSI:Miami - "Crazy Eights"
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cainesugar
Coroner
God I love you sometimes. All the time.
So get it together.
Ok, so what's a Wubba Monster exactly? Also- I loved Josh and Sarah and that asshole Bob. I loved the Hummerhome with Ryan (I want to get some Ryan candy, yum- sorry I like Ryan) and Katie, she so has a huge crush on him. I also loved Deklo and Jess- the skunk, that was great. And Horatio being babysitter again in the Hummerhome- yay! So awesome, thanks Geni.
SO, just on the Wubba Monster thing...thanks for clarifying Lori's death.
Ok, Speed what makes a great guy is he can cook, clean, massage, and talk to you about 'that' stuff.
So get it together.Ok, so what's a Wubba Monster exactly? Also- I loved Josh and Sarah and that asshole Bob. I loved the Hummerhome with Ryan (I want to get some Ryan candy, yum- sorry I like Ryan) and Katie, she so has a huge crush on him. I also loved Deklo and Jess- the skunk, that was great. And Horatio being babysitter again in the Hummerhome- yay! So awesome, thanks Geni.
SO, just on the Wubba Monster thing...thanks for clarifying Lori's death.
speedmonkey2
Head of the Graveyard Shift
Oh, Geni you amaze me. You really do.
Hahaha. Oh, I seriously doubt that as well. I think we all know how Katie feels about that man. All though I will agree he does have really good teeth. I also like the idea of the whole pinata thing. And ahhh the bickering, long live the bickering, reminds me of Speed and Delko's arguing back in the day and then Horatio would intrudeand say, "I'll finish it" the good ol' days. Keep up the great work!
bird_of_flame
Police Officer
Katie and Ryan bickering reminds me of the way I fight with my brother; they're acting like siblings . And do I detect so jealousy from Calleigh? Good thing Eric doesn’t smell anymore; that must have been horrible.
Great chapter, now you’ve got me wondering if they’ll ever find that darn Wubba monster; he could be like the Sasquash or something; they find footprints and take blurry photos, but never actually see him! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
. And do I detect so jealousy from Calleigh? Good thing Eric doesn’t smell anymore; that must have been horrible. Great chapter, now you’ve got me wondering if they’ll ever find that darn Wubba monster; he could be like the Sasquash or something; they find footprints and take blurry photos, but never actually see him! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
I've decided this will be the Wubba Monster. :lol:
(Courtesy of Google)
But essentially, the Wubba Monster was just a word that Eric made up during scrabble so he wouldn't lose.
But there hasn't been a big description about it or anything.
Yay! I've been deemed creative and hyper by the one-woman army. Love you too! *huggles*
Megan you're still there.
Lora, Alexx isn't dead and we have seen her quite a few times in the RT.
***********
Hummerhome
Ryan: Move over!
Katie: You move over!
Ryan: No I got here first.
Katie: Um no I did.
Ryan: Did not.
Katie: Did too.
Ryan: Did not.
Katie: Did TOO.
Ryan: DID NOT!
Katie: Okay let's make a deal. I'm right on Monday, Tuesday, Wednesdays. You're right on Thursday, Friday, Saturdays and we'll work out something for Sundays.
Ryan: Good deal.
Calleigh: Why don't ya'll just not speak to each other.
Ryan: Why?
Calleigh: Y'all hate each other.
Ryan: I don't hate her.
Katie: I don't hate him.
Calleigh: Then why the fighting?
Speed: Katie does that when she's attracted to someone.
Katie: *looks at Speed*
Speed: Whoops.
Katie: *frowns* SPEED!
Speed: Sorry, I had to say something.
Ryan: *smiles* Aw that's so cute.
Calleigh: NO IT'S NOT!
Ryan: Why?
Calleigh: Because...Nothing. Nevermind.
Colton: Hey who's going out with who here?
Calleigh: I...I'm going out with you Colton.
Colton: So why get jelous over Ryan and Katie?
Calleigh: I'm not jelous.
Speed: Yeah you are.
Katie: And what, you're not jelous?
