FanFic Poetry

[MacsGirlMel]

We won't I love the way you put words together

 

[EmeraldEyes06]

That was so beautiful. *wipes away happy tear* That's probably one of my favourites so far. Nice job!! And I could never give up on the two people who inspire me, or the ship I am completely devoted to.

 

[Jorja_Rain]

Mia, You are very welcome, and it was my pleasure to add some joy into yours and Jorga's day. Take care, LMH

Thanks, but you spelled my name wrong (for the 2nd time)

 

[MacsLovlyAngl]

Hello,my DuCaine Buddies, antoher poem of our couple.


@ Jorja....Sorry :lol: :lol:

 

[MacsGirlMel]

aww yay DuCaine

I feel that way about Smacked too...I may not get it into a poem, but fic maybe.

 

[Need4Speed]

this is a Hardy Boys one.

It's from Eric to Ryan

 

[EyeHeartH]

Great work on the poetry as always, everyone.
Need4Speed, what a great picture to go with the poem

It's been awhile (mainly due to writer's block, which seems to have plagued me in every aspect of my writing as of late), but here goes nothing. I'm going to try something new this time around. Instead of my usual highbrow Romanticism-inspired poems, I'm going to write it in the style of an R&B duet only with H and Calleigh. I would have put it to a picture but I couldn't think of anything good. Hope you like it anyway.


In The Gun Lab

[cue smooth R&B style music]

Horatio [spoken]:
From the first time I lay eyes on you girl
I knew you were the only one in my world
So many times I tried to say
What was really on my mind
But there was always drama hanging around
I couldn't get close, couldn't make a sound
But now it's just the two of us here tonight
So I gotta do it now, gotta make it right

[sung]
Oh baby baby you've always had my heart
Ohhh girl I've had my eye on you from the start
Lookin' at you from across the room
Wanting to come over and kiss you soon
So now I'm coming over to tell you girl
That you're my everything, you're my whole world

[chorus, just H this time]
It's just us in the gun lab (gun lab)
On a starry steamy night (ooh ooh ooooh)
The two of us alone together
We're gonna set this whole thing right
Standing in the gun lab (gun lab)
My heart beating so fast
So here I am to offer you
A love that can truly last

Calleigh [sung]:
When I caught you standing there silently
I wondered why the hell you were lookin' at me
And when I saw your eyes it was like a revelation
And when you touched my hand I felt a tingly sensation

Something I've never felt before coming from you
It was a whole new feeling that I came into
You looked at me and smiled and then I knew that was it
I'm under this deep lovespell and I know it's legit

[chorus, just Calleigh this time]

Horatio [sung]:
Now that I've kissed you, ooh this feels so right
All I want to do now is to hold you so tight

Calleigh [sung]:
I came down to the gun lab to solve a crime
And I'm gonna leave here with you all mine

Horatio [sung]:
It was down here in the gun lab where we came together
And now that I have you I can have this moment forever

Calleigh [sung]:
Hold me tighter Handsome, I've been alone for far too long
I need someone to keep me up and to keep me strong

Horatio [sung]:
Never fear girl for you I'll always be there
For the love I'm going to offer you can never be compared

[chorus, both]

 

[MacsLovlyAngl]

 

[EmeraldEyes06]

Gorgeaus, LMH!! Nicely done! And EyeHeartH, that was so wonderful!! Great lyrics, and I could feel the atmosphere!! Nice job!! That's got me all squeeing!!

 

[MacsGirlMel]

*squees happily for all the poems* Very nice...I like the song lyrics

 

[MacsLovlyAngl]

 

[MacsGirlMel]

very nice

*whacks Mac* forget her, dummy, you want Stella and you know it! *runs away giggling*

 

[Need4Speed]

this is one inspired by the song "Where is my boy?" and it is dedicated to the loving memory of

Tim "Speed" Speedle
June 24, 1974 - September 20, 2004
Gone but not forgotten

 

[MacsLovlyAngl]

 

[EmeraldEyes06]

Oh, Speedle... Must get that song. Lovely H/C poem with 'The Hug'. Best piccie ever!!