No. for 911 GSR fic!

hehehe......thanks! I love all your positive comments about my stuff :D

ok, if you wanna send me a fic challenge, or even icon making challenge, send me a PM! muahahahahahaha..lol
 
hehe....I gotone from christine caine :p

ok, here's an uber-short update. it's all I could think of.

10:40 P.M.

As Sara was walking outside, she passed out again, falling face first onto the ground. This is how Grissom found her when they arrived.

Catherine’s reading the assignment slip Brass handed them on the way out of the lab as Grissom screams, “Sara!”

Her unconscious form doesn’t move from its position on the ground, Her nose is broken as a result of the fall and is now bleeding profusely, noticing a puddle of blood that’s slowly growing bigger, Warrick stops the car immediately, Gil and Catherine jump out and run over to Sara.

Catherine gently rolls her over, and can see her nose is visibly broken by the way it sits off center in proportion to her mouth, eyes and forehead. She sighs and asks the still unconscious woman in her arms, “Oh, my Sara….how’d this happen?”
 
Hmmm well maybe you could put in a twist of maybe sara has some condition ..... like diabetes or something , the best advice i could give is give it a twist no one expects thats what helps keep attention and its your fic and you can do as you wish to ur characters *smiles* go for the gold and just have fun!!!!
 
Good start Grissoms_Angel, I hope that you find your good muse soon, and continue quicky on....because you know I'm a sucker for GSR.

Laters, tigger_willows xoxo
 
I am trying sooooooooo hard for youse guys and I can't think of anything! :(

maybe I just need to read angst fiction or that book on Serial killers I bought the other day :devil:

The things I do for fun. meh.
 
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