Speed: Hell no.
Anni: HA.
Katie: *frowns*
Delko: Okay I'm confused.
Horatio: You're not the only one.
Calleigh: But...RYAN!
Ryan: What?
Calleigh: Don't sit with her.
Colton: Um hey, you and I are together. Not him.
Calleigh: I know you two aren't together.
Colton: What? No that's not what I m-
Horatio: COW!
Speed: WHERE!
Horatio: Nowhere. I needed to break up that conversation.
Speed: Ah man and I actually brought my camera this time.
Miami Lab
Yelina: *walks over* Hey.
Josh: Hey.
Yelina: You look tired.
Josh: Taking care of three kids does that to a person.
Yelina: Where are they?
Josh: Hotel room. Cait's taking care of everyone, she swears she's a big girl so I trust her.
Yelina: You up for a case?
Josh: I have to make a living somehow.
Yelina: Good. *hands over folder* Playground murder.
Josh: Who died?
Yelina: A parent actually. Witnesses said they heard a shot out of nowhere and Lucinda Wellner hit the ground.
Josh: Was her husband there?
Yelina: We called him. He says he was at his office during the murder. His four year old girl is with PD.
Josh: I guess I should head out to the crime scene then.
Yelina: Yeah and there's a new CSI with you.
Josh: *stops walking* You can't be serious.
Yelina: County hires them, I don't.
Josh: *looks down at folder* I'm not here to babysit a newbie.
Yelina: You are now. She's in the lounge her name's Avery.
Josh: Great. *walks away*
Yelina: *smirks*
Lounge
Josh: *walks in*
Avery: *opens fridge* For a county building there sure isn't a lot of food.
Josh: Are you Avery?
Avery: *turns around* Yup. Who are you?
Josh: I'm Josh Speedle. You're on my case.
Avery: *walks over* Your case?
Josh: Yeah.
Avery: No offense sir but you don't own the case.
Josh: I'm the senior CSI on the case.
Avery: How long have you been working with CSI?
Josh: Four years.
Avery: Wow...Four...Whole years?
Josh: *frowns*
Avery: Well I've been workin' about four minutes so I guess you have seniority.
Josh: Alright let's head out.
Avery: Ladies first.
Crime scene, playground
Josh: *places down kit* Hey Alexx.
Alexx: Hey baby. You with the new girl?
Josh: Yeah unfortunately.
Alexx: *laughs* Well don't worry, I hear she'll be transfered to night shift by the end of the week.
Josh: Good.
Avery: *walks over* Ooh gossip much fun.
Josh: We weren't gossiping.
Avery: *laughs* Yeah you're whispering with the coroner about crime scenes and suspects.
Josh: How do you know we weren't?
Avery: I'm not an idiot.
Josh: *looks at Alexx*
Alexx: *smiles*
Avery: Let's get started already. This heat's going to damage my skin. *walks away*
Alexx: She's a pistol.
Josh: I've already got one pistol, I don't need another one. *walks away*
Alexx: *laughs*
Murder scene
Avery: *kneels* Blood.
Josh: Yeah it's a murder. There would be blood.
Avery: *tilts head* No casings. Shooter was far away.
Josh: You read that out of the folder.
Avery: *smiles* Yeah I did. I wanted to sound competant.
Josh: Congratulations.
Avery: *stands* Okay so we have to find the trajectory. We find the trajectory, we find the casing and evidence of our shooter.
Josh: Alright I'll set up a dummy.
Avery: Wait.
Josh: What.
Avery: *looks around*
Josh: *lifts brow*
Avery: *climbs up slide*
Josh: What are you doing?
Avery: *climbs up to the top*
Josh: *rolls eyes*
Avery: *looks across yard* You can see pretty much the whole neighborhood from up here.
Josh: What's your point?
Avery: Great place to find out a victim. No one saw the shooter.
Josh: I think if the shooter was on top of a slide, someone would have seen him.
Avery: *looks up* The school's pretty close to this position right?
Josh: Yeah.
