Greg/Sofia #1 -- The lady likes fast cars
- Thread starter BurnedToast
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CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
Okay which line do you like better.
He walked into the bar, and saw her sitting in a corner, he walked over to her, thinking it was her, when it wasn't
OR
He walked into the bar, listening to the song, and started to find a beat, when he looked over, and noticed someone, he thought it was her, but turned out it was just some random girl, someone who couldn't be her
He walked into the bar, and saw her sitting in a corner, he walked over to her, thinking it was her, when it wasn't
OR
He walked into the bar, listening to the song, and started to find a beat, when he looked over, and noticed someone, he thought it was her, but turned out it was just some random girl, someone who couldn't be her
BurnedToast
Coroner
The second one, Lynn.
Dude, thanks. Took long enough to be a stupid Coroner...
Thankies Liv, I knew somebody would like them at some point.
Dude, thanks. Took long enough to be a stupid Coroner...
Thankies Liv, I knew somebody would like them at some point.
CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
Thanks Al.
AmandaSzmanda
CSI Level Two
I definatly like the second one better, Amanda likes more detail (Which is weird because I never write stuff with lots of detail) not that the first one is bad either.
BurnedToast
Coroner
I should write something...I feel like writing something for some odd reason...
CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
You can finish mine!
AmandaSzmanda
CSI Level Two
No Lynn you have to finish yours, though we all could write a story using one of your promts. Ohh that would be a good idea.
Edit- To bad, I used it anyways, I wrote the story in my journal, and the thread in the fanfic form got me stuck on this theme, and I am now writting one for each person.
Edit- To bad, I used it anyways, I wrote the story in my journal, and the thread in the fanfic form got me stuck on this theme, and I am now writting one for each person.
BurnedToast
Coroner
Haha! I finally killed a character in that damn fanfic section! Anywho, Lynn, you and I can write a conjoined one. Amanda may even join in if she wishes.
CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
Who'd you kill off? ....Oooh we should write one!
BurnedToast
Coroner
I wrote two. I killed of Cath and Brass. Yeah me! I wanted to kill off Sara, and I may later.
Anywho, we so should!!!
Anywho, we so should!!!
CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
Quit killing Cath off! Everytime I turn around you wanna kill Cath, Sofia or Sara off.
Got any ideas?
Got any ideas?
BurnedToast
Coroner
Excuse me? What is wrong with killing off characters? v_v;;
AH! *goes into slayer mode* Um, not that you would like, no.
AH! *goes into slayer mode* Um, not that you would like, no.
haha. you guys make me laugh. but i'm surprised i was gone what three days and this is as far as w've gotten? oh well. missed you guys. might not be able to talk alot for the next hmm, two weeks 'cause i'm heading off for Kansas.
end tangent.
anyways. hope you guys come up with something. i've really neglected my fic. must. return. to CSX FIC. *weeee*
later
-x-liv
end tangent.
anyways. hope you guys come up with something. i've really neglected my fic. must. return. to CSX FIC. *weeee*
later
-x-liv
CathStokes
Head of the Day Shift
Slayer mode? Like Buffy mode?
Yeah Liv, you must.
Yeah Liv, you must.