Avery: *slides down slide*
Josh: *crosses arms*
Avery: We need to get to autopsy.
Josh: Whoa, slow down. We need to process the scene first.
Avery: There's nothing to process.
Josh: There's always something to process.
Avery: Right, you go through all of the bottle caps and paperclips and I'll head down to autopsy and get the angle of the shot so we'll have a real crime scene to check out.
Josh: No. You process the paperclips and bottlecaps. I'll go to autopsy.
Avery: *laughs* The rookie gets all of the crap jobs right?
Josh: Yeah and if you look toward the end of the giant sandbox over there, you might find some crap. *walks away*
Avery: *shakes head*
Autopsy, two hours later
Alexx: *grabs latex gloves*
Josh: *walks in*
Alexx: Back so soon?
Josh: You have an angle on the trajectory?
Alexx: Yep. I put it at about a 45 degree angle from above.
Josh: So someone was pretty high up.
Alexx: Yeah and talented. *hands over container*
Josh: What is that? A .22? So someone with a handgun.
Alexx: Maybe.
Josh: Any other findings?
Alexx: Well she was in great shape, healthy organs, nothing out of the ordinary there. But I did find something interesting in the wound tract. A black substance.
Josh: You send it to Trace?
Alexx: I did.
Josh: ...
Alexx: What?
Josh: *leans closer to body* Can you pass me a magnifying glass?
Alexx: Sure. What do you see?
Josh: *grabs magnifying glass* Something that shouldn't be here. *picks up tweezers*
Alexx: *stares at Josh*
Josh: *stands up straight* It's a micro chip. It was under her skin.
Alexx: What soccer mom carries a micro chip under her skin?
Josh: The kind that's hiding something.
Alexx: *smiles*
Josh: What?
Alexx: Timmy makes the same face when he finds out something interesting about a case.
Josh: *smirks* Thanks Alexx. *leaves*
Alexx: *covers body with sheet*
Trace Lab, two hours later
Avery: *walks in*
Josh: Hey. You find anything?
Avery: A lot of burried puke and soothers. You have anything here?
Josh: *hands over paper*
Avery: *looking at paper* Alright I don't speak tech, you're going to have to translate.
Josh: It's rubber.
Avery: Rubber....You say that like it means something.
Josh: It was in the wound tract.
Avery: So?
Josh: So put it in context.
Avery: You were here first, you do it.
Josh: It was a silencer. Well, part of a silencer. When the bullet passes through a silencer it can take some of it with it depending on how hot the chamber was. It will then leave a second set of striations on the bullet.
Avery: Did you look at the bullet?
Josh: An hour ago.
Avery; So whoever shot her had a silencer....Witnesses say they heard a shot. That wouldn't have happened if the killer had a silencer.
Josh: There was a second shot which we have to find.
Avery: Wait, shouldn't we find out where the first shot came from?
Josh: The roof of the school like you said.
Avery: Well that's a pretty direct shot from the roof.
Josh: I'm thinking rifle. The bullet was a .22 but you can substitute that with a rifle. They fire the same ammunition.
Avery: Sniper.
Josh: Yeah.
Avery: Well I'll think twice before going to a playground again.
Josh: You go to playgrounds?
Avery: I'm a kid at heart, sue me.
Josh: *nods*
Avery: So we search around the top of the school and find evidence.
Josh: First I have something else. *walks away*
Avery: *follows*
AV Lab
Avery: Alright why are we here?
Josh: *sits down* There was a micro chip under her skin.
Avery: Oh retro.
Josh: I'm trying to find the information that's probably being stored in it.
Avery: What is she, like some kind of secret agent?
Josh: I don't know. *typing*
Avery: *shrugs* She seems too 'Stepford' for that.
Josh: *looks at Avery*
Avery: What?
Computer beeps
Josh: *looks at computer* Here we go. We have her name, address, credit card information.
Avery: Oh I've seen those before.
Josh: You have?
Avery: Yeah girls go to the hot clubs in Miami with that under their dresses. Much easier than carrying a wallet. The guy scans them and they're in.
Josh: You scare me.
Avery: *smiles* Yeah right. How about you tell me something about yourself that I never could know.
Josh: I used to be gay.
Avery: *stares at Josh*
Josh: ...
Avery: Really?
Josh: Yeah you have a problem with that?
Avery: No it's just...Man why does it always have to be the hot ones.
Josh: Excuse me?
Avery: Nothing I was making a general statement. *grabs keyboard*
Josh: *lifts brow*
Avery: *typing* So we can track her movements over the past 24 hours right?
Josh: *staring at Avery* Theoretically.
Avery: Good. She might have met her killer at a club. Oh here I found one. South Beach Tropicana.
Josh: Sounds like a drink.
Avery: It is. It's also the name of the corresponding club. Come on we're going.
Josh: No. Absolutely not. There's no reason to go there.
Avery: The killer could be working there.
Josh: Yeah and he could be working at a Burger King we're not going.
Avery: What sniper do you know of that works at a Burger King. I don't think Jay and Silent Bob are the types we're looking for.
Josh: *sigh* ...Fine.
South Beach Tropicana Club, 8pm
Josh: *walks in*
Avery: *walks ahead* Stop being so slow.
Josh: You're only doing this because you want to go clubbing.
Avery: Hey no one said we couldn't have a little fun while we're on the case. Where'd your Joe-Gay flamboyant side go?
Josh: It's in the Hummer.
Avery: Oh get in touch with it for a minute and stop slacking behind like a mortician. Excuse me bartender man I have a question.
Bartender: Yeah?
Avery: You see this woman here lately? *lifts photo*
Bartender: Yeah that's Lucinda. Why?
Avery: She's dead.
Baretender: Shame.
Avery: Yeah especially for her little girl who had to see her head pop open like a big ol' grapefruit. So if you could tell me who she was with or if she was speaking to anyone here that would be GREAT.
Bartender: She was alone.
Avery: No one comes to a club alone.
Bartender: She did. Every night.
Avery: Do you know why?
Bartender: Said she wanted to get away from her family.
Josh: What else did she tell you?
Bartender: Her troubles like everyone else who comes in here half drunk.
Josh: You mind telling us what said troubles were?
Bartender: *shrugs*
Avery: I don't see a psychiatry degree on your wall so make with the 411 before I-
Josh: Avery.
Avery: *sigh*
Bartender: She said some guy was following her. She was freaked.
Josh: She ever mention a name or give a description?
Bartender: No.
Josh: Did she ever see the guy here?
Bartender: Not that I know of.
Josh: Okay, thanks. *leaves*
Avery: Can I get a rum and coke on the r-
Josh: *grabs Avery* We have to leave.
Avery: *rolls eyes*
TBC.................
(Courtesy of Google)
But essentially, the Wubba Monster was just a word that Eric made up during scrabble so he wouldn't lose.
But there hasn't been a big description about it or anything.
Yay! I've been deemed creative and hyper by the one-woman army.
Love you too! *huggles*Megan you're still there.
Lora, Alexx isn't dead and we have seen her quite a few times in the RT.
***********
Hummerhome
Ryan: Move over!
Katie: You move over!
Ryan: No I got here first.
Katie: Um no I did.
Ryan: Did not.
Katie: Did too.
Ryan: Did not.
Katie: Did TOO.
Ryan: DID NOT!
Katie: Okay let's make a deal. I'm right on Monday, Tuesday, Wednesdays. You're right on Thursday, Friday, Saturdays and we'll work out something for Sundays.
Ryan: Good deal.
Calleigh: Why don't ya'll just not speak to each other.
Ryan: Why?
Calleigh: Y'all hate each other.
Ryan: I don't hate her.
Katie: I don't hate him.
Calleigh: Then why the fighting?
Speed: Katie does that when she's attracted to someone.
Katie: *looks at Speed*
Speed: Whoops.
Katie: *frowns* SPEED!
Speed: Sorry, I had to say something.
Ryan: *smiles* Aw that's so cute.
Calleigh: NO IT'S NOT!
Ryan: Why?
Calleigh: Because...Nothing. Nevermind.
Colton: Hey who's going out with who here?
Calleigh: I...I'm going out with you Colton.
Colton: So why get jelous over Ryan and Katie?
Calleigh: I'm not jelous.
Speed: Yeah you are.
Katie: And what, you're not jelous?
Speed: Hell no.
Anni: HA.
Katie: *frowns*
Delko: Okay I'm confused.
Horatio: You're not the only one.
Calleigh: But...RYAN!
Ryan: What?
Calleigh: Don't sit with her.
Colton: Um hey, you and I are together. Not him.
Calleigh: I know you two aren't together.
Colton: What? No that's not what I m-
Horatio: COW!
Speed: WHERE!
Horatio: Nowhere. I needed to break up that conversation.
Speed: Ah man and I actually brought my camera this time.
Miami Lab
Yelina: *walks over* Hey.
Josh: Hey.
Yelina: You look tired.
Josh: Taking care of three kids does that to a person.
Yelina: Where are they?
Josh: Hotel room. Cait's taking care of everyone, she swears she's a big girl so I trust her.
Yelina: You up for a case?
Josh: I have to make a living somehow.
Yelina: Good. *hands over folder* Playground murder.
Josh: Who died?
Yelina: A parent actually. Witnesses said they heard a shot out of nowhere and Lucinda Wellner hit the ground.
Josh: Was her husband there?
Yelina: We called him. He says he was at his office during the murder. His four year old girl is with PD.
Josh: I guess I should head out to the crime scene then.
Yelina: Yeah and there's a new CSI with you.
Josh: *stops walking* You can't be serious.
Yelina: County hires them, I don't.
Josh: *looks down at folder* I'm not here to babysit a newbie.
Yelina: You are now. She's in the lounge her name's Avery.
Josh: Great. *walks away*
Yelina: *smirks*
Lounge
Josh: *walks in*
Avery: *opens fridge* For a county building there sure isn't a lot of food.
Josh: Are you Avery?
Avery: *turns around* Yup. Who are you?
Josh: I'm Josh Speedle. You're on my case.
Avery: *walks over* Your case?
Josh: Yeah.
Avery: No offense sir but you don't own the case.
Josh: I'm the senior CSI on the case.
Avery: How long have you been working with CSI?
Josh: Four years.
Avery: Wow...Four...Whole years?
Josh: *frowns*
Avery: Well I've been workin' about four minutes so I guess you have seniority.
Josh: Alright let's head out.
Avery: Ladies first.
Crime scene, playground
Josh: *places down kit* Hey Alexx.
Alexx: Hey baby. You with the new girl?
Josh: Yeah unfortunately.
Alexx: *laughs* Well don't worry, I hear she'll be transfered to night shift by the end of the week.
Josh: Good.
Avery: *walks over* Ooh gossip much fun.
Josh: We weren't gossiping.
Avery: *laughs* Yeah you're whispering with the coroner about crime scenes and suspects.
Josh: How do you know we weren't?
Avery: I'm not an idiot.
Josh: *looks at Alexx*
Alexx: *smiles*
Avery: Let's get started already. This heat's going to damage my skin. *walks away*
Alexx: She's a pistol.
Josh: I've already got one pistol, I don't need another one. *walks away*
Alexx: *laughs*
Murder scene
Avery: *kneels* Blood.
Josh: Yeah it's a murder. There would be blood.
Avery: *tilts head* No casings. Shooter was far away.
Josh: You read that out of the folder.
Avery: *smiles* Yeah I did. I wanted to sound competant.
Josh: Congratulations.
Avery: *stands* Okay so we have to find the trajectory. We find the trajectory, we find the casing and evidence of our shooter.
Josh: Alright I'll set up a dummy.
Avery: Wait.
Josh: What.
Avery: *looks around*
Josh: *lifts brow*
Avery: *climbs up slide*
Josh: What are you doing?
Avery: *climbs up to the top*
Josh: *rolls eyes*
Avery: *looks across yard* You can see pretty much the whole neighborhood from up here.
Josh: What's your point?
Avery: Great place to find out a victim. No one saw the shooter.
Josh: I think if the shooter was on top of a slide, someone would have seen him.
Avery: *looks up* The school's pretty close to this position right?
Josh: Yeah.
Avery: *slides down slide*
Josh: *crosses arms*
Avery: We need to get to autopsy.
Josh: Whoa, slow down. We need to process the scene first.
Avery: There's nothing to process.
Josh: There's always something to process.
Avery: Right, you go through all of the bottle caps and paperclips and I'll head down to autopsy and get the angle of the shot so we'll have a real crime scene to check out.
Josh: No. You process the paperclips and bottlecaps. I'll go to autopsy.
Avery: *laughs* The rookie gets all of the crap jobs right?
Josh: Yeah and if you look toward the end of the giant sandbox over there, you might find some crap. *walks away*
Avery: *shakes head*
Autopsy, two hours later
Alexx: *grabs latex gloves*
Josh: *walks in*
Alexx: Back so soon?
Josh: You have an angle on the trajectory?
Alexx: Yep. I put it at about a 45 degree angle from above.
Josh: So someone was pretty high up.
Alexx: Yeah and talented. *hands over container*
Josh: What is that? A .22? So someone with a handgun.
Alexx: Maybe.
Josh: Any other findings?
Alexx: Well she was in great shape, healthy organs, nothing out of the ordinary there. But I did find something interesting in the wound tract. A black substance.
Josh: You send it to Trace?
Alexx: I did.
Josh: ...
Alexx: What?
Josh: *leans closer to body* Can you pass me a magnifying glass?
Alexx: Sure. What do you see?
Josh: *grabs magnifying glass* Something that shouldn't be here. *picks up tweezers*
Alexx: *stares at Josh*
Josh: *stands up straight* It's a micro chip. It was under her skin.
Alexx: What soccer mom carries a micro chip under her skin?
Josh: The kind that's hiding something.
Alexx: *smiles*
Josh: What?
Alexx: Timmy makes the same face when he finds out something interesting about a case.
Josh: *smirks* Thanks Alexx. *leaves*
Alexx: *covers body with sheet*
Trace Lab, two hours later
Avery: *walks in*
Josh: Hey. You find anything?
Avery: A lot of burried puke and soothers. You have anything here?
Josh: *hands over paper*
Avery: *looking at paper* Alright I don't speak tech, you're going to have to translate.
Josh: It's rubber.
Avery: Rubber....You say that like it means something.
Josh: It was in the wound tract.
Avery: So?
Josh: So put it in context.
Avery: You were here first, you do it.
Josh: It was a silencer. Well, part of a silencer. When the bullet passes through a silencer it can take some of it with it depending on how hot the chamber was. It will then leave a second set of striations on the bullet.
Avery: Did you look at the bullet?
Josh: An hour ago.
Avery; So whoever shot her had a silencer....Witnesses say they heard a shot. That wouldn't have happened if the killer had a silencer.
Josh: There was a second shot which we have to find.
Avery: Wait, shouldn't we find out where the first shot came from?
Josh: The roof of the school like you said.
Avery: Well that's a pretty direct shot from the roof.
Josh: I'm thinking rifle. The bullet was a .22 but you can substitute that with a rifle. They fire the same ammunition.
Avery: Sniper.
Josh: Yeah.
Avery: Well I'll think twice before going to a playground again.
Josh: You go to playgrounds?
Avery: I'm a kid at heart, sue me.
Josh: *nods*
Avery: So we search around the top of the school and find evidence.
Josh: First I have something else. *walks away*
Avery: *follows*
AV Lab
Avery: Alright why are we here?
Josh: *sits down* There was a micro chip under her skin.
Avery: Oh retro.
Josh: I'm trying to find the information that's probably being stored in it.
Avery: What is she, like some kind of secret agent?
Josh: I don't know. *typing*
Avery: *shrugs* She seems too 'Stepford' for that.
Josh: *looks at Avery*
Avery: What?
Computer beeps
Josh: *looks at computer* Here we go. We have her name, address, credit card information.
Avery: Oh I've seen those before.
Josh: You have?
Avery: Yeah girls go to the hot clubs in Miami with that under their dresses. Much easier than carrying a wallet. The guy scans them and they're in.
Josh: You scare me.
Avery: *smiles* Yeah right. How about you tell me something about yourself that I never could know.
Josh: I used to be gay.
Avery: *stares at Josh*
Josh: ...
Avery: Really?
Josh: Yeah you have a problem with that?
Avery: No it's just...Man why does it always have to be the hot ones.
Josh: Excuse me?
Avery: Nothing I was making a general statement. *grabs keyboard*
Josh: *lifts brow*
Avery: *typing* So we can track her movements over the past 24 hours right?
Josh: *staring at Avery* Theoretically.
Avery: Good. She might have met her killer at a club. Oh here I found one. South Beach Tropicana.
Josh: Sounds like a drink.
Avery: It is. It's also the name of the corresponding club. Come on we're going.
Josh: No. Absolutely not. There's no reason to go there.
Avery: The killer could be working there.
Josh: Yeah and he could be working at a Burger King we're not going.
Avery: What sniper do you know of that works at a Burger King. I don't think Jay and Silent Bob are the types we're looking for.
Josh: *sigh* ...Fine.
South Beach Tropicana Club, 8pm
Josh: *walks in*
Avery: *walks ahead* Stop being so slow.
Josh: You're only doing this because you want to go clubbing.
Avery: Hey no one said we couldn't have a little fun while we're on the case. Where'd your Joe-Gay flamboyant side go?
Josh: It's in the Hummer.
Avery: Oh get in touch with it for a minute and stop slacking behind like a mortician. Excuse me bartender man I have a question.
Bartender: Yeah?
Avery: You see this woman here lately? *lifts photo*
Bartender: Yeah that's Lucinda. Why?
Avery: She's dead.
Baretender: Shame.
Avery: Yeah especially for her little girl who had to see her head pop open like a big ol' grapefruit. So if you could tell me who she was with or if she was speaking to anyone here that would be GREAT.
Bartender: She was alone.
Avery: No one comes to a club alone.
Bartender: She did. Every night.
Avery: Do you know why?
Bartender: Said she wanted to get away from her family.
Josh: What else did she tell you?
Bartender: Her troubles like everyone else who comes in here half drunk.
Josh: You mind telling us what said troubles were?
Bartender: *shrugs*
Avery: I don't see a psychiatry degree on your wall so make with the 411 before I-
Josh: Avery.
Avery: *sigh*
Bartender: She said some guy was following her. She was freaked.
Josh: She ever mention a name or give a description?
Bartender: No.
Josh: Did she ever see the guy here?
Bartender: Not that I know of.
Josh: Okay, thanks. *leaves*
Avery: Can I get a rum and coke on the r-
Josh: *grabs Avery* We have to leave.
Avery: *rolls eyes*
TBC.................
cainesugar
Coroner
I like Avery. Thanks by the way for the Wubba Monster pic and description. I need to get someone to make a Wubbe Monster icon, you should use that Geni. :lol:
He's a Speedle, so that's given.
Loved H and the cow thing. Made me laugh really hard. Great job, but when is H gonna drive to LA and pick me up and whisk me off to Miami...
Anywhoo, where did Riley go? What happened to her?
Thanks for the update Geni. Awesome.
Oh I KNOW! Always. I go into Abercrombie and Fitch and see some cutie and I realize he's gay. *sigh* So right, Avery. And so you have a crush on Josh? Well we know you think he's hot, but...
He's a Speedle, so that's given.Loved H and the cow thing. Made me laugh really hard. Great job, but when is H gonna drive to LA and pick me up and whisk me off to Miami...
Anywhoo, where did Riley go? What happened to her?
Thanks for the update Geni. Awesome.
CSI_Trainee
CSI Level One
Wow geni, waiting was totally worth it! I can't believe anni is pregnant tho, and then H asking speed how is therapy was going. The poor Josh having to work with that little like peppy chick, I would be like someone kill me now!
Totally loved the update and can't wait for more, Thnx so much for doing updates sooooo soon!
Totally loved the update and can't wait for more, Thnx so much for doing updates sooooo soon!
carlz31
Coroner
OK, two days without a computer and one chemistry assignment later, here I am!...oh man, so much to comment on, so little time.
Woah, Anni is pregnant? Awww, how cute! But seriously Speed, this is what you wanted and that was a really weird reaction. Maybe seeing Katie really got to him and he doesn't want to hurt Anni. *scratches head* Oh Speedy...
Ah, the Wubba Monster lives on Woah..that seems so long ago. The scrabble, the running out of the cabin in the underwear :lol: Good times, good times.
Ok, I don't really like that Avery girl. Maybe I'm just jumping to conclusions because I'm really really tired, but theres just something about her. I mean, she's been in the lab for less than a day and she's trying to delegate herself the good jobs while being rude to the senior agent (who yes, just happens to be my fake husband). Ok, I don't think I'm making much sense, so I'll just be quiet now.
OH! and I forgot to mention *points up* up there. Cop Josh is awesome! HA! take THAT mister hotel manager. Although, that would have been creeper Josh if that man was a woman, and that would have just been creepy. Not cool like creeper Speed, but just creepy (for lack of a better word). But don't get me wrong, the whole 'slamming the guy up against the wall' was cool Hee.
Ok, I should probably go to bed now because I am soooo tired *yawns* Night all! and please update soon!
Woah, Anni is pregnant? Awww, how cute! But seriously Speed, this is what you wanted and that was a really weird reaction. Maybe seeing Katie really got to him and he doesn't want to hurt Anni. *scratches head* Oh Speedy...
Ah, the Wubba Monster lives on
Woah..that seems so long ago. The scrabble, the running out of the cabin in the underwear :lol: Good times, good times.Ok, I don't really like that Avery girl. Maybe I'm just jumping to conclusions because I'm really really tired, but theres just something about her. I mean, she's been in the lab for less than a day and she's trying to delegate herself the good jobs while being rude to the senior agent (who yes, just happens to be my fake husband
). Ok, I don't think I'm making much sense, so I'll just be quiet now.OH! and I forgot to mention *points up* up there. Cop Josh is awesome! HA! take THAT mister hotel manager. Although, that would have been creeper Josh if that man was a woman, and that would have just been creepy. Not cool like creeper Speed, but just creepy (for lack of a better word). But don't get me wrong, the whole 'slamming the guy up against the wall' was cool
Hee.Ok, I should probably go to bed now because I am soooo tired *yawns* Night all! and please update soon!
bird_of_flame
Police Officer
Hahahahahaha! That's the best Wubba monster I've ever seen (Ok, the ONLY Wubba monster I've ever seen). :lol: Aww, Katie and Ryan *joins Hunter in chanting* K-I-S-S-I-N-G *ducks from a thrown shoe* Poor Colton though, being all ignored by Calleigh, who's getting very jealous.
Josh is so much like his brother, intellegently sarcastic. But Avery seems like a ditz to me, or someone with a very short attention span. Shame on Avery; you're not supposed to be drinking on the job!
Update soon pretty please!
Josh is so much like his brother, intellegently sarcastic. But Avery seems like a ditz to me, or someone with a very short attention span. Shame on Avery; you're not supposed to be drinking on the job!
Update soon pretty please!
Still_RIP_Speed
Police Officer
Ok I go away for 3 days-Geni is taking her break-come back and BOOM the RT is back with Avengence....wooooo HOOOOO....great stuff
being very tired from travelling 400miles in 3 days I wouldn't even attempt to review as it will go so wrong, but my brekkie entertainment is back-wahey
Update soon Geni as ever
being very tired from travelling 400miles in 3 days I wouldn't even attempt to review as it will go so wrong, but my brekkie entertainment is back-wahey
Update soon Geni as ever
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